[ThaBoY]

HEEEEEEY

you also took the motel for a shooting mission....didn't notice it before

Nah...just joking

Anyway...

Good missions

[TheXProyect]

I'll be back 1/29/12, when i'm back im gonna to finish Gangster 4 Life


@Thaboy Thanks man im glad you like it.

This post has been edited by TheXProyect on Sunday, Jan 15 2012, 07:51

[TheXProyect]

I'M BAAAAAAAAAAAAACK now, i already start to make my new mission of Gangster 4 Life series

[Converse]

"Gangster 4 Life" - Chapter 1 and Chapter 2.

Chapter 1

Great introduction. - Great first mission in the robbery! There was a heap of cops, and made for a great challenge.

The characters were suitable. The stting at the beginning, for me, didn't suit a gangster African-American, so I was glad that later on, you moved to a more, "ghetto" setting.

The grammar and punctuation was below standard. I know it's hard for people to get this right, especially if you live in a country where English isn't the main language, but having correct grammar and punctuation can increase ratings of missions by a mile!

There were plenty of shooting missions, which I thought was fantastic! I'm a big fan of shooting missions, especially involving gangs.

The Gabriel Wayne twist was the best! I was like Great twist in the plot there, reminded me of the "Green Sabre" incident between Ryder and Big Smoke.

The missions were mainly shooting, but you can pretty much expect that for a gang series. But, in my opinion, you should more variety in missions like vehicle chases or a drive-by.

Overall, I was pleased with the first chapter. You just really need to improve on your grammar and punctuation, because that can be the deciding factor for a mission series.

Rating - 7.3/10.

Chapter 2

Amazing chapter! This chapter was probably 5x better than the first!

The big shootout on the bridge was epic! Heaps of shots fired, heaps of enemies to kill and it was especially tough trying to survive! But, it was all worth it in the end when the explosions happened on the bridge!

You started to add more variety in your missions, with the pursuit of the "pervert" at the Gant Bridge.

The grammar and punctuation was a little improved in chapter 2, but was still a little below standard. But, don't get me wrong, I could understand everything everyone was saying. So, I guess that was good.

But, most of all, the most epic mission was killing Gabriel Wayne! He had a minigun! It took me at least 10 attempts to kill him! But, that was great for the last mission, making it as difficult as possible.

Overall, I was very pleased with this series. I hope you'll finish off the series with chapter 3! Your grammar and punctuation really needs to be improved, though. You have the potential to amaze players who play this series if you can improve on that. If you are planning on creating chapter 3 though, you should PM me. I can edit your missions so that you have excellent grammar and punctuation.

Rating - 8.7/10.

Review by Converse

This post has been edited by Converse on Tuesday, Jan 31 2012, 15:24

[TheXProyect]

New Mission added to the list! Undercover

[TheXProyect]

New mission released! Blood Brothers

Please leave a message i feel like nobody play my missions...

This post has been edited by TheXProyect on Friday, Feb 3 2012, 04:12

[Doublepulse]

WOW... You got yourself a new fan here! . I played all the missions up to the current mission, and I loved it alot. It really fits my style on the missions I like to play and design!

Design- Overall the design is great! You have great use of objects, good amount of cutscenes, and lots of action. There were parts were difficult, and you improved your missions a lot through the two chapters. Im glad you got rid of the wanted at some point, because it can get annoying. Hell even limiting to 1-2 stars would of not been that bad.


The objects were really interesting. I liked how you barricade Aaron inside the club with the casino tables. Some of the objects did not fit the scene, but I really did not care much because of the variety it gave.



You could improve on the continuity of them though. An example is some objects spawn late. Spawning most of the objects during the beginning will fix that.



There are a lot of things you improved on, and I cannot list them all. Chapter 2 was ALOT better in my opinion. More challenges, more characters etc.

Story- Overall the story was "typical gangster story" as most would call it, . But I feel it was put together really well. Some of the things are little predictable on where they would take place for missions, but you have a good basic understanding of your story and your characters.

The twists were just great! Even though I did not have much of an effect on Wayne, betraying you, The twist in second chapter with Johnny also betraying you was just really unpredictable! Interesting question would be how does that affect Eric's relationship with his Sarah.



Cutscenes- I have no problem with the amount of cutscenes you added, you added a good amount to give good flow for the story. I think the Dialouge and Grammar could really be improved, and improving one of them, will improve the other, but it was easy to understand.


For some reason, because of the gangsta vocab and the bad grammar, I got a good laugh out of it through both chapters. The dialouge was so cheap and over used, but for some reason I was laughing at it, don't take it as an offense though . So I guess that is a plus .

The last mission with playing as Shane, kind of reminded me of what I did in LVC, having those special moments where you play as someone other than the protagonist. I know I cannot expect this to be a regular thing, but it will be interesting if you play as Shane more in this Chapter.

Overall I think it is going pretty well, I do not have anything else to add, but you really should keep going. I am pretty much hooked on how this will turn out.

Rating: 8.5/10

This post has been edited by Doublepulse on Friday, Feb 3 2012, 09:00

[TheXProyect]

QUOTE (Doublepulse @ Friday, Feb 3 2012, 08:54)

WOW... You got yourself a new fan here! . I played all the missions up to the current mission, and I loved it alot. It really fits my style on the missions I like to play and design! Design- Overall the design is great! You have great use of objects, good amount of cutscenes, and lots of action. There were parts were difficult, and you improved your missions a lot through the two chapters.  Im glad you got rid of the wanted at some point, because it can get annoying. Hell even limiting to 1-2 stars would of not been that bad. The objects were really interesting. I liked how you barricade Aaron inside the club with the casino tables. Some of the objects did not fit the scene, but I really did not care much because of the variety it gave. You could improve on the continuity of them though. An example is some objects spawn late. Spawning most of the objects during the beginning will fix that. There are a lot of things you improved on, and I cannot list them all. Chapter 2 was ALOT better in my opinion. More challenges, more characters etc. Story- Overall the story was "typical gangster story" as most would call it, . But I feel it was put together really well. Some of the things are little predictable on where they would take place for missions, but you have a good basic understanding of your story and your characters. The twists were just great! Even though I did not have much of an effect on Wayne, betraying you, The twist in second chapter with Johnny also betraying you was just really unpredictable! Interesting question would be how does that affect Eric's relationship with his Sarah. Cutscenes- I have no problem with the amount of cutscenes you added, you added a good amount to give good flow for the story. I think the Dialouge and Grammar could really be improved, and improving one of them, will improve the other, but it was easy to understand. For some reason, because of the gangsta vocab and the bad grammar, I got a good laugh out of it through both chapters. The dialouge was so cheap and over used, but for some reason I was laughing at it, don't take it as an offense though . So I guess that is a plus . The last mission with playing as Shane, kind of reminded me of what I did in LVC, having those special moments where you play as someone other than the protagonist. I know I cannot expect this to be a regular thing, but it will be interesting if you play as Shane more in this Chapter. Overall I think it is going pretty well, I do not have anything else to add, but you really should keep going. I am pretty much hooked on how this will turn out. Rating: 8.5/10

Doublepulse! Wow! Thanks for the review i really like that, in the chapter 3 you gonna play as Shane.

[-S-hark21]

By the way, can you upload the chapter 2 mission in one pack? I don't like download it one by one. Just saying
Anyway, will play and post feedback.

[TheXProyect]

New mission added to the list Ready for action

@-S-hark21 Thanks man , when i finish chapter 3 im going to upload pack of Chapter 2 and 3.

[TheXProyect]

New mission added to the list! Bang! You're death

END OF THE CHAPTER 3!

This post has been edited by TheXProyect on Saturday, Feb 4 2012, 09:28

[ThaBoY]

If it's the end of Chapter 3,
can you add all missions in a .zip file?
So I don't have to download all missions one by one

[TheXProyect]

Forever alone, nobody feedbacks, i have hardly any support from people but it seems that nobody cares about the work I do ...

[Juan-R]

Are you kidding me? I put your logo on my DYOM trailer *hint hint*, it must mean at least I like it. People DO like it. I'll give the 3rd chapter a try, 'cuz I'm nice ^.^

Ps: Stop putting yourself down. "When they push you down, you gotta get back up". Meaning, even though it seems you're done for, push yourself & try harder.

[TheXProyect]

New mission upload! Your life is over
1, 2, 3 Lets go!

[ThaBoY]

:facepalm:

I need to watch to the whole main post.
I didn't see that you added them in one pack for every chapter

So I 'll play all your mission and give you feedback, okay

[TheXProyect]

QUOTE (ThaBoY @ Wednesday, Feb 8 2012, 21:00)

:facepalm: I need to watch to the whole main post. I didn't see that you added them in one pack for every chapter So I 'll play all your mission and give you feedback, okay

Thanks for the feedback ThaBoy

[TheXProyect]

Look at the topic much better than before?

[Juan-R]

Nice job X, the new layout makes everything more organized & easier to follow. Awesome

[TheXProyect]

New mission added to the list Peace or War?