[Secronom President]

Hum, guess I will have to rate the missions...

xGhostx: Buy a new property if you want him to be able to join. Cost is in the main post.

[Csabi98]

I'd like to create a gang.

Name:The Saints
Color:Blue
Property:Some houses in East Los Santos

If the red area is too big and unfair against other gangs, then tell me, and I will use only the purple area.

This post has been edited by Csabi98 on Monday, Aug 6 2012, 08:25

[The - Hunter]

Here is my first mission

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19692

This mission speaks of the casual meeting that and happened between Giuseppe (Player)
and the two members of the Sacra Corona Unita

Do make me know if it is all right?

[xGhostx]

@Secronom President
I have a question, if another designer want to join my gang, he must continue the story of that gang (use the main character) or create a 2nd main character and create another story (still in my gang)?

@TheSifter
Wait until I have enough money to buy you a property.


This post has been edited by xGhostx on Wednesday, Jun 27 2012, 00:25

[lee_atsugai]

QUOTE (xGhostx @ Wednesday, Jun 27 2012, 00:22)

@Secronom President I have a question, if another designer want to join my gang, he must continue the story of that gang (use the main character) or create a 2nd main character and create another story (still in my gang)? @TheSifter Wait until I have enough money to buy you a property.

I think it's up to the designer, Ghost. But about the main character, it should be different

The - Hunter : I'll rate your mission

[TheSifter]

Hunter your mission was...... Overall good, but you broke a few rules and for unknown reasons objectives and dialogue are in 3rd person.....

[xGhostx]

@The - Hunter
Dude, you have to buy cars for your gang to use, you might get a penalty for the 1st mission. And please try to learn English, what the hell do you mean ''It enters the Auto'', ''It sows the field'',...? Just write ''Enter the car'', ''Sow the field''!!!

@TheSifter
Choose one of these location as your hideout:

1/

I like this one because it has a large balcony and a scout tower.

2/

This one look kind of nice and it's near my hideout.

3/

This one is nice, too.

I recommended the second one because it's near my hideout.

This post has been edited by xGhostx on Wednesday, Jun 27 2012, 09:40

[TheSifter]

Ill check them IG

BTW He he wrote it 3rd person.

This post has been edited by TheSifter on Wednesday, Jun 27 2012, 10:02

[xGhostx]

QUOTE (TheSifter @ Wednesday, Jun 27 2012, 10:00)

Ill check them IG BTW He he wrote it 3rd person.

IG?

What do you mean he wrote it 3rd person.

[TheSifter]

IG means In Game

"It sows the field" is 3rd person perspective.

[lee_atsugai]

Alright, here's the score

The - Hunter
Sacra Corona Unita Family

Writing - Decent ($10) Lot of grammar mistakes. I would give this "Could Be Better" ($5), but the colored texts and the use of the capital letters make me to raise the rating up

Presentation - Good ($15) The cutscene angle are good enough

Length - Good ($15) It could be done in 6 minutes

Difficulty - Too Easy ($5) The mission only consist of driving. No action involved

Variety - Above Good ($18) There are several different objects, 2 different cars, and little variety of actors

10+15+15+5+18 = $63
So, that mean you have 6 new gang members!

SP: I think The - Hunter get money penalty because using 2 vehicles which he doesn't have

This post has been edited by lee_atsugai on Wednesday, Jun 27 2012, 13:56

[The - Hunter]

Boys excused for my English but I am trying to learn
I also apologize me for the vehicles that I have put
I didn't know with what vehicle to begin the history
I hope to do very better in the second mission, considering that for me and the first time

[lee_atsugai]

QUOTE (The - Hunter @ Wednesday, Jun 27 2012, 14:13)

Boys excused for my English but I am trying to learn I also apologize me for the vehicles that I have put I didn't know with what vehicle to begin the history I hope to do very better in the second mission, considering that for me and the first time

It's okay mate

[TheSifter]

Ghost after long inspecting i could chose the 2nd one, but when will you get money to buy an assset?

[The - Hunter]

I can buy 3 knives to be inserted in the next mission?

[xGhostx]

@TheSifter
Soon, maybe 1 or 2 more mission. Just be patience man, maybe you could make the mission first, wait till I bought you the property then publish it.

[Secronom President]

Main post has been updated (cash and gang members for missions, weapons buying, cash penalties, etc.)

Csabi: Please be more specific about the property.

xGhostx: You can buy a property right now if you wish. It will only put your cash in red (minus. Meaning you are in debt.)

[xGhostx]

Alright, I want to buy this property for TheSifter:

[Csabi98]

Name:The Saints
Color:Blue
Property:The houses around Glen Park, or lets call it Glen Park..
Once again, if the red area is unfair(too big), then tell me to use the blue area.


This post has been edited by Csabi98 on Monday, Aug 6 2012, 08:25

[TheSifter]

No updates since my birthday, 1st July