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 The Robbery

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caio3771  
Posted: Friday, Aug 17 2012, 17:14
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This is a mini-missionpack based in a robbery to a casino and mafia wars. There will be a lots of cutscenes explaining the story and a lot of animations, to give a life to the actors. And the most funny part, there will be any kind of actions like stealth, shootouts, chases, explosions and much more. So, play, have fun and give me feddback.
Critiscism and suggestions are appreciated


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After several years working for The Mafia in Los Santos, Claude retired of the criminal life to live a peacuful life Las Venturas. But some day, Woozie, the boss of the Yakuza, requested him to do a job. Rob the Caligula's casino, that is owned by Marco Forelli, the boss of Forelli Mafia, the most powerful mafia of San Andreas. But Claude isn't sure if he'll accept the offer, because he liked his new peaceful life. Claude will accept the offer? What will hapeen? Play the missions and will find the answers.


Characters



CharacterDescription
Claude MarkHe worked for The Mafia in Los Santos, but after years being a criminal, he retired of crime life and wants to live a
peaceful life in Las Venturas
Woozie GeckoThe boss of Yakuza in LV and owner of Four Dragons Casino. After the Forelli Family attacked his casino, he wants to kill
the responsibles for the attack and rob their casino.
Marco ForelliHe leds the Forelli Mafia and the Caligula's casino. He didn't like to see a new Mafia in ''his city'' he'll do whatever
he needs to take over Yakuza and their casino
Old ReeceFriend of Claude since ages, he's very good with guns and cars. He worked with Claude for The Mafia in Los Santos. They're working together on a plan to rob a casino.
ZeroA man who know everything about technolgy and nothing about guns. He worked for an unknown mafia but he never killed nobody. He's also helping Woozie and his boys to make a plan to rob a casino.
Big MeechLeader and founder of The Mafia. There's no much info about him.


Mafias



MafiaDescription
Forelli MafiaLed by Marco Forelli, they are the most powerful mafia of San Andreas. They sell whisky and own the Caligula's casino.
They are trying to defeat The Yakuza, the new mafia in the city.
The YakuzaMafia led by Woozie, they're trying to estabilish their business in Las Venturas and they're planning a big robbery.
The MafiaMost powerful mafia of Los Santos, they sell crack and cocaine. There's no much info about them.


Missions



1. Unexpected Offer
2. Accept or not accept. That's the question.
3. Knowing my Enemy
4. Getting New Wings
5. Caligula's Ride


Note: Topic under construction, more stuff will be added.
There will be a Storyline version of this series.


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who plays the missions and comment.




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caio3771  
Posted: Friday, Aug 17 2012, 17:20
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You can find DLC's and Storyline mode here :


Side Missions:

1. Sky Wars


Note: The side missions are just for fun, they aren't related to the main missions or with the story.



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TheXProyect  
Posted: Friday, Aug 17 2012, 21:42
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Good topic, but if you put some headers and logos the topic its gonna be better just watch other topics and see what you can do, gonna play it soon biggrin.gif
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caio3771  
Posted: Friday, Aug 17 2012, 21:58
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I know how to make headers by myself, but I just don't want to make them.
and I'll add more info when I finish more missions.

Anyway, Thanks for the advice.
I'm waiting for your feedback biggrin.gif
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TheXProyect  
Posted: Friday, Aug 17 2012, 23:22
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The grammar is okey, better than my grammar, i was expecting some action but this is the first missions so is okay.
I like the way how do you use the character "Woozie, Claude, etc." Woozie its my favorite, and Claude is talking wow.gif i didn't know that, anyway the mission was good, keep doing biggrin.gif


My Rating : 5/5
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caio3771  
Posted: Saturday, Aug 18 2012, 00:18
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The missions will have action for sure, that mission was just to explain the story, as you already noticed.
and Claude isn't mute because mine Claude is other Claude not the Claude from GTA 3 tounge.gif (hope you get this part)

Anyway, glad you liked and thanks for the great rating.



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caio3771  
Posted: Tuesday, Aug 28 2012, 11:45
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Sorry for double-posting, but I have and impportant new:


4 new missions released, check the main post for the links.

1st side mission released, check the second post for the link.


Please Play and give feedback

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Zizo008  
Posted: Wednesday, Aug 29 2012, 22:11
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The mission pack is clearly inspired by the caligula's bank heist. However the biggest thing that I hated is the grammar, there's lots of mistakes! but the gameplay is good, but something i hated in "getting new wings", the jump is very hard, since you drive on sand, also "caligula's ride" the searching can take sometime because of the large size of the area.
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caio3771  
Posted: Wednesday, Aug 29 2012, 22:24
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That mistakes won't happen in next missions. I just didn't time to fix them

Thanks for the comment, very interesting,
I'll improve the next missions though.
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Zizo008  
Posted: Thursday, Aug 30 2012, 10:58
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QUOTE (caio3771 @ Wednesday, Aug 29 2012, 22:24)
That mistakes won't happen in next missions. I just didn't time to fix them

Thanks for the comment, very interesting,
I'll improve the next missions though.

You know you can edit your previous mission? just fix the issues and then edit the mission file in the DYOM site
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caio3771  
Posted: Thursday, Aug 30 2012, 11:42
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Of course I know. But I'm too busy to find and fix that mistakes.
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