[Notna]

Two new missions released and character list updated!

Mission links:
Is Ballas playing a role in?
First date is the worst

Play, enjoy and give me feedbacks people !

[Notna]

One more mission added and character list updated.

All For Love

Play, enjoy and give feedback !

[Notna]

New mission released!

Ant the Saver

Play and enjoy! And I would appreciate some kind of feedback, I've worked like a crazy on the latest missions

[xGhostx]

Hey Notna, can you upload the missions in a zip file (from 1-8)?

[Notna]

QUOTE (xGhostx @ Friday, Jun 22 2012, 06:09)

Hey Notna, can you upload the missions in a zip file (from 1-8)?

Done it, it's a rar file but works atleast as good. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19657

[xGhostx]

Alright thanks, I'm gonna play and give feedback soon.

[Notna]

Great, can't wait for your feedback.

And I am going to make atleast one mission today. And I have now decided how many mission this will include, the final count is 14.

[xGhostx]

Alright I played 8 missions, first thing I need to say is you're missing mission 5 in the rar file.
I have to say the missions were really good, the story was great, I saw some writing mistake but it doesn't effect the missions. The cutscene are sometimes fast to me. The length is long in some missions, I mean, we have to drive really far distance, if we ramp into something, the car turn up side down...failed. This is just my opinion, I think you should make a checkpoint in the car, don't use the car as an objective. If the player accidentally bump the car into the water or destroy it,...they can find another car to get to the destination, it suck when you keep restarting the mission because of a damn car. In the mission ''the first date is the worst'', when I was about to call Jack, I sit in the red car...and the result is...WASTED-MISSION FAILED...because you hided the car and add the objective car, it's kind of annoying to me.
But the missions were really good, mission ''Ant the saver'' was the best to me (poor Kara, she was raped...), I think it would be awesome if this were a story-line.
Keep up the good word, waiting for more.
Rating: 8/10

[Notna]

Thanks a lot for the good rating. Mission 5 missing? Oh damn, now I see it.
About the car objective thing you said, I've used that style and maybe I'll get back to it, but my thing is, when I play missions by others I usually kind of own their style if I like it, and use the same style. As known, I am a big fan of Jackal's Hard Boiled, so guess twice whose style I've been using.

Anyway, did you download the 5th mission anyway? Well it's not too important for the story but still.
However, thanks for playing!

[-S-hark21]

Alright, you've uploaded the mission in .zip file. I'll play this and give feedback.

[Notna]

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Friday, Jun 22 2012, 15:42)

Alright, you've uploaded the mission in .zip file. I'll play this and give feedback.

Great, but remember to downlaod mission five separately since I forgot to include it.

[-S-hark21]

QUOTE (Notna @ Friday, Jun 22 2012, 20:52)

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Friday, Jun 22 2012, 15:42) Alright, you've uploaded the mission in .zip file. I'll play this and give feedback. Great, but remember to downlaod mission five separately since I forgot to include it.

Sure.

[xGhostx]

@Notna You welcome and of course I downloaded mission 5. And did I mention that I also wasted when I enter the chopper in mission 7...
Anyway, just keep your style if you want, I'll try to get used to it. I really love the story so this one goes to my ''must finish'' list.

This post has been edited by xGhostx on Friday, Jun 22 2012, 13:11

[Notna]

QUOTE (xGhostx @ Friday, Jun 22 2012, 16:07)

@Notna You welcome and of course I downloaded mission 5. And did I mention that I also wasted when I enter the chopper in mission 7... Anyway, just keep your style if you want, I'll try to get used to it. I really love the story so this one goes to my ''must finish'' list.

Haha hey thanks!

I am currently working on the 9th mission! It's gonna be exciting for sure, that I can tell.

[Notna]

New mission released!

Jack's Trouble

In this mission, I brought a whole new thing to my missions; in this mission, you play as Ant and Jack! So you play as two characters in this mission! So, play, enjoy and give feedback!

[The - Hunter]

I have played her all having a good time me very
I want to give her a feedback for the your beautiful mission packs



This post has been edited by The - Hunter on Friday, Jun 22 2012, 17:40

[Notna]

Thanks a lot for the good feedback I've worked a lot at this mission pack.

[AnDReJ98]

Played some missions. I can say the story is good and desinger skils is great,just make longer missions. Those're short,people who makes short missions are good in making storylines.

[Notna]

QUOTE (AnDReJ98 @ Friday, Jun 22 2012, 23:33)

Played some missions. I can say the story is good and desinger skils is great,just make longer missions. Those're short,people who makes short missions are good in making storylines.

Well thanks, but actually, they aren't short if they take 5-8 mins to complete. And quality over quantity

And about storyline, after LoAL I'll make a detective storyline.

[AnDReJ98]

Both. And it's okey for long missions,i'm waiting for storyline.