[orbitalraindrops]

Is this still going on?. I was enjoying this .

[SIKKS66]

QUOTE (orbitalraindrops @ Monday, May 7 2012, 19:33)

Is this still going on?. I was enjoying this .

I have half of the next chapter written but I'm in two minds over whether I want the chapter after that split into two or do as I originally planned. Been mulling it over for aaaaaaaaages but I do definitely want to finish this story. Every time I come to this forum and see my signature I think "f*cking finish it!" lol. Hang tight. It's this kind of comment that motivates me to get more written.

[Ziggy455]

QUOTE (SIKKS66 @ Monday, May 7 2012, 22:47)

QUOTE (orbitalraindrops @ Monday, May 7 2012, 19:33) Is this still going on?. I was enjoying this . I have half of the next chapter written but I'm in two minds over whether I want the chapter after that split into two or do as I originally planned. Been mulling it over for aaaaaaaaages but I do definitely want to finish this story. Every time I come to this forum and see my signature I think "f*cking finish it!" lol. Hang tight. It's this kind of comment that motivates me to get more written.

Allow me to interject then.

I read this a while back but I wasn't going to comment until you had gotten to a strong point in the story. I hope you do continue this as it is (in an ocean of dying, clichéd, and practically useless fanfiction) one of the better stories. Get this finished!

[Rico44]

First two chapters were awesome, I hope we'll see more soon. Don't turn R* on us!

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (SIKKS66 @ Monday, May 7 2012, 22:47)

QUOTE (orbitalraindrops @ Monday, May 7 2012, 19:33) Is this still going on?. I was enjoying this . I have half of the next chapter written but I'm in two minds over whether I want the chapter after that split into two or do as I originally planned. Been mulling it over for aaaaaaaaages but I do definitely want to finish this story. Every time I come to this forum and see my signature I think "f*cking finish it!" lol. Hang tight. It's this kind of comment that motivates me to get more written.

i've had that problem several times. I look at it like this:

What will it be like for the reader? Will they find the chapter too long? Will they skip paragraphs, or the entire chapter, or not read it at all?
If so, then split it, but if you split it, will the first half end in a cliffhanger or just stop?

I've tried to split only really long chapters, and make sure the first part ends with something thats going to make you want to read more.

Other times i've looked at editing it down.

[orbitalraindrops]

Next chapter next chapter!!!