[Nitroxious]

Great work dude. I played each of these. They are really great.

[shiva s]

QUOTE (Nitroxious @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 13:32)

Great work dude. I played each of these. They are really great.

Thanks, man. Like to hear more from you.

[Nitroxious]

QUOTE (shiva s @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 13:59)

QUOTE (Nitroxious @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 13:32) Great work dude. I played each of these. They are really great. Thanks, man. Like to hear more from you.

I had some problem with objectives in Chapter 4 but rest was fine. Keep up.

[shiva s]

QUOTE (Nitroxious @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 14:05)

QUOTE (shiva s @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 13:59) QUOTE (Nitroxious @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 13:32) Great work dude. I played each of these. They are really great. Thanks, man. Like to hear more from you. I had some problem with objectives in Chapter 4 but rest was fine. Keep up.

I think, you're saying Chapter 2. Thanks once again.

[Nitroxious]

QUOTE (shiva s @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 14:16)

QUOTE (Nitroxious @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 14:05) QUOTE (shiva s @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 13:59) QUOTE (Nitroxious @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 13:32) Great work dude. I played each of these. They are really great. Thanks, man. Like to hear more from you. I had some problem with objectives in Chapter 4 but rest was fine. Keep up. I think, you're saying Chapter 2. Thanks once again.

Yeah. I mean that.

[-S-hark21]

Played mission 6th until 9th and here's my feedback

- 6th mission was too hard! I can't pass the mission! Put more time limit next time.

+ Great twist you got there. I didn't thought that Garry Bottom was almost the same as Wade.
+ Good use of text, cutscene, animation and actors. I enjoy it.
+ I also liked that part where Garry got a stroke and the rain saved him. It was a creative idea you used.
- You should make some enemies not headshotable. So that, it will make the missions harder.
- Your timing, make sure it's more accurate next time alright?
Why won't the guy who called Garry "My Lord" dance in the 9th mission?

Overall rate :
7.9/10

[shiva s]

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 15:51)

Played mission 6th until 9th and here's my feedback - 6th mission was too hard! I can't pass the mission! Put more time limit next time. + Great twist you got there. I didn't thought that Garry Bottom was almost the same as Wade. + Good use of text, cutscene, animation and actors. I enjoy it. + I also liked that part where Garry got a stroke and the rain saved him. It was a creative idea you used. - You should make some enemies not headshotable. So that, it will make the missions harder. - Your timing, make sure it's more accurate next time alright? Why won't the guy who called Garry "My Lord" dance in the 9th mission? Overall rate : 7.9/10

Hey, man, thanks a lot for your feedbacks. Don't know why but your feedbacks are always special to me.
I'll keep that in mind when I make further missions. Thanks for notifying.
Thanks. I know it'll add a great twist to the story.
Thanks for giving feedbacks about the cutscens and all other stuffs. Infact, your feedbacks made me improve them.
I don't know the actual effect of headshots. That's why I turned them on. Anyway, thanks for pointing.
Well, they asked the man to dance naked and so he's not ready to do it. Moreover, he will loose his dignity.
Thanks for your rating and feedbacks. Really appericiate it. Love to hear more from you.

[Nitroxious]

QUOTE (shiva s @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 16:21)

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 15:51) Played mission 6th until 9th and here's my feedback - 6th mission was too hard! I can't pass the mission! Put more time limit next time. + Great twist you got there. I didn't thought that Garry Bottom was almost the same as Wade. + Good use of text, cutscene, animation and actors. I enjoy it. + I also liked that part where Garry got a stroke and the rain saved him. It was a creative idea you used. - You should make some enemies not headshotable. So that, it will make the missions harder. - Your timing, make sure it's more accurate next time alright? Why won't the guy who called Garry "My Lord" dance in the 9th mission? Overall rate : 7.9/10 Hey, man, thanks a lot for your feedbacks. Don't know why but your feedbacks are always special to me. I'll keep that in mind when I make further missions. Thanks for notifying. Thanks. I know it'll add a great twist to the story. Thanks for giving feedbacks about the cutscens and all other stuffs. Infact, your feedbacks made me improve them. I don't know the actual effect of headshots. That's why I turned them on. Anyway, thanks for pointing. Well, they asked the man to dance naked and so he's not ready to do it. Moreover, he will loose his dignity. Thanks for your rating and feedbacks. Really appericiate it. Love to hear more from you.

Played the 6th mission. Shark is shiva. You should definitely focus on increasing time limits. Cheats even are too buggy to use with the missions.

[shiva s]

Don't worry, man. I'll improve in my timings. Thanks for pointing out once again. Really appericiate it.

[shiva s]

The 16th mission has been released. Also, the ZIP file contaning all the missions of chapter 2 has also been uploaded. Here's the link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18336
Now, you don't have to download the missions of chapter 2 one by one. Play and give feedbacks. Negative feedbacks are much appericiated than positive feedbacks.

[sayooj]

i have maked a good trailor
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[sayooj]

cool eh?

This post has been edited by sayooj on Tuesday, Apr 10 2012, 01:39

[shiva s]

QUOTE (sayooj @ Tuesday, Apr 10 2012, 01:20)

cool eh?

Thanks, man. Just work on the clarity

[NothingSpecial]

sayooj, you've mispelled "trailer" into "trailor".

[sayooj]

sorry, man I had a doubt, thanks for saying

[sayooj]

QUOTE (shiva s @ Tuesday, Apr 10 2012, 11:06)

QUOTE (sayooj @ Tuesday, Apr 10 2012, 01:20) cool eh? Thanks, man. Just work on the clarity

hey guy, that was a video translition effect, can you see full part? it will be clear as heaven, so don't tease anything without analysing it, understand?

[-S-hark21]

Here's my feedback.

Can't pass the 10th mission. Too lazy to play the mission too many times.

- I think you got confused between Officer Rick and Richard. Because, when Rick is talking, you type Officer Richard instead of Rick.
- I still got confused about the story. Why did they left the girl to Wade?
- In mission An Ambush, I don't think that's a good place. It's too far to see from Los Santos. Even with that big checkpoint. And, not everyone knows about the myth.
And also, how do I get out from the cage?! I just use the rocketman cheat!
+ It's so creative! When you use the objects, and making the text "Gone" (I'll hope you know what I mean)
+ Damn, I was shocked in mission The Nightmare. You pretty made me love the mission.
- You should make a better route point for the suspect.
+ Final Battle was creative. I enjoy it very much. Well, when I gotta save the hostages, I thought that it's time limit. But, when I get out from the bus. Your trick got discovered.
- All missions in Chapter 2 (1 - 7), their wanted level was NOT disable. Garry is a cop, but.. he got chased by cops.

Won't give any rating right now.

[shiva s]

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Tuesday, Apr 10 2012, 15:48)

Here's my feedback. Can't pass the 10th mission. Too lazy to play the mission too many times. - I think you got confused between Officer Rick and Richard. Because, when Rick is talking, you type Officer Richard instead of Rick. - I still got confused about the story. Why did they left the girl to Wade? - In mission An Ambush, I don't think that's a good place. It's too far to see from Los Santos. Even with that big checkpoint. And, not everyone knows about the myth. And also, how do I get out from the cage?! I just use the rocketman cheat! + It's so creative! When you use the objects, and making the text "Gone" (I'll hope you know what I mean) + Damn, I was shocked in mission The Nightmare. You pretty made me love the mission. - You should make a better route point for the suspect. + Final Battle was creative. I enjoy it very much. Well, when I gotta save the hostages, I thought that it's time limit. But, when I get out from the bus. Your trick got discovered. - All missions in Chapter 2 (1 - 7), their wanted level was NOT disable. Garry is a cop, but.. he got chased by cops. Won't give any rating right now.

Thanks, man. Your feedbacks are always special to me. I'm sorry about that typing mistake between Rick and Richard. My bad.
Don't get confused about that little girl. You'll find your answer when you play the first mission of the chapter 3.
Okay, I thought everyone knew about that myth. But, there's a way to get out of that cage. Just look close.
I know, you'd like the Nightmare and Final Battle missions. Thanks for playing. No problem. Give ratings if you feel like. Waiting for your feedbacks for chapter 3.

[SatournFan]

QUOTE (sayooj @ Tuesday, Apr 10 2012, 23:40)

QUOTE (shiva s @ Tuesday, Apr 10 2012, 11:06) QUOTE (sayooj @ Tuesday, Apr 10 2012, 01:20) cool eh? Thanks, man. Just work on the clarity hey guy, that was a video translition effect, can you see full part? it will be clear as heaven, so don't tease anything without analysing it, understand?

Now shut up, okay? If someone just was a critic to your trailer, it doesn't mean he must suck your cock just because he told you to edit something. You're annoying as hell, and learn better English before writing something else, alright?

[Arejai]

Here's the review for Chapter 2.


PLAYABLILITY 4/5
From the beginning to the end of the chapter, there were no moments of bored. It's very fun and exciting to play those missions. The mission 'Final Battle' when we need to get out from the bridge with the bus is a bit impossible. Yes, the bus is too heavy to jump off with the ramp. But, however, it's still enjoyable and makes me wanna know what happened in the next mission.


BALANCE 3/5
These missions were pretty hard to beat. The 16th mission is the hardest, but not impossible to beat. The enemies has a high accuracy with a low health. Just don't get too near or you'll die easily.


CREATIVITY 5/5
Spawn at the back of the car when we need to catch Tony was pretty creative. But, it can be a bit longer. I loved the games in the cage. It's like a puzzle. And the mission that amazed me is 'The Nightmare'. Wow, I'm shocked when Mr.Zeon appears in front of me with a shotgun.


VARIETY 4/5
All the objects are well placed in position. Objects placement at the bridge is very nice. I loved how you make the gate/cage, and we need to break it to pass. It's a bit weird to see Garry on the uniform. Well, you can use other skin. But, it's okay, nothing bad.



STORY / WRITING 5/5
The story of Garry Bottom from his first day until the fall is very very good. You got a nice storyline. Well done.About the writing, all of them are good. Nothing big mistake.


OVERALL
I just loved the flow of the story. Some of the missions amazed me. The beginning which is the 9th mission impressed me when I noticed that the taxi is the man in the 1st chapter. You got a very good storyline. So, nice work, keep it up, and don't give up.


RATING 8.5/10


By Arejai.




Here's some feedback:
- Enemies' health shouldn't be too high in a fist fight.
- Don't forgot to stop the actor's animation.
- 10th mission; at the end, the timeout objective can be more longer or make some cutscenes of how Tony was captured.
- Don't forgot to turn off wanted level. It's disturbing.
- Don't make a mission TOO impossible to beat.

So, that's it.

This post has been edited by Arejai on Wednesday, Apr 11 2012, 07:51