[Skander Blade]

Status: ON HOLD
Main Theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=17SgVGPvv6E


One year has passed since this mess started and San Andreas is now in complete doom. The Black Operations locked the city and are killing every citizen untill a cure is found, but for now its KILL OR BE KILLED...





¤The Survivors: who are the armed and surviving citizens of San Andreas including Jane Simmons.
Their enemies are The Infected and The Black Operations.

¤The Black Operations: A specialized group of soldiers who have been ordered by the gouvrnment to lock San Andreas and kill everyone untill a cure is found.
Their enemies are The Survivors and The Infected.

¤The Infected: Who are killing any human they see and are the main cause of this apocalypse.
Their enemies are Humans (The Survivors and The Black Operations).





NOTE: You will unlock new subjects by advancing in the game

Subject: Jane Simmons
Gender: Female
Age: 27
Condition: Fine
Position: Survivor
Unlocked In: Introduction

Subject: Tommy Stevens
Gender: Male
Age: 46
Condition: Fine
Position: Survivor
Unlocked In: Saving Him

Subject: Ken Robbinson
Gender: Male
Age: 31
Condition: Fine
Position: Survivor
Unlocked In: The Favor



Introduction: http://www.dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16979
Saving Him: http://www.dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17231
The Favor: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17917

This post has been edited by Skander Blade on Sunday, Jun 2 2013, 21:41

[IXMJXI]

Wow! You made a new zombie mission pack! I will surely try this now and give feedback later!


EDIT: Played the Introduction, a decent intro, just cutscenes, no grammar mistakes just a bit of typo, but understandable. Anyways, nice mission for a INTRO!

Rate:
3/5

This post has been edited by IXMJXI on Sunday, Jan 22 2012, 00:15

[Skander Blade]

QUOTE (IXMJXI @ Saturday, Jan 21 2012, 23:23)

Wow! You made a new zombie mission pack! I will surely try this now and give feedback later! EDIT: Played the Introduction, a decent intro, just cutscenes, no grammar mistakes just a bit of typo, but understandable. Anyways, nice mission for a INTRO! Rate: 3/5

Thank you and stay tuned for more missions

[Arejai]

Played 1st mission.

Good introduction, good story.
And wow, it's something hard to find a woman being a protagonist/playable character.
But, you can make it even better by put an action scenes that flow with the story telling. For example, as the story says "And they were acting like animals so they killed the personel in the facility", you can put some acting, such as the zombies are killing the personel. So, it can avoid a boredom.
Btw, keep it up.

[Skander Blade]

QUOTE (Arejai @ Monday, Jan 23 2012, 16:03)

Played 1st mission. Good introduction, good story. And wow, it's something hard to find a woman being a protagonist/playable character. But, you can make it even better by put an action scenes that flow with the story telling. For example, as the story says "And they were acting like animals so they killed the personel in the facility", you can put some acting, such as the zombies are killing the personel. So, it can avoid a boredom. Btw, keep it up.

Yeah i had that idea too but it will be too much of a work and thanks for playing

[shiva s]

Played the introduction. It was good. My rating is 4/5. Keep it up.

[Skander Blade]

QUOTE (shiva s @ Tuesday, Jan 24 2012, 00:42)

Played the introduction. It was good. My rating is 4/5. Keep it up.

Thank you for playing and rating

[Pvt. Hunk]

Are you copying my zombie name, The Infected?

This post has been edited by Girish on Saturday, Jan 28 2012, 05:07

[-S-hark21]

What the hell man!? Stop quoting all the main post! And also, he create this mission pack before you!

[Skander Blade]

@-S-hark21: Don't bother with these newbies
@Pvt. Hunk: Your comment is pointless

[Pvt. Hunk]

You need any header ? Or logos?

[Skander Blade]

QUOTE (Pvt. Hunk @ Sunday, Jan 29 2012, 02:53)

You need any header ? Or logos?

Yeah do you know a good logo site ?

[Arejai]

QUOTE (Skander Blade @ Sunday, Jan 29 2012, 21:22)

QUOTE (Pvt. Hunk @ Sunday, Jan 29 2012, 02:53) You need any header ? Or logos? Yeah do you know a good logo site ?

Or you just could post a request on GFX section.

[Skander Blade]

QUOTE (Arejai @ Sunday, Jan 29 2012, 13:26)

Or you just could post a request on GFX section.

No i wanna design logos by myself but thanks for the heads up

[Pvt. Hunk]

QUOTE (Skander Blade @ Sunday, Jan 29 2012, 13:29)

QUOTE (Arejai @ Sunday, Jan 29 2012, 13:26) Or you just could post a request on GFX section. No i wanna design logos by myself but thanks for the heads up

OK then, mate
Goodluck with your TZI2 !
BTW, cool intro ! My Ratings : 7.9 / 10
Keep up

[abishai.kochara]

QUOTE (Pvt. Hunk @ Friday, Jan 27 2012, 15:53)

Are you copying my zombie name, The Infected?

If you look closely that post says 'edited by girish' hmm.......

Anyways good luck skander!
I'll be playing this when i get time soon! Its on my list......

[Skander Blade]

@Pvt. Hunk: Thank you for playing and rating
@abishai.kochara: Okay then... i'll wait for your feedback

[abishai.kochara]

Well played the mission, good work with the cutscenes and text.
I expected gameplay in the end when Jane's status is displayed but sadly i was left wanting
to know whats next and who's in the hut as the mission got over.
I could have done with some gameplay but the introduction was an introduction alright!
it was awesome and good work! Good luck for the next missions! Also good job with objects!
Good work and good luck!

[Skander Blade]

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Sunday, Jan 29 2012, 14:29)

Well played the mission, good work with the cutscenes and text. I expected gameplay in the end when Jane's status is displayed but sadly i was left wanting to know whats next and who's in the hut as the mission got over. I could have done with some gameplay but the introduction was an introduction alright! it was awesome and good work! Good luck for the next missions! Also good job with objects! Good work and good luck!

Woah... this is what i call a feedback... thanks man ,guys like you make me wanna carry on with my projects

[-S-hark21]

I've played the introduction so, here's my feedback.

1. You made good use of cutscene and text. I like it.

2. There's around 4 - 6 spelling mistakes. Don't type it too fast next time.

3. I was expecting to have gameplay after Jane was introduced , but it's already passed. You nearly got me there. Don't want to use any color on this, because it doesn't matter.

Rating : 9/10