[Arejai]

@AK Link?


REQUEST LISTS:

• yo-g - The Boss of Bosses
• abishai.kochara - Chinese Takeout
• ThaBoy - Grove 4 Life
• AnDRej98 - Mike Devison Chronices (some missions)

Tell me if I forgot any.

This post has been edited by Arejai on Thursday, Apr 5 2012, 08:33

[abishai.kochara]

@AJ
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17941

Thanks!

[Arejai]

Request added. I'll take it.

[Arejai]

Greeting everyone. I'm going to review a single mission called Chinese Takeout by abishai.kochara. This is the 3rd mission of his mission pack named GTA TBOGT Reloaded!

Here's the link to the mission: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17941


Let's get going to the review:

Writing (Very Good) I loved your english, it's very nice. Just a little spelling mistakes found in the mission. But remember, Capital Letter is important.

Presentation (Good) All cutscenes are pretty well accurated. But, some of them missing its point.

Length (Very Good) It can be done in 8 - 10 minutes. It consists of driving and shootout. We'll role as a guy named Luis, with our partner, Tony must escape from the enemies.

Difficulty (Hard) Well.. I failed it once. There are too many enemies in the building and coming towards you in a crowd. They has a high accuracy, but their headshot is turned on. So, it gives us an advantage to kill 'em.

Variety (Very Good) There are plenty used of actors and objects. I loved how you placed all the objects in the building. Very nice work.


Overall, the mission is pretty fun to play. I'm enjoyed killing the enemies, and enjoyed driving with Tony. So, nothing I want to say here, just good work, keep it up, and don't give up.


Rating
Actions : 8.5/10
Cutscenes : 8/10
Writing : 9/10
Overall : 8.5/10


By Arejai

This post has been edited by Arejai on Saturday, Mar 31 2012, 11:27

[abishai.kochara]

Thanks a lot AJ! Another great review from you!
Just use the objects for cover, think outside the box, there are different rooms on each floor, use them all to your potential! Thats all, thanks a lot! I'll improve for sure!

[ThaBoY]

Arejai, could you review the last 3 missions I made for my MP?
Which are: What happend, Ambulance Troubles and New Place, New Rules.
Link: http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=495857

[Arejai]

@ThaBoy Okay.

[Arejai]

Greeting everyone. I'm going to review some missions from Grove 4 Life by ThaBoy.

Here's the link to the topic: http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=495857


Let's get going to the review:

Writing (Very Good) The writing is very good, found no mistake on spelling. About the tv commercial, it's pretty funny.

Presentation (Very Good) All the cutscenes are well positioned and accurated. I loved the scenes when the agents leave the abandoned plane and the guy which is 'CJ' jumped to the ground. It's very good timing.


What Happened?

Length (Very Good) It took me 8 minutes to complete this mission. As usual, we'll role as P2, the protagonist, and after some cutscenes we'll face a lot of enemies inside a room in Jefferson Motel. After that, we need to pass all the guards through the roofs and get back to house.

Difficulty (Hard) There are a lot of enemies in front of us. They has a medium health, and some of them has a medium accuracy. Almost die because of the shotgun guy behind the door. He shocked me..!

Variety (Good) There are plenty used of differents actors and weapons such as MP5, M4 and shotgun.


Ambulance Troubles

Length (Excellent) It can be done in 13 minutes. This time, we'll play as Angel, P2's friend. From Los Santos, we need to go the the hospital at Las Venturas. After that, we need to save P2 from the Red Katana and get to a hotel.

Difficulty (Medium) You're given a Turismo, one of the fast vehicle, to chase the ambulances. If you have a driving skill, it's not a big problem. Then, we'll face 4 - 5 Red Katana members after we blowed up the last ambulance.

Variety (Decent) There are not so much used of actor, weapons and vehicles. The actors contain P2, Angel, Red Katana members, and some medics which driving the real ambulance.


New Place, New Rules

Length (Good) It can be done in 5 minutes. We need to walking around the street outside the hotel. You'll see a weird situations along the hood.

Difficulty (Very Easy) There's no gunfight or chasing part, only a small fight. At the Xoomer, we need to help someone, and that means, we'll involve in a small fight. The enemy armed with a pistol, but has a low health.

Variety (Decent) Same as previous mission, there are not so much used of actor, weapons, and vehicles.



Overall, these three mission is very fun to play. I like how you used the animations at the hospital, on which P2 is slapped by the doctor. About the delivered car, it's pretty funny and creative because the car was fell from the sky. It's a very good work. Last words, nice missions, keep it up, and don't give up.

Rating
Actions : 9/10
Cutscenes : 8.5/10
Writing : 8.2/10
Overall : 8.6/10



By Arejai

*Requests list updated*

This post has been edited by Arejai on Thursday, Apr 5 2012, 08:30

[ThaBoY]

Thank for the great review Arejai

Just this: Angel is P2's brother, not his friend.
Other than that, great review

[Arejai]

QUOTE (ThaBoY @ Thursday, Apr 5 2012, 17:58)

Thank for the great review Arejai Just this: Angel is P2's brother, not his friend. Other than that, great review

Oh, sorry for that.

[KaRzY6]

I haven't done a review in ages. Anyone give me a mission..?

[shiva s]

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Apr 6 2012, 02:25)

I haven't done a review in ages. Anyone give me a mission..?

Can you take my "Harsh Thunder" mission series?
Take your time. It's not urgent.

[KaRzY6]

QUOTE (shiva s @ Friday, Apr 6 2012, 13:58)

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Apr 6 2012, 02:25) I haven't done a review in ages. Anyone give me a mission..? Can you take my "Harsh Thunder" mission series? Take your time. It's not urgent.

Okay. The whole series..?

[shiva s]

Your choice, mate. You can either do the whole series or one or two missions.

[KaRzY6]

QUOTE (shiva s @ Friday, Apr 6 2012, 14:25)

Your choice, mate. You can either do the whole series or one or two missions.

I'll do the whole series. But they might take awhile.

[shiva s]

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Friday, Apr 6 2012, 03:31)

QUOTE (shiva s @ Friday, Apr 6 2012, 14:25) Your choice, mate. You can either do the whole series or one or two missions. I'll do the whole series. But they might take awhile.

I can wait, man. As I said before, it's not urgent.

[Mati]

Could someone review the first mission of Headhunters? It's listed under ''Missions''.

I'd be glad if a somewhat more ''professional'' reviewer could review this, with good grammar and such. Hope you understand

[KaRzY6]

QUOTE (Mati @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 23:03)

Could someone review the first mission of Headhunters? It's listed under ''Missions''. I'd be glad if a somewhat more ''professional'' reviewer could review this, with good grammar and such. Hope you understand

I'll do it. If you want me to?

[Mati]

QUOTE (KaRzY6 @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 12:05)

QUOTE (Mati @ Saturday, Apr 7 2012, 23:03) Could someone review the first mission of Headhunters? It's listed under ''Missions''. I'd be glad if a somewhat more ''professional'' reviewer could review this, with good grammar and such. Hope you understand I'll do it. If you want me to?

Sure, go ahead

[KaRzY6]

Hey everyone, this is KaRzY6 here, with another review. Today I'm reviewing the first mission of Mati's mission-pack Headhunters.

Broken Dreams

Writing Excellent The writing was excellent, perfect English. I didn't see any spelling or grammar mistakes. Also, a great use of coloured text. It was only used on approprete words.

Presentation Very Good The presentation was very good. All the cutscenes were angled right. Animations were used for the approprete times and cutscenes. And all the objects and cars were placed correctly.

Length Very Good The length of the mission was very good. It took me about 7 minutes to complete it.

Difficulty Easy After a lot of thinking, I have decided to rate the mission as easy for difficulty. The mission wasn't any bit difficult, but the small shootout at the start with only a 9mm versing Uzi's and Assult Rifles made the only hard part of the mission. The rest of the mission was a piece of cake. Only included a bit more shooting and driving.

Variety Excellent The variety was amazing. The many varieties of vehicles was great. There was a sawnoff shotgun, 9mm, shovel and health heart for the pickups. Uzi, AK47, Tec9, Rifle, 9mm were the enemies weapons. And there were so many objects, it was great.

Overall: It was a great mission and I can't wait for more.

9.8/10