[Moryachok]

CANCELED

This post has been edited by Moryachok on Sunday, Apr 14 2013, 13:16

[Zizo008]

I haven't seen you around, you new?
Ok, i played the first mission. And it was ok i guess, the plot is good, the cutscenes are decent, some writing mistakes but nothing much. The gunfight was cool, a little hard but thanks to the high health i made it alive, you could've made enemies easier to deal with but give us a pistol with low ammo. Finding those drivers took sometime, which is nice. Ending could've been better if you showed Steve worried or something like that.
Overall, it's a nice mission. I'm not sure if this is your first mission, but if it is, you did a great job. However, i advise you to work on the looks of the topic, the logo is bad the actors look like mutants or something. And the headers are a bit too big. You can request better ones in the GFX Requests & Tutorials forum.

[apit2010]

You're back in action? Cool!
Good luck with this MP, Moryachok!

@Zizo008 = He is not a new member

[Moryachok]

QUOTE (Zizo008 @ Monday, Dec 31 2012, 02:27)

I haven't seen you around, you new? Ok, i played the first mission. And it was ok i guess, the plot is good, the cutscenes are decent, some writing mistakes but nothing much. The gunfight was cool, a little hard but thanks to the high health i made it alive, you could've made enemies easier to deal with but give us a pistol with low ammo. Finding those drivers took sometime, which is nice. Ending could've been better if you showed Steve worried or something like that. Overall, it's a nice mission. I'm not sure if this is your first mission, but if it is, you did a great job. However, i advise you to work on the looks of the topic, the logo is bad the actors look like mutants or something. And the headers are a bit too big. You can request better ones in the GFX Requests & Tutorials forum.

OK, I'll fix logo and headers.
About logo - I made actors "like mutants" to hide who are they. But I'll do another logo in Photoshop, if you don't like this.

[Dude1]

CODE

http://i.imgur.com/gedBg.png

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http://i.imgur.com/dQJeg.png

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http://i.imgur.com/ksvH4.png

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http://i.imgur.com/zvvlh.png

Here, i resized the headers for you

[Moryachok]

@Dude1, thank you!