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 DYOM Missions review

 Reviewing the DYOM missions
 
The - Hunter  
Posted: Saturday, Aug 4 2012, 17:50
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QUOTE (lee_atsugai @ Saturday, Jun 30 2012, 03:13)
Hello everyone, today I'm going to review a mission pack called The Shade of Destiny by The - Hunter. He requested whole missions in this mission pack to be reviewed. The topic leading to the missions:
http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=509631

Here's the review:

Writings: Good - There are a lot of grammar and writing mistakes in the missions, but it still understandable.
Presentation: Excellent - The cutscene generally have great angles and perfectly timed and focused cutscene make the mission more exciting

A Strange Homicide

Length: Decent - It can be done in 4 minutes. We'll play as a police officer, found a dead body near the river
Difficulty: Easy - The mission only consist of driving around, no action involved
Variety: Good - There are low variety on actors, cars and objects. Weapons only included Shotgun

Ricky Cold

Length: Short - It can be done in 3 minutes. After the scientist check the car, it's suspected that the car belongs to Ricky Cold
Difficulty: Easy - Only driving from the police station, the farm and head back to police station
Variety: Decent - As the mission consist on 4 different characters/skin, 3 different cars but no objects are seen in this mission

James Connor Returns in the City

Length: Decent - It can be done in 4 minutes. In this mission, the main character meet his old friend from the city
Difficulty: Easy - No action, only driving from Dillimore to Blueberry
Variety: Could Be Better - There are only low variety on cars and actors. No objects are seen in this mission

Ricky Cold Dead

Length: Short - It can be done in 3 minutes. This mission shows how Tommy shot by Ricky, and explains more about the current situation
Difficulty: Easy - This time, you must defeat a clown that carrying a chainsaw. You'll be given a shovel
Variety: Good - There are low variety on actors and weapons, but large variety on objects

Shock

Length: Short - It can be done in 3 minutes. This shows a flashback from Tommy's past
Difficulty: Easy - Only cutscene and walking around
Variety: Decent - Clown, Doctors, a medic, police officers and cars are seen in this mission, but no objects

The Truth

Length: Good - It can be done in 6 minutes. In this mission, you will find the truth behind the strange homicide.
Difficulty: Hard - You'll be given a rifle while your ally will carry a Desert Eagle. The enemies use same weapons, SMG. They have low-medium health with high accuracies.
Variety: Good - As the mission contains low variety on objects, actors and cars. There are SMG, Rifle, Silence 9mm, Knife and Desert Eagle used in this mission

The Clown

Length: Very Good - It can be done in 8 minutes. This is the final mission in this mission pack. Tommy wakes up from his dream. The clown tell Tommy to go to Mount Chilliad hideout and retrieve the notebook
Difficulty: Hard - Firstly we climb up Mount Chilliad using a car. The hard part when the enemies come and started to shoot you. They have very high accuracies, but their headshot are turned on
Variety: Good - There are a lot of different characters, 3 weapons (9mm, Desert Eagle and Chainsaw), a few vehicles and objects are seen in this mission

The Clown (Alternative Ending)

Length: Excellent - It can be done in 10 minutes. This is the alternate ending on this mission pack. Clara called you to go to Mount Chilliad entrance. After that, you must raid the enemies hideout in the forest
Difficulty: Very Hard - The enemies have low-medium health and very high accuracies, but with headshot on. The second shootout will include enemies in moving cars, requires you to be fast
Variety: Good - There are a lot of different objects inside the house, low variety on actors and vehicles.

Overall, the missions are good. In the first 4 missions, there are no action involved in the missions. But for the rest of the missions, the gunfight can make the players want to know what happen next. The enemies accuracies can be lowered a bit because it can make the mission too hard to complete. About the writings, you should learn better English, but it still at understandable level. The author should keep up the good work icon14.gif

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Thanks you Lee_Atsugai biggrin.gif
Your review made me realize the merits and defects of the storyline
I definitely will try to improve my English wink.gif

I apologize if I responded late blush.gif


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Posted: Saturday, Aug 4 2012, 20:01
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QUOTE (AznKei @ Saturday, Aug 4 2012, 01:31)
QUOTE (Platinum Card @ Friday, Aug 3 2012, 00:01)
@AznKei: Hey could you do a review of No Fear Inferno:Chapter I

Well, I would like to review but I don't see the mission pack download for some reason...^^

It's weird, i'm not able to upload the files from my computer. I had to use my phone. Here's the missions:No Fear:Inferno Chapter I

Skins are here:Skins-add on

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Posted: Sunday, Aug 5 2012, 19:33
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Can someone please review my mission pack EPISODES FROM UNITED CITIES, it requires GTAUnited Mod
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AznKei  
Posted: Tuesday, Aug 7 2012, 04:37
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Hello everyone,

Today, I'm going to review the missions of Platinum Card's No Fear Inferno:Chapter I series. This mission pack can be downloaded at: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=20409 .

Now let's start the reviews...

- Writing: Excellent, as they're pretty much written in a way they normally should be in english. Though, I noticed a very few amount of mistakes, they're hardly detracts of whole written experience.
- Presentation: Very Good. Most characters make alot of corporal expressions with a large amount of animations, which are pretty neat, though they aren't jaw-dropping.

No Fear: Inferno
- Length: Very Short, as it can be done in 2 minutes. This mission shows the introduction of the main character calling herself Hana Tsu Vachel learning Earth science at her school.
- Difficulty: Very Easy, as the mission lacks any dangerous actions that the player has to go through. It's mainly composed of cutscenes.
- Variety: Decent. There's Hana and her car, her professor and some few students attending the same school as Hana, that's about it.

No Fierro
- Length: Decent, as it can be done in 4 minutes. This mission shows Hana facing a nightmarish event, where she was about to be raped by an old man called himself Grinch inside her apartment.
- Difficulty: Easy. There's a few not-so-far driving and some brawl fight to be done against one enemy with a low HP. Other than these, there's a good amount of cutscenes.
- Variety: Good. There's Hana and her car, the Grinch and his dildo, and characters and vehicles in which makes reference from another series.

Nightmares Of The Past 1

- Length: Very Short, as it can be done in 2 minutes. This mission shows Hana fleeing Las Venturas to San Fierro because of her fear against the Grinch.
- Difficulty: Very Easy, as the mission lacks any dangerous actions that the player has to go through. It's mainly composed of cutscenes.
- Variety: Good. There's Hana with her new car, a taxi woman with her cab, a flight attendant, a signal worker and a passenger plane.

Nightmares Of The Past 2
- Length: Decent, as it can be done in 4 minutes. This mission shows Hana going into her new apartment in San Fierro. While sleeping, she got a memory of her past when her parents were about to be killed.
- Difficulty: Very Easy. There's quite a lengthy driving to do, but since there's no cars or pedestrians, the player will less likely to do any accidents. Otherwise, there's a good amount of cutscenes.
- Variety: Good. There's Hana with her new car, her father, her mother and some hitmans with pistols that she remembered from her past.

Paragon Horizons
- Length: Good, as it can be done in 6 minutes. This missions shows Hana meeting a man called himself Deke, who the latter invites her to a building place called Paragon Horizons to met Gin via a monitor.
- Difficulty: Very Easy. There's quite a lengthy driving to do, but since there's no cars or pedestrians, the player will less likely to do any accidents. Otherwise, there's a good amount of cutscenes.
- Variety: Good. There's Hana, Deke with his car, a senile man called Gin, elevator metallic platforms and sofas. No guns can be seen.

Long Road
- Length: Good, as it can be done in 6 minutes. In this mission, Deke instructs Hana to go to Los Santos from San Fierro so he gives her more details about her mission once being there.
- Difficulty: Easy. There's quite a lengthy driving to do and cars and pedestrians are everywhere, in which prompts the player to be more careful. Otherwise, there's a good amount of cutscenes.
- Variety: Decent. There's Hana with her gifted car and Deke with his car. That's about it.

Sand Relic
- Length: Good, as it can be done in 6 minutes. In this mission, Deke instructs Hana to go to Santa Maria Beach in LS to dig a sand relic with a shovel. She later meets a couple in a Muholland's mansion.
- Difficulty: Easy. There's quite a lengthy driving to do and cars and pedestrians are everywhere, in which prompts the player to be more careful, especially when there's a sandstorm.
- Variety: Good. There's Hana with another gifted car, a flag, a shovel, a booklet, a punching bag, a cold drink seller Mrs. Rhodes and the mansion's couple Jordan and Rain.

Home Run/Sand Relic Finale
- Length: Decent, as it can be done in 4 minutes. This mission shows, Hana and Rain fighting against Redneck relics and his boys inside a town's bar. No driving involved.
- Difficulty: Normal. The player and her ally must brawl fight against a good amount of foes with a decent amount of HP. It's easy to get hit by the enemies, so focus on one enemy at a time.
- Variety: Very good. There's Hana with her car, Rain, Redneck relics and his boys with their pool cues, knifes, metal knuckles, dildos and beers, bar clients, and the sand relic with a flag.

Overall, the mission are good, especially since it is a story driven series. Personally, it would be a little bit better if there's a little bit more challenging actions in these missions, even though I'm aware that it isn't easy to do so since Hana isn't a kind of character who is willing to use guns. Anyways, great job for the author and keep up the great work smile.gif .
On a side note, this missions series has a total of 9 missions, but only 8 missions are reviewed because mission 2 "Business Pleasure" just crashed on me. sad.gif .
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Posted: Tuesday, Aug 7 2012, 15:58
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Thanks Aznkei! I'll try to get Business & Pleasure up and running! Chapter II is more of an action based chapter. Chapter I was more of a long introduction into the series.
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Posted: Tuesday, Aug 14 2012, 04:49
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Could someone do a review of chapter 3 and 4 of my mission pack gangster 4 life? Thank you.

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17260

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=20431

EDIT: I know that you ignore me but at least let me know ... people just realize that I exist!

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Nice reviews, keep up the good work, buddy! I've followed the whole DYOM case about you and stuff, ha ha.
Anyways, yeah, I am pretty new at DYOM and well, I kinda made my first mission today. I downloaded DYOM yesterday..
Here it is, I hope you like it and do a review on it. Judge it by yourself, eh? biggrin.gif

http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=520891

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Can anyone make a full review on Chapter one of The Walking Dead missionpack

Here's the link to the mission's thread:
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Posted: Wednesday, Aug 22 2012, 16:48
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Hi There!

Can you review Justifying Means Please?
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Posted: Thursday, Aug 23 2012, 08:22
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Please review my mission pack named Deagles&Cowboys
Here is a link to first season:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/20757

Thanks smile.gif Hope you like it
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Posted: Thursday, Aug 23 2012, 19:39
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Dusty_The_Jackal - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19905 - Not taken.
Dusty_The_Jackal - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19940 - Not taken.
Dusty_The_Jackal - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19933 - Not taken.

Secronom President - http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=510842 - Taken by lee_atsugai

xMatix - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=20169 - Not taken.

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AznKei  
Posted: Sunday, Aug 26 2012, 02:34
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IMPORTANT NOTICE!!!

Hey everyone,

There will be a new DYOM reviewer who will get into the team and his name is...xGhostx.

I just read his review he wrote on PM and it's very good.

Please be kind with his review and as for xGhostx, keep up the great work. smile.gif

In the meantime...

It seems that one reviewer just got banned. So I would have to delete him.
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Posted: Monday, Aug 27 2012, 00:00
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I haven't got much time nowadays to play missions and write reviews, so...
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Can anyone review my RE4 mission pack?
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Posted: Monday, Sep 3 2012, 12:53
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Thanks AznKei!

This topic helps me a lot in creating my missions!!! icon14.gif
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Hey! Can select one of my mission and put it here too? Please!

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QUOTE (Secronom President @ Aug 23 2012, 19:39)
Dusty_The_Jackal - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19905 - Not taken.
Dusty_The_Jackal - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19940 - Not taken.
Dusty_The_Jackal - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19933 - Not taken.


Been a long time since I reviewed a mission. Going to take these 3 for now.

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f*ck me, I remember when this topic first started...

Good to see you still going strong AznKei.
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