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 I Should Have Looked At the Calendar

 A short story
 
bluetops  
Posted: Friday, Aug 17 2012, 12:10
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"KRRRRRRRRNG!"

Alright. Slowly open the eyes. Look around. Look around. Yeah, it's my phone. Phone alarm. Pick up the phone slowly and look at it:

"Snooze."

Snooze? Maybe by just pressing this little button at the left corner of the keypad will remove this thing. There you go.

Now there's that tiny time teller at the screen... WHAT?!

"6:30!"

Good heavens above space and universe! I'm gonna be late for school. They should have not changed the schedule before. Yes, they should have not! Now everyone has to wake up early for a 7:00 AM goal!

Do not panic. Do not panic. Okay, look around. Look around. Where's my slippers? There you are, just right in front of me. Now what I need to do is open the door and walk outside the room.

I see the clock just at the left of me. Yeah, a clock that was "given" to me by a friend. Wait it's blurred. Wear the eyeglasses. Okay...

"6:35!"

How much time did I really spent in this small room of mine?!

Alright. Don't panic. Breath, breath. Open the door, walk out the room - that simple. I see the stairs. Time to rush. Rush time. Then...

There's a cat. A domestic cat. Beside him is another cat, a white one. They are cute.

Wait.

I do not own a white cat, do I? No, I do not. Yes, I do not own any white cat! So who's this stray...

"Shoo! Shoo! Get out of the house you stupid ignorant fool stray goddamned cat!"

What will I do here? How did I got here? Yeah. School time. I need to eat, take a bath, brush my teeth and all that stuff that any regular student does. Oh! What time is it? There's a clock.

"6:45!"

Now what? No chance of getting to school. I can go there but the lady guard won't let me in. 'Cause I'm late! Late!

I'm gonna miss all the fun, all the lessons, the grades and my special one! This day has been too harsh to me! Curse you first day of the week!

"Chris? Chris?" It's mom.

"Yes?"

"What are you doing? You woke up too early."

Early? Is she crazy?

"We got lot of things to do today. We, or you, need to wash those dishes, clean the house, the garage..."

"What?"

"Have you forgot?"

What else could I have forgot? The world going crazy?


"You do all chores on Saturdays!"



It's my first try in writing here. Forgive me if this turns out to be sh*t biggrin.gif

This post has been edited by bluetops on Friday, Aug 17 2012, 12:14
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Ziggy455  
Posted: Friday, Aug 17 2012, 12:26
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For a first try you've got basic punctuation down pretty well. As for the story itself I won't say much, but the writing felt a little clunky. Like too formal. Nothing that an edit wouldn't solve anyway. I'd like to see what you could make of a longer. more elaborate story.

All in all not bad.
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bluetops  
Posted: Friday, Aug 17 2012, 12:28
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Thank you for the comment. I'll keep that in mind biggrin.gif
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