[Eminence]

QUOTE (Sanjeem @ Saturday, Apr 14 2012, 22:25)

Hey all, just wondering for a story or introduction to a story do you think that it would be suitable to ask the readers to listen to a theme tune before hand so that it adds effect? Or is that not really how stories here should be written/Laid out, might be a little odd... I've been planning something anyway. First time in a long time.

Would you have it in a book? No. Let the writing 'add the effect'.

[elanman]

QUOTE (Craig @ Tuesday, Apr 10 2012, 17:15)

I think my main problem is I'm busy at work, what with my ongoing coursework and diploma, I spend a lot of my time writing for that and by the time I get chance to sit down with a drink and come to working on my drafts, I can only get so far as notes and drawings because I'm too bummed out from my work. I never used to have this problem though. I have about 4 or 5 half finished pieces, a couple from a series and I just can't go anywhere with them. They aren't going anywhere, so maybe I've just got to wait.

I've completely lost touch with writing. I've spent a few Friday afternoons, however, scribbling down some stuff for something in my notebook--it's strange writing in full sentences rather than mathematical symbols . Reminds of how writing can be a good form of escapism, mind you. Might get round to typing the story out once it's done.

[Sanjeem]

QUOTE (Ziggy455 @ Saturday, Apr 14 2012, 21:38)

QUOTE (Sanjeem @ Saturday, Apr 14 2012, 21:25) Hey all, just wondering for a story or introduction to a story do you think that it would be suitable to ask the readers to listen to a theme tune before hand so that it adds effect? Or is that not really how stories here should be written/Laid out, might be a little odd... I've been planning something anyway. First time in a long time. I think the use of music can be very helpful to certain aspects of a story. Sometimes though, it may seem forced and like it is trying evoke a certain mood when a writer should be able to do that without the aid of music.

I totally see where you're coming from, Thanks. That's actually the perfect answer I was looking for and now It's clearer whether I should include a theme tune or not.

@Emminence : I suppose you are right as well.

[El Zilcho]

QUOTE (Sanjeem @ Saturday, Apr 14 2012, 23:02)

QUOTE (Ziggy455 @ Saturday, Apr 14 2012, 21:38) QUOTE (Sanjeem @ Saturday, Apr 14 2012, 21:25) Hey all, just wondering for a story or introduction to a story do you think that it would be suitable to ask the readers to listen to a theme tune before hand so that it adds effect? Or is that not really how stories here should be written/Laid out, might be a little odd... I've been planning something anyway. First time in a long time. I think the use of music can be very helpful to certain aspects of a story. Sometimes though, it may seem forced and like it is trying evoke a certain mood when a writer should be able to do that without the aid of music. I totally see where you're coming from, Thanks. That's actually the perfect answer I was looking for and now It's clearer whether I should include a theme tune or not. @Emminence : I suppose you are right as well.

Oxi did it on a piece (I think it was him). If done well, it's good. But Eminence does have a good point; it's best to let your writing do the talking.

[El Zilcho]

Woah, just had a trippy idea. What if we had a big coo-op topic, where everyone wrote a small piece as a character who has walked into a particular bar, or lobby or office or whatever? Each person would write a bit interacting with the other, and we'd just freestyle from there, build characters and see where everyone's mutual contribution takes us?

[Ziggy455]

QUOTE (El Zilcho @ Monday, Apr 16 2012, 18:29)

Woah, just had a trippy idea. What if we had a big coo-op topic, where everyone wrote a small piece as a character who has walked into a particular bar, or lobby or office or whatever? Each person would write a bit interacting with the other, and we'd just freestyle from there, build characters and see where everyone's mutual contribution takes us?

I had a very similar idea a while back and it was frowned upon. Now though, I think it's worth a try. I'd be a part of it.

[SIKKS66]

I know I am guilty of this but perhaps you are seeing your work as it would be on TV/film Sanjeem?

As has been suggested, let your writing do the talking, so to speak. (Also, that was a strange sentence I just wrote). Perhaps one day a musician will write some music based on what you wrote

[Mokrie Dela]

a quick question regarding "parts"

If you're writing a story with three "parts" would the first chapter of each part be chapter one?

Example:

Part one
Ch 1
Ch 2
Ch 3
Ch 4
Part two
Ch 1
Ch 2
Ch 3
Ch 4

Or would the chapters continue?
Part one
Ch 1
Ch 2
Ch 3
Ch 4
Part two
Ch 5
Ch 6
Ch 7
Ch 8


I'm not sure which is correct.

[SatournFan]

I think the first is better.

Also, please, check my first written story, if you can. I'd like to see some feedbacks. Here it is - Click it

This post has been edited by SatournFan on Thursday, Apr 19 2012, 11:57

[Ziggy455]

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ Thursday, Apr 19 2012, 11:49)

a quick question regarding "parts" If you're writing a story with three "parts" would the first chapter of each part be chapter one? Example: Part one Ch 1 Ch 2 Ch 3 Ch 4 Part two Ch 1 Ch 2 Ch 3 Ch 4 Or would the chapters continue? Part one Ch 1 Ch 2 Ch 3 Ch 4 Part two Ch 5 Ch 6 Ch 7 Ch 8 I'm not sure which is correct.

I think that is entirely up to you on the way chapters are displayed and such.

[Eminence]

To clarify what Ziggy said, it is totally up to you. You'll find examples of books that do either. Personally I prefer the first option, separating each part entirely, but if you prefer a long continuation, then more power to you.

[Mokrie Dela]

Well the first is neater. Decisions time then!

[AceRay]

Morkie: "Parts" are usually called "Acts" eg Act 1, Chapter 1.

[Eminence]

QUOTE (AceRay @ Friday, Apr 20 2012, 01:56)

Morkie: "Parts" are usually called "Acts" eg Act 1, Chapter 1.

In a play, yes. Otherwise... not really.

[Ziggy455]

I think when it comes to planning I run it out like so:

Act I
Main conflict introduced.


Act II
Middle portion, conflicts which lead into final act and resolution.


Act III
Final act and resolution.

I find the more neater I plan and such, the easier it is to keep track of the story.

[El Zilcho]

I never plan and therefore get bored halfway through. Pity my incompetence.

[Mokrie Dela]

QUOTE (El Zilcho @ Saturday, Apr 21 2012, 16:21)

I never plan and therefore get bored halfway through. Pity my incompetence.

sometimes it works. You can overplan something. Then the work can feel artificial.

But spontaneous writing can often feel chaotic. Both have pros and cons.

I tend to plan it simply. Basic direction of where the story's going, and any main point planned.

[Typhus]

Well, I'm out of The Bar. There's no point in creating a character and thinking of cool things to do if people just kill him off with unnecessary violence because they want to create another mob character. I thought it was a good idea for a thread too.

And I'm aware that Barty's not dead, but what's the point in writing about him now? Honestly?
I had a lot planned, a lot of possible interactions with the other characters and someone just comes along as says "He got shot with his own crossbow and had his arm cut off, lol!"
No build up, nothing.

There's just no point in continuing because any character I create will just be f*cked up anyway. Cheers for the few hours I thought I'd be able to contribute something though.

This post has been edited by Typhus on Sunday, Apr 22 2012, 05:13

[AceRay]

Damn, I feel like a massive cock right now.

I didn't know you had anything planned. I just picked the most convenient dude and just made up sh*t. I didn't know it was going to f*ck with any plans. Well, of course, looking back on it now it looks bad.

How about this: my character travels back in time and stops himself from killing Barty and Vincenzo only knocks him or something. I mean, it wouldn't change much.

[Typhus]

QUOTE (AceRay @ Sunday, Apr 22 2012, 05:46)

Damn, I feel like a massive cock right now. I didn't know you had anything planned. I just picked the most convenient dude and just made up sh*t. I didn't know it was going to f*ck with any plans. Well, of course, looking back on it now it looks bad. How about this: my character travels back in time and stops himself from killing Barty and Vincenzo only knocks him or something. I mean, it wouldn't change much.

I'm out, just continue with your little crime story. Okay?