[Sanjeem]

QUOTE (MarijuanaMonkey @ Saturday, Mar 31 2012, 12:16)

I read all missions, they're awesome. Also you have developed yourself I can say. You're reflecting characters' characteristic better then you do in Faustin's Fate. I sent you a PM about the some plots and ideas in my story. However I forgot something to write, I'm writing here: Jewish Mafia is known for their connections with Mexican Cartel about drug trade (for example Abergil Cartel's known for its connection with Mexicans about ecstasy trade). Maybe I would add a Jew drug lord who's making drug deals with Mexicans.

Also the Sicilian Mafia, Not American Mafia have strong ties with Colombian and Mexican Cartels, for importing drugs into Europe and Italy. Maybe Include them as well.

[MarijuanaMonkey]

QUOTE (Sanjeem @ Saturday, Mar 31 2012, 12:18)

QUOTE (MarijuanaMonkey @ Saturday, Mar 31 2012, 12:16) I read all missions, they're awesome. Also you have developed yourself I can say. You're reflecting characters' characteristic better then you do in Faustin's Fate. I sent you a PM about the some plots and ideas in my story. However I forgot something to write, I'm writing here: Jewish Mafia is known for their connections with Mexican Cartel about drug trade (for example Abergil Cartel's known for its connection with Mexicans about ecstasy trade). Maybe I would add a Jew drug lord who's making drug deals with Mexicans. Also the Sicilian Mafia, Not American Mafia have strong ties with Colombian and Mexican Cartels, for importing drugs into Europe and Italy. Maybe Include them as well.

Yeah, this is right too. Maybe both of us can use Italia/Sicilia based crime families, Five Families, Pegorinos for our stories. I had an idea to use Ray Boccino as a drug connections and a money lender in my story but it's not obvious. However Five Families would fit better than Pegorinos. Maybe both of them.

[GTAboyWonder]

Mission 5 - Uptown Fighters
Mission Giver - Marcus Hamilton

A day after the last mission, Mark will get a call from an Unknown Caller. He'll then conceive that it is Marcus. Marcus will explain to Mark about how they can avenge Missy's death. He explains that a race is going on in Northwood, and how they can completely wreck it all. Marcus tells Mark to meet him at the gas station in The Meat QuarterOnce you've arrived, a cutscene will roll in.

(Mark walks up to Marcus who filled up a bottle with gasoline with a rag in it)

Mark: Making magic?

Marcus: I'm makin' power!

Mark: So? Are we going to ruin those speed junkies' race.

Marcus: Of course we are. Can I ask you, do you got some explosives or some sh*t?

Mark: Not on me, buddy.

Marcus: Aight'. I know a guy down in Bohan who hooked me up, he gave me this.

Mark: Pipe bombs? Now we're talking.

Marcus: 'Kay, lets go.

Once you've gained control of Mark, drive down to the starting line of the race. When it's begun, throw the Pipe Bombs out the window and blow all the UR away. When they're all wiped out, a bunch of Riders will chase you in Double T's The best way of getting rid of them is by jumping through a ramp, as they'll most likely crash or not even make it. Once you've lost the Riders, Marcus will tell you to take him home, and he'll explain about some other races the Riders are doing.

Mission Complete

REWARDS:

$600
Pipe Bombs
Racing Activity

[GTAboyWonder]

Mission 6 - Angels Amongst Us
Mission Giver - Marcus Hamilton

After the last mission, Marcus will call Mark and tell him to meet him at Meadows Park. When you get there, a cutscene will trigger.

(Mark walks towards Marcus, who's wearing sunglasses and sitting on a bench)

Mark: Hey..

Marcus: Yo'... I'm takin' everything pretty hard, man. My boss, he's blaming me for the death of Missy... Me!

Mark: Heh.. Yeah, I know how leaders are. They think they have so much power, but what do they need it for?

Marcus: Bullsh*tting.

Mark: Yeah, I know that.

Marcus: I'm thinking of going to Los Santos, live with my brother. So I can just run away from this sh*t.

Mark: Do you really think running away from our problems actually does anything?

Marcus: If that doesn't.... What does?

Mark: Guns

Marcus: Ha.. Y'know, you're actually a really good guy. I always thought Colombians were a bunch of drug smuggling, B killin', heartless guys.

(Engines of choppers are heard, Marcus gets a call from Joseph saying that a couple of Angels of Death are attacking his home)

Marcus: Sh*t! Aight' Mark, let's go.

Drive to Joseph's house.

Once you've entered a vehicle, Marcus will start a conversation.

Marcus: Why are the Angels of Death attacking you guys?

Mark: Hell, how should I know. Joseph always keeps me out-of-the loop.

Marcus: You guys got some history?

Mark: We've never interfered with any greaseballs. Well, until that day..

Marcus: But these are The Angels, the only problems we've had were with the Riders. Although, they did have some other prick wearin' a leather jacket. But I'm pretty sure he was part of those Alderney racist assholes.

Mark: Well who ever it was, we're still killing these bastards.

Once you've arrived, numerous waves of Angels will arrive to the street. Shooting them off there bikes before they get off is easier than shooting them while they take cover. When you've terminated all, you will have to come up to Joseph. A cutscene will trigger.

Mark: You okay?

Joseph: Yeah...

Marcus: 'We came too late?

Joseph: Not at all. I was about to handle these fools on my own.

Mark: I'd like to see you try that, heh. Anyways, why are they attacking you? Did you steal money, drugs, there dripping metal junk?

Joseph: I don't f*cking know, okay. But... I'll get to the bottom of it.

Mark: Alright

Marcus: Well, I'mma bounce. See ya' later, Marcos.

Mark: Yeah..

Mission Complete

REWARDS:

$500

After awhile, Marcus will call you to explain why the AoD attacked. He got the source from a man who turned states against Elizabeta Torres. He explains that the Coke was stolen from the AoD by the Uptown Riders and Lost MC during a heist gone bad.

[GTAboyWonder]

Mission 7 - Liberty City Blues
Mission Giver - Joseph Medina

After the last mission, Joseph will call you and tell Mark to come over at his mansion. Once you've arrived, a cutscene rolls in.

(Mark walks to the living room)

Joseph: Hey...

Mark: Hey, so you needed me?

Joseph: Yes, Mark, I do. I f*cking need you right now!

Mark: Okay, then what is it?

Joseph: Well... This music producer, Jack Ladwig. You might've heard of him.

Mark: Maybe..

Joseph: He bought a couple of drugs from us a few days back. He said he'll pay us when he releases his albums and make money. Well, it's been long enough. I need my cash, WE need our cash.

Mark: 'K, so what's this got to do with me?

Joseph: You're going to help me get my money back. Jack owns a record label that contracts the Blue Brothers.

Mark: Uhh... Those f*cking tween dipsh*ts. C'mon, we're an international criminal organization. Not a f*cking kids music production.

Joseph: No, we're not doing that Glory Hole sh*t. The Blues are having a concert at Star Junction. I want you to drug em'.

Mark: While I'm at it, maybe I should buy a windowless white f*cking van!

Joseph: Marcos... Come on. Do it for me, us, do it for yourself. Because... if you don't, THEN I'LL F*CKING STRANGLE YOU UNTIL YOUR PASSED OUT AND PISS IN YOUR MOUTH!.

Mark: Fine! I'll do it...

Now you have control of Mark. Get in a car and drive to The Majestic where the Blue Brothers are staying at.

Drive to the hotel.

Once you've arrived, Mark will call Joseph.

Mark: Alright, I'm at the Majestic, now what?

Joseph: Okay, there should be a couple of Coke in the alleyway around the back.

Get the coke.

Once you've grabbed it, Joseph will call Mark.

Joseph: You got the coke?

Mark: Yup..

Joseph: Alright, now I got word that they're staying at Suite 125. But you can't go near there unless your wearing a "uniform" of some sort. You'll find what you need in the trunk of a Dukes.

Mark: What is this? A scavenger hunt?

Find the car.

When you finally found it, open the trunk and Mark will change into a plumber outfit. Get to the Majestic and get in an elevator. When you've arrived at the floor. Walk to the suite, and there will be a guard.

Guard: Woah, you don't seem like you belong near these boys.

Mark: I'm the plumber, I've gotten reports of a broken.. oven.

Guard: There is no oven.

(Mark punches the guard, knocking him out)

Get in the suite and approach the Blue Brothers. A cutscene will trigger, showing Mark grab Billy and stuff Coke in his nose, and push him out the way. He'll then approach Bobby and force him to sniff it. Bobby will actually enjoy it, and continue sniffing it as Mark walks away.

Mission Complete

REWARDS:

$700

Mark will call Joseph and inform him of his work. He'll then tell Joseph that he felt like a bad person, and how he'll never look at teenage CD's the same ever again.

[GTAboyWonder]

Lots of new updates!

P.S. Sorry for double posting.

[Sanjeem]

Nice screenshots. Really good work mate.

[GTAboyWonder]

Finally posted the Random Encounters.

[MarijuanaMonkey]

Like the new stuffs, man. I sent you a PM, please give it a look.

[Money Over Bullshit]

This is a great concept for a DLC and so far you seem to me handling it really well. Keep up the good work

[GTAboyWonder]

Mission 8 - Devil Eats Cat
Mission Giver - Joseph Medina

Joseph will call Mark and inform him that he wants him to meet someone important. Drive to Joseph's mansion, and a cutscene will roll in.

Joseph: Man, these are definitely better than the other ones..
Packie: - Yea, I know!

(Mark walks in)

Joseph: Oh look, there's Mark. Hey Mark, come-come in...

Mark: What's wrong? Hit your head too hard.
Packie: - Yeah!

Joseph: F*ck you! Packie, I want you to meet Mark, Mark this is Packie.

Mark: Hey..
Packie: - Sup'

Mark: Seriously Joseph, what are you on?

Packie: Meds... Illegal Meds..

Mark: Meds? Ain't that what housemoms take?

Joseph: I don't know, and I don't care. But if they do... they sure are lucky b*tches.

Mark: How did you get these?

Packie: Well, some Serb and I went and stole them from those Chings from Algonquin. And things worked out. Joseph here contacted my brother, Gerald, and told him he wants in on the action. So we hook him up with these and-

Joseph: Alright, alright, alright... Mark, you and Packie are doing some deal with some Gambetti men.

Mark: No sh*t? We're doing big time now?

Joseph: Oh yeah, imagine how the men back in Colombia are right now. Anyways, you and Packie go do this deal, While I take a few more of these... "painkillers".

Mark: Alright, have fun.

Once you've regained control of Mark, drive to the meeting location. Mark will start a convo.

Mark: So, you're Irish?

Packie: No, I'm French. Maybe you can already tell by the way you must think I'm a bitch.

Mark: Ha! C'mon, don't make this a predicament talk. Since we're going to be working together, we might as well work together, of course.

Packie: Isn't working too strong of a word for new partners. How about concealing?

Mark: Let's just keep it low for now..

When you've arrived, a cutscene will start.

(Packie and Mark walk towards the Gambetti men)

Packie: (whispering) Alright, let's do this good.

Roy: Hey! Packie McReary and Mark Moreno working together... atlast?

Packie: Look Zito, we're doing this quickly, no harms done, no harms needed.

Roy: Alright. Where's the meds?

Packie: Here... I don't know why you just don't get this from the Pegs themselves.

Roy: Because we don't trust those weak pieces of-

(A car comes in, with Russians shooting out from the windows, while Roy and the Gambettis make a run.)

Once you've regained control of Mark, shoot the Russians. There are 15 in total. 11 are originally there, 3 arrive in cars, and 2 chase Mark and Packie as they leave. Once you've lost the Russians, take Packie home and you complete the mission.

Mission Complete

REWARDS:

$300

Packie will text you and tell you that he was impressed. He writes to come over at his home and do some more work.

[GTAboyWonder]

Mission 9 - Oh Brother
Mission Giver - Packie McReary

Once you arrive at Packie's home, a cutscene will start.

(Mark knocks on Packie's door, Maureen answers it)

Maureen: Hello, how may I help you?

Mark: Hi, I'm looking for Packie.

Maureen: Alright, I'll go get him, mister.

Mark: Thanks.

(Maureen closes the door. After awhile, Packie opens it)

Packie: Hey, Mark, come in. Come in..

(Mark walks in)

Mark: So, what kind of business are we doing?

Packie: Drugs.. You Colombians are known for having the best sh*t. The best sh*t. You know, our gang used to mean something in Liberty City. Mainly Algonquin. We were like f*cking King Tut. Just like your Cartel in Colombia. But we're also forgotten like your Cartel also.

Mark: Alright, so what's that supposed to mean?

Packie: It means that we've gone too soft. Us men. I mean, look at the business that we're doing. Us, working with Puerto Rican chochas. And you, drugging pop-tween stars. We need to step up. That's why you and I are working together.

Mark: So what are we doing?

Packie: We're going to pick up my brother first. Derrick, sweet, ol' Derrick. He just came back from Ireland, he's been there for a long time. Hell, I think he forgot how to hold a gun. But I doubt that. He was in the IRA, giving it to crooked toothed bastards from the UK.

Mark: So, you're telling me that we should step up? Meanwhile, you want me to pick your brother up? I don't f*cking get it...

Packie: C'mon lad. Let's do this. He knows alot of chings that can help us.

Mark: Fine, let's go then.

(Both Packie and Mark exit the living room as Kate stop them)

Kate: Woah, Packie, aren't you going to help ma?

Packie: You help her Kate. We have enough hard jobs in our hands.. We're picking Derrick up.

Kate: Well, okay. Bye you guys.

Packie: Yup..
Mark: -See ya.

When the cutscene ends, and you've regained control Mark, get in a car and drive to Francis International Airport. A conversation will begin.

Mark: So you're brother Derrick? Is he a great connections with the Chinese.

Packie: Chinese, Japanese, Korean, Vietnamese, Filipino. You name it, he connects it.

Mark: No seriously. What connections does he have?

Packie: Mostly drugs, and meds.

Mark: What kinds of drugs?

Packie: What are we doing, 20 questions? The Chinese deals with Needles. Steroids, Ecstacy. Not too long ago, the Chinese brought in Heroin or something like that in the city.

Mark: What connections does your Mob have.

Packie: Mainly Italian mobs from Alderney. The Pegorino is our main colleague. Although, they are probably the weakest, which sets a con for us.

Mark: Was that man, Roy Zito, connected with the Pegorinos?

Packie: No, he works with the Gambetti's. The strongest of all Commissions. If you get an opportunity to work with them, you'll definetly go untop.

When you arrive the airport, honk the horn to alert Derrick. Once he get's in, a brief cutscene shows an Irish man. He's named Conor Daugherty, an old friend Derrick left behind during a cop chase. Conor was put behind bars for 12 years. Derrick will immediatly recognize him and tell Mark to step on it. Try to shake Conor off your tail. Once you've done it, drive Packie and Derrick to there home.

Mission Complete

REWARDS:

$320

After a while, a man will call you informing you about a deal that just happened recently. He'll later reveal that he's Roy Zito. He'll tell Mark to come and meet him at his house in Dukes. His missions will now become available.

[SatournFan]

I just read all the missions. This is really well written, I'd surely play it if it'd be a real DLC.

[GTAboyWonder]

@SatournFan - Thanks!

Mission 10 - Closing In
Mission Giver - Packie McReary

After the last mission, a PM will appear on the radar. Once you've arrived to Packie's home, the mission will trigger.

(Mark walks in without knocking, Gerry comes out and attacks Mark)

Gerry: Who the f*ck are you? You're dead, asshole!
Mark: -What! Leave me alone!

Packie: Woah, woah, woah.. What's going on here?

Gerry: Patrick, who the f*ck is this?!

Packie: It's my friend, let him go, bimbo.

(Gerry lets Mark go, as he gasps for air)

Mark: You crazy motherf*cker! Who the f*ck do you think you are!?

Packie: Calm down, Mark. He's my brother, Gerald. He runs this whole family. Ain't that right Gerry?

Gerry: Whatever the hell you say..

Packie: Look, he's a little nervous. He's real paranoid. Anyone he sees, he'll think they're cops or FIB, or something.

Gerry: Come on, Packie. You know I ain't afraid of no FIB.

Packie: Yeah, whatever. Anyways, he wants to make sure no one will find him.

Mark: Alright, good for the both of you. I'm leaving now. Hey Gerry, thanks for the welcome. See ya'.

Packie: Wait, you're not going anywhere. There's business we got to take care of.

Mark: Like what?

Packie: There's a deal going down between the Ancelotti's and Lupisella's.

Mark: Alright, what are they dealing?

Packie: Oh, a couple of the Lupisella's are smuggling cigarettes from Sicily.

Mark: Cigarettes? I don't think that's something worth stealing.

Packie: But these cigarettes are stuffed with Weed. Straight from New Zealand. You can make a profit from this. Some can go to you, and the rest can go to us and the Pegs.

Mark: Fine, let's go.

When you regain control of Mark, get in the car, and drive to the meeting location. As you drive there, Packie will explain about a Waste Management business that belongs to the Ancelotti's, and how they're gonna hit it. Mark will ask Packie if that's too extreme. Packie will respond saying that it's impossible to call it extreme, as the Ancelotti's are by-gone's. Once you've arrived, Packie will instruct you to follow him into the abandoned building next to the deal site. When you're there, the Ancelotti's will come followed by the Lupisella's. After awhile, Packie will instruct you to shoot the main dealer. Killing or shooting him will trigger the rest of the gang to shoot at you and Packie. When you've killed them all, pick up the cigars and drive to Packie's home and drop him off.

Mission Complete

REWARDS

$500

Joseph will call Mark and explain to him about Freda almost being killed by some Mexican errand boy. He'll then tell Mark about Freda making run for it, and flee to Europe. A "J" will appear on the radar.

Packie will call Mark and tell him that Ray Boccino was impressed with the last job. A "PM" will appear on the radar.

[GTAboyWonder]

Mission 11 - The Albanian Trail
Mission Giver - Joseph Medina

After receiving Joseph's call, a J will appear on the radar. Drive to Joseph's mansion, and a cutscene will roll in.

(Joseph heads outside)

Joseph: Mark! C'mon, hurry up. We don't have much time.

You regain control of Mark, get in a car, and a conversation will begin.

Mark: Why are we in such a rush?

Joseph: Because Freda is said to be fleeing to Europe. We can't let him get away with my drugs, cash, and everything else he's done.

Mark: Where is he right now?

Joseph: In his apartment on Little Bay, in Bohan. We got to get there fast.

Mark: Alright..

Once you've arrived to the apartment building, Joseph will walk to the front door. An Albanian will notice Mark and Joseph and say something in their language. Numerous Albanians will exit the building shooting at Mark and Joseph. Take cover and kill all of the Albanians. A brief cutscene shows Freda hopping on a NRG-900. Another will appear next to him, get on it and chase him. The chase will go on from Little Bay, to the Northwood Heights Bridge. From Northwood, to Star Junction. After immediately passing Star Junction, the screen will fade black, showing a brief cutscene. Still in the cutscene, it shows Freda stopping infront of a bank being surrounded by police. Freda will creep out and escape the site. You regain control again, infront of the site. There are two choices...

1. Going through - Drive through the scene, and risk a Three-Star wanted level, but it's faster to catch up to Freda.

2. Go to the arch - Next to you, there's an arch with a ramp. Going through there will not give you attention. Although, it will be a risk of losing Freda and failing the mission.

Which ever choice you pick, the mission will go on. The remaining parts of the chase are scripted, meaning that Freda will cause mayhem. After awhile, a brief cutscene shows Freda looking back, shooting at Mark and Joseph. Without looking, a Phantom comes out from the road and crushes Freda. Joseph will get off the bike and take a look at Freda's body. Implying that the Colombian-Albanian war is over.

Mission Complete

REWARDS:

*Loan Sharking Missions
$5000

* = Unlocked by mission giver/activities/side missions

This post has been edited by GTAboyWonder on Thursday, Apr 26 2012, 04:16

[SatournFan]

I really liked the ending of the last one. A bit dramatic.

[MarijuanaMonkey]

The last mission is the best. Such a tragedic death for a scumbag like Freda. Also do you have any ideas about Albanians? Yili Valdron (the most powerful Albanian kingpin in L.C, I told you in the PMs) definitely gets angry about one of his good earners / loyal workers' death.

[GTAboyWonder]

Mission 12 - Mission Possible
Mission Giver - Packie McReary

Drive to Packie's home, and walk into the marker. The mission will begin.


(Mark walks in to see Packie with a but load of cash on the coffee table)

Mark: Woah, How'd you get all this cash?

Packie: Oh, we robbed a bank.

Mark: A bank? It looks like you robbed the f*cking Pyrmaids from Egypt. What are you going to with the cash.

Packie: Here, that's not much, but it's something.

Mark: Wow, thanks.

Packie: So, what I'm going to do with the cash is to buy, I dont know? I could start with Coke, or maybe guns. But, nah. I'll just buy a car.

Mark: Alright, want me to come with?

Packie: I'm not buying it today. The car is coming in from Germany. It's special, in some kind of way. The car is being shipped as we speak. The thing is that an Australian mob, that goes by the name of Five Jacks, wants to mess it all up. Make sure those Aussie bastards don't steal my car.

Mark: Okay, I'll do it.

Once you've regained control of Mark, drive to the docks in Dukes, and get in a boat. Drive the boat to the ship carrying the Infernus. The Germans will introduce themselves. As they do, the Australians arrive and start shooting at the boat. The car is found in the front deck. Make sure the Jacks do not destroy it, or the mission will fail. Once you've killed them all. The driver will dock the ship, and thank you. As Mark welcomes them to America.

Mission Complete

REWARDS:

$690

This post has been edited by GTAboyWonder on Saturday, Apr 28 2012, 19:47

[SatournFan]

There's a little mess you made in the final sentences. I corrected it, here's the better variant:

QUOTE (GTAboyWonder)

The car is found in the front deck. Make sure the Jacks do not destroy it, or the mission will fail. Once you've killed them all, the driver will dock the ship, and thank you, as Mark welcomes them to America.

The things I added are in bold.

[MarijuanaMonkey]

Hey, GTAboyWonder man. Can you show BEL events in GTA IV-EFLC Timeline and send (PM) me?