[Mokrie Dela]

If you havn't already read it, I'd recommend reading City of Lies first


Thanks to Narcis_speed6 For the title Art.
The second, and final, 'City of Lies' story.

CLICK HERE to start reading or see below for each chapter!

Chapter Number:	Chapter Title (Click to Read)
PART ONE	A Dark Storm Rises
Prologue	Prologue
One	Changing of the Guard
Two	Target Zero
Three	The Mysterious Man
Four	Lords and Hustlers
Five	Parlay Crashers
Six	Italians and Russians
Seven	Italians and Russians: Part II
Eight	Close, But No Cigar
Nine	The Hunt for Johnny Klebitz...
Ten	On the Trail
Eleven	Reunion
Twelve	The Road to War
Thirteen	Capture the Flag
Fourteen	Let the Voting Commence
PART TWO	REVELATIONS
One	Funding an Army
Two	Right under your nose
Three	Between a Rock And a Hard Place
Four	Final Boarding Call
Five	It's All About The Guns!
Six	Welcome Back Party
Seven	Sweet Dreams, Niko
Eight	The Remnants of The Lost
Nine	Exit Polls
Ten	The Culling in North Holland
Eleven	Dearest Petrovic...
Twelve	Doublestrike
Thirteen	Fortune Cookie
Fourteen	Babylon!
Fifteen	Finding The Mole
Sixteen	And The Winner Is...
Seventeen	Whack-A-Mole
Eighteen	The Pickup
Nineteen	For Evil and Good
Twenty	Why Did We Come Here...?
Twenty One	...I Guess It Was The Weather
PART THREE	EXILE
One	Zero Hour
Two	The Depths of Error
Three	State of War
Four	Enemy At The Gates
Five	An Unstoppable Force...
Six	...An Unmovable Object
Seven	Public Enemies
Eight	Freedom Fighters
Nine	...An Old Friend
Ten	The Wrath of an Angry God
Eleven	Redemption
Epilogue	Epilogue

This post has been edited by Mokrie Dela on Friday, Feb 22 2013, 12:15

[Mati]

That's almost as surprising as the GTA V announcement. Great work so far, I can see that you're going a different direction this time around. You've got an action-packed scene there with an open ending. I already can't wait to see what happens in the future chapters.

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (Mati @ Saturday, Nov 5 2011, 13:22)

That's almost as surprising as the GTA V announcement. Great work so far, I can see that you're going a different direction this time around. You've got an action-packed scene there with an open ending. I already can't wait to see what happens in the future chapters.

Now THAT'S a compliment!

I'll try to keep chapters coming regularly.

[dannyz]

Great. I like the story so far and it looks action packed right away, This story follows the Ending where Roman Lives ? I did not expect what has happened in the story so far. Keep up the Good Work.

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (dannyz @ Sunday, Nov 6 2011, 05:13)

Great. I like the story so far and it looks action packed right away, This story follows the Ending where Roman Lives ? I did not expect what has happened in the story so far. Keep up the Good Work.

Yes it does, Roman is alive in this story.

[02fishera]

Another great piece so far Mokrie. You're doing a brilliant job of illustrating the setting, so much so that I could imagine playing out the chase in game. I'm just sorry I didn't find time to read it sooner.

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (02fishera @ Monday, Nov 21 2011, 19:26)

Another great piece so far Mokrie. You're doing a brilliant job of illustrating the setting, so much so that I could imagine playing out the chase in game. I'm just sorry I didn't find time to read it sooner.

Don't worry bout it man. I know you're a busy mo-fo

Just glad to get interest in this

[dannyz]

How this Coming along? Would Love to Read more of this Great Stuff.

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (dannyz @ Sunday, Dec 4 2011, 02:09)

How this Coming along? Would Love to Read more of this Great Stuff.

it's going ok. Mostly it's hinging off of Mati's Life Price, so i'd recomend you check that out, as the more progress mati makes, the closer COL is to being regularly uploaded

Although i've got quite a bit written, I'm needing to check it with Mati's work to ensure continuity.
progress is still being made though

[Mati]

I'll update my stuff today with a new mission. Forget the preview I posted btw.
I kinda feel bad about it, like you can't progress just because of me

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (Mati @ Sunday, Dec 4 2011, 13:16)

I'll update my stuff today with a new mission. Forget the preview I posted btw. I kinda feel bad about it, like you can't progress just because of me

Nah man it's cool - I'm still writing the story, and waiting for you only lets me re-edit it and make sure it's better. Please don't feel bad about it, as it's not affecting progress!

Also check out the GTA Wiki:
http://gta.wikia.com/GTA_Fan_Fiction#List_of_FanFiction

Someone's put my story up there! <- to whoever did

[billy james]

Wow that was more epic than saint row the third, keep them coming mate

This post has been edited by billy james on Wednesday, Dec 7 2011, 01:28

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (billy james @ Tuesday, Dec 6 2011, 21:22)

Wow that was more epic than saint row the third, keep them coming mate

Haha thanks. Havnt played SRTT yet tho.
More chapters will come but most likely in the new yeah.

[megahypernova]

damn i never finished the first one -_- had alot of real life issues at the time, i'm gonna go finish reading it and then come back here!!!

[megahypernova]

Just Finished Reading City Of Lies Sad Ending , And I Just Read The Prologue It's Really Good, Can't Wait To Read More!!!

[GTAIndonesia]

The first part sound like Chevy Chase's revelation topic.

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (GTAIndonesia @ Tuesday, Dec 20 2011, 11:37)

The first part sound like Chevy Chase's revelation topic.

i'm not following ya mate... :S


@megahypernova - thanks man - your support on this and the first one's appreciated

New chapters will come in the new year

[GTAIndonesia]

But it's good anyway, sad to see that niko died at the end.

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (GTAIndonesia @ Tuesday, Dec 20 2011, 11:43)

But it's good anyway, sad to see that niko died at the end.

Could you maybe explain the "revelations" reference? I'm not getting it lol

If anyone wants to see more of the Rami Character - check my sig for a link to Life's Price - I've adopted the character from Mati's concept, as i really liked him (although the character's slightly different).

That should also keep you going till i upload new chapters (or check out the first story - also in sig)

[billy james]

So when's the part 2 coming