[shiva s]

Thanks to Narcis_Speed6 for the logo

It is 2003 and Los Santos is becoming more and more dangerous. People were killed like birds by the Drug lords. The cops were completely helpless. Some cops were bribed while some honest cops were killed in a horribel manner. People lost all their faith on the cops. Mr.Zeon and his wicked brother were ruling Los Santos. They became rich quickly through Drug Business. People living there hoped that they would be saved by a hero one day.

Characters	Descriptions
Wade Hopkins	He's a small time crook. He leads a crookery life along with his friend Darren G
Darren G	He's the friend of Wade. He's a crook and a robber too. They both spends most of their lives behind the bars.
Mr.Zeon	He's a powerful drug lord in Los Santos. He takes care of the drug business in South Los Santos.
Officer Richard	He's a cop hanging around San fierro. He always use to have an eye on Wade and Darren. His past is unknown and he still remains as a mystery.

Here's a video review by Aznkei:








Special thanks to those who're gonna pay my missionpack. Please give me feebacks about the topic too.
(Missions one by one)
Chapter 1:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17599
1.Intro:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16847
2. Uninvited Visitors:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17289
3. Life at Stake:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17329
4. The Stranger:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17443
5. I didn't sign for this:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17566
6. Pain in the neck:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17582
7. West to east:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17586
8. Officer Down:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17598
Chapter 2:
9. A Hero is not born but made:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17625
10.First day:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17809
11.The Party:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18000
12. An Ambush:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18187
13. The Nightmare:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18188
14. Way Down:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18276
15. Final Battle:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18317
16. The Fall of Garry Bottom:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18335
Chapter 3
17. Clown's Play:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18447
18. Robbing Uncle Zeon:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18492
19. The End:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=18611
Download the whole series here

This post has been edited by shiva s on Saturday, Apr 21 2012, 14:08

[IXMJXI]

I will try this and give feedback later. Hope you will make it on .zip file.

[shiva s]

QUOTE (IXMJXI @ Saturday, Jan 14 2012, 12:07)

I will try this and give feedback later. Hope you will make it on .zip file.

Thanks, Man. Yea, I'll compress this. Glad to get comments from guys like you.

[Arejai]

Nice story and amazing logo. I'll give it a try.

[shiva s]

@Arejai Thanks, dude. Actually, the story is too big to explain and I don't know how to write it fully. So, made a short plot for it. Play the intro and give feedbacks.

[-S-hark21]

Good luck with this! Awesome logo too!

[shiva s]

@Shark21 Thanks, dude. Play and give feedbacks.

[IXMJXI]

Played the Intro, not much, but it's a nice mission for a intro. I will wait for more.


Ratings:
3.5/5

[Skander Blade]

Your story is awesome i like it and i'm definately gonna play this mission pack

[-S-hark21]

Played the introduction
Nice one for intro
But I wanted to know who is Garry Bottom (if I'm right)

[shiva s]

@IXMJXI thanks for your honest feebacks and rating. Much appericiated.
@Skander Blade Damn! I can't believe that a pro like you've commented. Thanks. I'll be waiting for your feedbacks.
@Shark21 that's a suspense. You've to play the upcoming missions to find out. Thanks for your feedbacks

[Arejai]

Nice intro . You put a mystery thing in it. I loved the scene in the casino. Good work
But, one thing that can be improved, in the cutscene when Mr. Zeon and his men are leaving his place with a car, make it a little longer. Otherwise, nice mission.

[KaRzY6]

Nice! I will play when I have time. Lots of spelling and grammar mistakes in the main post. Maybe in your free time, try and work on your English a bit, no offence

[shiva s]

Thanks, Arejai. Theres also a bug. The actor who is taking outside the hospital in the phone is supposed to die. But, a small bug has occured so he's not dying. You know I'm playing your Bad Boys right now. Its awesome.
@KaRzY nah, no offense. There maybe spelling mistakes in the post but not in the mission. Don't forget to give feedbacks after playing.

This post has been edited by shiva s on Sunday, Jan 15 2012, 04:12

[Arejai]

QUOTE (shiva s @ Sunday, Jan 15 2012, 12:10)

Thanks, Arejai. Theres also a bug. The actor who is taking outside the hospital in the phone is supposed to die. But, a small bug has occured so he's not dying. You know I'm playing your Bad Boys right now. Its awesome.

It's okay. It doesn't spoiled the intro. Just keep it up the good work.
Btw, thanks for playing my mission

[shiva s]

QUOTE (Arejai @ Sunday, Jan 15 2012, 04:13)

QUOTE (shiva s @ Sunday, Jan 15 2012, 12:10) Thanks, Arejai. Theres also a bug. The actor who is taking outside the hospital in the phone is supposed to die. But, a small bug has occured so he's not dying. You know I'm playing your Bad Boys right now. Its awesome. It's okay. It doesn't spoiled the intro. Just keep it up the good work. Btw, thanks for playing my mission

Thanks, Man.

[abishai.kochara]

awesome! guess I'll play it tomorrow!
DON'T READ THIS
This is heavily influenced by Indian movies! right?
And 'I am soldier by India's present state and movies, by Indian movies I mean the south indian ones, right? 'cause even I'm a south.

[shiva s]

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Sunday, Jan 15 2012, 09:05)

awesome! guess I'll play it tomorrow! DON'T READ THIS This is heavily influenced by Indian movies! right? And 'I am soldier by India's present state and movies, by Indian movies I mean the south indian ones, right? 'cause even I'm a south.

I can't get you. But, you mean that I made a mission pack based on the Indian movies,huh? No, I'm not. If you still have something to say send me a PM.

[abishai.kochara]

Played it, awesome mission! I thought it wouldn't consist of gameplay but it cam in the end all right! you should've kept some screenshots in the end too. Awesome mission, good use of cutscenes and animations, good work & good luck! I'm waiting for more!

This post has been edited by abishai.kochara on Saturday, Feb 11 2012, 09:15

[shiva s]

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Monday, Jan 16 2012, 11:47)

Played it, awesome mission! I thought it wouldn't consist of gameplay but it cam in the end all right! you should've kept some screenshots in the end too. Awesome mission, good use of cutscenes and animations, god work & good luck! I'm waiting for more!

Thanks, Man. Appericiate your feedbacks. The second mission was to be released today but a crash occured and I want to make the missions again. So, its gonna be delayed. Keep waiting and dont forget to give feedbacks.