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4 months before biker stories begins,John forreli and the forreli mafia are at war with the leones,they fight there enemies for a long time,and evantualy the leones make a deal with the russian mob,already under pressure by 2 mafias,it seems everybody wants a piece of the all powerful forrelis,even one of the most powerful las venturas biker gangs,the black cobras (AT THAT TIME lead by the black fox,the gang UNDER FOXES ORDERS send a small group to kill forrelis sister Adriana,but his best man James saves her from certain death,from that moment,the war seriosly begins... John Forreli: Leader of the Forrelis in San Andreas. The gang was famous in Liberty City and Vice City James: John forrelis most trusted man,and main character Martin: no matter if he is black (cosa nostra originaly only accepts italians),the boss accepts him due to his deeds in liberty Adriana: Johns sister and Jimmies girlfriend Alexio: one of forrelis men,and one of jims mission givers CHAPTER 1 ( take and destroy ) PT 1 CHAPTER 2 ( Fate brought us here ) CHAPTER 3 ( War vetrans )  Dutchy3010 and PatrickW for dyom ME for headers and logo http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rBBR6zhAAuI...outu.be]TRAILER This post has been edited by gguywesker101 on Monday, May 6 2013, 15:02
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That Episode was really nice. But I've a request for you. Work on your grammar a little. Example: Instead writing the line like this: jim:will do boss Write like this: Jim: Will do, Boss. Or: drive to the compound, Correct it a little: "Drive to the compound. If you'll do this, your missions will get more attention of DYOMers.  I don't order you to do that, but after that, reading the text is nicer.
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| QUOTE (WillBe @ Friday, Apr 19 2013, 18:05) | That Episode was really nice. But I've a request for you. Work on your grammar a little. Example: Instead writing the line like this: jim:will do boss Write like this: Jim: Will do, Boss. Or: drive to the compound, Correct it a little: "Drive to the compound.
If you'll do this, your missions will get more attention of DYOMers. I don't order you to do that, but after that, reading the text is nicer. |
thank you Willbe,but the thing is,the grammar is my keyboards folt,its hard to type cause of it,it skips letters and sometimes i dont notice the mistakes it has done This post has been edited by gguywesker101 on Sunday, Apr 21 2013, 14:46
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gguywesker101  |
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| QUOTE (Zizo008 @ Friday, Apr 19 2013, 22:06) | Right, definetly the keyboard's fault all along.
You should post the trailer using the YT BBCode tag.
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And please for the last time, stop acting as if you're the center of the world. | i didint even see the youtube code on the forums O_o,and who said im the center of the world,you are getting more and more annoying by the minute,i just said TNX for him telling me he likes it O_O (my job is perfection and satasfaction) ,AND YES,its my keyboard,do you possibly know how hard is it to play mp cause of it,even harder to type,belive or not,its a pain in the ass
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gguywesker101  |
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SORRY FOR DOUBLE POST BUT,
i found out that the "chrome virus" was actualy a music file that i uploaded BY MISTAKE,since i found it in my THE MOVIES TM video game files O_O,anyways,i will reupload pt 1,BUT ,part 2 (which is almost done) will be put on hold due to my gta3.IMG file being corrputed,the sooner i get a backup the sooner il continue =D,if you wish to help,you can upload your gta3.img file on 4 shared and send me the link =D
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