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After Nikolai rescue Soap and Price, a group of Shadow Company soldiers arrive to get Shepherd's body. The Task Force 141 San Andreas Branch army heard about this, and decided to take and burn Shepherd's body once and for all. But, after they take Shepherd's body, the chaos will start, and there will be a lot of battle in front of you! Be ready!
Characters
Descriptions
Sgt. Calvin Sanderson (Protagonist)
A soldier of TF141 and the leader of the TF141 SA Branch.
Sgt. Lukas
Co-leader of TF141 SA Branch and Sgt.Calvin's partner.
Sgt. Joy
Best friend of Calvin since they were kid.
David
He used to be a great captain of Task Force 141 until he retire. He's working at Los Santos, as a doctor.
Pvt.Samuel
A rookie in Task Force 141 Army. He's Sgt.Joy's partner in the Battle for Los Santos
Major Jeremy
A high ranking soldier in Task Force 141
John 'Soap' MacTavish
A field commander of TF141.
John Price
A field commander of TF141.
Nikolai
A Russian Loyalist. He's one of the TF141 Supporter
Yuri
An ex-spetnaz. Only the guy who hates Ian more than Price
General Shepherd
Founder of TF141 and Shadow Company. One of the main antagonist in the story
Ian
The leader of Inner Circle. He hates Task Force 141 more than Shepherd. One of the main antagonist in the story
Chapter 1 - Prologue - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18603 Night of Doom Alive in Darkness Ghost Warrior Battle for San Fierro Last Stand Chasing Shepherd In the Pits of Hell
Chapter 2 - Betrayal of Great Army - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19619 Avengers Desperate Escape Anti Task Force Medical Situation Wolverines Los Santos Freedom
Hello everyone my name is ToniForelli and i will do another DYOM mission review, ok so lets start reviewing lee_atsugai's mission called Night of Doom from his mission pack called Crisis of 2016:Rage of Task Force 141 now time to review
"Writing:Very Good I know that Nikolai is russian and two words i can't remember were bad and i'll make an exception. "Presentation:Excellent Awesome presentation. Enemies, cutscene angle, couple surprises make it excellent
"LengthGood Enemies with high health take your time and took me 5 minutes and 34 seconds.
"DifficultyMedium It can be sometimes difficult when you're in a building and they have high health with medium accuracy and also surrounded.
"VarietyGood Well, there were many drug dealing actors and some objects. It's strange when an old man is a drug dealer .
Overall 9/10 Mission was exciting. It had its moments and there were many enemies. Various guns and actors and when i got in into that building i felt relaxed until i got attacked.
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Chapter 1 (2nd - 7th Mission) by Arejai
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Greeting everyone. Today, I'm going to review a mission pack called Crisis of 2016:Rage of Task Force 141 by lee_atsugai. He requested the chapter 1 to be reviewed starting from the 2nd mission.
Writing (Above Very Good) Although I found some spelling mistakes, the writing and dialogues are very good; the words are pretty much same as army's conversations.
Presentation (Good) Some of the cutscenes are good and some of them could be better. About presentation, I loved the big explosions at the Gant Bridge.
Alive In Darkness
Length (Very Good) It took me 7 minutes to complete this mission. In the beginning of this mission, we'll play as Shephard. We need to figh our way to escape the place. After that, we'll play as the protagonist, Sgt Calvin and we must defend the base that is being attacked by the Shadow Company.
Difficulty (Medium) There are a lot of enemies we need to kill. They've a medium health and accuracy and using a weapon like M4 and Ak47.
Variety (Good) There are plenty used of actors and weapons. I loved how you used the SWAT skin as Shadow Company army.
Ghost Warrior
Length (Very Good) It can be done in 8 minutes. In this mission, we need to eliminate the enemies which is the Shadow Company army in San Fierro. We'll fight with other 3 members.
Difficulty (Medium) Same as above mission, a lot of enemies with medium accuracy and health.
Variety (Good) There are just little types of actors and vehicle, plenty used of weapons and objects. You can see some of the enemies use small gun like micro uzi.
Battle For San Fierro
Length (Good) It can be done in 5 - 7 minutes. We need to defend the tunnel in Calton Heights from the incoming enemies. After that, we'll have a little ride to the place where a pilot was attacked by them.
Difficulty (Medium) I say, medium because we'll fight with other soldiers in defending the tunnel. We'll given a minigun to kill the enemies coming by bikes and some of our allies are using RPGs.
Variety (Very Good) There are just 3 types of actors in this mission, but I really like how the creator placed all those objects inside the tunnel. It looks nice and great for a defence point.
Last Stand
Length (Good) I finished it exaclty 6 minutes. This time, we must defend the Gant Bridge from the Shadow Company.
Difficulty (Medium) Medium again because the enemies has a medium health with low accuracy. We'll get an RPG rocket launcher from the dead soldier.
Variety (Good) Just 2 types of actors, but a lot of objects and vehicles used in this mission especially barracks; too many on the bridge.
Chasing Shepherd
Length (Very Good) It can be done in 7 minutes. We'll role as Calvin's friend, Sgt Lukas in this mission. We'll raid the Easter Bay Airport, San Fierro which is the base of Shadow Company.
Difficulty (Hard) Some of the enemies has a pretty high accuracy. But don't worry, we'll be followed by other 3 Task Force's members.
Variety (Above Very Good) Wow, I liked the base. The objects, the vehicles such as chopper & tank were placed very good.
In The Pits Of Hell
Length (Very Good) 7+ minutes for me to finished this which is the last mission of chapter 1. The protagonist woke up near Gant Bridge. We'll fight our way to Shepherd's hideout/base.
Difficulty (Hard) Even though we use a minigun, almost all those enemies has a high accuracy that I think it's set to 75. Just need to take a little cover and spray all of 'em with the minigun.
Variety (Very Good) The tunnel is full of objects and I loved it. It looks like a real army tunnel; almost of them are boxes. Really nice.
Overall, this chapter is very fun to play. It's full of actions and enjoyment. I love to fight in a group. The good things is, it don't have a long drive. About the story, it's a fight between Task Force and Shadow Company which is led by Shepherd. Yes, he's still alive and it's our task to catch him. Good twist in the last mission, but I'm not telling it here. So, good missions, keep it up, and don't give up.
Today, I'm going to review four missions made by lee_atsugai from his mission pack called Crisis of 2016: Rage of Task Force 141. The link of the topic leading to the missions: http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=506827
Anyways, here's the reviewing:
- Writing:Excellent, there are hardly any errors. Nice use of text coloring. - Presentation:Very good, the cutscenes generally have good angles, apart from one mission that doesn't have any.
Avengers: - Length:Good, it can be completed in five minutes. The player plays as a member of the Task Force 141 team. He must defend a position all mission long. - Difficulty: Easy, all enemies have headshot disabled and have weapons capable of rivalising with yours, but taking cover behind the Patriot or using allied soldiers as human shields will make the mission way easier. - Variety:Very good, the mission contains six different weapons, five different types of vehicles, and nine different characters (skins.)
Desperate Escape: - Length:Very good, it can be complete in eight minutes. The player has to fight his way out of Task Force 141's base. - Difficulty:Easy rolling to aoid enemy shoots and to take cover, plus using allied soldiers as human shields will make it way easier to complete the mission. Also, most enemies are far distance from you. - Variety:Very good, as the mission contains two different vehicles, five different weapons, four different objects, and nine different characters (skins.)
Anti Task Force: - Length:Excellent, it can be completed in ten minutes. The player has to defend the hospital where the team headed. - Difficulty:Medium, the firefight against enemy soldiers equiped with weapons should be easy. The parts where you should watch out is when they throw molotov cocktails at you, the mortars attack (explosion), the RPG guys and the Rhinos attack. Plus, riot mode is enabled. Taking cover behind your allies (using them as human shields) and behind vehicles will help greatly to make the mission easier. - Variety:Excellent, as the mission contains three different vehicles, three different objects, thirteen different characters (skins), and seven different weapons.
Medical Situtation: - Length:Excellent, as it can be completed in eleven minutes. The player controls two characters: a pilot aka Gold Eagle and the same character from the Task Force 141 team from the last mission. - Difficulty:Easy, the mission should generally be easy once inside the Rhino and blowing enemy tanks, helicopters, and foot soldiers. The tedious part might be the firefight to enter the tank. Just take cover behind your allies and objects and vehicles and you should make it alright. Riot mode is enabled in this mission too. - Variety:Very good, as the mission contains three different objects, twelve different characters (skins), four different vehicles, and six different weapons.
Overall, the mission are pretty much well designed. The writing is excellent as the missions contain hardly any errors, the presentation of the missions is very good due to the fact two missions has excellent use of cutscenes with great angles, one without any, and another one with some cutscenes which the angles could be better, the variety is very good due to the high ammount of different weapons, vehicles, characters (skins), and objects, the lenght is very good due to the ammount of time taken to play all four missions, and the difficulty could be toned up a little bit due to the fact the missions are somehow easy to complete. Nonetheless, the missions are great and keep up the good job.
- This mission pack's story is taken from my blog (See my profile for the link) - Calvin is my real name, but don't count the Sanderson - The Story is started directly after the event of Call of Duty : Modern Warfare 2 - All the characters name (Excluding Soap, Price, Nikolai, Shepherd) is all of my friends name - Use this Army skin mod, Outfit Mod for maximum experience
Dutchy3010 and PatrickW xGhostx for the support Narcis_Speed6 ToniForelli for reviewing the 1st Mission Arejai for reviewing the rest of Chapter 1 Secronom President for reviewing 8th - 11th Mission Anyone who play this mission pack
This post has been edited by lee_atsugai on Thursday, Jun 21 2012, 13:38
Ok so I've played the first mission (Night of Doom). Here's my comment:
•I like the first cutscenes, made me wonder what happened to Soap, Price and Nikolai, and what kind of a group those Shadow's are. •At the first shootout, I like how you placed each enemies in they perspective location. It was hard though, especially when I have entered the building (there's no cover), and sadly I've died once because of that. •I like how you've placed the objects, the Basketball court, gates, boxes. Nice one there! •The cutscenes are well done, and no mistake on spelling even on grammar.
My Rating is: ****/*****
I will wait for the next mission. This MP's caught my eyes, this will be on my "To Try MP's" list. Keep it up lee!
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Thanks for the feedback MJ!
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At the first shootout, I like how you placed each enemies in they perspective location. It was hard though, especially when I have entered the building (there's no cover), and sadly I've died once because of that.
I want the mission to be hard, so i didn't put any cover in the building
The mission starts with a cutscene. It showed Price and Nikolai found a man. It fades out and showed a bunch of SWATs found something suspicious. It fades out again and now it showed the HQ of Task 1411. Sgt. Lukas informed Sgt. Calvin that the body of Shepherd was captured by a company named Shadow Company. Lukas wanted to raid their base only with Calvin.
They rushed into the base of Shadow Company, killing everyone inside. When they finally found Shepherd's body in a cell, a man came and hit Calvin with a baseball bat. The man was Soap, who thought Calvin was his enemy. Soap then informed both to came back to the HQ, where Price was waiting for them there.
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Thanks for the feedback NS!
- Did you play COD : MW2? If you play it, then you'll know the ending ( I made it exactly as in the original game, just with a few animation) - It's actually Shadow Company's army, not the SWAT. I use it because there isn't any Shadow Company's soldier skin
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The second mission has been released! Check the main post for download link
Read this ONLY if you're not understand why Shepherd is still alive:
For anyone who play COD : MW2, the knife that made Shepherd dead didn't hit his eyes, it's actually Between his eyes. So that's why, Shepherd's still alive
This post has been edited by lee_atsugai on Wednesday, Apr 18 2012, 10:48
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The writing is excellent as the missions contain hardly any errors, the presentation of the missions is very good due to the fact two missions has excellent use of cutscenes with great angles, one without any, and another one with some cutscenes which the angles could be better, the variety is very good due to the high ammount of different weapons, vehicles, characters (skins), and objects, the lenght is very good due to the ammount of time taken to play all four missions, and the difficulty could be toned up a little bit due to the fact the missions are somehow easy to complete. Nonetheless, the missions are great and keep up the good job.
! Awesome mission, I'm waiting for the next one 
