[Flight180Victim]

QUOTE (GTA-King @ Tuesday, Jun 26 2012, 16:01)

^ Thanks! I like to consider myself the expert. His son, Walter Jr., has cerebral palsy. The actor who plays him, RJ Mitte, also has cerebral palsy... but not as bad as the character he plays. Enjoy the show man! You're in for one hell of a ride!

Now I understand, thanks a lot!

[GTA-King]

^ No problem!

Bumped this again in case someone hasn't read it yet.

[Notna]

I read it finally.

What can I say? The best frickin' story I've ever read. It's simply awesome. The story is dramatic. Al's turn to back to the crime life but still, all because of his, family. The story is great.

Also, as it worked in RDR, killing the protagonist worked in this one as well.
Great story. 10/10. You inspired me to finally write and publish my own here soon!

[GTA-King]

^ Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'm also glad I inspired you to write your own story!

[Bellic 4 life]

I'm sorry, but I just saw this, and I think you deserve 2012 Witer of the Year forum award.

[GTA-King]

Thanks! I'm glad you think so. I actually asked the higher ups here for one, but they declined. I guess they don't appreciate all the hard work I put into this... smh.

Would be cool if you guys nominated me though, as well as telling the higher ups I deserve an award.

[GTA-King]

Bumpity bump!

Just in case someone hasn't read yet.

[Leve-O]

Great story. More people should read this if they haven't already.

[GTA-King]

Thanks! Yeah, I put alot of hard work into it.

[MarijuanaMonkey]

Really good and impressing story, mate. Liked it. Also looks like you're a Breaking Bad maniac like me. Also:

QUOTE (GTA-King)

Basically, it's about a mathematician who resorts to counting cards for the mob in order to provide for his family. He's someone who has lacked testostrome his whole life, due to having 3 sister, a mother, and no father figure. So he loves the danger in working with the mob. Why does the mob need him to count cards for them? That is the secret I will not tell. Just know that he eventually gets way over his head.

this sounds like Breaking Bad, so I'll definitely love it. Waiting it.

And I have a project like Breaking Bad too. It will be about ketamine produce & trade and it will set in England (according to my research England is the place where ketamine is most used during last years, even it sat on the throne of ecstasy according to I found). It will probably (I've some other ideas about it) about a Scottish/British (or would be an Indian migrant, I'm not sure) who's a chemistry student after involved in ketamine producing and trade after his pharmacist father gets lost. Volpe Brothers (from GTA IV) will be main characters in my game who expanded their business to England. Also there will be Mexican Cartel, Ukranians and U.K Angels Of Death in the game. I'm planning to name it "Dog Dusters" or "Dog Bleeders" (cause I read, one of ketamine's nicknames is "dog cocaine") but I don't know which is better.

[GTA-King]

^ Sounds like a great story, man. Looking forward to it.

This post has been edited by GTA-King on Wednesday, Aug 8 2012, 17:45

[skrillarilla]

should make a second story

[GTA-King]

^ I will one of these days when I have the time again.

[GTA-King]

Bump.

[GhostWryter]

Team up with a drawing artist. You handle the lines and him/her the visuals. You never know.

[GTA-King]

QUOTE (GhostWryter @ Friday, Aug 31 2012, 15:21)

Team up with a drawing artist. You handle the lines and him/her the visuals. You never know.

Well, most of my characters in the story are from the V trailer... but I wouldn't mind some of the other ones.

[universetwisters]

Really nice, man! What if V comes out and it turns out it was just like this

[GTA fan from the United Kingdom]

Great story, well thought out, intense, and i think this storyline would work in GTA V

[GTA-King]

QUOTE (GTA fan from the United Kingdom @ Tuesday, Sep 4 2012, 12:50)

Great story, well thought out, intense, and i think this storyline would work in GTA V

Thanks man! Much appreciated!

[ClaudeSpeedRulez]

I applaud you.

It was very extensive and well thought out.