[GTAIndonesia]

GTAIndonesia presents


Story
James Trevor and his brother, Chris Trevor are starting a new life at Las Venturas
To get away from problems at Liberty City
at Las Venturas, things are fine
until they got involved with Drugs, money, Mafia......

Characters: Allies


James Trevor
A 29 year-old man from Liberty City, he has a brother, Chris, they both came to Las Venturas to start a new chapter of their life

Chris Trevor
James brother, a bit annoying and clumsy, just can't get enough of things.

Marcus "Mark" Jackson
James' new best friend, met during a deal, and became good friens after

Kate
Chris' girlfriend, already dated for 5 years.

Characters: Enemies


Martinez and Sanchez
2 dealers that wanted to get revenge on Mark because he didn't pay on time ONCE.

Rocko
Caligula's Casino manager, very harsh, and owns a small time mafia.

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Chapter One - New Beginning

This post has been edited by GTAIndonesia on Thursday, Apr 26 2012, 05:49

[NothingSpecial]

Looks promising. Good luck

[AnDReJ98]

Goodluck with this! And logo looks cool!

[GTAIndonesia]

Some pics, still in progress


^In action with Mark

[GTAIndonesia]

Chapter one uploaded!

It's recomended after "The Damned Deal" Go to Chris first.

[AnDReJ98]

Played the storyline!
Sorry man,but this hasn't been very good. Almost every mission started automatic 1 ,and in every mission was just to drive somewhere and kill someone... 2
I like when's there action and please while you making missions use more options from DYOM. (Many people say: there's no much options,but they are wrong. Coz they usually use checkpoint and killing people).
Anyway,for some designers,i think if they play this,they should ask you how did you get LC and LC airport! 1
I expect Chapter 2 very better,then i'll give you rating. Now,rating should looks like this:

1 + 2 =
1 =

= 1.5/5

Anyway goodluck!

This post has been edited by AnDReJ98 on Thursday, Apr 26 2012, 12:31

[GTAIndonesia]

Hey, that's embarrassing man, it is the Introductory missions anyway....

I'll work on chapter two better

LC Was made with the LC Interior in Sain't Marks Bistro mission.
The airport is an unused interior near the place where he said "After ive years on East Coast, it was time to go home" And used when he gets in the cab

[AnDReJ98]

Don't worry man. Anyway thanks for the interiors. Yeah those are intruduction missions
But i expected higger quality with your missions,coz you're 2011 designer. Anyway sorry,hope next will be better!

[GTAIndonesia]

Anyway the Mission starting each other is a bug.

[AnDReJ98]

Yeah! Do you know that in DYOM Support,everytime when someone requesting help from other people about starting automatic,on the end that topic gone...
Anyhow for me. Automatic bug doesn't work (I had problem before). Now i don't have it,and i sent it as start autorun,and everything is ok.

[GTAIndonesia]

Sorry because there has been no updates, But chapter 2 is on it's way.