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 DYOM Missions review

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jaban  
Posted: Tuesday, Jun 26 2012, 15:22
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can someone review my storyline EFSA chapter 1
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Posted: Tuesday, Jun 26 2012, 16:33
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can someone review my UNITED WE STAND (for gta united mod ) Mission Pack.
Chapter 1 : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19528
Chapter 2 : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19575
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AznKei  
Posted: Friday, Jun 29 2012, 04:01
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IMPORTANT NOTICE!!!

Hey everyone,

I just want to say that lee_atsugai is officially part of the DYOM review team. Since he just started, please be nice of his reviews. smile.gif
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Hey AznKei, can you review these missions? smile.gif
Operation 40
Vorkuta
Executive Order
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lee_atsugai  
Posted: Friday, Jun 29 2012, 04:10
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QUOTE (xGhostx @ Friday, Jun 29 2012, 04:08)
Hey AznKei, can you review these missions? smile.gif
Operation 40
Vorkuta
Executive Order

I already review Operation 40 (For the mission reviewer confirmation to AznKei). Would you mind if I paste it here? smile.gif (Just Operation 40, I haven't review the other missions)
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Post it when you reviewed all the missions, please. smile.gif
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lee_atsugai  
Posted: Friday, Jun 29 2012, 04:13
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QUOTE (xGhostx @ Friday, Jun 29 2012, 04:12)
Post it when you reviewed all the missions, please. smile.gif

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If lee do my review, can you review the whole act I?
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Posted: Friday, Jun 29 2012, 06:29
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Can someone review my missionpack TSoAS? Mission 2.1 until 2.4. About the mission 2.3, you can choose to play the easy version or the hard version. It's your choice. Thanks in advance. smile.gif
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lee_atsugai  
Posted: Friday, Jun 29 2012, 06:58
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Hello everyone. Today I'm going to review a mission pack called Call of Duty: Black Ops by xGhostx. He requested whole Chapter 1 to be reviewed. The topic leading to the mission:
http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=511773

Here's the review:

Writings: Very Good - There are few writing and grammar mistakes. Nice using on text coloring
Presentation: Excellent - The cutscenes generally have great angles, the use of the 1st person camera, and the perfectly timed and focused cutscene makes the mission more challenging


Operation 40

Length: Very Good - It can be done in 7 minutes. Mason and his team must find and kill Castro in his base. We'll given a minigun to defend Woods and Bowman
Difficulty: Medium - The enemies have medium health and accuracies. A lot of covers are available for you to take down the enemy easily.
Variety: Excellent - There are a lot of different of objects, large variety of weapons, good variety on actors

Vorkuta

Length: Excellent - It can be done in 10 minutes. We'll play as Mason, escaping the Russian Prison with Viktor Reznov
Difficulty: Medium - Same as previous mission, enemies with medium health and accuracies. We'll be given minigun to defend the truck
Variety: Excellent - There are a huge variety of different objects, small amount of vehicles, a lot of different actors and huge variety of weapons used by the enemies

RP

Length: Good - It can be done in 6 minutes. This time, you'll play as Hudson and Weaver, a CIA Agent that came to rescue Mason
Difficulty: Medium - A lot of enemies with medium health and accuracies, a lot of cover are available for you in case your health is low
Variety: Very Good - There are huge variety of objects, a lot of actors with different skins, various weapons used by the enemies, but I see no vehicles in this mission

U.S.D.D

Length: Decent - It can be done in 4 minutes. Mason and Hudson, his new handler, are summoned to the Pentagon by the President.
Difficulty: Easy - The mission only consist on walking around the pentagon, no action involved
Variety: Good - There are only few actors, 1 vehicle, few objects, and low variety of actors

Executive Order

Length: Very Good - It can be done in 8 minutes. Mason and his team were sent to search and destroy the Russians rocket before it can launch. We'll be given a Heat-seeking RPG to destroy the rocket
Difficulty: Hard - Some of the enemies have pretty high accuracies and some of them armed with shotguns. You're a dead man if you don't take cover quickly
Variety: Excellent - Large variety of objects, cars and actors, the enemies used various gun from their arsenals

Scoped

Length: Very Good - It can be done in 9 minutes. It shows the flashback of Woods and his captain, Parker. They make their way out from an enemy territory using stealth
Difficulty: Medium - Some of the enemies have high accuracies. But, most of them are in far distance.
Variety: Very Good - Large amount of objects, actors and weapons that used in this mission. There's only one vehicle in this mission

S.O.G

Length: Good - It can be done in 6 minutes. Mason, Hudson and Woods must defend Khe Sanh from the enemies
Difficulty: Very Hard - The enemies have medium health and some of them have high accuracies. There are a lot of enemies and destroyable covers
Variety: Very Good - There are medium variety on actors, destroyable covers, huge variety of weapons and small amount of vehicles are seen in this mission

Extraction Point

Length: Very Good - It can be done in 7 minutes. This mission is about Woods flashback, when he and Parker are going to escape the area
Difficulty: Medium - The enemies have medium health and accuracies. There are a lot of covers available for you in case your health is low
Variety: Very Good - A lot of different objects, actors, vehicles and weapons are used in this mission.

Overall, the chapter is very fun to play. There was good use of objects, and good choice of the locations for the missions. This chapter doesn't have a long drive, and full with actions and enjoyment. Highly recommended for those who love wild war theme missions. The author should keep up the good job in designing the missions icon14.gif

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Posted: Friday, Jun 29 2012, 08:16
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Thanks, I'll wait for it. smile.gif
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lee_atsugai  
Posted: Friday, Jun 29 2012, 09:55
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Hello everyone. Today, I'm going to review a mission pack called The Story of A Soldier by -S-hark21. He requested 4 missions from Chapter 2 to be reviewed. The topic leading to the missions:
http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=503616

Here's the review:

Writings: Very Good - There are some grammar errors, but I didn't found any writing mistakes in the missions. Nice using on the text coloring
Presentation: Excellent - Awesome cutscene angles, the actors are given perfect animation, making the mission more lively and have a lot of action in it.

'Ghost Town' War

Length: Good - It can be done in 5 minutes. Allen and his team must help James' army to eliminate the SAT in 'Ghost Town'
Difficulty: Hard - The first part of the shootout should be easy. The hard part is when the enemies are attacking from West and the East. They carry some powerful gun like Shotguns and Rifles and have medium health
Variety: Excellent - The mission contains a huge variety of vehicles, objects, weapons and random actors as the SAT

Trouble in SF

Length: Good - It can be done in 6 minutes. Ryan send Allen and his team to San Fierro because the SAT already take over San Fierro
Difficulty: Very Hard - The enemies have medium health, some of them have high accuracies and have powerful weapons, and the last part of the mission requires you to be fast, otherwise you're a dead man
Variety: Very Good - As the mission contain a lot of different cars, huge variety on actors and various weapons from SAT arsenals, but no object used in this mission

Getting to City Hall

Length: Short - It can be done in 3 minutes. Ryan finally contact Allen's team. He send Allen and his team to reinforce James in the city hall.
Difficulty: Too Hard! - The enemies have medium health, some of them have medium accuracies, some of them carry some powerful weapons, like RPG, Shotguns and Desert Eagle. The escaping part leave you no mistake in riding your bike, otherwise you're a dead man in seconds.
Variety: Good - As the mission contains low variety on actors and vehicles, one object, but various weapons from SAT Arsenals

Saving James

Length: Good - It can be done in 6 minutes. Allen and Sullivan finally arrive at the City Hall, helping james before he got killed by the SAT
Difficulty: Hard - The enemies have low and medium health with high accuracies. Some of them carry powerful weapons, such as Shotguns and Rifle.
Variety: Excellent - There are large variety of actors, vehicles, weapons and objects are used in the mission.

Overall, these missions are very well made. Good choices on the mission and good use on placing those objects. The difficulty can be lowered a bit, especially in mission "Getting to City Hall". It can make some players frustrated when playing the mission. Last word, good job and keep up the good work icon14.gif

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Awesome review buddy. Good job, I'll add it on my topic. icon14.gif
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lee_atsugai  
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QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Friday, Jun 29 2012, 10:48)
Awesome review buddy. Good job, I'll add it on my topic. icon14.gif

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Cool review, I'll add them soon in my topic.
One more thing, it's Viktor Reznov, not Victor.
And thanks for the review, glad we have an active reviewer. biggrin.gif
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QUOTE (xGhostx @ Friday, Jun 29 2012, 11:03)
Cool review, I'll add them soon in my topic.
One more thing, it's Viktor Reznov, not Victor.
And thanks for the review, glad we have an active reviewer. biggrin.gif

Little typo. Going to edit it biggrin.gif
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QUOTE (The - Hunter @ Friday, Jun 29 2012, 13:54)
Can you show me a review of this mission pack, thanks a lot smile.gif

http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=509631

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lee_atsugai  
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Hello everyone, today I'm going to review a mission pack called The Shade of Destiny by The - Hunter. He requested whole missions in this mission pack to be reviewed. The topic leading to the missions:
http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=509631

Here's the review:

Writings: Good - There are a lot of grammar and writing mistakes in the missions, but it still understandable.
Presentation: Excellent - The cutscene generally have great angles and perfectly timed and focused cutscene make the mission more exciting

A Strange Homicide

Length: Decent - It can be done in 4 minutes. We'll play as a police officer, found a dead body near the river
Difficulty: Easy - The mission only consist of driving around, no action involved
Variety: Good - There are low variety on actors, cars and objects. Weapons only included Shotgun

Ricky Cold

Length: Short - It can be done in 3 minutes. After the scientist check the car, it's suspected that the car belongs to Ricky Cold
Difficulty: Easy - Only driving from the police station, the farm and head back to police station
Variety: Decent - As the mission consist on 4 different characters/skin, 3 different cars but no objects are seen in this mission

James Connor Returns in the City

Length: Decent - It can be done in 4 minutes. In this mission, the main character meet his old friend from the city
Difficulty: Easy - No action, only driving from Dillimore to Blueberry
Variety: Could Be Better - There are only low variety on cars and actors. No objects are seen in this mission

Ricky Cold Dead

Length: Short - It can be done in 3 minutes. This mission shows how Tommy shot by Ricky, and explains more about the current situation
Difficulty: Easy - This time, you must defeat a clown that carrying a chainsaw. You'll be given a shovel
Variety: Good - There are low variety on actors and weapons, but large variety on objects

Shock

Length: Short - It can be done in 3 minutes. This shows a flashback from Tommy's past
Difficulty: Easy - Only cutscene and walking around
Variety: Decent - Clown, Doctors, a medic, police officers and cars are seen in this mission, but no objects

The Truth

Length: Good - It can be done in 6 minutes. In this mission, you will find the truth behind the strange homicide.
Difficulty: Hard - You'll be given a rifle while your ally will carry a Desert Eagle. The enemies use same weapons, SMG. They have low-medium health with high accuracies.
Variety: Good - As the mission contains low variety on objects, actors and cars. There are SMG, Rifle, Silence 9mm, Knife and Desert Eagle used in this mission

The Clown

Length: Very Good - It can be done in 8 minutes. This is the final mission in this mission pack. Tommy wakes up from his dream. The clown tell Tommy to go to Mount Chilliad hideout and retrieve the notebook
Difficulty: Hard - Firstly we climb up Mount Chilliad using a car. The hard part when the enemies come and started to shoot you. They have very high accuracies, but their headshot are turned on
Variety: Good - There are a lot of different characters, 3 weapons (9mm, Desert Eagle and Chainsaw), a few vehicles and objects are seen in this mission

The Clown (Alternative Ending)

Length: Excellent - It can be done in 10 minutes. This is the alternate ending on this mission pack. Clara called you to go to Mount Chilliad entrance. After that, you must raid the enemies hideout in the forest
Difficulty: Very Hard - The enemies have low-medium health and very high accuracies, but with headshot on. The second shootout will include enemies in moving cars, requires you to be fast
Variety: Good - There are a lot of different objects inside the house, low variety on actors and vehicles.

Overall, the missions are good. In the first 4 missions, there are no action involved in the missions. But for the rest of the missions, the gunfight can make the players want to know what happen next. The enemies accuracies can be lowered a bit because it can make the mission too hard to complete. About the writings, you should learn better English, but it still at understandable level. The author should keep up the good work icon14.gif

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