[alifjenius]

[Attention] : UPDATE. Mission 2.6 or Mission 14

Nowhere to Go ?

The hit & run case still on the run ! The mission contain little car chase and gunfight. But in the end, there is a bug that I can't fix. It's supposed to be another car chase, but the limo just continue to circle around and stop. I already make the driving point, so if someone can tell me what happened, please tell me.

It's the end of investigation. The next mission will be the bust that John and Ringo take a part in

Enjoy the mission and give me the feedback

[SatournFan]

I already found easter eggs in your new mission, alif.

Boxers fighting each other and two officers (again.) fighting

EDIT: Played the mission. Nice car chase and gunfight made me happy and enjoy. Waiting for continuing.

This post has been edited by SatournFan on Sunday, Sep 4 2011, 07:54

[alifjenius]

QUOTE (SatournFan @ Sunday, Sep 4 2011, 14:46)

I already found easter eggs in your new mission, alif. Boxers fighting each other and two officers (again.) fighting

Thanks for warning me to add the mission in main post !

Yes, those are the easter eggs

[alifjenius]

[Attention] UPDATE Mission 2.7 or Mission 15

One After 59

The last mission of the investigation. Which mean, I already pack the 7 missions into 1 zip

S.A. Noire Chapter 2 - Detective Desk Investigation #1

Enjoy the missions. Give me feedback and review please...

Thank you for your attention

[Exekucnak]

Nice as always. the part at the desert was beast keep up the good work man

[SatournFan]

You're making me nothing with your missions! So good plot, actors, and what nice gunfights!

I just done here, you're beating me and many DYOM beginners with your "S.A. Noire". Really wonderful.

Keep the good mood with your missions, good luck and just don't crash like me with my packs.

[alifjenius]

QUOTE (Exekucnak)

Nice as always. the part at the desert was beast  keep up the good work man

Thank you very much for your feedback. You mean the mission "Reason" ? I glad you like that mission

QUOTE (SatorunFan)

You're making me nothing with your missions! So good plot, actors, and what nice gunfights! I just done here, you're beating me and many DYOM beginners with your "S.A. Noire". Really wonderful. Keep the good mood with your missions, good luck and just don't crash like me with my packs.

You are too much, SatournFan. Thank you very much for supporting me

[alifjenius]

[ATTENTION] There is a problem when downloading my .zip file right ?

Well, this is the fix version of it. It's kind of wierd that I upload the same file and edit the last link but the return error always be the same

So, here is the new link for my Chapter 2 missions pack

S.A. Noire Chapter 2 - Detective Desk Investigation #1 (FIXED VERSION)

I'm really sorry if you can't download the first one. Really sorry.

[Gorgonit]

QUOTE (alifjenius @ Tuesday, Sep 6 2011, 21:28)

[ATTENTION] There is a problem when downloading my .zip file right ? Well, this is the fix version of it. It's kind of wierd that I upload the same file and edit the last link but the return error always be the same So, here is the new link for my Chapter 2 missions pack S.A. Noire Chapter 2 - Detective Desk Investigation #1 (FIXED VERSION) I'm really sorry if you can't download the first one. Really sorry.

There's no problem brotha', take it easy

[alifjenius]

QUOTE (Gorgonit @ Wednesday, Sep 7 2011, 04:37)

QUOTE (alifjenius @ Tuesday, Sep 6 2011, 21:28) [ATTENTION] There is a problem when downloading my .zip file right ? Well, this is the fix version of it. It's kind of wierd that I upload the same file and edit the last link but the return error always be the same So, here is the new link for my Chapter 2 missions pack S.A. Noire Chapter 2 - Detective Desk Investigation #1 (FIXED VERSION) I'm really sorry if you can't download the first one. Really sorry. There's no problem brotha', take it easy

Well, maybe my computer that has a problem (yes, i try to download it again and there is no problem)

Thank you for telling me this

[alifjenius]

[Attention] UPDATE Mission 3.1 or Mission 16

Test Drive

The intro of Chapter 3. I made "un-detective" thing for the intro. The next mission will be a detective mission

Enjoy this mission and give me feedback

[alifjenius]

[ATTENTION] Update Mission 3.2 or 17

Old Reece

I'm sorry if this mission is too boring, because it's only contain cutscene, search this checkpoint, pick this pickup, and no gunfights happened in here

The detail of the mission can be found in the link

Thank you for the attention and give me feedback

[MegaDas14]

I started playing chapter 2,so far I have a few things to say:

1)First of all,you could remove the "sky".Seriously,it's already annoying to get back on "war" on some missions.Just follow a story and stick to it.If you wanna make war missions,add a separate chapter for that.You could have started the story with these missions...

2)Don"t use the same enemy skin.In every mission the enemies are the same.There are a lot of ped models in DYOM,why not using them?So far you used only 5-6 models,and a special actor.

3)Change the gameplay.Almost every mission is "go there,kill the enemies".Change the gameplay sometimes.Here are some ideas:you could follow a suspect with a car,you could kill the bad guys with a sniper,you could add a mission where your partner is kidnapped by the criminals etc. There are a lot of ways you can improve the gameplay in your story,just use them!

[Exekucnak]

2 new missions of chapter 3 are nice, first mission is maybe too easy and boring, you can maybe remove invureable tires. The things , that i like most in your missions are funny dialogues and policemans in SFDP garage, how were they photographing in the last mission? Pretty nice, so I'm waiting for more missions of this nice storyline

[alifjenius]

QUOTE (Exekucnak)

2 new missions of chapter 3 are nice, first mission is maybe too easy and boring, you can maybe remove invureable tires. The things , that i like most in your missions are funny dialogues and policemans in SFDP garage, how were they photographing in the last mission? Pretty nice, so I'm waiting for more missions of this nice storyline

About Invulnerable Tires, let me try the missions without using them

For the photograph, I set the 2 cops that in the right and the left side as neutral actor, one that bringing the fire extinguisher is the enemy actor, and the one who take the photograph is a friend actor. So the friend actor tried to kill the enemy actor using the camera (their behaviour is hold position, so the enemy actor won't move to kill the friend actor) and voila !

QUOTE (MegaDas14)

I started playing chapter 2,so far I have a few things to say: 1)First of all,you could remove the "sky".Seriously,it's already annoying to get back on "war" on some missions.Just follow a story and stick to it.If you wanna make war missions,add a separate chapter for that.You could have started the story with these missions... 2)Don"t use the same enemy skin.In every mission the enemies are the same.There are a lot of ped models in DYOM,why not using them?So far you used only 5-6 models,and a special actor. 3)Change the gameplay.Almost every mission is "go there,kill the enemies".Change the gameplay sometimes.Here are some ideas:you could follow a suspect with a car,you could kill the bad guys with a sniper,you could add a mission where your partner is kidnapped by the criminals etc. There are a lot of ways you can improve the gameplay in your story,just use them!

Thank you for your feedback
1. I'll remove sky in the future missions
2. I'm trying to add some characters for each factions in the future missions
3. Well, the mission "Nowhere to Go ?" contain car chase. But thanks for the idea, I'll keep those in mind

Thank you both of you guys for supporting me

[pauliux2]

gawd...A newbie...With such good missions?I can't believe my eyes!Your missions are AWSUM'!!Waiting for more missions.

[xMatix]

At first I was like: "Hmm, I saw somewhere topic writen with similar format." But then i saw: "xMatix (yes, you !) - For screenshots and topic format inspiration", lmao.

If I will have some free time, I will check those missions, now I'm trying to translate my Storyline "Theory of Revolution" but I have damdaged disc and my f'cking computer working like 103 japanese grandpa.

[Secronom President]

I'll start working on the review of chapter two this week end, if you don't mind.

[alifjenius]

QUOTE (pauliux2)

gawd...A newbie...With such good missions?I can't believe my eyes!Your missions are AWSUM'!!Waiting for more missions.

Thank you for playing my missions

QUOTE (xMatix)

At first I was like: "Hmm, I saw somewhere topic writen with similar format." But then i saw: "xMatix (yes, you !) - For screenshots and topic format inspiration", lmao. If I will have some free time, I will check those missions, now I'm trying to translate my Storyline "Theory of Revolution" but I have damdaged disc and my f'cking computer working like 103 japanese grandpa.

Yeah, I adapted your G.I.W topic. Thank you for the inspirations
Poor man, how slow is your "103 Japanese Grandpa" ?

QUOTE (Secronom President)

I'll start working on the review of chapter two this week end, if you don't mind.

Well, SatorunFan already take my request for reviewing my missions. But he has to review Doublepulse's missions too. So, it's okay for reviewing my missions, I think he is too busy for reviewing Doublepulse's and my missions (help him )

[kmlwin.1996]

A newbie with great missions.

Keep up the good job!

I'll inform you when I found a bug or something you missed.