[Mokrie Dela]

Mokrie Dela presents:

An award winning story:


A PDF format is available HERE:http://sdrv.ms/Noabpd Thanks to Cammi for his help/suggestion in this.

Chapter Number	Chapter Title (Click To Read)
One	A Shared Sorrow
Two	A Rude Awakening
Three	Wetwork
Four	Clash of the Titans
Five	Truth or Dare
Six	Deal or No Deal?
Seven	Number 47
Eight	Homecoming
Nine	Ace of Spades
Ten	Round Two
Eleven	An Unlikely Alliance
Twelve	Sweet Dreams
Thirteen	Get This Done, Then We'll Talk
Fourteen	Hunting the Hunters
Fifteen	The Voice
Sixteen	Unmasked!
Seventeen	Answers At last
Eighteen	Three's The Magic Number
Nineteen	Now What?
Twenty	Keep Your Friends Close...
Twenty One	...And Your Enemies Even Closer
Twenty Two	Guns… Lots of Guns
Twenty Three	The Cat’s Out of the Bag
Twenty Four	Ambushed
Twenty Five	The Battle for Liberty City: Part I
Twenty Six	The Battle for Liberty City: Part II
Twenty Seven	The Battle for Liberty City: Part III
Twenty Eight	For Michael
Twenty Nine	Revelations
Epilogue	Epilogue

New format - easier to read and work out where you got to! Just click the link in the above table to go to that chapter.
As always please comment, suggestions constructive criticism, ideas etc all welcome!

This post has been edited by Mokrie Dela on Thursday, Aug 23 2012, 20:33

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This post has been edited by Mokrie Dela on Thursday, Jun 2 2011, 17:54

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This post has been edited by Mokrie Dela on Thursday, Jun 2 2011, 17:54

[mrpain]

Very nice! I assumed this story will be about Niko only but the minute I saw Johnny's name I was impressed. Let Luis joined the mix!

Looking forward to the next chapters

[mrpain]

EDIT: Sorry for the double post. Computer went berserk!

This post has been edited by mrpain on Sunday, May 2 2010, 14:36

[Mokrie Dela]

Not sure how Luis would fit into the story yet. He may appear. He may not.
Thanks for the feedback
Post has been updated with the next chapter.

[Cashy]

Mate, I cannot wait for more. I am hooked on this badboy

[VercettiTheNiter]

Wow this is one of the best things I have ever read on WD. A lot better than mine! Fantastic. I can't wait to read more

[Mokrie Dela]

Thanks for the kind words
I'll keep this updated, hopefully very regularly, so keep your eyes peeled!

@VercettiTheNiter, I'm sure you story's good. Could you PM me a link to it? I'll check it out later

[Mokrie Dela]

Story's been updated with a new chapter

Edit: Oh c*ck it. Double post. Sorry. My brain's turned to mush. Bedtime i think!

[Playstation_Loyalist]

Nice GTA IV sequel! (is it?)

It is great, just a few grammatical errors and some not-so-important random stuffs, but overall, the concept is AWESOME. Keep it up!

[Mokrie Dela]

thanks. I have notices some errors, most of which i though i had corrected, but I'll look through it when i upload the next chapter, which is on it's way

Thanks for the comment

[Rockwheels]

Awesome Concept!
Keep IT UP!!!!!!
here have a cookie

[Mokrie Dela]

thanks! The cookie was nice. Choc chip. My favorite!

New chapter is in progress...

[xxcyylonexx]

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ May 9 2010, 22:59)

thanks! The cookie was nice. Choc chip. My favorite! New chapter is in progress...

it would be cool if someone made a machinama out of this! i read the whole thing so far. pretty damn good. keep it up!

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (xxcyylonexx @ May 17 2010, 18:58)

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ May 9 2010, 22:59) thanks! The cookie was nice. Choc chip. My favorite! New chapter is in progress... it would be cool if someone made a machinama out of this! i read the whole thing so far. pretty damn good. keep it up!

Hell yeah.
But i think this particular story will be better played inside your head

More chapters are in progress. The more interest and posts i get the quicker they will come!

[nufc.neilo]

I'LL RIP YOUR f*ckING HEART OUT!

haha gotta love it, can't wait for more chapters! woo

[Mokrie Dela]

Just a little bump to say,New chapter's up! Please comment with your thoughts, even if it's just to say you've read it! Any feedback is appreciated and any suggestions are welcome!

Thx for reading everyone


This post has been edited by Mokrie Dela on Friday, May 21 2010, 20:13

[mrpain]

JOHNNY IS DEAD?!?

Damn I really think you can come up with better chapters with him alive

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (mrpain @ May 21 2010, 17:57)

JOHNNY IS DEAD?!?

I got a couple of good ones in the works (at least in concept) Keep watching this space!

Edit:
Does anyone know what these are? They kept popping up in that post...

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This post has been edited by Mokrie Dela on Friday, May 21 2010, 20:15