[MarijuanaMonkey]

I can say proud, "I love this topic". It has an amazing story. "Rami's one of the reason of the money crisis in Los Santos ( GTA V )" idea's interesting, can't wait to see that shocking situation. Also one of the question mark's in my head's "What the hell was Aaron doing with that gun?", wish that we can learn this mystery. Keep up this good work, mate.

[Mati]

Thanks, I've never expected to people actually like this. Good news fellas, I don't have to go to school tomorrow and don't really have anything planned so I'll probably have time to write a few missions up tomorrow

[Mokrie Dela]

cool. look forward to it.
Im having to press on with mine so i'm thinking of making Rami less of a major character to avoid any continueity problems.

[Mati]

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ Tuesday, Feb 28 2012, 12:06)

cool. look forward to it. Im having to press on with mine so i'm thinking of making Rami less of a major character to avoid any continueity problems.

Well, PM me if I should give you a short description about the future missions, who dies and such.

I got 3 new missions written down already

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (Mati @ Tuesday, Feb 28 2012, 22:09)

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ Tuesday, Feb 28 2012, 12:06) cool. look forward to it. Im having to press on with mine so i'm thinking of making Rami less of a major character to avoid any continueity problems. Well, PM me if I should give you a short description about the future missions, who dies and such. I got 3 new missions written down already

look forward to them

[Mati]

Yeah, I think I'll post them when I have finished the rest too. That way, I'll have everything on the same table and can make the story to be more flowing, know what I mean? I can always make some changes, maybe even add characters in the correct place and time before posting the missions. I think the mission's quality will improve if I post them all at once in a few weeks.

[Money Over Bullshit]

Yo Mati, could you please put spaces between the screenshot links on the first page so it doesn't look like one big link. I don't know why but that really bothers me

[Mokrie Dela]

Been a while since any updates. Hope alls good mati, and your not having the problems I'm having (lack of interest mostly, no one is replying to my story). I genuinely want to see how this ends. Hope to see more soon

[Mati]

I doubt that I can go on with this I'm terribly sorry for that, I simply don't have the interest, motivation, time and sense in continuing this. I know, I'm a dick.

I could give you short descriptions of the most important things that will happen in the mission, but I doubt that I'll have time to write them in the full version.

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (Mati @ Wednesday, Mar 28 2012, 15:01)

I doubt that I can go on with this I'm terribly sorry for that, I simply don't have the interest, motivation, time and sense in continuing this. I know, I'm a dick. I could give you short descriptions of the most important things that will happen in the mission, but I doubt that I'll have time to write them in the full version.

Oh, that's a shame man.

*holds a minute silence*

[Mati]

Hey Morkie, reading trough your Justice in Flames inspired me enough to go on with this

Also, just saying, this concept started in 2011 so it still can be nominated for the annual awards.

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (Mati @ Monday, Apr 9 2012, 08:40)

Hey Morkie, reading trough your Justice in Flames inspired me enough to go on with this Also, just saying, this concept started in 2011 so it still can be nominated for the annual awards.

wow I'm honored

Congrats on having this win the award man.

This played a big part in JIF.

Enjoy your medal(s)

And i just saw your post about carrying on - i hope you do, and i think the award shows that people think it's good. It deserves to be completed i think.


Sorry for not posting - i simply didnt realise .

*re-subscribes*

[Money Over Bullshit]

Yes congratulations Mati.. I voted for Pedochu (sorry) but you are a very deserving winner and I'm happy to pass the torch to you!

This definitely shows that you should carry on and complete this story. I really look forward to seeing what else you have to offer.

BTW congratulations Mokrie on best story

[Mati]

Well guys, I have to thank you for supporting this concept. As English isn't my first language and Pedochu is much better in writing than me, I didn't expect to win the first place. Congrats for him too.

Yeah, for now I'm kinda busy (exams) so I won't write that much for the next 2-3 weeks but I'm starting to work on this again.
Also, sorry Morkie for not checking out JIC since the 4th or 5th chapter. I'm very busy right now but I'll get to it when I have some free time.

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (Mati @ Sunday, May 13 2012, 05:45)

Well guys, I have to thank you for supporting this concept. As English isn't my first language and Pedochu is much better in writing than me, I didn't expect to win the first place. Congrats for him too. Yeah, for now I'm kinda busy (exams) so I won't write that much for the next 2-3 weeks but I'm starting to work on this again. Also, sorry Morkie for not checking out JIC since the 4th or 5th chapter. I'm very busy right now but I'll get to it when I have some free time.

Writing is all about conveying a message. Considering english isnt your first language, you did well. Most of the errors were the typical things non english people struggle with. Our language is apparantly one of the hardest to learn.

And by all means focus on your exams.
Justic in Flames had moments where i simply couldnt write it. I tried but it wasn't happening. There were times where that, and COL could have falled by the wayside. Sometimes you have to force it, sacrifice an hour sleep or something, but sometimes you do have to just put it aside for a few days or a week. I think this is one of the latter; exams are important, and we'll all still be here when you're done.

Also as a side note, I'm going to keep Rami's backstory vague (though i have just written a bit where he explains the truth behind his infamous act of beating a man with his own leg), trying to HINT at things, so as to allow more freedom with this

Feel free to send me a PM when you're back posting missions and i'll re-read it

@MOB: Thanks. I owe some thanks to Mati and this story. The dynamic of Rami and Niko works well i think, and i have to give credit to Mati for making the character appeal to me.

[Tommy.]

Congrats Mati, you deserved to win!

[SatournFan]

Congratulations, Mati, you're the one who really deserve it.

[Mokrie Dela]

has this died again?

[Mati]

Nah, give me one more week and I'm starting working on it again

Sorry, but I wasn't really interested in continuing this at first. I've had exams, I've wrote other things and such.. but next week I'll have more time

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (Mati @ Wednesday, Jun 13 2012, 20:06)

Nah, give me one more week and I'm starting working on it again Sorry, but I wasn't really interested in continuing this at first. I've had exams, I've wrote other things and such.. but next week I'll have more time

Cool
What else did you write? If they'd uploaded I might check them out