[Eminence]

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This post has been edited by Eminence on Monday, Aug 6 2012, 00:45

[shiva s]

Wow I have never read poems about the human face. This is really good. Well, I can't really find any mistakes to point out. Good job. Keep it up

[Eminence]

QUOTE (shiva s @ Tuesday, Jul 24 2012, 12:49)

Wow I have never read poems about the human face. This is really good. Well, I can't really find any mistakes to point out. Good job. Keep it up

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's not really about the human face, though; try looking a little deeper.

[shiva s]

QUOTE (Eminence @ Saturday, Jul 28 2012, 23:49)

QUOTE (shiva s @ Tuesday, Jul 24 2012, 12:49) Wow I have never read poems about the human face. This is really good. Well, I can't really find any mistakes to point out. Good job. Keep it up Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's not really about the human face, though; try looking a little deeper.

Woops. Sorry, I read it twice but I can't figure it out. My guess is the human shadow but I know, I'm wrong.. I'm not sure, you better use the spoilers to tell me.

[Tyler]

I'm particularly happy with the influx of poetry lately. Though I have to admit this one resonates most, I can't say I expected otherwise. You've got a nice voice in your work, Em, and something as taunting as a clock on the wall is described wonderfully here. Can't really critique your work on my iPhone, but when I get back to my pc I'll see what kind of disembowelment I can preform on your pentameter.