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 The decline of Liberty

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THE MOST FORGOTTEN EPIC STORY ABOUT GRAND THEFT AUTO IS BACK!

This fan-fiction story is intended to happen right after the final mission in Grand Theft Auto III. It gives a final conclusion to the whole GTA III-era storyline.

Written since March 2005, this story became one of the most popular at GTAForums.com, however, due to various personal problems and other issues in my life, the project was abandoned and left unfinished in chapter 38, published around 4 years ago. Even though it may seem pointless now, there's people that are interested in knowing the end of the story, and it's my intention to finish it.

Keep in mind this is the second story in the English language that I've written so far, so please excuse the grammatical errors and other weird things you might encounter while reading it.

Enjoy!

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April 26th, 2010 - Topic officially re-opened. New chapters and "e-book" will be posted soon.

April 27th, 2010 - Look and feel updated. Chapters 39 and 40 posted.

May 4th, 2010 - "Volume I" e-book now available. Check the "e-books" section below.

May 8th, 2010 - Chapter 41 posted.

May 26th, 2010 - Chapter 42 posted.

June 12th, 2010 - Chapter 43 posted.

June 22th, 2010 - Chapter 44 posted.

July 10th, 2010 - Chapter 45 posted.

July 29th, 2010 - Chapter 46 posted.

August 22nd, 2010 - Chapter 47 posted.

September 12th, 2010 - Chapter 48 posted.

October 21st, 2010 - Chapter 49 posted.

November 16th, 2010 - Chapter 50 posted.

January 7th, 2011 - Chapter 51 posted and Happy New Year!

March 13th, 2011 - Chapter 52 posted. Writer's Block has been defeated!

March 26th, 2011 - Chapter 53 posted.

July 8th, 2011 - Chapter 54 posted. I'm really sorry for the long-ass delay!

October 18th, 2011 - Chapter 55 posted after a long hiatus. Sorry about that!

November 21th, 2011 - Chapter 56 posted.

December 21th, 2011 - Chapter 57 posted.


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The Consequences of Killing a Don


Lounge, Leone Mansion – St. Marks, Liberty City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 11:45 AM


Joey Leone is playing what seems to be the “Godfather” theme in the piano. Some Mafia thugs are in the place drinking and chatting with Toni Cipriani and Luigi Goterelli about their businesses and the war against the Forellis and the Triads. All of them just returned from the Don’s funeral.

Salvatore Leone, head of the Leone Family Mafia, got killed by Claude Speed, a former Mafia associate, just a few weeks ago outside Sex Club 7 in the Red Light District. Joey Leone, the Don’s son, was following every single piece of evidence to take down Speed, but he wasn’t successful at all. He knew he was still in Liberty, but the Yakuza, a Japanese gang of businessmen, were protecting him.

After a few minutes, the phone rings and a Mafia thug answers it for a few seconds and hangs up.

Mafia thug: “Joey, Joey, come here!!”

Joey stops playing the piano and goes to see what the problem is...

Joey Leone: “What’s the problem? Don’t you see I’m trying to play pop’s favorite piece of music?”

Mafia thug: “I’m really sorry Joey, but it’s Fabio, he says we need to turn on the T.V., there’s something important on the news…”

Joey: “Ok, ok”.

Joey grabs the remote and turns on the TV...

TV News Reporter: “… as we said before commercials, we’ve just got new information about the terrible shootings that took place a few minutes ago at the Cochrane Dam in Shoreside Vale. Witnesses told the police about a guy whose description matches the identity of Claude Speed, a felon that a few months ago was presumed to be death as the result of the Callahan Bridge bombing. The authorities then found out that he and other 2 convicts were really alive and on the loose. Police detectives are now…”

Joey turns off the TV…

Joey (mad): “That cocksucker is in Shoreside Vale, we need to get him before anything else happens!!”

Mafia thug: “Ok Joey, I’m calling the guys. Let’s go.”

The Mafia thugs leave the room while Luigi approaches Joey…

Luigi Goterelli: “Don’t you think it’s a bit dangerous to get this guy?? I mean, he just annihilated most of the Colombian Cartel…”

Joey (still mad): “I don’t care! That bastard is going to pay!! Let’s get him!!”

Joey, Luigi and Toni leave the room for the mansion’s garage.


Garage, Leone Mansion – St. Marks, Liberty City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 11:52 AM


Joey, Toni and Luigi are talking near Salvatore’s Stretch and two Mafia Sentinels.

Joey: “Ok, listen carefully. Luigi...?”

Luigi: “Yes, Joey?”

Joey: “Get back to the club and grab anything you’ve got in there, Toni will pick you up later, ok?”

Luigi: “Ok.”

Joey: “… and tell Misty that I’ll be away for a while…”

Luigi: “Sure Joey, I’ll tell her.”

Luigi takes a Mafia Sentinel and leaves…

Joey: “Now, Toni, you were pop’s capo, his very right hand. Now, I’m going to need you as much as my dad did. I’m counting on you, you hear?”

Toni: “Of course Joey, the Leone family can trust me for the rest of my life, don’t worry.”

Joey: “Good, now go to my garage, these are the keys...”

Joey gives the keys to Toni.

Joey: “Take the Patriot, it’s bulletproof and we’re gonna need it. Then go to Luigi’s and pick him up. Meet me at the AMCO garage in Pike Creek in 30 minutes, ok?”

Toni: “Fine, Joey, I’ll see you there.”

Toni also takes a Mafia Sentinel and leaves. Joey goes outside where several cars and Mafia members are waiting for him; he gets into a car and all of them leave the place immediately.

Meanwhile, at Wichita Gardens in Shoreside Vale…


Apartment 1260, Tower 2 – Wichita Gardens, Liberty City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 11:58 AM


This is Claude Speed’s apartment. There’re lots of beer cans in the floor and an old-fashion Candy Suxx poster in the wall, along with a picture of Catalina with darts all over her face. There’re also a TV and a pile of newspapers. Maria Leone is sitting in a chair crying while Claude is in his bed cleaning his shotgun and staring at Maria.

Maria (crying): “I still can’t believe you blew off a Cartel member’s head in front of me with your damn shotgun! What an insensitive lunatic asshole you are!!…”

Claude’s attitude is the usual “silent type” and just keeps staring at Maria…

Maria: “Would you say something? You know I don’t like your usual “badass” attitude!”

Claude clears his throat, gets up from the bed and replies…

Claude: “What do you want me to say? ‘I’m sorry’? That f*cking grease ball would have killed us…”

Maria: “Yes, I know, but I was sharing my feelings about you and you just ruined it…”

Claude: “You were talking about your damn haircut…”

Maria: “Yes, I was talking about that too, it’s ruined, just like my dress… it’s covered with blood… oh God!!”

Maria starts crying again. Claude takes his jacket, shotgun and some money and heads to the door…

Claude: “Oh well, whatever… listen, I’m going out, I need to talk to 8-Ball, get a nice cold beer and some smokes… do you want to come with me or what?”

Maria (sad): “Not really, go ahead, I’ll just wait here…”

Claude leaves the room. Maria looks at Catalina’s picture…

Maria (yelling): “Damn you bitch!! What the hell did you do to him??”

Maria resumes her crying…


AMCO Garage – Pike Creek, Liberty City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 12:40 PM


Joey and Toni are talking with other 7 Mafia members while Luigi is chatting with Fabio Donato, a friend of the Leone family. There’re Mafia associates all over Pike Creek while numerous police officers and helicopters are patrolling the Cochrane Dam area.

A door in the AMCO building opens and an old oriental man appears. He closes the door and approaches the Mafia guys. Three Mafia thugs block him the way and aim at him with AK-47’s.

Old oriental man: “Hey, hey, calm down! I just want to know what’s going on in here, I’ve got some business in here and seeing a lot of people around the place makes me nervous.”

Joey looks at the oriental man and orders to leave him alone. The Mafia thugs go a few feet away but keep aiming. Joey approaches the oriental man.

Joey: “What can I do for you sir? As you can see, we’re in a middle of something…”

Oriental man: “Nothing really son, it’s just that I’m a little nervous with all these cops around and then you’re in here, in front of the building.”

Joey: “But who are you anyway? And why are you nervous about the cops? Are you hiding something in there, old man?”

Oriental man: “Oh, where are my manners? I’m Satoshi Honatsu. And no… I’m not hiding anything in there…”

Joey: “Well, my name is Joey Leone. Don’t worry sir, we’re leaving soon.”

Oriental man: “Well, the sooner the better. Good day Mr. Leone.”

Satoshi makes a reverence and gets inside the building again. Joey looks confused…

Joey: “What a strange person…”

A Mafia thug appears running towards Joey…

Joey: “What the f*ck is the matter with you?”

Mafia thug: “Joey, the guys saw Speed on the bridge near Cedar Grove.”

Joey: “What? When??”

Mafia thug: “A few minutes ago, they chased him but he got away, luckily they managed to shoot him but we don’t know if he’s hurt though”

Joey: “Good job! All right guys, let’s go to Cedar Grove!! MOVE IT!!”

Everyone gets in their cars and leave the place.


Apartment 1260, Tower 2 – Wichita Gardens, Liberty City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 1:06 PM


Maria is lying in bed watching TV. She’s holding a gun just in case something happens.

A loud noise is heard on the staircase outside the room. Maria loads the gun, gets up and hides in the bathroom. The sound of a door opening is heard…

Voice (groaning): “Oh, sh*t, sh*t, sh*t!!!”

Maria gets out of the bathroom quickly…

Maria (yelling): “Ok asshole, stay right where you are!!”

Maria then realizes that Claude is lying on the floor groaning.

Maria: “My God!! What the hell happened??”

Claude (groaning): “The f*cking Leones are near; one of them shot me in the shoulder…”

Claude carefully removes his jacket, there’s blood all over him. Maria is shocked.

Claude (groaning): “We need to get out of here, quickly!!”

Maria: “Ok dear, don’t worry, just let me clean you up with some alcohol from the bathroom…”

Claude (groaning): “There’s no f*cking time for that, we gotta get the hell outta here!!”

Claude gets up, puts his jacket on again, grabs two bags in the floor and gets Maria.

Claude: “Let’s go!!”

Claude and Maria get out of the apartment but they hear voices downstairs… Claude takes a look…

Claude: “f*ck!!! The Mafia is here already! Let’s go upstairs!!!”

Maria: “Upstairs? But how…”

Claude gets Maria and both get upstairs quickly until they reach the roof. Claude opens the door and both go outside. Claude shuts the door back and attaches a bomb on the lock. He and Maria go to the other side of the place.


Rooftop, Tower 2 – Wichita Gardens, Liberty City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 1:11 PM


Maria (worried): “What the hell?? How are we gonna get out of here??!!”

Claude: “Don’t worry, I’ll work something out.”

Claude takes a look down, Joey Leone and a lot of Mafia members are in the building’s front door and the surroundings. Claude opens one of the bags and grabs a radio to turn it on.

Maria: “What are you doing?”

Claude: “I’m trying to get a transmission from them.”

Claude keeps messing with the radio until some voices are finally heard…

Radio voice 1: “There’s nobody in here … (interference)… what do we do? over”

Radio voice 2: “Just look everywhere in the building, Joey says kill everyone… DO IT!! ... (interference)… over”

A few seconds later a lot of gun shots and screams are heard. Maria starts crying…

Maria (crying): “They are killing everyone because of us…”

Claude keeps his cool, he knows that the apartment building is full of hobos and hookers so they ain’t really that important, he’s in pain but he doesn’t care that much. He removes his jacket and shirt and takes out a bottle of scotch from the opened bag, then pours it all over the wound. Maria stops crying then she looks at Claude’s shoulder and removes her sweater.

Maria: “Let me help you.”

Maria cleans Claude’s wound with her sweater, then she rips part of it and rolls it around Claude’s arm and shoulder to cover the wound.

Maria: “There, but we need to get to a doctor.”

Claude: “Thanks. But we can’t get into a hospital, you know…”

Maria: “Oh, I’ve got an idea. Remember Chico? He lives in Pike Creek, he can help us.”

Claude (skeptical): “And how are we gonna get to Pike Creek with all these Italians around?”

Maria starts thinking; gun shots are suddenly heard on the street. Maria and Claude get some cover under a small water tank. Claude takes a brief look…

Claude: “What the hell?”

Hundreds of Yakuza Stingers are coming down the road from Cedar Grove. The Mafia members on the street are trying to shoot at them but the Yakuza just run over them without giving them a chance. Claude and Maria look at the building’s entrance. Joey, Toni and several Mafia members are getting into their cars and leaving the place. The sound of a window breaking is heard a few seconds later with Luigi Goterelli falling to his death. Some more gun shots are heard during a couple of minutes until everything gets silent.

Maria: “What happened?”

Claude: “Who told the Yakuza??”

Some people are knocking at the rooftop’s door…

Voice behind door: “Claude-san, we’re here to take you to the casino, are you ok? Claude-san?”

The knocks continue… Claude gets up and walks to the door.

Claude: “Yes, I’m here, but I can’t open the door, there’s a bomb on it.”

Voice: “Don’t worry Claude-san. A helicopter is heading this way.”

Five minutes later the helicopter arrives. Shinji Kasen greets Maria and Claude. They get into the chopper. A doctor on board quickly takes care of Claude.

Shinji Kasen is the new leader of the Yakuza after the death of Asuka and Kenji Kasen in the past weeks. Shinji is their cousin.

The Yakuza helicopter interiors are quite comfortable and luxurious. Shinji is smoking while Maria is drinking some water. The doctor is taking care of Claude’s wound. Another 3 Yakuza members are in the vehicle, with M16’s in their hands. A few minutes later, the pilot is announcing their arrival to Torrington’s casino.


Helipad, Kasen Casino (formerly known as Kenji’s Casino) – Torrington, Liberty City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 1:47 PM


The helicopter is landing. Several Yakuza members are guarding the place. Shinji, Maria and Claude get down from the helicopter along with the 3 Yakuza members guarding them. Claude approaches Shinji.

Claude: “Thank you, Mr. Kasen.”

Claude and Maria make a reverence. Shinji makes them stop with a gesture.

Shinji: “Please, don’t do that, that’s so old-fashioned that it’s not even interesting anymore. I know my cousin Kenji was obsessed with all this ‘honor’ stuff but I’m more liberal. And you can call me Shinji.”

Shinji is only 19 years old. Some Yakuza members don’t like him because of his age and “liberalism”, but he’s the only true heir of the Yakuza leadership.

All of them keep walking and get into the casino.



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Granted that there are some grammatical errors that you mentioned may exist, but it's an interesting story. Though I can't say I like the way it's written; I think you should take it into more of a book direction and not as much of a script.

Though I do like the characters. Claude is a difficult hero to write, but I like the idea of an heir to the Yakuza. Killing Luigi off early is an interesting twist as well.

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Thanks for the feedback Bart.

Yeah, I thought at some point that I should write it more like a book and not like a movie script.

I have to think more about that but first I need to improve my grammar skills. tounge.gif
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Good story

To tell you the truth, I kind of like the way you've laid out the story. The story, from what I've read, has a lot of dialouge, so the "movie script" approach is a good way to approach that. Besides the few grammatical errors, it is a good read and I look foward to an update.

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QUOTE (beanmachine43 @ Nov 9 2005, 22:08)
To tell you the truth, I kind of like the way you've laid out the story. The story, from what I've read, has a lot of dialouge, so the "movie script" approach is a good way to approach that. Besides the few grammatical errors, it is a good read and I look foward to an update.

Yeah, 80% of the story is dialogue.

I'm still thinking about that tho. On the next update I'm gonna try and correct all the grammatical errors.

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PK, I salute you..I was actually into it. Interesting story, good plot twists so far, and I enjoyed every bit of it so far. I've read a few GTA3 fanfics that people have written and I have to stop reading it after the first chapter because it gets too ridiculous. I'm sure it will just keep getting better. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Because of the use of the dialouge, I actually imagined most it as if it was actually in game, great job!
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Thanks for the comments guys. smile.gif

Now, I fixed some grammatical errors. I know there might be more, but I'll keep looking.

Should I keep the "script" style or should I switch to "book" style?
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My opinion..keep the script style, for sure.
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Yeah, the script style is nice. Makes it easier (for me) to imagine the story taking place in the game.
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Very nice story indeed. I'm also a fan fiction writer and I'm thinking of starting a story again, not confirmed tho. I did GTA Saga, and that was the most popular story on these boards, (cheap plug) But I like the script style, keep to that, and I agree writing in the view of Claude is hard, as I had ot do in the ever popular GTA Saga, (just cant stop with the plugs)
Looking forward to next chapter, release it earlier than a week if you have 10 of them done.
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QUOTE (Kanney @ Nov 11 2005, 04:47)
Looking forward to next chapter, release it earlier than a week if you have 10 of them done.

Yeah, I think I'm gonna post 2 chapters a week.

Thanks for the comments. I'm gonna stick with the "script" mode. tounge.gif

Well, this is chapter 2. Enjoy!



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Shinji’s Office, Kasen Casino – Torrington, Liberty City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 1:52 PM


The room on top of the casino is Shinji’s office. The exquisite furniture once belonged to Kenji Kasen, who had a private garden and an elevator to get there. Both the garden and the elevator are still there, but nobody is allowed to go to those places.

Shinji sits on his desk’s chair, makes a phone call and then stands up to join Claude and Maria who are sitting in the office’s lounge.

Claude: “So Shinji, I want to know... how did you know we were in trouble?”

Shinji starts laughing…

Shinji (laughing): “Come on Claude, don’t you think it’s really stupid to leave you without protection, after half of Liberty hates you??”

Claude and Maria laugh too…

Claude: “Yes, it makes sense…”

Shinji: “There were some Yakuza members in that building keeping an eye on the surroundings. When they noticed you were bleeding, they called me. I bet the Leones weren’t expecting that!”

They keep laughing for a while until Shinji gets serious.

Shinji: “Ok Claude, let’s get to the point of this meeting. You’re pretty f*cked right now. This Mafia assault was stopped but it won’t last forever. Joey Leone and Toni Cipriani are very dangerous, and now that Luigi Goterelli is gone; they’re going to be pretty pissed off…”

Claude: “Yeah, but I guess if we stay here in Torrington we will be safe, isn’t it?”

Shinji stands up and walks around; he gets near a window and just stares at the outside world...

Shinji: “Yes Claude, that is correct. The Yakuza are all over Staunton Island. The remains of the Colombian Cartel and the Yardies are not a threat, but I’m worried about the Mafia. They’re taking over Portland. The Forellis are practically gone, the Chinese are weak since the destruction of their fish business, and the Diablos just left the place. The Mafia don’t have any enemies left in Portland anymore…”

Claude and Maria gulp.

Shinji: “Listen Claude, we don’t want trouble with the Leone family. If you finally leave the city they won’t be messing with us.”

Claude stands up.

Claude: “But you killed Goterelli…”

Shinji: “Yes, we did, but you Claude Speed… you whacked out the Don, Salvatore Leone, the kingpin of the Italian Mafia, and even took his wife with you… that’s like killing 50 thousand Goterellis in a row…”

Shinji walks to a minibar, takes out a bottle of water and drinks it.

Shinji: “Listen, a contact just told us that the Los Santos branch of the Leone family is having an important meeting in Vice City on the next spring. Fabrizio Leone is going to shake hands with Tommy Vercetti, who’s pretty much the owner of the city. Vercetti began to take over back in the 80’s by killing Sonny Forelli and that’s why the Leones admire him, they want to partner with him so they can expand to Vice City and let Vercetti take over businesses in Los Santos and Liberty too…”

Claude interrupts Shinji…

Claude: “Wait Shinji, what does this have to do with Maria and me?”

Maria looks worried. Shinji sits down on his big chair.

Shinji: “Come here Claude, sit down.”

Claude goes to a chair in front of Shinji’s desk and sits down.

Shinji: “Listen Claude, if the Leones get any more power, we lose. They’ll be coming to Liberty to join their relatives and partners in no time and they’re going to take us out. Even if we have Staunton under control we simply don’t have enough power like Vercetti has down in Florida or Fabrizio Leone in Los Santos. We’ve been negotiating with people too and we got deals going with the Zaibatsu Corporation. They’ve been taking over the city since Donald Love disappeared; they already gained control of Love Media and AMCO. They are getting stronger, and that’s what we need.”

The Zaibatsu Corporation is a Japanese holding that owns several companies in the U.S. Their stronger company in Liberty is Zaibatsu Pharmaceuticals, which got big thanks to an anti-depressive called Equanox.

Donald Love was the founder and president of Love Media, a company that owns almost every single radio and TV stations in Liberty City and various other cities in the U.S. He mysteriously disappeared a few days ago without a trace.

AMCO is a major gas and petroleum production and distribution company. Both Love Media and Zaibatsu Pharmaceuticals own stock from this important company.

Shinji drinks some more water.

Shinji: “So, Claude, I’m asking you for a favor, you have to get to Vice City and sabotage the meeting between the Leone family and Tommy Vercetti. My cousins really trusted in you so I think I can trust you as well. If you’re worried about Maria, she can stay at the Belleville Hotel, where she’s going to be safe. What do you say?”

Claude stands up, and starts thinking for a while. Maria looks at Claude’s eyes.

Claude: “Maria, will you stay here under the protection of the Yakuza? You’ll be just fine baby.”

Maria starts crying…

Maria (crying): “But what if you get killed or something down at Vice City, you’ve never been in there, do you?”

Claude approaches Maria and hugs her…

Claude: “Listen Maria, if we don’t do this, we and the Yakuza are gonna be doomed. You were Salvatore’s wife so you know the Mafia good enough to foresee our terrible destiny if we don’t do something. You have to stay here and when I come back we can live peacefully together, and I won’t have to blow another head off in front of you ever again…”

Maria keeps crying, but calms down a little…

Maria: “Ok Claude, but take care of yourself. I’ll be waiting for you.”

Shinji stands up and calls for some bodyguards. A few seconds later, the bodyguards arrive to the office.

Shinji: “Ok then, get the future Mrs. Speed down to the Belleville Hotel. Tell Mr. Akio that I’ve sent you. Get more men from the Dojo and keep both eyes all over the place, day and night. Mrs. Speed must be well protected. Do you understand?”

The bodyguards make a reverence. Maria kisses Claude and leaves the room with the bodyguards while crying.

Shinji: “Good, now let’s get to the airport…”

Four Yakuza members get into the room and escort Shinji and Claude to the helipad, where they take the helicopter heading to Francis International.


Kasen Private Hangar – Francis International Airport, Liberty City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 3:14 PM


The helicopter lands at the helipad next to Shinji’s private hangar where a small jet is ready to take off. Shinji and Claude get into the hangar while 6 Yakuza members are preparing themselves as they’ll be Claude’s protection during the trip.

An airport staff member approaches Shinji…

Airport staff member: “Everything is set, Mr. Kasen. Your people can board the jet now.”

The staff member leaves.

Shinji: “Ok Claude, you better get in the plane now. Take care.”

Claude: “All right Shinji. Please take care of Maria.”

Shinji: “Don’t worry about that. Good luck.”

Shinji and Claude shake hands. Claude gets into the plane, along with his protection. A couple of minutes later, the jet is heading to the runway and takes off. Shinji and a couple of Yakuza members get back to the helicopter and leave.


Arrivals Area – Escobar International Airport, Vice City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 6:20 PM


Vice City’s airport is bigger and more impressive than Francis International in Liberty. Claude Speed and his protection are waiting for transportation. Two taxis get in the place. Claude notices the words “Vercetti Cabs” on both vehicles’ doors. He and the Yakuza get into the cars.

Taxi driver: “Where are we going to?”

Claude: “We’re looking for a hotel; we’ve been told that the ones in Vice Point are the best ones.”

Taxi driver: “Well, you’ve been misinformed. Those hotels WERE the best ones, but now they’re just ancient history.”

Claude: “Ok then, what do you suggest?”

Taxi driver: “You can stay at the Ocean View hotel in Ocean Beach or at the Vercetti Resort downtown.”

Claude: “Well, you’re driving a Vercetti cab, so take us to the Vercetti hotel.”

Taxi driver (laughing): “Ok señor.”

Both cabs leave the airport area and head Downtown. Vice City has changed a lot in the past 15 years. The place where Little Haiti was is now a commercial and business complex built by Avery Construction Co. in 1989, after Tommy Vercetti and his gang annihilated the Haitians and their leader, Auntie Poulet. The Cubans are Vercetti’s partners and important businessmen since Humberto Robina, head of the Cubans in Florida, won the lottery in 1991 and bought an important bank and some businesses. All of Vercetti’s assets, except The Malibu and the Pole Position Club, changed their name after Vercetti: Kaufman Cabs became Vercetti Cabs; Sunshine Autos is now Vercetti Motors; Cherry Poppers Ice Cream Co. turned into Vercetti Frozen Foods Co.; the Print Works is now Vercetti Printing Co., a subsidiary of Vercetti Publishing House; InterGlobal Films is now Vercetti Film & Television Productions; the Well-stacked Pizza is now Pappa Vercetti’s Pizza and the Moist Palms Hotel became the luxurious Vercetti Resort.

After a few minutes, both cabs arrive to their destination.


Lobby, Vercetti Resort – Downtown, Vice City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 6:46 PM


The marvelous decoration and fine music at the hotel’s lobby makes Claude a little bit nervous, getting the attention of a nearby Yakuza member.

Yakuza member: “What’s the matter Claude-san?”

Claude (nervous): “Nothing, it’s just that I think this place is a bit pricey and I don’t feel very comfortable in such nice and happy places…”

Yakuza member: “You don’t have to worry Claude-san. We the Yakuza are paying for this.”

Claude (nervous): “Well, that’s really not the problem, but whatever.”

The Yakuza member goes to the reception and gets some keys. Everybody goes to their rooms. Claude gets a suite with a Jacuzzi and a big plasma TV. Two Yakuza members step at Claude’s room door…


Suite 890, Vercetti Resort – Downtown, Vice City - Autumn 2001
Saturday - 6:55 PM


Yakuza member: “We are staying in the corridor.”

Both Yakuza members close the door, Claude locks it and goes to the bathroom to take a shower. After dressing up again, he goes to the balcony and starts thinking…

Claude (thinking): “Damn, this city is so big and that Vercetti dude really owns everything over here. I wonder where he is right now…”

Claude keeps thinking, he turns around and looks at the big TV. Claude walks near the TV and turns it on. A man in a suit with the hotel’s building in the back is talking.

Narrator: “Hi, my name is Tommy Vercetti .Welcome to Vice City and welcome to the Vercetti Resort, the most luxurious hotel in Florida! In this video you’ll see the convenience and privileges of being a Vercetti Resort guest…”

Claude stares at the screen surprised; now he knows who Tommy Vercetti is. Claude wanted to meet him as soon as possible, but he didn’t want the Yakuza getting on his way. Claude changes the channel on the TV and increases the volume, then he goes to the balcony again and looks below…

Claude: “Damn, this is not going to be a piece of cake.”

Claude is at the 8th floor so he had to be very careful.

Claude: “I can just go down and get into an empty room so I can reach the elevator without the Yakuza noticing.”

Claude climbs down to the balcony below. He carefully looks through the window to see if someone’s in there, but it seems to be empty. Claude goes to the door and cracks the lock to get inside. He walks slowly in the darkness until the sound of a trigger freezes him...


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I love this PK, remember when I bugged you about it a 'while back? Are you just posting chapters, day by day or are you re-wrtiting it a little bit?
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I'll post a couple of chapters each week. I've been rewriting some bits and correcting the grammatical mistakes.

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Good stuff so far, Pk. And yeah..posting two chapters a week would be excellent. wink.gif
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Very nice. Vercetti is doing well for himself.

Should be another good chapter. Are you going by the story of GTA, as in say Lance Vance is dead, Forellis, etc. Cos there are a few things you could look into before continuing, like stuff that happens in Liberty City Stories.
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I dont think Avery Construction would be around or would be called that. Seeing as Donald love made Toni kill him in LCS. But except for that very nice story! Cant wait for next chapter.

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QUOTE (Kanney @ Nov 12 2005, 08:43)
Are you going by the story of GTA, as in say Lance Vance is dead, Forellis, etc. Cos there are a few things you could look into before continuing, like stuff that happens in Liberty City Stories.


Yes. The events of GTAIII, Vice City, San Andreas and LCS are being considered for this story.

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I dont think Avery Construction would be around or would be called that. Seeing as Donald love made Toni kill him in LCS. But except for that very nice story! Cant wait for next chapter.

EDIT: I tried adding spoiler tags but didnt work


And that's why I don't like post wrappers. tounge.gif

Yeah, I know that. But the complex was built in 1989 and LCS is set in 1998. Besides, Avery's company could be lead by someone else. ph34r.gif
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Yeah company's names don't have to change when the founder is Killed and/or retires. If that was the case a lot of big name companies would have their name changed constantly.
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QUOTE (JP Speed @ Nov 12 2005, 19:15)
Yeah company's names don't have to change when the founder is Killed and/or retires. If that was the case a lot of big name companies would have their name changed constantly.

Example Disney Land.
Anyway, whens the new chapter up and da gta master, if spoilers dont work, just makes it a very small font size.
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