I haven't seen you around, you new?
Ok, i played the first mission. And it was ok i guess, the plot is good, the cutscenes are decent, some writing mistakes but nothing much. The gunfight was cool, a little hard but thanks to the high health i made it alive, you could've made enemies easier to deal with but give us a pistol with low ammo. Finding those drivers took sometime, which is nice. Ending could've been better if you showed Steve worried or something like that.
Overall, it's a nice mission. I'm not sure if this is your first mission, but if it is, you did a great job. However, i advise you to work on the looks of the topic, the logo is bad
the actors look like mutants or something. And the headers are a bit too big. You can request better ones in the GFX Requests & Tutorials forum.