[ClaudeSpeedIV]

ok this is my GTA IV chain story, I know their are others but I want to make my own, I'll do the 1st one:

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HOW TO PLAY
Someone will write part of a story. EG-Niko then stole a car and travled to...
Then the writer must add up to five options for the next writer.
Any person can take over from that point
RULES
No more than 5 options for a story part
You are not allowed to kill off main characters EG-LJ, Niko, Packie etc. NOTE you can kill Niko, he just respawns at the hospital
No cheats. EG-Then Niko got infinite health and armour
Who ever posts first between 2 more people the first story will continue as normal, the 2nd or 3rd story replying to a same story part must edit their post and must say 'never mind this' to not cause confusion
No supernatural sh*t that isn't in the game
Please do not edit your story if it IS used already by another writer
You can say Niko finds weapons but only in correct and real spawn points in the game
The same writer can NOT reply to their own story

Please pay the most attention to the Underlined and Bold Rules.
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Niko wakes up one day and puts his default clothes on, he goes outside and...



1. kills the 1st person he sees
2. answers his phone to find out roman wants to go bowling
3. start a rampage!

This post has been edited by ClaudeSpeedIV on Saturday, Nov 13 2010, 16:34

[AceRay]

well guess what? use the perfectly good other ones. you don't always get what you want!

[nb2010]

THE CHAIN STORY version 1 has become silly with the same few members adding various gay fantasies probably jerking off while they do so.

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (nb2010 @ Nov 9 2010, 11:11)

THE CHAIN STORY version 1 has become silly with the same few members adding various gay fantasies probably jerking off while they do so.

he's right. There were 2 good ones. I regularly posted in one but that went silly, people creating new characters and failing to stick to cannon.

And the surviving one got ridiculous. last bit i saw had Luis jacking off and one of the options was him ejaculating when niko came in. wtf is that?

Due to writing commitments (look in my sig) i wont join in this one and tbh one of these topic hating mods will come and lock this, as one or two of them seem to hate ANY topic other then that damn wishlist.

But OT's right. If it's gone stupid, you can post and TRY to bring it back to seriousness,but why bother.

We need a new chain story that's moderated.

Good luck keeping this topic alive man.

[cidamelo]

"last bit i saw had Luis jacking off and one of the options was him ejaculating when niko came in. wtf is that?"

[AlexGTAGamer]

I am getting tired of seeing gay related options in THE CHAIN STRY VERSION 1 as well, sadly enough I am one of those people who are trying to keep it censible, chances are those who give gay options are kids anyway.

[Mati]

Well, the first chain story got a little better now in the last 5 posts or something. That gay stuff was funny at first now its just boring and the whole story got like this:
´After doing (enter something here) gay Tony wants to f**k Niko. What does Niko do?
1. Call Luis to gang bang
2. Whack off
3. (enter a plot opinion here, will be ignored anyways.)´
Now I stopped it. Now its just tasteless and boring. A new chain story would be a new good fresh start.

This post has been edited by mati1501 on Tuesday, Nov 9 2010, 17:07

[ClaudeSpeedIV]

QUOTE (mati1501 @ Nov 9 2010, 17:05)

Well, the first chain story got a little better now in the last 5 posts or something. That gay stuff was funny at first now its just boring and the whole story got like this: ´After doing (enter something here) gay Tony wants to f**k Niko. What does Niko do? 1. Call Luis to gang bang 2. Whack off 3. (enter a plot opinion here, will be ignored anyways.)´ Now I stopped it. Now its just tasteless and boring. A new chain story would be a new good fresh start.

ok now can we start the chain story? i'll even let you take the next turn, we will make this chain story WAY better than the other pointless ones. together we can make a more better chain story that makes more sense than the other retarded topics of this that don't make sense.

[Mati]

OK then.

2. answers his phone to find out roman wants to go bowling.
Roman: ´Niko, my cousin! Want to...´
Niko: ´Go bowling? Sure cousin. I pick you up in an hour.´

Niko:
1. Runs all the way to Roman in south Bohan.
2. Goes to the Turismo car dealership and steals a Turismo.
3. Takes the Infernus he got from Bryce and Bernie.

[AlexGTAGamer]

3.
Niko drives to Roman and picks him up. They go to Memory Lanes at Firefly Island and meet some friends there who are bowling. Who do they meet:
1. Brucie and two girls.
2. Little Jacob and Badman.
3. Packie and Derrick.
4. Dwayne and some of his "boys".

[Mati]

4. Dwayne and some of his boys.
They play a game or two together and Roman wins both times. He goes to his gambling friends since he feels lucky.
´Letting Roman win was a bad idea...´
Anyways, Dwayne needs some help:
1. His new girlfriend is kidnapped.
2. He lost his wallet.
3. He makes a deal with the Lost MC but he doesn´t trust them.

[AceRay]

2.
Niko agrees to find teh lost wallet. He ditches Roman and runs to the Burger shot. He buys a burger, and when he eats the burger
1. the wallet falls
2.some police break in with the wallet
3.some russians break in with the wallet

[Mati]

3.
´Man, lets buy some f**king burgers. I stole this wallet from some black guy in Memory Lanes.´
´Yeah lets eat.´
Niko:
1. Calls Dwayne to tell him that the Russians have it.
2. Shoots the Russians.
3. Asks them nicely about the wallet.
4. Pukes in one of the Russians face and shows them his red army skills.

[AlexGTAGamer]

3.
Niko: "Hey um I think you guys stole that wallet from a friend of mine."
Russian 1: "Yeah we did, you got a problem with that?"
Niko: "Well I do, I was wondering if I could have that wallet back."
Russian 1: "Are you f**king joking?!"
Niko: "No."
Russian 1: "It's my wallet now".
Russian 2: "Your wallet? I thought you agreed that it was all our wallet."
Russian 1: "Yeah but I'm the leader so I get it."
Russian 2: "Well I revolt!"
Russian 3: "Look at you with the big words."
Russian 1 and 2: "Shut up!"
As the russians are now having an arguement over who now owns the wallet Niko steals the wallet out of the russians hand and runs to the Burger Shot car park, steals a car and drives away to Dwaynes house to return his wallet. But when Niko knocks on Dwayne's door:
1. He sees a note on his door saying that he has left on a vacation to Vice City.
2. The door is open.
3. He hears smashing from inside the house.
4. The LCPD are at his house.

[Mati]

1.
´Well, that boy needs a vacation. But what should I do with his wallet? Do I dare to look inside? Oh, WTF not.´
Niko opens the wallet and sees about 200 bucks, a few pictures of probably his mother and some friends and a exclusive VIP membership to:

1. Bahammas mammas.
2. Club Liberty.
3. Hercules.
4. Triangle club.
5. MeTV building.

[The Lolwut Pear]

3.

"Ah..Must be..."
Niko sees an ID inside.
"Bernies! But wasn't his Dwaynes?"

Niko:
1. Calls Bernie to give him back teh wallet.
2. Decides to see if he can trade that membership.
3. Steals the 200 bucks.
4. Calls Dwayne to tell him he found the wrong wallet.

[Mati]

4.
´Oh f**k it, son. But while you are in LC could you still search for it? There is something important there.´
´OK Dwayne. I call ya later.´
Niko drives to Bernie to:
1. Give him the wallet.
2. Ask if hes allright.
3. Hang out with him.
4. Give him his wallet and ask for helping find Dwayne´s.

[The Lolwut Pear]

4.

"Oooh! Niko! It's so good to see you!"
"Hey, Bernie..How are you doing?"
"Fine..Come in!"
"Hey Bernie, I found your wallet..."
"Oh! I lost it at Hercules.."

Suddenly:
1. Niko's phone rings
2. Bryce Dawkins walks in.
3. A rock is smashed through the window that says:"DIE FAGGOT"

[AceRay]

3.
Niko picks up the rock and smashes it with his fist. Inside it, there is
1.The wallet
2.A treasure map of where the wallet is.
3.A pistol
4.Bernie's Email address

[Mati]

4.
´My E-Mail adress? WTF?´
´Hey! who threw that rock?´
Outside:
1. Some of the North Holland hustlers throw some rocks.
2. Russians throw some rocks.
3. Some street thugs throw rocks.