The Story Of Leroy Kingston(TSOLK)created by KaRzY6
This is The Story Of Leroy Kingston. My First Series. Play the 8 missions and give me feedback. I'm thinking about making a episode 2 of the series.
Plot: You are Leroy Kingston, who grow up on a farm in the remote San Andreas desert. In the year 1984, (Leroy is 18 at this time) move to Los Santos to find work, with older brother Jamie(24yrs old). In the year 1995(Leroy is now 29), Leroy takes a holiday to Miami for to weeks. But finds that it is AWESOME! So he spend all his life-savings and stays there for a year. A banker, Mr Frewt, sells Leroy's house in Jefferson, Los Santos to pay back debt. Leroy is forced to return to Los Santos now with no money. He Stays with friend Chance because he has no house. Jamie is very pissed at Leroy because he "ran away". Then the worst thing happens.... his father dies from a heart-attack. Jamie and Leroy go home to the desert to their father's funeral. Leroy wants to get away and start a new life, so he moves to San Fierro. On the ship he meets Katie.
Oh ok. Its just that first I thought that having a farm in a desert doesn't make sense. But I realised that there are many types of farms.
Anyway, I see that you are also planning to make snother episode of this. Well, if you have a good idea in your mind, then there is no reason for you not to make it.
I will play this later as I had said before, and then give you feedback.
QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Thursday, Oct 27 2011, 21:26)
Oh ok. Its just that first I thought that having a farm in a desert doesn't make sense. But I realised that there are many types of farms.
Anyway, I see that you are also planning to make snother episode of this. Well, if you have a good idea in your mind, then there is no reason for you not to make it.
I will play this later as I had said before, and then give you feedback.
By the way, welcome to the forums.
thanks haha.
Um after you play it, could you tell me if a 2nd episode would be good. thanks
QUOTE (Nitesh aka AAAAAAA @ Thursday, Oct 27 2011, 21:26)
Oh ok. Its just that first I thought that having a farm in a desert doesn't make sense. But I realised that there are many types of farms.
Anyway, I see that you are also planning to make snother episode of this. Well, if you have a good idea in your mind, then there is no reason for you not to make it.
I will play this later as I had said before, and then give you feedback.
Ok, I'm trying to be honest. I already see the missions review from AznKei Try to improve your grammar, and the capital letters used. Punctucation (I don't know if I spell it right), the (!?,'), you have to improve it too
It's kinda unusual for an Australian like you. It's an English speaking country, you should have done better than that ! Anyway, good luck with your missions !
Ok, I'm trying to be honest. I already see the missions review from AznKei Try to improve your grammar, and the capital letters used. Punctucation (I don't know if I spell it right), the (!?,'), you have to improve it too
It's kinda unusual for an Australian like you. It's an English speaking country, you should have done better than that ! Anyway, good luck with your missions !
Haha yeah, i know. Although Australia is english, we are very slang. Anyway, i have improve on my new series
I tried the trailer, you know, you're right. Writing is awful, no offense, and youdidn't use "Publish mission" feature.
What's the publish mission feature do?? and i know it's self-critisisam but i know it's sh*t coz it's only my first missions(i only made like 3 missions before this pack). but i've played other peoples missions and learnt stuff and now i have improved a bit and my new series is better.
Publish mission - a DYOM feature that lets you make a file that can NOT be edited. Don't worry, it doesn't overwrite your mission, it just makes a copy of it.
Publish mission - a DYOM feature that lets you make a file that can NOT be edited. Don't worry, it doesn't overwrite your mission, it just makes a copy of it.
