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This is a "detective" storyline with some similarities to LA Noire; Hardboiled (By Jackal1337) ; but with added features to really take advantage of objects and thinking. Two Detectives...Two Stories..Two Cases. Both stories crossover and have the same main goal, but each detective is fighting to get the bust for himself. The player will be encouraged to use thinking and observe the objects near him as Invisible checkpoints are placed, take pictures of Clues and work together with his partners.
Take the role as "James Barretta" who starts off as a Mall Security Guard and makes himself known enough to be a detective. The cases he gets involved as a detective become more than he can handle..
MAIN CASES
Desk 1: Mall Security
Case 1: City Mall Defense
Missions
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The Big Sale The Trashed Store Life Changing Moments
Welcome, Deputy James (Intro to Desk) Training Time Knocked Out! Unapproved Orders Sending a Message A Warehouse Full of Them I ain't giving up so easy! Questioning Time
Dead on the Red Carpet Give me a Direction Nagging Bitch Checking The Bar Photo Journalism Scene at the Club Irresponsible Friends You Got Mail It's a Trap! We got 3 Possible Suspects No where to go with this! Unknown Connection
Long Fall to Death Does this look familiar to you, Sir? Finally Connecting The Dots A Little Talk with Jackson I Need Your Help, Phil McNarty! The SMC Investigation The Doctor made him do it!
A Lost of a Loved One Officer Down! LSPD Shootout Warning Phil The Culprit
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Desk 5: High Class Detective
Case 1: Finding the One Responsible
Missions
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Background Check SMC Shut Down The Parking Lot Mall Madness Finding the One Responsible Cold Year
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SIDE CASES/STREET CRIMES
These cases are not required to move on to the story and are usually random crimes that have been reported. They only consist of 1 mission and are unlocked after certain ranks.
Local Market Robbery- Desk 2, Case 2 Gang War in Glen Park- Desk 2, Case 2
Characters:
Protagonist and Partners
James Barretta- He is the protagonist for this story. Everyday James worked as a boring Mall Security Guard, that eventually changes after one encounter with a criminal. He is now slowly becoming a smart detective. He gets smarter as he advances in rank and can be understanding of some of the situations. Apparel:Desk 1, Desk 2, Desk 3, Desk 4, Desk 5
Byron Williams Partner in: Desk 2 Byron is one of the better deputies in the LSPD. He has never had a full time partner and James is his first partner. He follows most orders from Officer Jackson. Byron always takes 1 step further in the investigations with his interesting theories. He is a loyal partner who will help you any way he can. Weapon of Choice: Desert Eagle
Guo Tseng Partner in: Desk 3 He is a Middle Class Detective who wants to help the Lower Class Detectives with their cases. His parents were born in China, but he was raised in the United States. He is willing to get his hands dirty if that means getting the job done. Weapon of Choice: Shotgun
Alexandra Cross Partner in: Desk 4 Case 1 It is unknown how she got her detective career, but she does a damn good job at it. She is a good friend of Walter who came to visit him at the end of Desk 3 for James. It is rumored around the LSPD that her and Walter had more than just a friendship. Weapon of Choice: SMG
Hired Bodyguards Partner in: Desk 4 Case 2 In Desk 4 Case 2, James gets some bodyguards to protect him as he has a hit contract on his head. There are 3 Bodyguards. One has a specialty in Investigations, another is helpful in large gun fights with his superb accuracy, and the third has extra protective body armor. Weapon of Choice: 1. Shotgun, 2. AK-47, 3. Desert Eagle
Other Major Characters Walter Peterson Introduced in: Welcome Deputy, James Walter is the chief of the Desk 2 and 3 cases. He was looking for more deputies to train to keep the streets safe. He can get a little tense and sometimes overreact. He wants to train James for Desk 3 Low Class Detective. It is learned he has connections with the mayor and is a good friend of him. Walter and Detective McNarty also are close friends.
Officer Jackson Introduced in: Welcome Deputy, James Officer Jackson is the captain of Desk 2 Deputy cases. He is in charge of all Deputy cases and is trying to get some deputies ready for desk 3. He also runs cases in Desk 4. He wants James to become a hero some day and question authority.
Phillip "Phil" McNarty Apparel: Desk 3, Desk 4, Desk 5. Introduced in:Dead on the Red Carpet Phil McNarty is hard working Detective who is in Desk 3, while James is still in Desk 2. They have met a couple times off duty, but never really got to know each other. When he meets James at the movie star case, Phil is bitter against James, saying he is going to steal his job. Even though he wants to keep his cases separate with James, they might be forced to work together.
Case Notes Here are the notes saved in each case. Only view them if you completed the case as they will have spoilers.
Unlockable Pickups Weapons are Officers 2nd best friends, and even detectives. Here is a list of all weapons you will unlock as you rank up.
Nightstick (Unlocked at Desk 1) This is your first weapon you should consider in a Brawl. Every type of officer of the Law carries one of these things.
9mm Pistol (Unlocked at Desk 2) This is a simple weapon, It is good if you don't intend to get into any large shootouts, but need to protect yourself.
Body Armor (Unlocked at Desk 2) You are going to need this to definitely protect yourself from the criminals.
Desert Eagle (Unlocked at Desk 3) A lot better than the 9mm. This weapon is a Detective's best choice for it's power and mobility.
Shotgun (Unlocked at Desk 3) The Shotgun is used for Close enemies in short corners. This weapon is better for the bigger shootouts.
Camera (Unlocked at 50% into [B]The Dead Movie Star case)[/b] Your camera is very helpful as a detective. Taking pictures of the crime scene will help you remember where important clues are if you forget.
SMG (Unlocked at Desk 4) It is not great as an assault rifle, but it is good for taking out threats from medium distance with a great fire rate.
Health Upgrade (Unlocked at Desk 4) It is just a health upgrade to Show that the PD is proud for your hard work.
Sniper (Unlocked at Desk 5) Why does it take so long to get this weapon!? Because it is for the most bad ass detectives and police. You may be asked to provide sniper support because you are just that bad ass.
M4 (Unlocked at Desk 5) This weapon is good for large armies. Even though you are a detective, there will be those times where they need something heavy.
Unlockable Vehicles
LS Police Cruiser (Unlocked at Desk 2) It is a well balanced police car that has Decent Control, Durability and speed. There is nothing special besides holding 4 people.
Detective's Buffalo (Unlocked at Desk 3) It is a black buffalo commonly used by Low Class Detectives, but also higher ranks. It provides a good speed boost while on a chase and bullet proof tires so it cannot pop. Only Disadvantages is it is not very Durable and can only hold 2 people.
Detective's Sultan (Unlocked at Desk 4) This is a good vehicle used by high class detectives. It has balanced speed and durability, and is even better because of it holding 4 people.
SAPD Chopper (Unlocked at Desk 5)
This is only for the higher ranks. Traveling is made easier to go between cases. It has everything a detective wants. Flying, 4 seats, and good durability.
EXTRA NOTES:
This storyline is being created using DYOM v6.1 Recommended to upgrade to play all missions and get full experience
Some missions may require Passenger mod+ Driveby mod. It will be clear in the mission. The mods can be found by downloading this mission
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This post has been edited by Doublepulse on Tuesday, Apr 16 2013, 22:08
"You start with a detective already reached Desk 3, his name is Phillip McNarty. His life was perfect until the end of his vacation, until his brother's death. He fights through many cases in order to find out who is... the killer of his brother."
Downtown Shootout - During the "Bloody Incident" case, there's a shootout going on with a minor gang. An Illegal Situation - During the "Seville Gang Bang" case, there's an illegal van of illegal stuff around the Willowfield. He Killed - During the "Car Madness" case, a guy kills an innocent civilian near a car selling business. Robbery - During the "Car Madness" case, a guy robs a shop and kills it's owner and steals a bike, trying to escape.
Characters
Protagonist & Partners
Phillip "Phil" McNarty Apparel: Desk 3, Desk 4, Desk 5. Phil is a hard working Detective that helps to solve cases around Los Santos. He was on vacation for 4 months, in the meanwhile... his partner was killed. When Phil got back, he found out that not only his partner have died, but his younger brother too. His investigation begins from then, raising through ranks, getting new partners and hunting down the man who killed his brother.
Bob Raerho Partner in: Desk 3. Bob is a deputy of LSPD, Walter thought that Phil could do a little training for Bob, so he's now a new partner of Phil. Weapon of Choice: Shotgun. Clue Find: 35% (finds more than 2 clues each case)
Daniel Williams Partner in: Desk 4. Daniel is the star in Desk 4 of LSPD. Jackson signed Phil with Daniel, so that Phil could learn from Daniel. Weapon of Choice: MP5 Clue Find: 50% (finds more than 3 clues each case)
Harry Tix Partner in: Desk 5. Tix is the high detective of Desk 5, the best one ever was in such desk. Arnaldo signs Phil with him, because he knows they two will do good and solve the madness in Los Santos. Weapons of Choice: MP5 Clue Find: 60% (finds more than 4 clues each case)
Other Characters
Walter Petersen Introduced in: Desk 3. Walter is the chief of Desk 2 and Desk 3. He's also Phil's and the Mayor's friend. Walter has more contacts with the Mayor.
Harry "Mayor" Zvagui Introduced in: Desk 4 The Mayor is the main thing in Los Santos. He has contacts with Walter and the other LSPD, also runs the SM Company, which is Send Mail Company. Mayor needs Phil's help, to inform him about madness inside SM Company.
Dave "Ricky Jones" McNarty Introduced in: Desk 3 Dave is Phil's younger brother, Dave used to work at SM Company, but after visiting the Mall, he was found dead in the alley.
Jackson Introduced in: Desk 3 Jackson is the chief of Desk 4 and the department of it. Also, he's a good friend of Walter.
Arnaldo Querchesto Introduced in: Desk 4 Arnaldo is the leader of Desk 5, the high detectives. Arnaldo has no contacts with no one from the LSPD, but he knows the madness going on in Los Santos and signs Phil with Harry Tix on Desk 5.
This post has been edited by leoncj on Sunday, Oct 21 2012, 21:45
From the posts you put I'm sure that S.A. Noire is nothing. From my missions pack, I only have 2 detective missions in my pack (the 2nd detective missions have 5 part)
I will turn your life upside down! Group: Members
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Even though It is more "Detective".. There are some things you might find similar with SA Noire. There will be a lot of use of objects. It is going to take some thinking.
Im not sure myself, but I think the entire story is looking at 40-70 missions. The missions will not be too long, but Each Case will have a DSL folder. I don't want to overwhelm anyone or myself yet. But thats my predictions.
LA Noire is similar because there are about 3-5 cases per Desk and 5 desk. Each Case takes around 30-60 mins to complete.
Our cases might take 30-45 mins to complete.
Thanks for the luck , we are gonna need it.
This post has been edited by Doublepulse on Sunday, Sep 4 2011, 03:28
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Haha maybe!
That is not even the icing on the cake even if it was true. So there is gonna be more than just that happening. Stay tuned, We will maybe release few cases little early to ease the waiting.
Overall here is what is added on the main post:
*Unlockable Pickups
*Desk 1 and Desk 2 Cases
*One Character added
This post has been edited by Doublepulse on Sunday, Sep 4 2011, 03:39
From the posts you put I'm sure that S.A. Noire is nothing. From my missions pack, I only have 2 detective missions in my pack (the 2nd detective missions have 5 part)
What I can say is goodluck you two...
From the looks of your pics and the video, (I haven't played them though), this story has no f*cking similarity with yours. So, NO. This story is more like relaxing, sit back and solving the damn cases, some will involve gun fights or brawls.
-- There's no intro, no introductions. Real things starts after Trainings. --
This post has been edited by leoncj on Sunday, Sep 4 2011, 14:07
I don't care if I am a bastard you know... Group: Members
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Played training mission, I will not rate it because it's only training, oh, and I recommend to put the player only 25 health, so It will be hard and make more real the game, a few bullets should kill the player, all missions were good.
Damn the officer that poisoned the other officer's food, damn him, damn him!
, we are gonna need it. 
