[Ziggy455]

QUOTE (Wipex President Mike @ Sunday, Jul 29 2012, 18:27)

Hey dude, as a writer who knows his way around his own Vocabulary, I say don't listen too much to people like Ziggy, theres too many people like that on this forum, that'd sooner bite your head off and subtlety mock you by constantly trying to pile you with tips. Whilst some of these tips are fair and good in their own ways, Writing is a creative avenue to walk, and in this respect... You writing like that will eventually transform your work into something unique and cool to read, Not everyone has to like it, especially the fogies. Seeing as you're already into writing then I trust you'll pass your English/English Literature if you are still in Education. The very fact you write in Vocal columns is indicative of the possibility you could become a script writer, for film or TV. I think some of the writers on here need to open their minds to the possibility of different styles of writing, instead of expecting just to read what THEY want. Typical GTAForums imo.

Excuse me but what? Who the f*ck are you? Seriously?

I'm not trying to hint little digs at him, I've told him what he can do to improve his work. Don't come on here thinking that you're so different from everybody else. I don't mind reading experimental fiction but listen up.

You're saying if he continues down this path of experimenting and disregarding the help us so called 'fogies' give him, that he'll create amazing and new pieces of fiction that people will want to read? Like I said, I'm all for that, but any writer needs to learn the core fundamentals of writing, so please don't come on here with a chip on your shoulder like you're the next King or Twain. If you don't have anything nice to say, sit down somewhere and shut up.

Oh and also, don't rag on my story, just because you've got pissed off at somebody telling it like it is.

[Wipex President Mike]

I'm not a writer, I'm a reader. I'm no Twain or King. You're the one that wasn't being very nice to the guy, and yeah you was doing the classic forum arsehole thing.
Yeah you're right I shouldn't have just ragged on your piece I apologise for that that, but for everything else I've said I won't apologise.
I honestly think its Obvious this fella is young and probably still in education, you're not his teacher.

[Ziggy455]

QUOTE (Wipex President Mike @ Sunday, Jul 29 2012, 18:51)

I'm not a writer, I'm a reader. I'm no Twain or King. You're the one that wasn't being very nice to the guy, and yeah you was doing the classic forum arsehole thing. Yeah you're right I shouldn't have just ragged on your piece I apologise for that that, but for everything else I've said I won't apologise. I honestly think its Obvious this fella is young and probably still in education, you're not his teacher.

Obviously one like yourself can't take criticism. I was no different? I came here, I wrote, I learned. I wasn't being a douche to the guy? I was helping him, if people like you take it to a level of offence, then more the fool you. It's hilarious you think I'm a stuck up arsehole? I read his work, I took the time to read his work, I reviewed it, and I offered him help that he DID NOT have to take on his own accord?

Maybe you should stop reading, it doesn't seem to be doing much. You're not some brave hero standing up for somebody's rights. You're ragging on writers who are trying to help, and why? Because you've got some sort of stick up your ass.

[Wipex President Mike]

Course I've got a stick up my arse, I'm a firecracker.

No, I read your review from his perspective and to be honest you could've been friendlier.
Sayonara

[Ziggy455]

QUOTE (Wipex President Mike @ Sunday, Jul 29 2012, 18:57)

Course I've got a stick up my arse, I'm a firecracker. No, I read your review from his perspective and to be honest you could've been friendlier. Sayonara

You're not a firecracker. You're a splinter user who got lost and is now realizing his way back.

And I offered him help, he didn't need to take it.

So long.

[Wipex President Mike]

I'll always be a splinter user I only come on occasionally.
buh-bye

[Ziggy455]

QUOTE (Wipex President Mike @ Sunday, Jul 29 2012, 19:04)

I'll always be a splinter user I only come on occasionally. buh-bye

Interesting.

Bye.

[cammi]

WTF is a Twain?

[Ziggy455]

QUOTE (cammi @ Sunday, Jul 29 2012, 19:49)

WTF is a Twain?

Mark Twain - One of the world's greatest writers.

[Sgt. Foley]

QUOTE (Ziggy455 @ Sunday, Jul 29 2012, 18:47)

QUOTE (Wipex President Mike @ Sunday, Jul 29 2012, 18:27) Hey dude, as a writer who knows his way around his own Vocabulary, I say don't listen too much to people like Ziggy, theres too many people like that on this forum, that'd sooner bite your head off and subtlety mock you by constantly trying to pile you with tips. Whilst some of these tips are fair and good in their own ways, Writing is a creative avenue to walk, and in this respect... You writing like that will eventually transform your work into something unique and cool to read, Not everyone has to like it, especially the fogies. Seeing as you're already into writing then I trust you'll pass your English/English Literature if you are still in Education. The very fact you write in Vocal columns is indicative of the possibility you could become a script writer, for film or TV. I think some of the writers on here need to open their minds to the possibility of different styles of writing, instead of expecting just to read what THEY want. Typical GTAForums imo. Excuse me but what? Who the f*ck are you? Seriously? I'm not trying to hint little digs at him, I've told him what he can do to improve his work. Don't come on here thinking that you're so different from everybody else. I don't mind reading experimental fiction but listen up. You're saying if he continues down this path of experimenting and disregarding the help us so called 'fogies' give him, that he'll create amazing and new pieces of fiction that people will want to read? Like I said, I'm all for that, but any writer needs to learn the core fundamentals of writing, so please don't come on here with a chip on your shoulder like you're the next King or Twain. If you don't have anything nice to say, sit down somewhere and shut up. Oh and also, don't rag on my story, just because you've got pissed off at somebody telling it like it is.

Wow, I come to the Writer's Discussion and I see this sh*t. Well, back to the GTA V section.

BTW, you are absolutely not the f*cking boss, I'm telling you right now. I can't leave just 1 little part in the forum and not see a fight or an argument. Wipex is right, this is a typical GTAF user.

[cammi]

I feel like this topic is just an output for everyones stress.

[Sgt. Foley]

QUOTE (cammi @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 18:48)

I feel like this topic is just an output for everyones stress.

I feel like this forum is giving stress.

[Ziggy455]

QUOTE (Sgt. Foley @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 19:31)

QUOTE (cammi @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 18:48) I feel like this topic is just an output for everyones stress. I feel like this forum is giving stress.

Listen up now. You're from the V section? f*ck off back there then. You're not welcome here if all you're going to do is berate people who are trying to help. I have not once claimed to be the boss- look at the title under my name, it says HELPING HAND. Almost everybody who comes here PMs me to come onto their thread and critique their work, and even Wipex has PMed me apologizing for his asinine remarks because I'm the only one who has offered him constructive criticism. This is why whiny f*ckers like yourself should keep to your business in the V section - because you can't define the line between constructive criticism and bullying.

Ask Cammi yourself, he'll show you the PMs I have sent him trying to help him in his quest to become a better writer. We were all like him at one point, but we accepted the criticism, swallowed it hard, took in the tips, and learnt. We didn't get V f*ckheads like yourself coming on here trying to stupidly defend somebody who doesn't need defending like a little child. He needs help, and that's exactly what he's gotten and is getting from me.

I'm getting sick of all these morons who think they're being moral angels defending but in truth, they're just looking like complete and utter twats. Don't comment on this thread unless you've got something helpful to say.

[cammi]

Actually I think Ziggy is right. I used Ziggy's feedback and criticism and I have dramatically improved my writing. I went from an script or whatever the f*ck it was writer.

To the writer of this - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8396558/1/Fifty_Shades_Infinity

It may be small and terrible but it is a big improvement to what I used to write and I will continue it.
I am a better writer thanks to the writers on here. So I thank them for teaching me to be a less sh*tty writer.

Needed to get that out.

[Ziggy455]

I just had a read of that Fifty Shades Infinity and although it's not a masterpiece, I must say, well done. It's a large improvement -still lacking alot but still,- and you should be proud of it.

[cammi]

QUOTE (Ziggy455 @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 21:52)

I just had a read of that Fifty Shades Infinity and although it's not a masterpiece, I must say, well done. It's a large improvement -still lacking alot but still,- and you should be proud of it.

Thanks, that means a lot to me. What is on my fanfiction.net is just an intro. If you did not see, the main character is Johnny Kibbutz from TLAD and Kelly is the ex-wife of Yusef from TBOGT that is why she is rich.

[Sgt. Foley]

QUOTE (Ziggy455 @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 21:41)

QUOTE (Sgt. Foley @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 19:31) QUOTE (cammi @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 18:48) I feel like this topic is just an output for everyones stress. I feel like this forum is giving stress. Listen up now. You're from the V section? f*ck off back there then. You're not welcome here if all you're going to do is berate people who are trying to help. I have not once claimed to be the boss- look at the title under my name, it says HELPING HAND. Almost everybody who comes here PMs me to come onto their thread and critique their work, and even Wipex has PMed me apologizing for his asinine remarks because I'm the only one who has offered him constructive criticism. This is why whiny f*ckers like yourself should keep to your business in the V section - because you can't define the line between constructive criticism and bullying. Ask Cammi yourself, he'll show you the PMs I have sent him trying to help him in his quest to become a better writer. We were all like him at one point, but we accepted the criticism, swallowed it hard, took in the tips, and learnt. We didn't get V f*ckheads like yourself coming on here trying to stupidly defend somebody who doesn't need defending like a little child. He needs help, and that's exactly what he's gotten and is getting from me. I'm getting sick of all these morons who think they're being moral angels defending but in truth, they're just looking like complete and utter twats. Don't comment on this thread unless you've got something helpful to say.

My god, I was going to write a STORY and let my FEELINGS OUT. Sheesh, f*ck this section. I thought you were all nice respectful people. All you do is f*cking criticize peoples work!

[Ziggy455]

QUOTE (Sgt. Foley @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 22:21)

QUOTE (Ziggy455 @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 21:41) QUOTE (Sgt. Foley @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 19:31) QUOTE (cammi @ Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 18:48) I feel like this topic is just an output for everyones stress. I feel like this forum is giving stress. Listen up now. You're from the V section? f*ck off back there then. You're not welcome here if all you're going to do is berate people who are trying to help. I have not once claimed to be the boss- look at the title under my name, it says HELPING HAND. Almost everybody who comes here PMs me to come onto their thread and critique their work, and even Wipex has PMed me apologizing for his asinine remarks because I'm the only one who has offered him constructive criticism. This is why whiny f*ckers like yourself should keep to your business in the V section - because you can't define the line between constructive criticism and bullying. Ask Cammi yourself, he'll show you the PMs I have sent him trying to help him in his quest to become a better writer. We were all like him at one point, but we accepted the criticism, swallowed it hard, took in the tips, and learnt. We didn't get V f*ckheads like yourself coming on here trying to stupidly defend somebody who doesn't need defending like a little child. He needs help, and that's exactly what he's gotten and is getting from me. I'm getting sick of all these morons who think they're being moral angels defending but in truth, they're just looking like complete and utter twats. Don't comment on this thread unless you've got something helpful to say. My god, I was going to write a STORY and let my FEELINGS OUT. Sheesh, f*ck this section. I thought you were all nice respectful people. All you do is f*cking criticize peoples work!

f*ck off back to the proverbial sh*thole of this forum; The V section and don't come back. Learn to take the criticism.

[cammi]

Well bye