[sayooj]

(work in progress)

(thanks to andrej for the logo)

introduction
features
characters
INTRODUCTION
john franklyn is the main character of this game, why did he came to SF? you'll see it on the intro mission his parents were lost on the incident showed on indroduction
mission. this storyline is RPG, you will play the role of JOHN franklyn in the quest to make some money and take some revenge on the murderers.[/font]
john:
this storyline is like gta series , you can go anywhere in SF, the story of a young guy who developed and became a star.
triads: the most powerfull gang in SF contracted to kill JOHN'S MOTHER!


This will show you the features that i made in my storyline:
emotion feature: this is a feature that i made to identify emotions, this will be identified by the colours in the names, red:angry/bad. green:good. blue:happy
purple: sad yellow: not statisfied white: normal
TiPS feature: this will give tips while playing
let's do the talking while driving:this feature allows you to talk while driving. there will be a marker showing the place to go, then you must mark it in map, so you can go there while talking!
EXTRAS: in this feature you will get to play thrilling scenes of the game, eg: in the real mission, you drive and escape, when in the mission in the extras folder, you get to shoot as the passenger!!!
DON'T FORGET TO SAVE BY PRESSING Y and N TOGETHER! in storylines
AUTHOR: this storyline story is not intented to represent any actual person, business or anything else.
anybody can upload gameplay videos and reviews.
SCREENSHOTS



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characters	describtion,picture
Sean peterson	john's friend when he comes to SF. Was a dealer in mexico, the mobs had kicked him out of the place coz he didn't sell the drugs to mobs!
harry JT	was a friend of sean in mexico, he is a staff in burger shot and he does gambling! also he have big connections!
john franklyn	the main character.was a driver of a man called uncle dave.
frank	[john's dad, doesn't come home often, he says that he's a sales rep.
maria joseph	john's mother, a normal women
chinese mafia/triads	the ones who attacked john and maria on the airport

don't forget to comment!
trailor

the best three trailors will be shown here, so everybody start to make one, please !!!

MISSIONS

intro mission- download
CHAPTER-1 :[SIZE=7]download chapter 1
warning: there is a little problem in chapter 1, mission 2 :just a walk in the alleys.in the mission you must mark your house before walking with sean.
Achievements
the achievements that you will get ingame:
cover fire: win the storyline without health cheat
i'm a wise guy: choose wise decisions
intellingent: win the storyline legally
the driver= drive cool
real shooter= shoot using coversystem mods
CREDITS

narcis speed: cool titles and cool logo
kmlwin: cool signature
AnDReJ98: telling me about gfx requests
thanks for all who plays and rates!

don't expect the chapter 2 this month, coz it is big
but i'm working my best, the speed is half mission per day.
i will be waiting for your feedbacks!
(will update later)

This post has been edited by sayooj on Friday, Jun 15 2012, 14:34

[IXMJXI]

Could you add a bit of info?
Such as:
•Pictures/Headers/Banners
•Story
•Characters


And Goodluck with this.

[sayooj]

THANKS MAN!

[SatournFan]

Re-size your logo, it's too big and stretching the page for me (even for my big monitor).

And learn two things:

1. English
2. How to not be annoying.

For the second, I suggest you to stop writing in Caps and putting that much smilies.

[sayooj]

he he

[sayooj]

can anyone please make me a cool logo for this one?

[AnDReJ98]

This time,i'll. But next time use GFX requests and read the rules about it. Click on my signature to view topic.

EDIT:

You didn't said what you want? Which style or something...

CODE

http://i.imgur.com/WV0pW.png

This post has been edited by AnDReJ98 on Wednesday, Apr 18 2012, 10:53

[Notna]

QUOTE (sayooj @ Wednesday, Apr 11 2012, 04:52)

I am a bit disappointed in this. This logo is made by Narcis_speed6 for the third multi designer project. First you should have asked permission from me and then Narcis.
Anyway, welcome to the DYOM forums.

[sayooj]

sorry man, i don't know that kind of things, i appologise for what i did.

[sayooj]

anybody please tell me which software are you using to make cool subtitles.

[GTAIndonesia]

QUOTE (sayooj @ Wednesday, Apr 25 2012, 08:51)

anybody please tell me which software are you using to make cool subtitles.

Notepad++, although you can already do it in DYOM.

[sayooj]

can anybody comment anything please

This post has been edited by sayooj on Tuesday, Jun 12 2012, 15:22

[sayooj]

chapter 1 is been published, so feedbacks are welcome!!!!

[sayooj]

why can't anybody please comment, please please please any feedback, i'm sure chapter 2 will be loaded with guns

[Juan-R]

I'm not a super duper designer, but I don't think begging will help you. I'll try this out & give you feedback just so you could calm down.


Edit: I played all the missions so far. They were alright. The only thing I can complain about for this series is the dialog. It's too sloppy, although I can understand it. Other than that, you're on the right path! Keep up the good work

This post has been edited by Juan-R on Wednesday, Jun 20 2012, 02:43

[AznKei]

I don't know if it's only me, but the 4th mission (the pizza/burger deliveries) was a little bit too hard IMO.

You should add a little bit more time in order to make it user-friendly. Also, don't put forced countdowns on a time limit mission please.

This post has been edited by AznKei on Wednesday, Jun 20 2012, 05:08

[sayooj]

thanks , man , but i didn't felt difficult

[AznKei]

QUOTE (sayooj @ Wednesday, Jun 20 2012, 12:41)

thanks , man , but i didn't felt difficult

Now, I got it. You putted the time limit before the 15 seconds cutscenes, so I had to skip them to have enough time to complete the mission.

It's still more tight than the original GTA SA missions with a time limit though.

[sayooj]

thanks for playing the storyline, i like to make hard missions, it'll be interesting. can you make a review for my missions??

This post has been edited by sayooj on Friday, Jun 22 2012, 10:31

[AznKei]

QUOTE (sayooj @ Friday, Jun 22 2012, 01:32)

thanks for playing the storyline, i like to make hard missions, it'll be interesting. can you make a review for my missions??

You can check out the DYOM video review commentary topic for your answer.