[abishai.kochara]

could anyone review the missions of 8 miles please do this
thanks in advance, i'd be happy if john12 did them

[KaRzY6]

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 14:16)

could anyone review the missions of 8 miles please do this thanks in advance, i'd be happy if john12 did them

Don't double-post the same thing, and in the same day to.

[abishai.kochara]

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 03:19)

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 14:16) could anyone review the missions of 8 miles please do this thanks in advance, i'd be happy if john12  did them Don't double-post the same thing, and in the same day to.

i forgot that i already posted a request

[KaRzY6]

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 14:20)

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 03:19) QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 14:16) could anyone review the missions of 8 miles please do this thanks in advance, i'd be happy if john12  did them Don't double-post the same thing, and in the same day to. i forgot that i already posted a request

Haha, okay

@Any reviewer (I don't care)
Can I request a review for missions 3 and 4 of my series, The Story of Leroy Kingston: Remake. Thank you

[ItsAllAboutGTA]

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 03:23)

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 14:20) QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 03:19) QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 14:16) could anyone review the missions of 8 miles please do this thanks in advance, i'd be happy if john12  did them Don't double-post the same thing, and in the same day to. i forgot that i already posted a request Haha, okay @Any reviewer (I don't care) Can I request a review for missions 3 and 4 of my series, The Story of Leroy Kingston: Remake. Thank you

I can do it nut let me play the mission first !

[KaRzY6]

QUOTE (ItsAllAboutGTA @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 14:45)

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 03:23) QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 14:20) QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 03:19) QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 14:16) could anyone review the missions of 8 miles please do this thanks in advance, i'd be happy if john12  did them Don't double-post the same thing, and in the same day to. i forgot that i already posted a request Haha, okay @Any reviewer (I don't care) Can I request a review for missions 3 and 4 of my series, The Story of Leroy Kingston: Remake. Thank you I can do it nut let me play the mission first !

Okay, thank you.

[ItsAllAboutGTA]

Alright guys,today i'm going to review a mission made by KaRzY6,The Story of Leroy Kingston.Mission number 3 & 4,which is 52 & Collin & Drug Dealer

-Writting:Very Good,they are written perectly good grammar and coloing text
-Presentation:Good,i don't say very good because less cutscene are used,it used many timeout
-Length:Good,i'm done it maybe in 1 - 2 minute,cause the mission not too long but it has an interesting storyline
-Difficulty:Medium,Both of the mission series have a different difficulty,like in Drug Dealer,we must defeat the ballas using only a baseball bat without armor,but the ballas are using guns,that's the interesting part,make's the mission more challanging & twisting
-Variety:Decent,almost all the actor's and playable character using the skin that we seen while playing the original mission of San Andreas,like Leroy,the main character,use the skin of Ryder

Overall,the mission are cool,very fun to play & 5 thumbs up.Great job KaRzY6,for designing this mission ! Keep it up !

[KaRzY6]

QUOTE (ItsAllAboutGTA @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 15:42)

Alright guys,today i'm going to review a mission made by KaRzY6,The Story of Leroy Kingston.Mission number 3 & 4,which is 52 & Collin & Drug Dealer -Writting:Very Good,they are written perectly good grammar and coloing text -Presentation:Good,i don't say very good because less cutscene are used,it used many timeout -Length:Good,i'm done it maybe in 1 - 2 minute,cause the mission not too long but it has an interesting storyline -Difficulty:Medium,Both of the mission series have a different difficulty,like in Drug Dealer,we must defeat the ballas using only a baseball bat without armor,but the ballas are using guns,that's the interesting part,make's the mission more challanging & twisting -Variety:Decent,almost all the actor's and playable character using the skin that we seen while playing the original mission of San Andreas,like Leroy,the main character,use the skin of Ryder Overall,the mission are cool,very fun to play & 5 thumbs up.Great job KaRzY6,for designing this mission ! Keep it up !

Thank so much GTA. Nice review Btw, the mission is 'Drug Business' not 'Drug Dealer'. I'll add this to the topic

[abishai.kochara]

ok I can't wait anymore,
could anyone please review the missions in 8 Miles, thanks in advance

[KaRzY6]

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 15:57)

ok I can't wait anymore, could anyone please review the missions in 8 Miles, thanks in advance

Are you serious??

3 requests in less then 24 hours...

Just wait till a reviewer is willing to do it.

[abishai.kochara]

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 05:03)

QUOTE (abishai.kochara @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 15:57) ok I can't wait anymore, could anyone please review the missions in 8 Miles, thanks in advance Are you serious?? 3 requests in less then 24 hours... Just wait till a reviewer is willing to do it.

first i asked for john12 but it seems he's been missing, hence, this, sorry, really sorry

[KaRzY6]

Review missions 5 and 6 of 'TSoLK: Remake'

Link - http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=495161

Thank you

[Moryachok]

Hi all. Can you review missions Militant rental part 1-3, please?

[abishai.kochara]

well........ guys I'll start reviewing and designing and all other DYOM stuff from monday onwards, I just got back from church so in case theres no one else I'll do them on monday and all this because today's christmas so........
Anyway karzy I'm really sorry but I'll give you the screenshots on Monday,
Sorry again

[john12]

@abi: I asked you first to just review Divided Roles from my THE CRASH!! series. What happened?

[Notna]

I am requesting someone to review the first chapter of JPAHC. Thanks in advance.

[john12]

I will do that by Thursday. I will start now then Alex's

[abishai.kochara]

QUOTE (john12 @ Monday, Dec 26 2011, 17:35)

@abi: I asked you first to just review Divided Roles from my THE CRASH!! series. What happened?

on it, thought i would put it after you came back expect it by some hours from now....................

[john12]

QUOTE (ItsAllAboutGTA @ Friday, Dec 23 2011, 10:12)

Alright guys,today i'm going to review a mission made by KaRzY6,The Story of Leroy Kingston.Mission number 3 & 4,which is 52 & Collin & Drug Dealer -Writting:Very Good,they are written perectly good grammar and coloing text -Presentation:Good,i don't say very good because less cutscene are used,it used many timeout -Length:Good,i'm done it maybe in 1 - 2 minute,cause the mission not too long but it has an interesting storyline -Difficulty:Medium,Both of the mission series have a different difficulty,like in Drug Dealer,we must defeat the ballas using only a baseball bat without armor,but the ballas are using guns,that's the interesting part,make's the mission more challanging & twisting -Variety:Decent,almost all the actor's and playable character using the skin that we seen while playing the original mission of San Andreas,like Leroy,the main character,use the skin of Ryder Overall,the mission are cool,very fun to play & 5 thumbs up.Great job KaRzY6,for designing this mission ! Keep it up !

um.. Its all about...

YOU AREN'T IN THE TEAM! SEE!

QUOTE (At the Main Post)

I heard about some DYOM users here that are confused about who are the legitimate DYOM reviewers in this topic. I'm going to give the answer so that's people can understand... There's ONLY 12 DYOM REVIEWERS that are allowed to review in this topic: Me (AznKei), Secronom President, Jetjatin, maliksusanto, abishai.kochara, Nitesh aka AAAAAAA, SatournFan, KaRzY6, Juan-R, john12, Notna and GTAIndonesia. However, if you're interested to be a DYOM reviewer or want to post a review in this topic. You have to GET THE AUTHORIZATION by PM me or posting a request here in order to legitimate your review post. Thank you for your understanding.

...?

Now face the problem

This post has been edited by john12 on Tuesday, Dec 27 2011, 06:53

[abishai.kochara]

Hey guys! Today I'm going to review 'Divided Roles' by john12 from 'crash!!'
trust me for being late but I'm sorry!
Anyway to the review.

'Divided Roles'

Presentation Excellent. As expected, beautiful cutscenes from john, good camera angles, they'll keep you glued!

Writing Excellent No mistakes, all are proper and are clearly understandable, by this I mean crystal-clear.

Length Good Well, took me about 5 minutes to complete, you play as Sam and along with a friend wreak havoc in a construction site filled with goons(awesome gunfights)

Difficulty Medium I failed just once(because of ignorance) but if you play properly using your surroundings you'll probably find it real easy.

Vareity Decent Well there are the triads and mafias as the goons but their placements make them really indistinguishable, good job john! Good idea for the location of the mission.

Awesome mission john, as expected. Our friend with a minigun makes stuff(easy) and yeah really good location for a gunfight(especially when theres a specific target). Good job john12, I have no words that can explain this mission,
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