[Jimmy_Leppard]

Mission series status: Finished



Play the mission and give me feedback about it

Hi, guys. This mission series is called ''Kidnapped''. It's finished and it consists of 12 missions. All my missions are connected to each other, so I suggest you play them by order which you are able to follow in this topic.

Theme song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=daSU9giY7bo

Summary:

Alex Pierce is an early-retired FBI agent currently living in Bayside. Since he'd retired, he's been living a quiet, boring life all to the one morning when his cellphone rang. It was a call from his sister's husband Rick who've had some terrible news. He called him to say that Alex's younger sister Jane has been kidnapped yesterday night by a group of guys driving a black van. Since the police doesn't know where to start looking for his sister, Alex decided to return to Los Santos, meet with Rick and find his kidnapped sister on his own. Will Alex's FBI expertees be enough to find his sister or not?

Characters:

Character Name	Character Description
Alex Pierce	The protagonist/playable character. He is an early-retired FBI agent who lives in Bayside. After he finds out his sister Jane has been kidnapped, he decides to travel to Los Santos and find her.
Rick Robinson	He's Jane's husband. He's older than Jane. He's the one who called Alex and told him what happened to his sister.
Jane Robinson	She is Rick's wife and Alex's younger sister. She's a photographer, very good looking woman and a tender person.
Daniel Becker	He's Alex's old friend from the days when Alex worked for the FBI. Unlike Alex, Daniel is still working for the FBI as the computer expert and a data analyst.
Jethro Cruz	He's the owner of the big mansion in Verdant Bluffs and he's the host of the party that the black van owner was invited to.
Lewis Horton	Alex's old friend from the days when he was in the FBI. Lewis is a human wheel. He can drive practically anything. He lives in Las Venturas.
Frankie Sabers	Alex's old friend from the days when he was in the FBI. He's a great Sniper.
John McHale	Alex's old friend from the days when he was in the FBI. He's a cool guy, often very into action and demolishion. He has a brother, Clyde. He is an electronics expert.
Clyde McHale	Alex's old friend from the days when he was in the FBI. Also a cool guy and often very into action and demolishion. He has a brother, John.
Simon Carson	Description not available. Play the mission series to find out about this character.

Mission list:

Chapter 1: Family matters

ZIP file with all the missions of the mission series - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=20117

1.) Shocking night out - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17422
2.) The Scars - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17430
3.) Shadow of trouble - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18487
4.) Unit reunion - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19796
5.) Law and disorder - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19801
6.) Leaks and plugs - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19805
7.) Mystical divergence - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19808
8.) Voice of the unknown - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19809

Chapter 2: Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide

1.) Nick of time - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19860
2.) Showdown in the desert - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19879
3.) Old memories upon the threat PART 1 - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=20115
4.) Old memories upon the threat PART 2 - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=20116

This post has been edited by Jimmy_Leppard on Monday, Jul 23 2012, 12:46

[KaRzY6]

Great story Jimmy! I can't wait for this. After BTH and The Runaway, I'm looking forward to this. I will play the intro ASAP, and post feedback. Good luck, Jimmy.

[Jimmy_Leppard]

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 11:48)

Great story Jimmy! I can't wait for this. After BTH and The Runaway, I'm looking forward to this. I will play the intro ASAP, and post feedback. Good luck, Jimmy.

Wow. Thanks for the fast reply, man. Great. I hope you'll like it.

[AnDReJ98]

Good luck with this! Gonna download it now,then feedback! Okey?
Now i'm going outside with the friends.When i come back,i'll play the mission and send you feedback!

This post has been edited by AnDReJ98 on Friday, Feb 17 2012, 12:02

[Jimmy_Leppard]

QUOTE (AnDReJ98 @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 11:49)

Good luck with this!

Thanks a lot, AnDReJ !!

[Notna]

Awww. All I can say right now.

[Jimmy_Leppard]

QUOTE (Notna @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 11:53)

Awww. All I can say right now.

Haha. I'll take that as a good ''Aww''. When you have time, check the intro mission out and give feedback about what you think of it

[Notna]

For sure, Jimmy. I would never miss a mission made by you. I am not at my computer now but will play it later. Good luck

[-S-hark21]

Nice! Another great mission pack by Jimmy_Leppard. Will play the intro!
And, good luck with this!
You will surely got tons of feedback from me, and other too.

[Jimmy_Leppard]

@ Notna - Cool Can't wait

@ -S-hark21 - Thanks a lot, man. I appreciate it. I hope it will be a success too. Can't wait to hear your feedback aswell

[Arejai]

Wow, great story. I'll give it a try later.
Well.. right now my DYOM is having a problem.

[shiva s]

Good luck with this, Jimmy. 'll, I have one condition to be met if you want me to play this. I.E, it should have a lot of twists just like BTH and The Runaway. Don't worry, I'll play this even if the above condition was not met because I won't keep up my words first of all. Just kidding, good luck, dude.

[Jimmy_Leppard]

@ Arejai - Thanks, man. Oh.. Well, I hope you'll fix it soon

@ Shiva S - Thanks a lot, dude Don't worry, it will involve as much twists as the previous mission series Can't wait for your feedback

[-S-hark21]

I've played the intro and here's my feedback

1. I love how you making Jane kidnapped by the Scars. F*cking love it.

2. I'm also love how you make Daniel using the computer to find the address. I was thought that when Alex say he wants the license plate then, Daniel will tell the license plate. (You understand what I mean right?)

3. I played around 5 - 6 minutes. So, it's a great intro for making it that long. (Without no gunfight)

I want to ask you a couple of questions.

1. Will you make this mission pack more gameplay than the Runaway

2. Is the Scars are all Mexican?

There are no red on my feedback because it was too good.Congratz! Now, that's all my feedback on the intro.
Rating :
9.1/10

[Jimmy_Leppard]

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 12:21)

I've played the intro and here's my feedback 1. I love how you making Jane kidnapped by the Scars. F*cking love it. 2. I'm also love how you make Daniel using the computer to find the address. I was thought that when Alex say he wants the license plate then, Daniel will tell the license plate. (You understand what I mean right?) 3. I played around 5 - 6 minutes. So, it's a great intro for making it that long. (Without no gunfight) I want to ask you a couple of questions. 1. Will you make this mission pack more gameplay than the Runaway 2. Is the Scars are all Mexican? There are no red on my feedback because it was too good.Congratz! Now, that's all my feedback on the intro. Rating : 9.1/10

Wow, thanks for a detailed feedback in such a short period of time and for a such a high rating for the intro. I really appreciate it

Let's start explaining and answering your questions:
Yes, I understand what you meant, but I didn't want to write the plate number cause it's not really necessary.

Yeah. I did put a brawl fight instead of a gun fight cause Alex went to the address without intention just to kill everybody there. He needed answers first so.. He couldn't get any info from those guys if he just shot them

Well, we'll see. I don't have the detailed script/summary of the mission series, so I can't actually answer your first question. In most cases I make up the story on my way through so.. We'll see Actually, the only mission pack where I had a detailed 100% made up script was for my first mission pack ''GTA CJ Stories''. All my other mission packs had just a starting summary.

Umm, it's too early to give that one up. All I can say is that the Scars have Mexican members in the gang.

[Venus FlyTrap]

Wow, i played some of your other missionpacks, they were really awesome, gonna give it a try.
Also, how you make that Character list like that?

[Jimmy_Leppard]

QUOTE (Venus FlyTrap @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 13:12)

Wow, i played some of your other missionpacks, they were really awesome, gonna give it a try. Also, how you make that Character list like that?

Hey, thanks a lot, man Great. Looking forward to your feedback then.

Well, it's a [tableb] code.

[abishai.kochara]

Good luck man! gonna' try this for sure!

[Jimmy_Leppard]

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Feb 17 2012, 13:34)

Good luck man! gonna' try this for sure!

Thanks Don't forget to give feedback

[Skander Blade]

Awesome you made a new mission pack, good luck with this