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Notna  
Posted: Sunday, Jan 15 2012, 13:02
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UPDATE: Main post updated with some information about factions and now, there is a theme tune for the mission series. I've now done the half of Chapter 3. It will be released soon.
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Notna  
Posted: Saturday, Jan 21 2012, 13:57
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UPDATE: Topic updated with the new logo and headers made by Narcis_speed6. Thanks man. Chapter 3 is going to be released really soon, possibly tomorrow.
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abishai.kochara  
Posted: Saturday, Jan 21 2012, 14:38
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Do you realize you could get into trouble by posting that? ^
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Posted: Saturday, Jan 21 2012, 14:44
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QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Saturday, Jan 21 2012, 22:38)
Do you realize you could get into trouble by posting that? ^

It's important update, maybe. colgate.gif
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alifjenius  
Posted: Saturday, Jan 21 2012, 23:36
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Okay time for feedback

Well, the missions are too short to be played. It spend like 15-20 minutes to beat all the 8 missions (my PC suddenly crashed as soon as I started the 8th mission). I hope you'll make the missions longer in Chapter 3

The story ? Well, not bad at all. I like the number of the twist. Finally, we see Irish gang in a mission series. And one thing that make me confused
How the hell a head of a gang could be the prison's head ?

Gameplay ? Well, it's not like what I expected. I think the stealth mission will be longer and will be more challenging (for "breaking out from the jail" part, "breaking out Edwin" part, and "escaping from Griffin" part). I thought we have to pass the guards and finally break free. And ? We only have to pass the sewer (breaking out the jail part) (maybe it's because Edgar called off the guards, so there aren't any guards at that time)

But, I like the "beat up some Irishmen" things. It's the most challenging mission. And I thought it will be a hunter that will attack us in "War at the Hideout". It turned out that it's only Maverick. And how lucky was James to find an Uzi in the shack (and how the hell is that possible ?) And the last mission was very hard, with a heap of guards attacking us and the only ally we have is a guy with a pistol

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shiva s  
Posted: Sunday, Jan 22 2012, 02:21
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For few things, I'll agree with you, Alifjenius. But, though the missions were short they were good and nice.
Well, if you go to a prison and gain the respect of the other prisoners and become a tough guy and a lot of prisoners follows you, you'll become the head of the prsion. Why don't you take that in this way?

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QUOTE (shiva s @ Sunday, Jan 22 2012, 09:21)
Well, if you go to a prison and gain the respect of the other prisoners and become a tough guy and a lot of prisoners follows you, you'll become the head of the prsion. Why don't you take that in this way?

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shiva, I think Edgar isn't an inmate. He's the head of the prison. Which mean, he is the one who has to responsible for anything happened in the jail. Not the one who lead the whole inmates in the prison
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Notna  
Posted: Sunday, Jan 22 2012, 07:24
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I can tell you, that the missions of Chapter 3, are at least two times longer and better than the missions of Chapter 3. It was hard to make missions in the prison.

In the beginning of Chapter 3, the whole story will change. It will not be just about James' vengeance, but something much bigger.
Then, about Edgar and Edwin. Well, I actually were not planning to make them Irish, but due to my Irish relatives who proposed about it, I added them in the series. They are not going to be in Chapter 3, but they will make a comeback in Chapter 4. The last name of them, 'Cross', and the nickname of Edwin, 'The Celtic Cross', came from one of my favourite pro wrestlers, Sheamus, who uses 'The Celtic Cross' as his finishers. And about Edgar being the head of the prison. Well, let me explain. Edwin were judged to the death penalty in the prison. Edgar of course wanted to save his brother, and get to work in the prison. Using his manipulating powers(er, pointing a gun on the previous head of the prison) and got the job as the head of the prison. And I made it a bit unclear, but James found the Uzi from the shack, cause he were there before. I mean, that is why he left there.


Anyway, thanks, and be ready for Chapter 3.
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Juan-R  
Posted: Sunday, Jan 22 2012, 07:29
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I'm still asking myself, why have I not seen this before? I'll try it out & post feedback wink.gif
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shiva s  
Posted: Sunday, Jan 22 2012, 07:35
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I'm waiting for chapter 3, Notna.
OFFTOPIC: celtic cross is the best finisher in Wwe and I like Sheamus.
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Notna  
Posted: Saturday, Mar 31 2012, 09:26
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Finally, FINALLY!!!

Chapter 3 has been released
Download here.
Play, enjoy and give me feedback people biggrin.gif

Get ready for the big finalle, Chapter 4!
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Posted: Saturday, Mar 31 2012, 09:34
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Finally, FINALLY!!!

You said this in the right way! biggrin.gif

I'll try your missions today, when I'll have some time.

P.S. I didn't forget to give a feedback! biggrin.gif
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Haha thanks, can't wait for your feedback mate icon14.gif
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shiva s  
Posted: Sunday, Apr 1 2012, 13:49
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Sorry, I was able to play only two missions due to lack of time.
Here's my feedbacks.
The 1st mission was really good. The virus concept was really creative. I was very much impressed by that.
The 2nd mission had awesome cutscenes but the long driving from Fort Carson to that building was a bit time consuming. Try to improve that. Anyways, awesome missions. I'll play the others and give feedbacks.

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Notna  
Posted: Sunday, Apr 1 2012, 14:14
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QUOTE (shiva s @ Sunday, Apr 1 2012, 16:49)
Sorry, I was able to play only two missions due to lack of time.
Here's my feedbacks.
The 1st mission was really good. The virus concept was really creative. I was very much impressed by that.
The 2nd mission had awesome cutscenes but the long driving from Fort Carson to that building was a bit time consuming. Try to improve that. Anyways, awesome missions. I'll play the others and give feedbacks.

Thanks.

About the second mission, you know, I made that mission over 2 months ago. Thanks for playing biggrin.gif
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Posted: Friday, Apr 20 2012, 06:37
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you used Ted DiBiase theme...lol..try Million Dollar man..BTW nice..i played this and it is COOL AS f*ck
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Posted: Friday, May 4 2012, 20:46
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I'm a bit late ( biggrin.gif ) with promised feedback, but better late than never! So, here it is!

Chapter 3 was really great! I especially liked your new mineral and a plan to catch Michael Thompson. The scene of interrogation of Michael Thompson in James' house was hilarious (I mean the interrogation with a chainsaw) biggrin.gif . Chapter 3 ended fascinatingly and now I can't wait for Chapter 4. Excellent work, dude! icon14.gif
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Trailer is nice, gonna try the missions!

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Notna  
Posted: Saturday, May 5 2012, 05:27
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Thanks everyone.

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you used Ted DiBiase theme...lol..try Million Dollar man..BTW nice..i played this and it is COOL AS f*ck

Ted is the real man. It's sad that he doesn't appear in WWE's programming too often.
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