[AnDReJ98]

UPDATE:
Episode 2 part 3 uploaded!!!

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UPDATE:
Added more characters gang and icons!

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UPDATE:
Added informations about game.


If someone can review this story-line please to do that.Here's the official topic about DYOM reviewers by AznKei.

[shiva s]

I played the first episode. I liked everything but you've to add the name of the respective person's dialogues. For eg you added " why are you here?" I was confused and wondered who'd talked that. To make it clear, you should add like this "(Mike) why you're here?". It can be made this way. Anyway, you've improved a lot. Put a little effort on your english and you'll do good.

[AnDReJ98]

QUOTE (shiva s @ Tuesday, Feb 14 2012, 12:18)

I played the first episode. I liked everything but you've to add the name of the respective person's dialogues. For eg you added " why are you here?" I was confused and wondered who'd talked that. To make it clear, you should add like this "(Mike) why you're here?". It can be made this way. Anyway, you've improved a lot. Put a little effort on your english and you'll do good.

Everybody ask me why i didn't wrote dialogues. In other episodes i've done it.
Example:
(Mike)
About English.Episode 1 part 1 is so old,you see,i haven't much mistakes here. I've been made Ep.1 pt.1 when i knew English worse than now.Thats all i think

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Thanks for feedback

[AnDReJ98]

Well guys,i'm finally back at Mike Devison Chronicles,and i want to continiou it. Episode 3 (final) part 1 is not ready to be realased yet,but here's the progress:

Update:

Since i'm back,i've already finished first four missions from Episode 3 part 1. These missions won't be like in pervious episodes.
They will be better and higer quality! I need to finish 11 missions and Episode 3 part 1 will be realased.
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I decited to come back on this cause i'm free from other DYOM projects now. Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas Stories is
wating for realase date,GTA Los Santos is on hold,other projects i've already finished. School took time from me very much,but i'll try to finish
this as soon as possible.
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Please play the pervious episodes and give me an feedback. Expect an big update on main topic soon! As you want to see
my mission topic,you can look at here. Happy waiting final missions!

[AnDReJ98]

Well,guys i have to tell you something...This has been canceled...I made 9 missions and started 10...sudnelly they have lost. GTA SA crashed.
I have to make 25 missions to be end. I must cancel this coz i don't have a time to finish and remake missions again. They were very long and high quality...

This Story-Line is canceled!

Mabey,i'll get time from school holiday (1 may) then i'll mabey try to finish this,but don't expect that of me,might i won't ??? cause from 1 May i'm starting GTA SAS with 60 (mabey more) missions.