[Jackal1337]

Behind Bars is prison themed mission series,
you may find similarties with movies and TV shows such as Prison Break Oz, Shawnshank Redemption etc.



Chapter One ( 6 Missions )

This chapter focuses on first timer Stanley Brass and San Fierro Rifas.

Routine Part 1
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18457

This mission introduces Stanley Brass,
wealthy office worker living in suburb of San Fierro with his wife, Laura.
One mistake however costs him everything.

Routine Part 2
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18458

After being sent to San Andreas Correctional Facility, Stanley meets Armando Gomez, man serving 8 years
for aggrevated assault of San Fierro Rifa member. Armando introduces Stanley to routine of prison system.

Solitary
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18459

Brass is sent to solitary with Carlo Hazer, high ranking member of San Fierro Rifas.
Homicide detective arrives to investigate murder of inmate.

Transfer
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18460

While Stanley sits in solitary because of his confession, Cesar Vialpando, convicted murderer of four,
is transferred to Unit B. Cesar quickly befriends with couple of San Fierro Rifa members.
His true movivation remains secret.

NOTE: If mission crashes at end, heres what happens in end:
Carlo Hazer forces Stanley to confess the murder of Armando Gomez in order to end the lockdown.

Going Deep
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18461

Carlo Hazer is released from solitary after one week. Carlo has his doubts about familiar sounding name,
Cesar Vialpando and decides to test his loyalty.

Unforgottable
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18462

Leader of San Fierro Rifas, Diego "T Bone" Mendez arrives to prison after being sentenced to life inprisonment
for murder in first degree. Cesar reveals his true intentions when Mendez recognizes him...




Characters

Stanley Brass

Convicted 5/11/1992 for two counts of murder.
Sentence: 30 years, up for parole in 10.

Cesar Vialpando

Convicted 1/2/1992 for 4 counts of murder.
Sentence: life imprisonment without possibility of parole.

Armando Gomez

Convicted 27/1/1992 for aggrevated assault, reckless driving.
Sentence: 8 years.

Carlo Hazer

Convicted 6/30/1990 for 7 counts of murder.
Sentence: life in prison without possiblity of parole.

Jose Hazer


Convicted 5/17/1992 for possession of controlled substance with intent to distribute.
Sentence: 15 years, up for parole in 8.

Jorge Vasquez


Convicted 12/21/1991 for grand theft auto.
Sentence: 6 years, up for parole in 4.

Rodrigo Sanchez


Convicted 2/15/1991 for murder in first degree.
Sentence: 30 years, up for parole in 20.

Diego "T Bone" Mendez


Convicted 4/16/1992 for murder in first degree.
Sentence: life inprisonment, up for parole in 30.

This post has been edited by Jackal1337 on Friday, Apr 13 2012, 18:50

[Jimmy_Leppard]

I absolutely love prison themed mission series aswell as movies and TV shows. Prison Break is by far my favorite TV series of all time and I also made a ''GTA: Prison Break'' mission series based on the same TV show, so.. I'll check this out as soon as I can and get back to you with a feedback

EDIT: I played a couple of missions. First of all, I'll say the things I liked:

- Nice use of actor animations and good cutscene views.
- Pretty cool overall prison interior. It really made a better ambience.
- Very good use of interiors aswell.
- Kinda funny and yet good prison jobs such as driving that forklift to get the supplies to the prison kitchen.
- I also liked the fights in prison and defending ally prisoners.
- Nice text coloring.
- I liked how you used ''multi-protagonist'' way to tell the tale of other prisoners.

Now, the stuff I didn't find so good/you should improve: (SPOILERS)

- Killing your wife and her lover in a heartbeat is not something I expected. To be honest, I really didn't expect the guy who makes breakfast for his wife every morning and treats her (obviously) like a princess to change his behavior from a caring husband to ultra-raged killer. And all that because his wife was cheating on him. Also, maybe you could make a story a little bit longer if someone heard the shots and called the police rather than having the protagonist calling the police and making a confession immediately. That is also a quick change of behavior from ultra-rage to some kind of a cooperative convict. Anyway, the story is good once the protagonist gets into prison.

- Also another thing I would like to recommend you, use the ''hide'' function more. For example, in the first mission when we get out of the house to get to work, there is no car in the cutscene, but after the cutscene, the car is there. Also, after teleporting to work and back home, there are two cars at the house at the end of the day.

Overall, I'd give you a pretty good 7.5/10 since this is still chapter one. I'm sure the rating will go up as the story progresses. Good luck in the future

This post has been edited by Jimmy_Leppard on Friday, Apr 13 2012, 19:46

[Skander Blade]

Great, the king is back

[AnDReJ98]

Goodluck and welcome back!

[KaRzY6]

Nice to see you back Jackal. I will definitely try this. The story looks nice.

[-S-hark21]

Glad you are back Jackal. Good luck with this.

[Notna]

Ooh my. Jackal's back. Almost wrote that Brock Lesnar's back but anyhow.

I'll play this as soon as I get back home.

[Skander Blade]

Mission 2: routine part 2 crashes for me can you tell me how to fix it?

[Jackal1337]

QUOTE (Skander Blade @ Saturday, Apr 14 2012, 18:54)

Mission 2: routine part 2 crashes for me can you tell me how to fix it?

at what part exactly?

[Skander Blade]

QUOTE (Jackal1337 @ Sunday, Apr 15 2012, 10:50)

at what part exactly?

First, the forklift part and after i restarted it it was ok and then it crashed again after stocker takes brass to solitary

[Jackal1337]

QUOTE (Skander Blade @ Sunday, Apr 15 2012, 12:20)

QUOTE (Jackal1337 @ Sunday, Apr 15 2012, 10:50) at what part exactly? First, the forklift part and after i restarted it it was ok and then it crashed again after stocker takes brass to solitary

i crashed at solitary part too, i thought i tested it before i released it D:

well mission ends anyway after solitary part

[tinu09]

Please a make a ZIP with all missions...

[AnDReJ98]

Next time don't bump the topic. Use PM instaed this.

[The - Hunter]

Nice Missions

[Platinum Card]

I'm just seeing this for the first time. Downloading the missions now.