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 Grand Theft Auto IV: A México, Al Infierno

 To México, To Hell
 
MarijuanaMonkey  
Posted: Wednesday, Mar 27 2013, 19:53
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Mission Name: The Pot And The Spoon
Mission Giver: Rique Armandes

Jose goes to the coffee shop in Middle Park for meeting with Bailey on Rique's orders. He starts to look for Bailey and finds him drinking coffee and relaxing by the wonderful view of Middle Park, sitting at a table right of the shop. Jose sits opposite him and they start a well-going chit chat.

Ochua: Hello Santiago!
Jose: Hi!
Ochua: You know I drink coffee here at least once a week. I don't know what takes me here but its coffee and wonderful view I guess. More like a magic. [takes a sip from his coffee]
Jose: Look. Ochua! Can't we stop this? I am a very busy man. I have to look over my business, I've a bad payload of heroin to offload... I'm sorry, mister; I don't have time to run after the mad crooks.
Ochua: [takes a sip from his coffee] I know about your problems, Jose. Please don't admit me as an asshole who's using you. We're friends. I'm trying to help all of us. [takes an other sip from his coffee]
Jose: But I have no time for these bullsh*ts. Also actually I started to get tired of it.
Ochua: Like I said, I know you're about bad times. But at last, we will get out of this advantageously. So you with me, friend?
Jose: Oh goddamnit! Allright. Fine. What do you want?
Ochua: There are some street punks who's trying to squeeze me out of lies. I don't scare them but I am afraid they would brainwash guys in the top. Also these guys are sin, Jose. All they do is selling to sick high-school kids and stick their nose up cocaine all day...
Jose: Okay. I got it. You want me to kill 'em?
Ochua: Exactly. The bastards claim that they've something I must worry about it. I arranged a meeting with them, at the park in Castle Gardens. So you'll go there and put the guys and their evidence out of history.

Bailey begins sipping his coffee as Jose gets up from the table and walks away.

After the cutscene, Jose goes to Castle Gardens where he will carry out the meeting with the blackmailers. He gets located near the fountain in the park and starts to wait for the blackmailers.

After a short while, Jose arrives the location, four men arrive in a white Schafter and later walk down the fountain where they encounter with Jose.

Jose: You the guys?
Blackmailer 1: What?
Jose: I'm a friend of Ochua's. He sent me to get his thing.
Blackmailer 1: Finally, that old bastard came to way, eh? Anyway, yeah, I got it. Show us the money first. You know, we ain't doing it for free.
Jose: Yeah. Understood.

Jose gets his gun from his pocket and later he aims it on the blackmailers.

Jose: Well, you're giving it or not?
Blackmailer 1: F*ck you.

The main blackmailer and his buddies get their guns too and they open fire on Jose. Jose strikes back then but both sides manage to dodge each other's bullets. Blackmailers make a run for it, Jose runs after them but blackmailers hop in their car and attempts to drive away.

So Jose immediately grabs a vehicle and starts to chase the blackmailers. When blackmailers realize that Jose's tailing them, they begin openinig fire on Jose.

After a long chase, blackmailers bump their car in Topaz Street, at a very close location to North Park LTA. So they decided to make a run again, the crew goes down to North Park underground subway station and Jose tails on them too.

In the station, the crew tries to make his way down to the opposite platform, by passing the tracks. Jose must do the same thing to whack the blackmailers and get the proof about Ochua. However after the crew will pass the tracks, Jose must watch out for the trains that is about to come to the station.

After Jose kills the three blackmailers, he will have only a one target, the main blackmailer, who will surely alive after he takes other blackmailers. When Jose reams his body with the bullets, he will fall down on knees and a cutscene triggers:

Blackmailer 1: Uh! Uh! Oh f*ck, man!

Blackmailer attempts to escape by crawling out because of his deep bullet scars. Jose aims his Pistol to him and tells him to stop.

Jose: Yo! Don't move. It's over, man. Just admit it. Now where's the evidence?
Blackmailer 1: A'right, you won. That's it. [produces a camera from his jacket] Can't you let me go? Please.
Jose takes the camera and...
Jose: Sorry, guy. I'm ordered to finish you.

Jose fires four bullets on the blackmailers' torso, leaving him a death with blood pukes. Later Jose calls Bailey to inform him about the situation.

Jose: I whacked the blackmailers and got their thing about you.
Ochua: Good. Then what's that thing?
Jose: Seems like some crappy photographs.
Ochua: Those spook bastards. Allright. Just get it over the coffee house.

Jose gets back to the coffee shop in Middle Park and finds Bailey in peaceful manners.

Jose: A'right. Here are them. [puts the camera on the table]
Ochua: Good. Very good. I really appreciated your help, Santiago. Good day, amigo.
Jose begins stepping out from the coffee shop.

Mission Completed!

Reward:
None

user posted image After a while, Ochua gives Jose a call, just tells him to come over East Island City Police Station and immediately hangs up.
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Keeed  
Posted: Wednesday, Apr 3 2013, 10:44
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There's a lot of problems with your English in this topic. I am guessing that English is not your first language? Ask me and I will help you with it.
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MarijuanaMonkey  
Posted: Wednesday, Apr 3 2013, 11:28
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QUOTE (Keeed @ Wednesday, Apr 3 2013, 10:44)
There's a lot of problems with your English in this topic. I am guessing that English is not your first language? Ask me and I will help you with it.

You guess it right, English is not my first language, so it's a bit problem for me. Actually I make some of the grammar mistakes in the dialogues intentionally, for adding dialogues a more casual-speech style. Thanks for help.
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Keeed  
Posted: Wednesday, Apr 3 2013, 13:07
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QUOTE (MarijuanaMonkey @ Wednesday, Apr 3 2013, 11:28)
QUOTE (Keeed @ Wednesday, Apr 3 2013, 10:44)
There's a lot of problems with your English in this topic. I am guessing that English is not your first language? Ask me and I will help you with it.

You guess it right, English is not my first language, so it's a bit problem for me. Actually I make some of the grammar mistakes in the dialogues intentionally, for adding dialogues a more casual-speech style. Thanks for help.

No I mean you make grammar mistakes when you are writing about characters and stuff. For example you wrote:
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Jose's a passioned guy who lives with the dreams of wealth, power and respect


It shout be like this:
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Jose's a passionate guy who dreams of becoming wealthy, powerful and respected.


I can help you with this if you like.
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MarijuanaMonkey  
Posted: Wednesday, Apr 3 2013, 16:52
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QUOTE (Keeed @ Wednesday, Apr 3 2013, 13:07)
QUOTE (MarijuanaMonkey @ Wednesday, Apr 3 2013, 11:28)
QUOTE (Keeed @ Wednesday, Apr 3 2013, 10:44)
There's a lot of problems with your English in this topic. I am guessing that English is not your first language? Ask me and I will help you with it.

You guess it right, English is not my first language, so it's a bit problem for me. Actually I make some of the grammar mistakes in the dialogues intentionally, for adding dialogues a more casual-speech style. Thanks for help.

No I mean you make grammar mistakes when you are writing about characters and stuff. For example you wrote:
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Jose's a passioned guy who lives with the dreams of wealth, power and respect


It shout be like this:
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Jose's a passionate guy who dreams of becoming wealthy, powerful and respected.


I can help you with this if you like.

Yeah, I got what you're talking about. I knew you're saying this. However I wanted to indicate the grammar for the dialogues too. I'm trying to watch out for them but as English's not my first language, I can't write like many other concept writers. Also thanks for the hand, I will check out the topic in my spare time but I've no time because of school work.
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