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 King of the streets

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Posted: Sunday, Feb 5 2012, 21:08
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A new mission pack created by Destructor24

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This story is about Jonathan, son of CJ, Carl Johnson. He is ready to continue what his father left pending... The death of all the Ballas. Allied to other Groove Street, will try to achieve your goal. Although the road will not be easy... You will have to face several leaders, and if this were not enough, Vagos also join in this fight. So I wish you luck ...The'll need!

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Player
Name: Jonathan Johnson
Status: Alive
Gang/Mafia: Groove Street Families
Specialties: Robbery, kidnapping, combat
First appearance: Ballas, outside our territory
Description: Jonathan Johnson born in Los Santos, San Andreas. He is the son of CJ and Denise. His father died and now he seeks revenge. His aim is to achieve the death of all the Ballas. He is known by many alias, but the main ones are "JJ" and "Jona".

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Friend
Name: Geoff
Status: Alive
Gang/Mafia: Groove Street Families
Specialties: Fights, shootings, bombings
First appearance: Ballas, outside our territory
Description: Geoff born in Los Santos, San Andreas. His father is Big Smoke, but his mother is unknown. It's a great friend of Jonathan, even though their parents have been a rivalry in the past. Throughout the missions, helps Jonathan to meet its target.

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Friend
Name: Cody
Status: Alive
Gang/Mafia: Groove Street Families
Specialties: Traffic in arms, sneak, protect
First appearance: Rescuing a colleague
Description: Cody probably born in Los Santos, San Andreas. His parents are unknown. It's an old colleague of Jonathan and Geoff. In his first appearance, he is kidnapped by the Ballas, and you have to rescue him. Throughout the missions, helps his friends in their battles.

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Groove Street Families

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Leaders: Jonathan, Geoff and Cody
Members know: None
Type: Street Gang
Color: Green
Enemies: The Ballas
First appearance: Ballas, outside our territory
Description: The Grove Street Families have been silenced over the past few years by drugs, internal disagreements and their arch rivals, the Ballas. The Seville Boulevard Families (controlling only a small area in south-east Los Santos) and the Temple Drive Families (located up north) have split from the Grove, so just because they're wearing green doesn't mean they are necessarily allies. Whilst these events took place, Vagos and Ballas took over. Everyday, Grove Street gets weaker, and the Ballas get stronger. Grove Street OG's include Sweet (Sean Johnson), Big Smoke (Melvin Harris), Ryder (Lance Wilson) and CJ (Carl Johnson). The families must re-unite if they are ever to rise again. The Grove Street Families control areas of Ganton and East Los Santos.

The Ballas

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Leaders: Unknown
Members know: None
Type: Street Gang
Color: Purple
Enemies: Groove Street Families
First appearance: Ballas, outside our territory
Description: The Ballas have a bitter rivalry with the Grove Street Families. The Ballas come in two sets - Front Yard Ballas and Rollin Heights Ballas. The Front Yard Ballas are Los Santos' most nutorious drug dealers, and Grove Street's biggest rivals. The Rollin Height Ballas act as backup and control only the tiny area of Glen Park, although they are said to be expanding south, into Idlewood. The Ballas are battling with rivals (Vagos & the Grove Street Families) to control East Los Santos. The Ballas have been around since the 1970's - Involved in drug dealing, gang banging, prostitution, arms dealing, vandalism, degeneracy, but mainly, the cocaine trade. Mindless, uncontrollable, and thought to have ties with Mexican (Drugs), and Russian (Weapons) Mobs.

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Chapter 1: The Groove Street return

1- Ballas, outside our territory
2- Rescuing a colleague NEW!
3- Coming soon
4- Coming soon
5- Coming soon
6- Coming soon
7- Coming soon
8- Coming soon

Thanks to:

- TheXProyect

This post has been edited by Destructor24 on Saturday, Feb 18 2012, 15:55
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Posted: Sunday, Feb 5 2012, 21:32
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Hmm, don't know what I can expect from this.
Could be great if you make it an interesting story with nice missions.

Anyway,
I 'll play it.
I 'll add this mission to my "to play" list for DYOM TV.
And give feedback later.

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And welcome (cause this is your 1st post)
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Posted: Monday, Feb 6 2012, 00:41
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This is sound familiar to me.... well good luck!

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Posted: Monday, Feb 6 2012, 00:52
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This seems very well organized, sounds like a lot of fun! I'll try this out smile.gif
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Posted: Monday, Feb 6 2012, 01:25
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QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Monday, Feb 6 2012, 00:41)
This is sound familiar to me.... well good luck!

Yes, you inspired me to do missions, sorry if my post is very similar to yours.
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Posted: Monday, Feb 6 2012, 02:38
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Gangster theme seems to be the most popular this day huh ? I'm going to make a gangster mission pack too then !
Anyway,Goodluck ! biggrin.gif
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QUOTE (Destructor24 @ Monday, Feb 6 2012, 10:25)
QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Monday, Feb 6 2012, 00:41)
This is sound familiar to me.... well good luck!

Yes, you inspired me to do missions, sorry if my post is very similar to yours.

It's not just similar, it's copied from Proyect's topic. I even thought you're multi-accounting before I saw Proyect's post.
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QUOTE (SatournFan @ Monday, Feb 6 2012, 06:20)
QUOTE (Destructor24 @ Monday, Feb 6 2012, 10:25)
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This is sound familiar to me.... well good luck!

Yes, you inspired me to do missions, sorry if my post is very similar to yours.

It's not just similar, it's copied from Proyect's topic. I even thought you're multi-accounting before I saw Proyect's post.

Destrutor24 is my friend of real life....... why i have to create another user and do it the same post?
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Posted: Monday, Feb 6 2012, 16:27
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SF what's happening with you man.
I only see negative posts of you lately...
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QUOTE (SatournFan @ Monday, Feb 6 2012, 06:20)
QUOTE (Destructor24 @ Monday, Feb 6 2012, 10:25)
QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Monday, Feb 6 2012, 00:41)
This is sound familiar to me.... well good luck!

Yes, you inspired me to do missions, sorry if my post is very similar to yours.

It's not just similar, it's copied from Proyect's topic. I even thought you're multi-accounting before I saw Proyect's post.

Of course not, TheXProyect is my friend in real life. I'm not very fan of GTA, but play his missions made ​​me want to do mine. And yes, my post is identical to him, but because I take as a guide as I am new and had never been on a forum before.
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So we can take it as a fan's view of how things would've gone? Awesome!
It's not really stealing if the creator of the series gives you permission. I got to admit, I thought Proyect was multi-accounting as well since he was mentioned in the credits for no reason & he kept on looking over the thread, but I guess I was wrong smile.gif
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QUOTE (ThaBoY @ Tuesday, Feb 7 2012, 01:27)
SF what's happening with you man.
I only see negative posts of you lately...

Hey, if you were on my place, you'd get it suspicious too.
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Uploaded new mission, "Rescuing a colleague"

It took me time to do it, is rather short, but I hope you like it.
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Ohh, sorry man.
I forgot your feedback.

Played the 1st mission (some time ago)

You need to use some more animations in your cutscenes, I only saw the "walk" animation.

Where did that car come from ??żż mercie_blink.gif

Good use of different actors. You only used the Ballas but the most of them were nicely arranged, so no twins

You should use a checkpoint when we need to enter the house with Ballas in it. I was confused when there was no checkpoint.

Nice gunfight. The actors have normal health. But turning the headshot off is better IMO, cuz it makes the mission a bit harder. But it isn't necassery.

Overall, this a good first mission. It's an easy one but it's still a good mission. Just improve the animations and be a bit more clear about where we need to go.

So keep it up, and don't give up biggrin.gif - Arejai
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QUOTE (ThaBoY @ Saturday, Feb 11 2012, 23:47)
Ohh, sorry man.
I forgot your feedback.

Played the 1st mission (some time ago)

You need to use some more animations in your cutscenes, I only saw the "walk" animation.

Where did that car come from ??żż mercie_blink.gif

Good use of different actors. You only used the Ballas but the most of them were nicely arranged, so no twins

You should use a checkpoint when we need to enter the house with Ballas in it. I was confused when there was no checkpoint.

Nice gunfight. The actors have normal health. But turning the headshot off is better IMO, cuz it makes the mission a bit harder. But it isn't necassery.

Overall, this a good first mission. It's an easy one but it's still a good mission. Just improve the animations and be a bit more clear about where we need to go.

So keep it up, and don't give up biggrin.gif - Arejai

Thanks, I'm glad you played my mission biggrin.gif

It is true, I only use the "walk" animation, But that's because I'm new, I'm still learning.

I'm going to take account of the cars appear from nowhere xD

And I'll try to fix the checkpoints when you have to enter confined spaces.

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Sorry, but I do not think I will continue doing missions. There is something I call a lot of attention, and it bores me. Maybe in a future re-do them, but not assure anything. Thank you all, and goodbye.
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keep it up this
i love gangster stories
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You do realise that he cancelled this mission pack, right?
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