[daviescirca93]

GTA San Andreas; The Script.

I'm aiming to do the whole games' story line, in a playscript, anyone who wishes to help please feel free to PM me.

Introduction:

Carl: After 5 years on the East Coast, it was time to go home.
(Cell phone rings)
Carl: 'Sup
Sweet: Carl it's Sweet.
Carl: Whassup Sweet, what you want?
Sweet: It's Moms, she's dead bro.
{Carl jumps into a cab.}
(Police car siren)
Tenpenny: Passenger! Show us your hands. Stop, get down on your knees. Now down on your stomach. There you go.
{Hernandez pulls a wad of cash from Carl's jeans.}
Tenpenny: I'll take that, Hernandez.
Carl: Hey that's my paper man, that's money.
Tenpenny: This is drug money!
Carl: My money, man...
Pulaski: Hey, don't worry about it I'll fill it out later.
Tenpenny: Welcome home, Carl. Glad to be back? You haven't forgotten about us, have you boy?
Carl: Hell no, Officer Tenpenny. I was just wondering what took y'all so long.
Tenpenny: Get in the car.
{Pulaski and Hernandez push Carl towards the cop car}
Carl: Ease up man, damn.
Tenpenny: Watch your head!
(Bang!)
Carl: Ah!
{Pulaksi laughs)
Tenpenny: Oh, my bad.
Pulaski: Get outta here you greaseball bastard!
{Cab pulls away}
Pulaski: Stupid Mexican...
{Hernandez stares at Pulaski}
Pulaski: Oh, hey, sorry.
Carl: My bag. Hey man, my bag!
{Cop car drives off}
{Scene fades out}
{New scene fades in}

Tenpenny: So how you been Carl? How's the wonderful family?
Carl: I'm here to bury my Moms, you know that.
Tenpenny: Yeah I guess I do. So what else you got shakin' Carl?
Carl: Nothing. I live in Liberty City now, I'm clean. Legit.
Tenpenny: Nah you ain't never been clean, Carl.
Pulaski: Well what have we got here?
Tenpenny: This is a weapon, Officer Pulaski, that was used to gun down a police officer not ten minutes ago. Officer Pendelbury. A fine man I might add. You work fast, nigga!
Carl: You know I just got off the plane!
Pulaksi: It's a good thing we found you, and retrieved the murder weapon.
Carl: That ain't my gun!
Tenpenny: Don't bullsh*t me Carl!
Pulaski: Yeah don't bullsh*t him, Carl!
Carl: What the f*ck do you want from me this time?
Tenpenny: When we want you, we'll find you. In the meantime, try not to gun down any more officers of the law.
{Tenpenny chuckles}
Carl: You can't leave me here, it's Ballas country!
Tenpenny: I thought you said you was innocent Carl? That you don't bang?
(Cop car pulls into a lane, and throws Carl out of the car)
Pulaski: This is car 58... WHAT?!
Tenpenny: See you round, Carl. Like a doughnut!
{Tenpenny roars with laughter}
Pulaski: Officer Pendlebury's down? We'll be right over.
Carl: Ah sh*t, here we go again. Worst place in the world. Rollin' Heights Balla country. I ain't represented Grove Street in 5 years, but the Ballas won't give a sh*t.
(Carl walks down the lane towards a bike, jumps on it, and starts cyling to Grove Street.)
{Scene fade out.)

To be continued.

This post has been edited by daviescirca93 on Saturday, May 10 2008, 19:10

[lt_yao]

Nice work, don't know what it could be useful for but someone will find its uses.

[dawg1990]

whats the point of this when the missions have subtitles

[daviescirca93]

Big Smoke

(Carl cycles up Grove Street)
Carl: Grove Street, home. At least it was before I f*cked everything up.
(Carl jumps off the BMX and goes into the Johnson house.)
(Carl enters the house, looks around, and picks up a picture of his Moms)
Kendl (Flashback): Stop it! What are you doing? Carl, Brian, stop it!
Carl: (Flashback): Quit it! Moms will hear!
Kendl (Flashback): Mom! They're up to something!
(Carl pulls out a chair and sits down)
(Big Smoke comes out with a baseball bat)
Big Smoke: You picked the wrong house, fool!
Carl: Hey, hey hey hey, Big Smoke it's me, Carl, chill chill!
Big Smoke: CJ? Ohhh my dog! Whassup?
(Starts laughing and pulls Carl into a hug)
Big Smoke: Hey baby, you OK man?
Carl: Nah man, it's my Moms, homie...
Big Smoke: Hey, I don't know why this had to happen, but I promise you, I'm gonna find out who killed your Moms! The streets is cold, dawg. Like it says in the book, we are blessed and cursed.
Carl: What f*cking book?
Big Smoke: Same things make us laugh, make us cry. But right now we gotta take care our business. Go see your brother at the cemetery. C'mon, let's bounce.
(Smoke and CJ leave the house)
(Scene switches to outside the Johnsons')

Big Smoke: You wanna drive?
Carl: Yeah that's cool.
(CJ and Smoke get into Smoke's Perennial)
Carl: Nice car, Smoke.
Big Smoke: You know me. It's not cut. Keep the value in it, keep it real.
(Scene fades out)

This post has been edited by daviescirca93 on Thursday, May 15 2008, 01:20

[daviescirca93]

QUOTE (dawg1990 @ May 10 2008, 19:35)

whats the point of this when the missions have subtitles

Not much, but a good way to pass time, and also a decent read if anyone's bored.

@ lt_yao: thanks

[dawg1990]

QUOTE (daviescirca93 @ May 10 2008, 20:03)

QUOTE (dawg1990 @ May 10 2008, 19:35) whats the point of this when the missions have subtitles Not much, but a good way to pass time, and also a decent read if anyone's bored. @ lt_yao: thanks

do you seriously have that much free time to make a whole sa script?

[daviescirca93]

QUOTE (dawg1990 @ May 10 2008, 20:06)

QUOTE (daviescirca93 @ May 10 2008, 20:03) QUOTE (dawg1990 @ May 10 2008, 19:35) whats the point of this when the missions have subtitles Not much, but a good way to pass time, and also a decent read if anyone's bored. @ lt_yao: thanks do you seriously have that much free time to make a whole sa script?

Yes. I have a huge amount of free time at the moment. So this really does help the nights along when there's nothing else to do.

[bman_triads]

Big task on your shoulder's there buddy, but I'll be very impressed when you get to the last line and finish, very impressed. I wish I could help, but I already got that other project tying up my time (which hints I got no time at all).

Anyways, good luck!

(I feel so guilty for not helping.. )

[daviescirca93]

QUOTE (bman_triads @ May 13 2008, 04:00)

Big task on your shoulder's there buddy, but I'll be very impressed when you get to the last line and finish, very impressed. I wish I could help, but I already got that other project tying up my time (which hints I got no time at all). Anyways, good luck! (I feel so guilty for not helping.. )

This project's gonna take a few months at least I expect, to finish the whole script, as well as jotting down the important in-mission action.

As for the other project, take your time, there's no rush

Thanks for the support. Sweet & Kendl coming up in the next post.

[daviescirca93]

Sweet & Kendl

{Scene fades in to Carl and Smoke walking up the cemetery path}
Big Smoke: I've missed you these five years, man. They gonna be real happy to see you.
{Scene switches to Ryder, Sweet and Kendl around the Johnsons' mothers' grave}
Big Smoke: Hey whassup, y'all. Look who I found hanging around.
Kendl: Carl, hey. Good to see you.
Carl: I can't believe she's gone, man.
Sweet: That's another funeral you ran away from, fool. Just like Brian's!
Carl: Hey, she was my momma too!
Sweet: Not for the past five years she wasn't, nigga!
{Kendl walks off}
Sweet: And where the f*ck do you think you going?!
Kendl: What?! Get out of my face, I'm going to see Cesar.
Sweet: The hell you are girl! You ain't messing with them ese's, you know we beefing, they ain't nothing but a bunch of lowlifes!
Kendl: Look I love him! And what the f*ck are you?
Sweet: At least I got principles.
Kendl: Oh, and I guess that makes you and upstanding American. Carl, tell him!
Sweet: Carl, don't tell me sh*t, bitch.
Carl: As long as he treat her right, disrespect you, and he's dead.
Sweet: How the hell you gonna say that?! Like it's any business of yours!
Kendl: f*ck you, Sweet. f*cking asshole.
{Kendl walks off again}
Carl: Oh sh*t, here we go again.
Sweet: This sh*t's real f*cked up! Everything!
Carl: What you mean?
Sweet: What, apart from your mother being dead? Things are going real bad, here, let me show you, running man.
{Sweet points to a few graves.}
Sweet: Tony's buried over there. Little Devil over there, Big Devil over there. Man it's just crazy. Everybody blasts on fools first, then asks questions second.
{Scene fades out and in to Sweet, Carl, Smoke and Ryder walking to Smoke's car.}
{A Balla's car comes around the corner, firing at the OG's}
Ryder: Ballas! Drive-by! Incoming!
{Smoke's car explodes}
Big Smoke: Aww, motherf*cker, my car!
Sweet: Follow my lead!
{They all jump on bikes, and start cycling down the road}
Sweet: Takes you back some, huh, CJ? Yeah!
Carl: Things has changed around here!
Sweet: CJ, watch your back around here man!
{The Ballas car rides up along CJ, and starts firing at him}
Carl: How'd it get so bad? I thought this was Families' turf?
Sweet: Yeah, it's Temple Drive Families, we don't roll with them no more.
{Scene switches to Sweet pedalling through the Mullholland Intersection car park}
Sweet: sh*t! A Ballas car is onto us! Split up!
Ryder: Keep up motherf*cker!
{Ryder, Smoke and CJ cycle off, scene fades out.}

More coming soon.

[The Unvirginiser]

Whats the point in this?
It'd be better as a story

[daviescirca93]

QUOTE (The Unvirginiser @ May 15 2008, 01:35)

Whats the point in this? It'd be better as a story

Well do you wanna give me a hand turning what I've done thus far to look like a story?

If not, I'll carry on with it.

[TonyZimmzy]

Why not make your own gamescript of San Andreas Stories or something?

[The Unvirginiser]

I meant it would be better set out as a story instead of a game script you idiot

[mark-2007]

It'll take a lot of determination and attention to detail to finish this.

As already stated I'd think it'd be better to write it out as a story because we've already heard San Andreas as a script.

[radicell]

QUOTE (mark-2007 @ May 16 2008, 11:25)

It'll take a lot of determination and attention to detail to finish this. As already stated I'd think it'd be better to write it out as a story because we've already heard San Andreas as a script.

Agreed - seeing as its only up to the 2nd mission, I can't imagine this done until about 2009, but if it is, it'll be a great accomplishment.

[Eminence]

QUOTE (radicell @ May 16 2008, 13:40)

QUOTE (mark-2007 @ May 16 2008, 11:25) It'll take a lot of determination and attention to detail to finish this. As already stated I'd think it'd be better to write it out as a story because we've already heard San Andreas as a script. Agreed - seeing as its only up to the 2nd mission, I can't imagine this done until about 2009, but if it is, it'll be a great accomplishment.

No, it won't.

It's basically plagiarism. Why do you want credit for 'writing' the San Andreas game script? You're just copying it down. What's the point? As Unvirginiser said, telling the story through a narrative would actually be worthwhile; copying down the script? No.

[The Unvirginiser]

Exactly, dosn't take much effort, this isn't what WD is for mate

[daviescirca93]

OK, f*ck the idea then.

I'll just leave this to die.

And then maybe I'll have a crack at a storyline version.

This post has been edited by daviescirca93 on Saturday, May 17 2008, 01:05

[Eminence]

Don't be bitter about it. I'd be happy to see you try your hand at creating something of your own - I just have no respect for copying up someone else's work.