[Platinum Card]

DAY 1 was amazing, I'm surprised how good of an introduction it was. I really like the style that you're coming into. I felt like James and Sarah were carefree freerunners, living life on the edge doing what they love. I really like the pacing of it all and the comedy. I like to see a good mix of comedy, romance, and drama in mission. Reminds me of the main game itself and just damn good writing. Can't wait for the rest bro. I wish you the best of luck.

This post has been edited by Platinum Card on Monday, May 21 2012, 17:22

[Nitesh aka AAAAAAA]

Played Day 1, the missions were short and simple, but good for an introduction. Looking forward to more missions.

Also nice use of humour in the dialogues, especially the intro mission and third.

Good luck with this MP.

[Darkseller63]

Played Day 1.
Cool missions for an introduction, I would say. Waiting for more.

[leoncj]

March: Week Three - Day 2 RELEASED.

Gotta' warn you, though, the whole week is just a tutorial.
Real thing will start from the next week.

But now, enjoy a little robbery won't hurt day.

[Platinum Card]

Hell yeah!

[cammi]

just what i was waiting for, this sounds amazing. I will play day 2 right now. By the way, how many missions can we expect in the next weeks days ?

[leoncj]

QUOTE (cammi @ Monday, Jun 25 2012, 21:18)

just what i was waiting for, this sounds amazing. I will play day 2 right now. By the way, how many missions can we expect in the next weeks days ?

Honestly, I don't know. :

[cammi]

well good luck anyway.

[Platinum Card]

Very nice. Amazing as always. Sometimes the gammar is odd but the characters are foreign so it makes since.

[jovan 53]

why is there no week 1 or week 2

[leoncj]

QUOTE (jovan 53 @ Thursday, Jun 28 2012, 08:52)

why is there no week 1 or week 2

Because based on reality and to make it more impression, the adventures start from at the end of the month.
Plus, don't think I'll make sh*tloads of missions on this storyline, it's a new genre that I'm using is helping me to have more ideas, so thank god, I will be able to finish this storyline. (on MHP, I'm already running out of ideas -.-)

[leoncj]

Long Road
March
Week 3: Miller's One Way Out
Day 7 - Long Road Awaits
RELEASED

[Jimmy_Leppard]

Epic. Good luck with this, man.

[mkthetimelord]

I look forward to these

[xGhostx]

I played the first week and here's my feedback:

Day 1: Day 1 is really short but really fun to play. In the mission just a robbery, the objects weren't well placed but I love how you make Sarah jump from place to place. And there's a part when James fall down from the tree, f*cking creative. And the shooting training...how the hell can you get in there anyway?

Rating: 6/10

Day 2: Once again, it's funnier and dirtier. The mission where we found Mr.Z truck, feel like Assassin's Creed to me, the objects were well placed this time. Then in the last mission, I love how you make the player use their imagination to sneak in, find cover and stuff, great idea but you didn't executed well, you could have put more objects, vehicles to trick player, make more way to sneak in, more guards! And if you want to force the player to use stealth, let the guards hold shotgun. And then the van part was creative too.

Rating: 7/10

Day 7: Day 7 is a little better than the other days, things is getting more serious this time.

Rating: 7.5/10

Overall, you have done a good job building the main character, but not too much for the missions. Your writing is great but sometimes I spot some mistake that effect the dialogue. I know this is just intro and sh*t, but you could have done much better than this. And keep making it funnier and more creative, that's the main things I like about your missions.
Everyone know that you're one of the best designer, but I really want to see you try harder in week 2, I know that's gonna be awesome. So keep up the good work.
I'm waiting for the next week, I believe that it's gonna be great, so please don't let us down.

My favorite quotes:
James: Two hookers want to suck my cock while making me a sandwiches?
Sarah: I've had sex more than you did with women.

[leoncj]

QUOTE

And the shooting training...how the hell can you get in there anyway?

I used "Crazy Trainer" to noclip through walls.

QUOTE

Day 2: Once again, it's funnier and dirtier. The mission where we found Mr.Z truck, feel like Assassin's Creed to me, the objects were well placed this time. Then in the last mission, I love how you make the player use their imagination to sneak in, find cover and stuff, great idea but you didn't executed well, you could have put more objects, vehicles to trick player, make more way to sneak in, more guards! And if you want to force the player to use stealth, let the guards hold shotgun. And then the van part was creative too.

The whole week is just a training, it shows you what kind of things you can expect to see in other weeks.
That's why I didn't put more stuff in there.

-

And thanks, Ghost. Thanks for the ratings and I'll try not to let ya' guys down, cuz' this storyline is something that I never made before, so it's kinda new to me.
You'll see why in the next week.

[mkthetimelord]

Abandoned? =/

[leoncj]

QUOTE (mkthetimelord @ Monday, Aug 13 2012, 20:30)

Abandoned? =/

1) It's summer, I can't concentrate on DYOM pretty well because of this heat in my country. And also I'm on vacation.
2) When I'll be back on DYOM, I'll probably work on Matthew Hegan's Path: Act III, after finishing that, I'll get on this one.
3)

[xGhostx]

So ah, LnD, how is the progress of the next week so far?

[leoncj]

QUOTE (xGhostx @ Tuesday, Aug 14 2012, 10:31)

So ah, LnD, how is the progress of the next week so far?

Haven't worked on nothing, like I said above.