[WILLAL212]

Absolutely amazing

[Gtaghost22]

QUOTE (Long_Haired_Boy @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:25)

Who else thinks this reminds them of the GetALife building.

Nobody..

[cp1dell]

GTAForums: That place where pre-pubescent children come to bash mature folks for being creative and writing. I just love this generation.

[GTA-King]

@Gtaghost22: Thanks! Yeah, like I said, this story is not for everybody. I am just describing the story I would like V to have about the balcony guy, Albert De Silva. I respect your opinion.

@Long_Haired_Boy: lol, nice! That was pretty clever. I would like to confirm though that I do indeed HAVE a life. I've been writing this story for bout 3 days now. I had the day off work today, and I can't hardly go anyone due to the aftermath of a tornado we had recently, so I decided to finish my story. I hope you at least read it before you judged me.

@WILLAL212: Much appreciated! It's nice to see feedback like this.

[Long_Haired_Boy]

QUOTE (Gtaghost22 @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:28)

QUOTE (Long_Haired_Boy @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:25) Who else thinks this reminds them of the GetALife building. Nobody..

Well it doesn't matter anyways because I for one get it.

[HydraulicWaRiOr]

QUOTE (cp1dell @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:31)

GTAForums: The place where people come to bitch about other peoples opinions about threads and constantly assume that everyone with a different opinion than them is 12 when they themselves are most likely around that age.

Fixed.

[GTAboyWonder]

Now that I've read this, Alberto/Ned can be a VERY good protagonist. Good Job! You should even make a concept thread in the GTA Series Chat section!!

[Cole Phelps Gta]

id prefer to play as alberto del rio

[cp1dell]

QUOTE (HydraulicWaRiOr @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:36)

QUOTE (cp1dell @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:31) GTAForums: The place where people come to bitch about other peoples opinions about threads and constantly assume that everyone with a different opinion than them is 12 when they themselves are most likely around that age. Fixed. [Supreme]

Dohohoho, how clever. So you don't find it one bit immature that someone "needs to get laid" or "has no life" because they wrote some fan-fiction? That sure explains a lot.

[GTA-King]

@HydraulicWaRiOr: That's ironic, because you bash other people's opinion in favor of your own. You're one of the most close-minded people on this site. Like I said before, how about you make some effort in telling the story of your character. By the way, did you even read the story? I'm guessing you didn't. I included your character in it, and I gave him an important role. In my story his name is Terrance "T-Ray" Rodriguez.

@GTAboyWonder: Thanks! I am going to keep it in the V section though. It's meant as a hype thread, so I think it belongs here. If it get's locked, which it might judging by some of the f*cking idiots who post in here, then I will post it in a different section.

@Cole Phelps Gta: He's puerto rican I'm guessing?

This post has been edited by GTA-King on Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:47

[Gtaghost22]

Guys stop bashing the OP, his story is AMAZING! and to be honest i dont think writing a very good story like this means he has no life! He could be into writing you know... So please STFU and leave him alone

[flnyla]

Give Rockstar their script back please....

10/10

[waitin4gta]

Again very well made my friend. Much better detail and you put gangs in! Awesome man, but again I hope that the old man is not our lead character

[HydraulicWaRiOr]

QUOTE (GTA-King @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:45)

@HydraulicWaRiOr: That's ironic, because you bash other people's opinion in favor of your own. You're one of the most close-minded people on this site. Like I said before, how about you make some effort in telling the story of your character. By the way, did you even read the story? I'm guessing you didn't. I included your character in it, and I gave him an important role. In my story his name is Terrance "T-Ray" Rodriguez.

Of course I do, that's how a debate works. You aren't supposed to accept any of the opposition's opininons as a possibility, especially when you find it to be so prepostorous, such as your's and many other's opinions around here.

[canttakemyid]

Read the entire thing and then re-watched the trailer.....

NOTHING SHORT OF AMAZING

*Love the Breaking Bad vibe as well.

[cp1dell]

QUOTE (HydraulicWaRiOr @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 04:07)

QUOTE (GTA-King @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:45) @HydraulicWaRiOr: That's ironic, because you bash other people's opinion in favor of your own. You're one of the most close-minded people on this site. Like I said before, how about you make some effort in telling the story of your character. By the way, did you even read the story? I'm guessing you didn't. I included your character in it, and I gave him an important role. In my story his name is Terrance "T-Ray" Rodriguez. Of course I do, that's how a debate works. You aren't supposed to accept any of the opposition's opininons as a possibility, especially when you find it to be so prepostorous, such as your's and many other's opinions around here. [Supreme]

What you're doing is blindly defending someone. You're just ignorant.

[AceRay]

Haters gonna hate.

Amazing work King, see you put a lot of effort into this

[GTA-King]

QUOTE (HydraulicWaRiOr @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 04:07)

QUOTE (GTA-King @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:45) @HydraulicWaRiOr: That's ironic, because you bash other people's opinion in favor of your own. You're one of the most close-minded people on this site. Like I said before, how about you make some effort in telling the story of your character. By the way, did you even read the story? I'm guessing you didn't. I included your character in it, and I gave him an important role. In my story his name is Terrance "T-Ray" Rodriguez. Of course I do, that's how a debate works. You aren't supposed to accept any of the opposition's opininons as a possibility, especially when you find it to be so prepostorous, such as your's and many other's opinions around here. [Supreme]

And that is your opinion, and I respect that. But you could express it in a more respectable manner. That's the only problem I have with you. You bash other people's opinions, and shove your own down their throats. I believe Hitler did that, and look what happened to him. lol.

I really would like to hear the story of the character your rooting for, because I am more of a two-sided person and would love to read it, as opposed to you being single-minded and only favoring your own opinion.

A debate will go on forever if you don't see it from both sides. That's just how it works.

@flnyla: Wow, thank you! It makes me happy to know you think this could be the actual V story.

@waitin4gta: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the gangs. They are going to play a big part in my story. And I respect your opinion. MY version of Albert De Silva is 44 years old, so he's not that much older than Johnny Klebitz. I'm hoping my version of Albert will make people think twice about his age. 44 is not that old.

@canttakemyid: Thanks man! I knew you would enjoy it, being a huge Breaking Bad fan like me. Expect alot more references to that show in my story! Especially when Albert starts working for the Cartel.

This post has been edited by GTA-King on Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 04:21

[HydraulicWaRiOr]

QUOTE (cp1dell @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 04:12)

QUOTE (HydraulicWaRiOr @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 04:07) QUOTE (GTA-King @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:45) @HydraulicWaRiOr: That's ironic, because you bash other people's opinion in favor of your own. You're one of the most close-minded people on this site. Like I said before, how about you make some effort in telling the story of your character. By the way, did you even read the story? I'm guessing you didn't. I included your character in it, and I gave him an important role. In my story his name is Terrance "T-Ray" Rodriguez. Of course I do, that's how a debate works. You aren't supposed to accept any of the opposition's opininons as a possibility, especially when you find it to be so prepostorous, such as your's and many other's opinions around here. What you're doing is blindly defending someone. You're just ignorant.

And that's just everyone's response who can't come up with a valid opinion, one of humanity's unalienable rights happens to be freedom of expression, and if that involves thinking that some one has no life and expressing it in a simple way, then so be it, you have to respect that, no matter how "immature" someone is. And this conversation ended when I stated the "problem" with you just as you stated the "problem" with the forum. Im talking to king now, you can leave.

[cp1dell]

QUOTE (HydraulicWaRiOr @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 04:19)

QUOTE (cp1dell @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 04:12) QUOTE (HydraulicWaRiOr @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 04:07) QUOTE (GTA-King @ Tuesday, Mar 6 2012, 03:45) @HydraulicWaRiOr: That's ironic, because you bash other people's opinion in favor of your own. You're one of the most close-minded people on this site. Like I said before, how about you make some effort in telling the story of your character. By the way, did you even read the story? I'm guessing you didn't. I included your character in it, and I gave him an important role. In my story his name is Terrance "T-Ray" Rodriguez. Of course I do, that's how a debate works. You aren't supposed to accept any of the opposition's opininons as a possibility, especially when you find it to be so prepostorous, such as your's and many other's opinions around here. [Supreme] What you're doing is blindly defending someone. You're just ignorant. And that's just everyone's response who can't come up with a valid opinion, one of humanity's unalienable rights happens to be freedom of expression, and if that involves thinking that some one has no life and expressing it in a simple way, then so be it, you have to respect that, no matter how "immature" someone is. And this conversation ended when I stated the "problem" with you just as you stated the "problem" with the forum. Im talking to king now, you can leave. [Supreme]

No I don't. It's my opinion!