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 The Promise

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Nitesh aka AAAAAAA  
Posted: Wednesday, Feb 15 2012, 16:20
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Love, mystery, revenge, betrayal.

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Is it as simple as it looks?

Helena, the wife of Anthony is found dead after she jumps from a raised ground. The people close to her are shocked to find that she is dead. However, when her body mysteriously disappears, it is suspected that the suicide is not as simple as it looks.

Ian Turner, a police officer who is just thinking about leaving the job, gets the call about the suicide and is tied up with Micheal to investigate. However, when he finds out that it's Helena who has committed the suicide, he suddenly changes his mind and says he wants to take the case.

Find out the mystery behind Helena's suicide as you follow the mind boggling story by playing the mission pack.





Helena Patterson

I promised to be faithful to you.
I tried my best, but it was just because of helplessness that I had to do what I did.
But you, you get a wrong idea and start suspecting me.
I can't live with your suspicion.
Anthony Patterson

I wanted to give you a surprise that I thought would have made you happier.
Instead it was you who gave me a bigger surprise that broke my heart.
Just one promise you couldn't keep.
I am going to make the one responsible pay, make him suffer before he is punished by the law.
Ian Turner

I only joined the Police Department because of you three years ago.
Then you betray me.
When I am about to give up and forget you, you come back in my life.
This time, as a nightmare.
Whoever is responsible for this will surely be behind bars.
Micheal Clark

The only thing I care about is law.
I gave you the evidence to prove that you are guilty.
If you are innocent, you have to prove it.
That's all it's about.
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Major characters
Ian TurnerThe major playable character. A police officer the Los Santos Police Department who is assigned to the Helena Suicide case. He has a dark past.
Anthony PattersonA minor playable character. The husband of Helena. Lost his eye sight in a car accident during a race.
Helena PattersonA dead, yet one of the most important characters in the story who develops the plot. The wife of Anthony who has commited suicide. Leaves a mystery behind her.
Micheal ClarkA police officer working in the Los Santos Police Department. A very strict officer when it comes to his duty.
Minor characters
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Click on the missions to download them.
Click on the chapters to download a zip file containing all the missions in that chapter.
MissionsBrief descriptions. INCLUDE SPOILERS!!! This is just to remind yourself of the story. Only read if you have played that mission/chapter.
Chapter 1:The Helena Suicide CaseHelena, the wife of Anthony, has committed suicide. However further events lead the police that it may not be a simple suicide case after all.
Death of the loved ones
Helena is found to have committed suicide. Ian wants to retire from the job as a police, when he gets the call from Anthony about Helena.
Investigations
Ian does further investigations and questioning and all points to the conclusion that Helena did commit suicide.
Death Race
A flashback which shows how Anthony becomes blind.
U turn
Helena's body is missing from the post-mortem. This suggests that Helena's suicide is not as simple as it looks.
Further Questioning
Anthony and Luke are further questioned by Micheal and Ian. It is revealed that there was another guy in Helena's life before Anthony. It is also revealed that Ian has a part of ownership of the Anthony's Motor Association.
Chapter 2: A new leaf
The chapter shows how Ian and Helena meets and their relation grows.
Let the fun begin
A small parkour mission. However someone is impressed by Ian's skill and tells him to do a job for him.
It just happens..
Ians saves Helena from some thugs.
Testing my skills
Ian goes to steal the documents for the mystery guy. However he is ordered to be killed by the mystery man.
Growing relations
Ian and gang are forced to flee as the mystery man's thugs comes to ge the documents from them. However, things change when the thugs kidnap Helena.
Hard luck
Ian meets the father of Helena, who is also the same guy he pointed the gun at in the Testing my Skills mission. Ian promises Helena that he will change.
Chapter 3: Start of a profession
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This is too easy!
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Can you be trusted?
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Chapter 4: Where are my cars?
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Set a thief to catch a thief.
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1.PatrickW and Dutchy3010 for DYOM
2. -S-hark21 for the logo and headers.
3. Doublepulse who is always ready to help whenever I ask him for his suggestions (on Skype chat).
4. Everyone who plays the missions or even view this topic.


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Nitesh aka AAAAAAA  
Posted: Wednesday, Feb 15 2012, 16:22
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Posted: Wednesday, Feb 15 2012, 16:39
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Good luck sir!
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Posted: Wednesday, Feb 15 2012, 16:44
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Played it,

Nice introduction.
I don't get the story yet, but it's just the intro.
I like the multi-protagonist (or however you spell it) thing.
I'm curious how this is going to continue so I 'll play the next missions for sure.

Anyway,

I wish you good luck smile.gif
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Nitesh aka AAAAAAA  
Posted: Wednesday, Feb 15 2012, 16:54
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Thanks for the quick feedback ThaBoy. smile.gif

The story is a bit complex and I wanted to add more, but then the objective limit wouldn't have given space. Also it's better not to confuse you with the intro itself by it having a lot of confusing story in it, so decided to keep it simple. Well, at least I tried my best to make it simple because I believe there are some things you MAY be still confused with. tounge.gif

EDIT: The story will start to be more clearer in the later missions.



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Posted: Wednesday, Feb 15 2012, 18:01
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Boom! Here comes the Boom!
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Good luck with this mission pack! biggrin.gif
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ThaBoY  
Posted: Wednesday, Feb 15 2012, 18:09
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QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Wednesday, Feb 15 2012, 17:54)
Well, at least I tried my best to make it simple because I believe there are some things you MAY be still confused with. tounge.gif


Yep,

I don't know who the dead woman is.
I don't know how the officer 'll be involved in the story.
At least I think he's a part of the story...
And you didn't explain who Andrew (or something like that) is.

QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Wednesday, Feb 15 2012, 17:54)
EDIT: The story will start to be more clearer in the later missions


You just gave me an extra reason to play the next mission wink.gif
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Nitesh aka AAAAAAA  
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@TheXProyect
Thanks.

@ThaBoy
The dead woman is actually Anthony's (not Andrew) wife. I guess it wasn't clear in the mission.

About the officer's role... well, you will find more about that in the future mission.

I will update the main post with all the necessary information tomorrow. That will give you all the information about the mission pack that I can give without spoiling the story. That will make some things more clearer.

Also I will try to start and finish the next mission tomorrow.
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Posted: Wednesday, Feb 15 2012, 19:00
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Okay,

Good luck Nitesh smile.gif
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Posted: Wednesday, Feb 15 2012, 21:23
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Sounds epic, looks epic. Huge potential, man biggrin.gif Good luck in the future. wink.gif





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Played the 1st mission. Well.. it's very nice beginning. I loved how she fall from the hill. Good job. biggrin.gif
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@ThaBoy
Thanks.

@Jimmy
Thanks. There are??? tounge.gif

@Arejai
Thanks. Glad you liked it.




I don't know if anyone has noticed something about Anthony. It's not directly mentioned, but there are some clues given to hint it.


Also am in the process of updating the main post.
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Nitesh aka AAAAAAA  
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Main post updated with:
Themes
Story overview
Characters
Credits

More will be added as the mission pack progresses.
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New mission uploaded: Investigation (Edited)

Have fun and your feedback, question and thoughts will be highly appreciated.

Thanks.

Main post will be updated with Logos and headers. Special thanks to Shark for those.

EDIT: There's no action, very little gameplay because it's still the second mission and I am still developing the story. You will see some action in the next mission.

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Good luck with this! Do you want me to make logo for this? If you want use this:

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@AnDReJ98
Thanks for the luck, but the logo has already been made.
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AnDReJ98  
Posted: Saturday, Feb 25 2012, 10:42
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Nevermind.If you need PM me.Mabey i'll join in GFX team because now i have photoshop,and i'm learning with that.Anyway goodluck!
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Nitesh aka AAAAAAA  
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New mission uploaded.

Death RaceSlot 0Slot 1Slot 2Slot 3Slot 4Slot 5Slot 6Slot 7Slot 8
Have fun and your feedback, question and thoughts will be highly appreciated.

Thanks.

Main post has been updated with all necessary information.
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Arejai  
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Played the 2nd & 3rd missions.

Wow, it was like a detective mission series. Nice job. A very good case and it makes me confused. I didn't see the footsteps at the first 10 seconds. lol.gif

I loved the race and the route. It's very nice. I liked the idea: placed object on the car and hide it. Great idea. The car that John used is really fast, though(it makes more interesting).

The part when Anthony is hit by the truck is great! It amazed me. A very good scene you made.

There were a twin Anthony in the 3rd mission(when Luke is coming).

Anyway, great missions. biggrin.gif
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