[caio3771]

Played the missions. Very good.

I think you got inspired by fast five, right?
it's very similar.

[Jimmy_Leppard]

QUOTE (caio3771 @ Thursday, Jul 26 2012, 15:48)

Played the missions. Very good. I think you got inspired by fast five, right? it's very similar.

Yeah, pretty much But I have my own twists for this Thanks a lot, man

[tinu09]

Hey!What why ... ?Ok, allright another mission pack by JIMMY!!!YAY!!!I will play it for sure, hope you will finish it and don't cancel it...wait what?

Good luck!

[Jimmy_Leppard]

QUOTE (tinu09 @ Thursday, Jul 26 2012, 19:04)

Hey!What why ... ?Ok, allright another mission pack by JIMMY!!!YAY!!!I will play it for sure, hope you will finish it and don't cancel it...wait what? Good luck!

Hey, man I don't cancel my mission series. I finished Kidnapped, so I moved to this project Thanks

[Jimmy_Leppard]

UPDATE: 3rd and 4th mission uploaded. Have fun, play the missions and give me feedbacks, people

This post has been edited by Jimmy_Leppard on Saturday, Jul 28 2012, 13:13

[-S-hark21]

Okay , just played mission 1 until 4 . So , here's my feedback .

What I see in this mission series is almost the same as Fast & Furious 5 . I really like how you introduce each of the character . Makes me wonder how do they job . In the second mission , I don't really like about all 7 partners follow me in that meat factory . They just get into my way and I can't shoot the guards . In the fourth mission , I like the race but you could give them some proper route . So that they won't just bump into things . Other than that , good job . I eagerly waiting for the next mission .

[shiva s]

I had only time to play the first mission. Anyway, here's what I think about the missions.
The 1st mission was just like watching a movie. I enjoyed the characters introductions part. It was really awesome and cool. I was suprised to find Brian Thompson (I know Zack is the protagonist but I use to call that actor Brian Thompson, you know lol.. Loved the shootout in the second mission. I'm gonna play the remaining missions soon.

[Jimmy_Leppard]

@ -S-hark21 - First of all, thanks for the feedback. Now, let me explain the route problem at the race. I tried to get them on the right route and to get them race straight, but something just doesn't seem to be working. I know, I was trying to solve the route problem for like 2 hours. I made them drive 4 or 5 different routes, but they always went in circles and bumping into things at the very beginning. I just didn't know why and how to solve that problem, so I just went with the best possible way I could pull out of it.. So, I know, it kinda sucks, it's supposed to be an intense race, but that's the best I came up with.

@ Shiva - Thanks a lot, man LOL, I know, but now you can call him Brian and Zack Again, thanks for your feedback

[xGhostx]

So I just played the missions, so here's my feedback:
BTW, I'm gonna get a little serious here...almost...

Mission 1: You should have call this one Fast Five, it will get more attention. I mean it exactly like it, I remember all the quotes and stuff, I think there's a girl, too (the one who's driving the motorcycle). Anyway, love the cutscene, love how you introduce the characters and their specialists. The mission was fine or an intro. And once again with the ''to be continued'' stuff, really don't like it, never did.
I'm not rating this mission as a normal mission, I rated it as an intro, that's why it's so high although with cutscene only.

Rating: 9.5/10


Mission 2: I think you should change the first car, I don't know if you're lazy by choosing the first car in the car menu but the car look old, to me it doesn't fit. In the meat factory, the shooting was fine and easy. But when Zach just said ''We ain't stealing'', you should have make use of the fire object, saying ''we're burning it...'' doesn't sound cool at all, I mean if you want it to look like the movie.

Rating: 7/10

Mission 3: Hmm, smart, changing from a safe to a truck trailer...BTW, you make The Rock look suck by using Woozie skin. And you misspelling O'Conner.

Rating: 7/10

Mission 4: Yeah the mission is simple, just a little bit racing that's all, but it too easy for me.

Rating: 6.5/10

Overall, your writing is good as usual, but you really should have made Fast Five, I mean Zach O'Conner? Anyway, keep up the good work.
Waiting for more!

[Jimmy_Leppard]

QUOTE (xGhostx @ Monday, Jul 30 2012, 08:34)

So I just played the missions, so here's my feedback: BTW, I'm gonna get a little serious here...almost... Mission 1: You should have call this one Fast Five, it will get more attention. I mean it exactly like it, I remember all the quotes and stuff, I think there's a girl, too (the one who's driving the motorcycle). Anyway, love the cutscene, love how you introduce the characters and their specialists. The mission was fine or an intro. And once again with the ''to be continued'' stuff, really don't like it, never did. I'm not rating this mission as a normal mission, I rated it as an intro, that's why it's so high although with cutscene only. Rating: 9.5/10 Mission 2: I think you should change the first car, I don't know if you're lazy by choosing the first car in the car menu but the car look old, to me it doesn't fit. In the meat factory, the shooting was fine and easy. But when Zach just said ''We ain't stealing'', you should have make use of the fire object, saying ''we're burning it...'' doesn't sound cool at all, I mean if you want it to look like the movie. Rating: 7/10 Mission 3: Hmm, smart, changing from a safe to a truck trailer...BTW, you make The Rock look suck by using Woozie skin. And you misspelling O'Conner. Rating: 7/10 Mission 4: Yeah the mission is simple, just a little bit racing that's all, but it too easy for me. Rating: 6.5/10 Overall, your writing is good as usual, but you really should have made Fast Five, I mean Zach O'Conner? Anyway, keep up the good work. Waiting for more!

Thanks for the feedback, now the explanations.

Well, most of you figured out it's based on Fast Five. I didn't want to call it that way cause it's not the real Fast Five story since there is no girl in the story, there's no Dom, Brian, Roman etc. and there's no real connection to the characters except the base story.

About the second mission: I did put the fire object after the cutscene ''We're burning it'', but the mission then crashed for me and it couldn't be fixed, so I had to improvise. Of course I tried to put the fire object, but unfortunately, it was an overload. And, I actually didn't want to look exactly like the movie, so.. that's why I improvised as I did

About the third mission: As said, this is not Fast Five complete story, it's just a base, so there's no ''The Rock''. There's just an FBI agent called Howard Loom. I chose Woozie for a reason. I didn't want to choose some steroid guy to catch the team, but someone more inteligent and ''cooler'', sort of speak. And yeah, about the O'Conner thing.. I saw it after I uploaded the mission.. but it's just one letter, so I think it isn't worth mentioning. Everyone has typing mistakes when typing fast. And there's no ''perfect'' thing in life, so..

About the fourth mission: Yeah, I know. I already explained that I had problems with route points for other car racers and they just kept bumping into stuff at the very beginning, so it does kinda sucks, but.. That's the best I could do.


Anyway, thanks for the great feedback as always, man. Looking forward to your next feedback

[Notna]

Wait just one second Jimmy.. I've never felt this way but it's the first time ever when I got something to say against you...

Did I just see you calling The Rock - the God of professional wrestling, the most electrifying man in all entertainment - some steroid guy? What the hell? What can I say? Damn!

Anyway, as you may have noticed I still haven't played it. But there's no way that I ain't going to play it, so, I'll play ASAP.

EDIT: One thing about Ghost's post, I know, I don't like it when someone else has a different opinion to mine I know, but I'll live with it, but seriously, Jimmy, who's the most electrifying DYOM designer ever been, can't get lower ratings than I've got from you. I can't be sure before I play but yeah.

This post has been edited by Notna on Monday, Jul 30 2012, 11:00

[Jimmy_Leppard]

QUOTE (Notna @ Monday, Jul 30 2012, 10:53)

Wait just one second Jimmy.. I've never felt this way but it's the first time ever when I got something to say against you... Did I just see you calling The Rock - the God of professional wrestling, the most electrifying man in all entertainment - some steroid guy? What the hell? What can I say? Damn! Anyway, as you may have noticed I still haven't played it. But there's no way that I ain't going to play it, so, I'll play ASAP.  EDIT: One thing about Ghost's post, I know, I don't like it when someone else has a different opinion to mine I know, but I'll live with it, but seriously, Jimmy, who's the most electrifying DYOM designer ever been, can't get lower ratings than I've got from you. I can't be sure before I play but yeah.

LOL, man. Sorry, I didn't mean that The Rock is some steroid guy in that kinda way. I thought that he doesn't apply to my story with that kind of body structure. But, he's cool, you know

About your opinion on Ghost's post, I'm not mad. I appreciate constructive and well-thought feedbacks the most. I just wanted to explain why I made that missions the way I made them. I didn't make them just to make them, you know, I had some pretty rough time with complexity of those missions and 2 of them needed to be somewhat different, I know, but since they crashed a lot of times in different places, I had to cut down the objectives and such.. You misunderstood my comment. I appreciate Ghost's comment very much and I'm glad cause it means he played my missions with a lot of attention. I made a small mistake, misspelled O'Conner in one of the cutscenes and he noticed it. I appreciate that he and everyone else like him play my missions with that much concentration.

Anyway, I don't mind lower ratings, I even like it cause then I know what to improve in my next missions But, of course, I don't find 7/10 for example bad at all. So, nobody's angry at anyone if you thought that

Looking forward to your feedback, man

[Notna]

I somewhat knew you didn't mean about Dwayne(Rock) like that, but just had to be sure And I meant that in my opinion you deserve much higher ratings, I posted that with no offense or anything.

[xGhostx]

What Jimmy mean is everybody have their own opinion.
I rate base on almost everything, it's my opinion. He can't just get a high rating because he's Jimmy, right?
You think he deserve higher rating? Yes, I totally agree and it's your own opinion.

[xGhostx]

Stupid and retard.

[lee_atsugai]

Spurgis: Awh, come on man....
SERIOUSLY!? YOU'RE SPAMMING in another topic!!?? You should leave this place kid, this is not the right place for you

Jimmy: Well, based on the comments and the feedbacks, I decided to play this mission series now (Even though you haven't done the 1st Chapter yet )

[Jimmy_Leppard]

@ Ghost - Absolutely, that's exactly what I wanted to say. Nobody should get good ratings just cause of a name and I'm the first one who doesn't ask for it.

@ lee - Oh, great, man. Thanks a lot I'm looking forward to your feedback.

[Notna]

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Monday, Jul 30 2012, 19:35)

@ Ghost - Absolutely, that's exactly what I wanted to say. Nobody should get good ratings just cause of a name and I'm the first one who doesn't ask for it. @ lee - Oh, great, man. Thanks a lot I'm looking forward to your feedback.

Sorry, I didn't mean that because of the name, but because in my opinion your missions are simply best in the world Haha yeah, that was what I originally meant.

[Jimmy_Leppard]

QUOTE (Notna @ Monday, Jul 30 2012, 17:05)

QUOTE (Jimmy_Leppard @ Monday, Jul 30 2012, 19:35) @ Ghost - Absolutely, that's exactly what I wanted to say. Nobody should get good ratings just cause of a name and I'm the first one who doesn't ask for it. @ lee - Oh, great, man. Thanks a lot I'm looking forward to your feedback. Sorry, I didn't mean that because of the name, but because in my opinion your missions are simply best in the world Haha yeah, that was what I originally meant.

I know. It's all cool, man, but that guy Spurgis is not cool at all.

[Kratos2000]

What's up with this project, Jimmy?