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 [Mission Pack] Blueberry Massacre

 First Mission, by LFarmer
 
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Posted: Saturday, Aug 4 2012, 05:54
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Blueberry, 1997

Numerous death reports and sightings of the infamous serial killer in Blueberry.
The serial killer is locally known as "Diablo of Blueberry".
Locals believed that the serial killer lives in the Easter Board Farm since 15 years ago.

John Greg, and the rest of the team, "SAMT" or "San Andreas Myth Team" took the case of the infamous and mysterious serial killer in Blueberry. Follow the story of John consisting of 5 missions. Feedbacks and reviews would be much appreciated. Thank you for playing.

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Character Description
John Greg Age: 34
John Greg, a retired plumber. Now being a myth investigator joining the SAMT for 4 years.
Claimed that he once encountered bigfoot in Shady Creeks.
Jim Loose Age: 32
Jim Loose, a close friend of John since childhood. Jailed 2 years for bank robbery.
Realizing what he had done for his crime. Now being part of the SAMT.
Gob Rogers Age: 36
Gob Rogers, whose father a drug addict and wanted criminal in San Andreas.
Gob was a fisherman. Now being part of the SAMT.
Fred Willow Age: 54
Fred Willow, the man who claimed to have encountered with the killer in Blueberry.
He never talks alot about the killer although he knew him very much.
James Beniggson Age: 47
James Beniggson, a sheriff in Blueberry who also claimed to had encountered with the killer and had seen him many times.

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Progress: 43%
Missions Download Link Status
Introduction http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/20347Complete
Diablo of Blueberry http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/20641 Complete
The Investigation - Remake Progress

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Group Description
SAMT "San Andreas Myth Team" Since 1980, SAMT has been responsible for investigating
numerous myths around San Andreas.

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Dutchy3010 & PatrickW: for creating DYOM modification
PatrickW: retrieving lost edited files of the 1st and 2nd mission
AznKei: for making a video review
GunWrath, UNRATED69, Narcis_speed6: for providing logo and headers

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Posted: Saturday, Aug 4 2012, 05:57
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Finally , in all of your missionpack , you have finally put a mission in this missionpack topic . I'm going to play this , and give you feedbacks so that you won't drop this , this time . wink.gif

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LFarmer  
Posted: Saturday, Aug 4 2012, 06:00
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QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Saturday, Aug 4 2012, 05:57)
Finally , in all of your missionpack , you have put a mission in this missionpack topic . I'm going to play this , and give you feedbacks so that you won't drop this , this time . wink.gif

Thanks, -S-hark21! Glad to hear that comin'. colgate.gif

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This topic is f*cking nice for a first a first one. Good luck, I'm gonna try this one out. icon14.gif
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LFarmer  
Posted: Saturday, Aug 4 2012, 10:41
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This series will be completely finish ASAP in October or the next fortnight due to my school examination.
Sorry for the inconvenient.

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Okay , played the first mission . I kinda like it but , it's too short . You could've put some gameplay on it . And also , you should publish the mission . So that it will be "Play only" mission. I spotted a spelling mistake at the beginning of cutscene . It's actually "Numerous" , not "Nomurous" . Well , that's all I can say about the first mission since it's too short . It's like 1 minute only .

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4.3/10

I know it's too low but , try to improve alright ? wink.gif
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LFarmer  
Posted: Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 05:09
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QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 05:04)
Okay , played the first mission . I kinda like it but , it's too short . You could've put some gameplay on it . And also , you should publish the mission . So that it will be "Play only" mission. I spotted a spelling mistake at the beginning of cutscene . It's actually "Numerous" , not "Nomurous" . Well , that's all I can say about the first mission since it's too short . It's like 1 minute only .

Rating :

4.3/10

I know it's too low but , try to improve alright ? wink.gif

Ok, matey. It's just an intro and i'll try to improve next time. wink.gif Oh, and i forgot to publish the mission. Such embarassing. blush.gif
Anyways, thanks for the rating. smile.gif

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Finally you finish a mission, gonna player later buddy.
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QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 05:38)
Finally you finish a mission, gonna player later buddy.

Thanks, pal. colgate.gif

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UPDATE:
- Introduction will be fixed for some spelling mistakes.

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Posted: Tuesday, Aug 7 2012, 14:33
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Here is the unfinished mission, "Diablo of Blueberry" preview.
It's still in the works but, it'll be finish soon as so on the other missions. xGhostx helped me fixed some errors in the mission. Well, here you go. colgate.gif

http://199.91.153.34/f2vab23e8o1g/e82s22a748a7pq2/DYOM1.DAT

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Man, don't put it on Media Fire, put it on DYOM Official Site, I will play this for sure, and by the way cool topic!
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QUOTE (tinu09 @ Tuesday, Aug 7 2012, 15:11)
Man, don't put it on Media Fire, put it on DYOM Official Site, I will play this for sure, and by the way cool topic!

Dude, don't you understand English? He said he need someone to fix it for him. So he had to upload it to MF.

@LFarmer
One tip, don't tell only me to fix, yes I will fix it. But next time say something like ''Can anyone fix it?'' or something like that, this way you will get more help, not only from me. smile.gif

Anyway, I'll play the intro today.
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QUOTE (tinu09 @ Tuesday, Aug 7 2012, 15:11)
Man, don't put it on Media Fire, put it on DYOM Official Site,  I will play this for sure, and by the way cool topic!

Thanks. About the putting it at DYOM, I don't have my computer at the moment.
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QUOTE (xGhostx @ Wednesday, Aug 8 2012, 01:48)
QUOTE (tinu09 @ Tuesday, Aug 7 2012, 15:11)
Man, don't put it on Media Fire, put it on DYOM Official Site,  I will play this for sure, and by the way cool topic!

Dude, don't you understand English? He said he need someone to fix it for him. So he had to upload it to MF.

@LFarmer
One tip, don't tell only me to fix, yes I will fix it. But next time say something like ''Can anyone fix it?'' or something like that, this way you will get more help, not only from me. smile.gif

Anyway, I'll play the intro today.

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EDIT: Opps, accidental double post. Sorry.

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I just play the intro, I don't like the intro cutscene very much, maybe you could have start the intro with a murder or something like that. You could have make the ''Blueberry Diable'' sound more mysterious or something, and work on timing, the cutscene sometimes is too long.

So the Diablo of Blueberry is the guy with the chainsaw?

Anyway, the intro was okay, but you could have done better. icon14.gif
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QUOTE (xGhostx @ Thursday, Aug 9 2012, 08:26)
I just play the intro, I don't like the intro cutscene very much, maybe you could have start the intro with a murder or something like that. You could have make the ''Blueberry Diable'' sound more mysterious or something, and work on timing, the cutscene sometimes is too long.

So the Diablo of Blueberry is the guy with the chainsaw?

Anyway, the intro was okay, but you could have done better. icon14.gif

I was planning that. The intro will be improved, updated and published next week and the actor with chainsaw is the killer in Blueberry in the last cutscene. Anyways, have you played the unfinished second mission preview? More missions comin' next week! wink.gif

And if you didn't know, "Diablo" is spanish for "Devil".

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UPDATE:
Intro updated, second mission added. Enjoy! icon14.gif
Don't forget to rate the mission on DYOM!

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Good story and good characters, compliments for the 2 missions.
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