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I'm so glad to see this series win back to back medals. You really deserve this Mokrie, thank you for the great entertainment that you've provided us so far and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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QUOTE (Lightning Strike @ Saturday, May 12 2012, 17:15)
I'm so glad to see this series win back to back medals. You really deserve this Mokrie, thank you for the great entertainment that you've provided us so far and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Thank you and everyone else who voted. I won by 33 votes (or thereabouts). Last year was by 2 or 4.
It really feels great to have people vote for my story, and for BOTH to win feels even better. I will strife to make parts two and three as best I can. I will try to entertain you, make you wonder, surprise and to move you.
Again thank you so much, but a special thank you to Mati, who also won an award for life's price - the character of Rami came from his idea and that concept.

Thank you again, for reading, for voting and for being part of the award.
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AS A THANK YOU FOR THE AWARD. HERE'S TWO CHAPTERS!!

Chapter Forteen – Let the Voting Commence


Karen had found something out from her boss apparently. Luis sat next to Johnny as they listened to the explanation.
“Our friends our making a pick up. We’ll look through the evidence you picked up later, but I want this pick up stopped.”
“What is it?” Johnny asked.
“They’re picking up some documents or something. My boss isn’t letting me in on all the intricate details, at least on the operational side of things. But the document in question is an intelligence report. I don’t know what of, but it’s something I want.”
“Give us some answers.” Luis thought out loud.
“Exactly. They’re planning something. They’ve been involved with the recent rise of crime – I suspect they’ve been setting the gangs up. But there’s more to it. We need to find out what, and this document will help.”
“So just grab it?”
“Pretty much. Locate the contact and grab the document.”
“What if the pickup’s done before we reach the guy?” Johnny asked.
“Then you follow the guys picking it up, and recover it.”
“Kill them?” Luis had a serious look on his face.
Karen shook her head. “I’d prefer not. We just want the document.” She paused. “But if you have to…”
Johnny and Luis nodded.

The contact was an average looking man in a suit. He sat at an outside café drinking a coffee.
Luis pointed him out to Johnny from in the car.
“So what, we just walk up to him and point a gun in his face?”
Luis nodded. “Any sign of the bad guys?”
Johnny looked around, seeing dozens of men and women in suits. They were in the southern area of Algonquin, with hundreds of offices surrounding them. And it was lunch time.
“Could be any one of them.”
“We better do this quick.” Luis looked at the man drinking coffee. “That’s definitely him.”
Johnny nodded. “Looks like the photo.”
“Let’s go.”

Rami had seated himself on the table next to the contact, and set his briefcase down next to the contact’s. He’d ordered a Panini and began to read the paper.

Niko was inside the café and looked out, waiting for Rami’s cue. Rami finished his lunch and threw the napkin theatrically to the plate.
Niko walked out of the café, putting his coffee cup in the bin by the door. Outside he walked unsure of himself, a map in his hand. He paused by the contact’s table, and looked around.

“I think it’s happening.” Luis said to Johnny as they walked toward the café. They watched as the man spoke with the contact. The seated man pointed as he replied, and Niko moved around to try to look in the direction he was being shown.

Rami stood casually and picked up the briefcase. He allowed his eyes to look down – not moving his head – to see the brass clasps of the case. He walked away with no hesitation and moved down the street.

“Wait a minute.” Luis said. “I think that guy just took the wrong brief… Oh sh*t, we missed it.”
“What man?”
“The one in the beige suit. Walking toward the – ”
“Oh I see him.”
“You stay on the map-man. I’ll get the other guy.”

Niko thanked the man and adjusted his baseball cap. He was dressed like a tourist – complete with a rucksack which held a change of clothes in case he needed them. He walked off, looking intermittently at his map and the city.
Luis was following the man in the beige suit who seemed oblivious to him. He reached into his coat pocket and touched his .44 pistol, wondering where to take the man…

Niko wasn’t bothered about his tail. He knew who it was and the temptation was there to turn and fight, but he had to just walk on.

Rami was almost on autopilot. The stupid spic was walking arrogantly, thinking he could play this game. Well, Cabrón think you can step up to the big boys? Bring it on.

Rami turned and headed across the road blending with the crowd. Luis followed but rushed across the road. A minivan sounded its horn as it came to a sudden, noisy stop. Luis turned to see the minivan’s driver lean out of the window and offer a typical Liberty City four-letter word insult.

Rami didn’t look round. He heard the traffic through the crowd, and used the distraction to duck into the subway station.

Luis hurried to the sidewalk and looked around.
Mierda.” He couldn’t see the man he was following. But he saw the subway entrance and rushed down there.
Rami had pulled a fast one. He exited the far side of the subway station and hailed a cab. Luis reached the platform as Rami was two blocks away, laughing to himself.
Niko still had the biker behind him, only – judging by the reflection in the shop window – he was becoming more and more annoyed. Niko decided to use that. He rounded a corner and sprinted, heading down some steps to a backstreet car park. An elbow to a car window later and the Serbian was accelerating into the Liberty City traffic.

Johnny reached the steps and looked around. He shouted a curse that resulted in a dozen looks.

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PART TWO: REVELATIONS


Chapter One – Funding an Army


“Looking through the things you got from Ramirez’s house,” Karen said in the old casino, “I’ve decided we need more support.”
“The brothers not enough?” Johnny said with a wave aimed to encompass the Remnants MC.
Karen shook her head. “If sh*t hits the fan, and we have to commit men to some sort of combat, then no. The bikers are capable of shooting other bikers, sure, but we’re talking about professionally trained mercenaries. You fight fire with fire.”
“You’d be surprised. The Lost could bring the fight to anyone, and many of these boys were in The Lost. I wouldn’t underestimate bikers.”
“Johnny think about it. Would you pit your bikers up against Navy SEALS?” Johnny blinked then shook his head. “Exactly. For gang activities and things like that, they’d work, yeah…”
“Why didn’t you just resurrect The Lost?” Michael asked. “Why make a whole new club?”
Johnny sighed. “The lost were important to me. You never understood that, Mike, but it was like a family. Then when all that sh*t with Billy and Brian, the so-called brotherhood turned on itself. It broke down – the one thing I believed in consumed itself with petty bickering and power struggles. That broke down, the whole thing fell apart, and I left the city. I left it all behind me, I can’t go back to that. I miss the MC, yeah, but The Lost stands for nothing now. So we start a new one, with the remnants of The Lost. Start afresh.” Johnny shrugged. “Perhaps this time things will be different. Maybe it’ll last, I don’t know.”
“I think the name’s sh*t, bro.” Luis added lightly. “I’d have called it Phoenix Motorcycle Club. Y’know, rise out of the ashes? What about The Found Motorcycle –”
“Ok, that’s enough. I need to meet with a contact to try to get some mercenaries to come on our side. With Rodriguez on board with the – let’s say the opposition – they now have a plethora of weapons and as many of Rodriguez’s men as the arms dealer feels necessary. We need to match that.”
“So we’re hiring mercs.” Michael said by way of confirmation.
“Yeah.”
“How we gonna pay them?” Luis’s question turned some heads.
“We have to get some money.”
“Do you have a plan for that?”
“I sort of do. We have a few options. Firstly you each have ways of making money, right? Johnny, you used to race didn’t you? That’s an assumption on my part but I know the bikers in this city have regular races.”
“Yeah…”
“And Luis, you used to race too. And do cage fighting.”
“F*ck that, bro, I aint doing the fighting again. I’ve stopped that, it’s too…”
“Option two is to rob a bank or something.”
“Forget that.” Michael offered. “This day and age you won’t be away with it.”
“Not necessarily true.” Karen countered. “Remember the big robbery two years ago?” She turned to Luis who nodded. How could he forget? Seeing that have-a-go-hero get shot right in front of him. “One of the men who did that is working against us. I believe you had a fight with him, Johnny.”
Johnny blinked. Him? “Well he certainly gets around…”
Karen shrugged, her face looking like she wanted to say more. Luis, the lady’s man, saw something in her face but didn’t pursue it.
“So what we just walk in and rob the place?”
Luis had turned away slightly and was staring into nothingness.
“Get some brothers, go in, hold the place up… We’ll need some explosives – we can’t just pick the lock on a vault.”
“Be better to hit smaller places – less security – but I can’t say I’m happy robbing a bank…”
“Smaller places are probably a safer bet.” Karen said, ignoring Michael’s grievance. “Less security. Hit a bigger place the cops will be all over it. I’d like to avoid that.”
Luis, who’d been silently staring through the walls, suddenly turned. “I think I got an idea.” All eyes turned to him. “We need money – I think I can get it.”
“How?” Karen voiced everyone’s thoughts.
“I know someone who’s got the money. If I can convince him to lend it…”
“No.” Karen protested. “We can not pay it back. At all.” She shook her head. “If you get the money it won’t be a loan.”
Luis nodded. “Maybe we can earn it.” Karen frowned. “Favor for a favor.”
Karen chewed on that for a minute. “Who is it.”
“Yusuf Amir. He’s certainly got the bread,”
“Son of a prince or something isn’t he?”
“Something like that.”
“Ok. I don’t think he’s connected with any of this. Go convince him.”
Luis nodded.
Luis had called Yusuf and was relieved to find out the man was in the country. They met at Yusuf’s penthouse.
“Luis! How’s it going my nigga?”
Luis exhaled. “Look, bro I’ve said about that before. It aint cool.”
Yusuf held his hands up. “Whatever homie! What you need?”
“Money, Yusuf. I need money.”
The Arab moved into a drawer and pulled out a wad of cash. He under-armed it to Luis who fumbled the catch.
“This is cool bro, but it aint enough.”
Yusuf sat on his couch, raising one leg over the other. “How much do you need?”
Luis said the amount that Karen had decided on. Yusuf whistled. “I can’t just give you that, Luis!”
“Fair enough, bro. What about a favor then?”
Yusuf stood and walked to the windows. “I tell you what. You get something for me, I’ll give you all the money you need.”
Luis thought that sounded reasonable. “Alright bro. What you need?”
“A Hydra, niggah!”
“A what?”
“Hydra. It’s a VTOL.”
“What the f*ck’s that, some kind of drug bro?”
“It’s a motherf*cking jet plane. Vertical Take Off and Landing.”
“A Jet? Like a fighter jet?”
Yusuf nodded. “f*ck yeah homie.”
“Where the f*ck is that then?”
Yusuf smiled mischievously. “An army base.”
“F*ck that.”
Yusuf shrugged. “That’s my deal, bro.”
Luis sat and pondered that. After a minute he said, “Alright, bro. Where is it and how do I get in without being shot?”
Yusuf smiled. “Go find a Patriot. Take it to a Transfender or some place like that. Get it done up to look like an army truck, then drive to the base up north.”
“Just drive in, steal the jet and leave?”
“You could shoot your way in if you want, but I don’t think you’d be too successful. Dress like a soldier, drive your army truck in, who will stop you?”
“And once I steal the jet, then what. Actually bro, how the f*ck do I fly the jet? I got a helicopter license, not a jet license.”
Yusuf went back into his drawer and came out with an iFruit pad. “The internet my niggah!”
Luis shook his head.

“Mercenaries.” Rami said the word as if it was a curse. “Who is this guy then, the king of mercs?”
Niko shrugged from behind the wheel. “What are we then?”
Rami cocked his head with a nod of his shoulder. “The question that should be asked is why is this mercenary coming to Liberty now. He’s not working with us, he’s arriving in the middle of this so…”
“Working against us?”
“That’s what he says.”
“You don’t believe that?”
“That’s missing the point, Niko. We’re working for one goal–”
“And a paycheck.”
“And that – it stands to reason that people will be working to a goal on the other side of the coin to ours.”
Niko shrugged. “Well let’s just tail him like we’re supposed to and see who he goes to.”
“That’s the plan.”

They arrived at the airport – so many people land here to start their life of crime, Rami thought – himself included – but they didn’t consider how easy it was to be found out that way.
The mercenary looked like any other. He wore a casual leather jacket, a shirt and a pair of jeans. He walked out of the terminal and hailed a cab.
“Here we go.” Rami said into his earpiece. They’d hedged their bets on this one, and both selected different vehicles. Niko sat in a Ruiner, parked a little way out from the airport. Rami, in the Washington, began to tail the taxi. He made a note of the car’s license plate and informed Niko of it. Every turn the cab made the Israeli reported to his partner, who followed a long way back.
Rami followed the cab two car lengths behind it as Niko drove a street away. When it was time for the change over, Niko took the turn and sped toward the correct street. He pulled out just after the target cab passed, and Rami confirmed Niko’s positioning. Rami then turned off of the road.
Niko followed for the next half-dozen blocks and the second switchover was made just before the bridge to Algonquin. Rami, now in a new – stolen – Peyote, had caught up and took over tailing duties. Niko moved lanes and overtook the target. By the time they reached Algonquin, Niko had switched cars and began following on an adjacent street.

The leapfrog style of tailing continued to a store in Bohan. The mercenary didn’t even change cabs.
Complacency, Rami assumed.
He was wrong. The target walked one block to Frankfurt high station.
“He’s taking the train.” Rami said into his headset. Heading back to Algonquin, next stop… Frankfurt high.”
Niko simply had to drive quickly now. The target wouldn’t see him, so he didn’t worry about being seen. He’d changed cars to a Sabre – a decent little car, despite its mediocre appearance – and sped through the city following Rami’s instructions.

Rami sat on the train of course, at the far end of the carriage to their mark. Not once did the Israeli look directly at the mercenary.

The target transferred at Easton, and Rami expertly followed. Finally the mercenary returned to street level and took another cab. Niko had done well keeping up and Rami rapped off the license plate as he hailed a cab of his own.

Niko saw the cab immediately – in fact he saw the target leave the station. He’d raced ahead and now followed in routine fashion. Rami had his cab go a block away where he’d collect a new car.

Niko was starting to get annoyed. Finally the target reached his hotel and, as Niko drove past, he saw him enter. Rami, once caught up, entered the hotel in time to see the target hit the button for an elevator.
“We got him.”

Getting the clothes was the easy bit. The fancy-dress shop had taken care of most of it, and Luis had bought the camouflaged army outfit with no problem. Finding the Patriot was almost as easy; Luis picked on up from a car park near the university.
The downside was paying for the vehicular modifications. When he was done, the vehicle had been converted to look like an army truck. The back was slanted, and the entire vehicle had been colored in military green. Everything looked the part.
But Luis was worried. He began doubting the plausibility of his mission. Firstly getting in – wouldn’t he need a form of ID.
Luckily Yusuf had thought of that, and had supplied a false ID card. As Luis approached the army base he found himself questioning the likely hood of this working.

He saw the facility ahead. Men in combat fatigues walked around the parameter, and before he knew it, he was passing the armed watch towers. Then he was there.
His heart was beating fast now and he felt himself sweating under the costume. He forced himself to take a deep breath as he turned off of the road.

The gate was down and a female soldier appeared to look at the ID. Luis showed it having thought to note the details written on it. His name was Javier De Zeuuw. A strange name he felt but there it was.
The soldier was actually hot. She must have been barely twenty. Likely still in training or something, Luis supposed. It took some self control to resist hitting on her, and he didn’t want to do anything to be remembered. He also found it hard to resist pulling his cap down further over his face.
The soldier looked at the ID and nodded. She handed the card back a moment later and the gate was opened.

Luis wanted to laugh but he held it in. He drove the Patriot onto the military base and knew he was now in the lion’s den. He had to be careful.
Driving around wasn’t as hard as he thought. The place was huge, with a lot of open space. He passed a pair of soldiers but apart from that he came no close than thirty yards or so to anyone else. Finally he parked near the area with the helicopters and hangers. It occurred to him that this was an air force base, not an army base, but that didn’t matter much did it?

Luis began to walk toward the hangers and within a minute he saw the Hydra. No one looked at him, as he ‘looked like he belonged” but it felt like forever as he approached the Hydra.

Finally he got there and climbed aboard, hoping the things he read online would allow him to fly it.
It took a few prods at the controls to start the engines and he gripped the controls. He took a deep breath then activated the throttle.

For Luis it was a strange sensation. He expected the jet to move forward, but it began its flight like a helicopter. He watched the military base fall away and, once he was high enough that he wasn’t going to crash, he activated horizontal flight, worried he was going to hit eject by mistake.
The take off was slow and unsteady. Luis’s true jet flight took him away from the base but the radar in front of him informed him that two more jets were now in the air. He knew he had to lose these. He climbed high.

The other two Hydras were controlled by more skilled pilots. They caught up and Luis got a warning shot. He ignored it and reached for his phone.
“Yusuf!” Luis shouted. He just about heard the reply over the noise of the jet.
“Luis! You get it?”
“Yeah but I got two after me.”
“Where are you?”
“Heading to the city.”
“I wouldn’t. Lose the jets first.”
“How the f*ck am I going to do that?”
“Shoot them.”
“How!?”
Yusuf, unheard to Luis, scrambled around for his Fruitpad. He then began listing the controls of the jet, telling Luis what button to press.

The result was a shaky arched turn, and Luis released two missiles that automatically homed in on their target. The Hydra didn’t see it coming and exploded in a bright orange and blue fireball.
One down.
But then, from behind him, the other Hydra fired. Luis panicked and shouted out to Yusuf who, after a second told Luis exactly what to press.
Luis, thanking the hands free kit he’d hurriedly put on, felt the jet jolt as the countermeasures were released. Luis then dove and the radar reported that the missile had been fooled by the countermeasures.

Luis was starting to get the hang of it. He’d looped down and under, managing to get behind the remaining Jet. He unleashed his onboard machinegun.
The Hydra wobbled then dove, black smoke coming from its rear. Luis climbed and turned, flying away, hoping the jet was sufficiently crippled.

And it was. Now Luis headed back toward the city. Yusuf advised he took nap-of-earth flight, and Luis hated it. He flew under the bridges on the Humbolt at over two hundred miles per hour, knowing one tiny error would end his life. Finally though, he climbed and found the helipad in southern Algonquin. He landed on his second attempt, having missed the building on the first, and finally, to a blissful relief, Luis’s feet touched something more solid.
“You did it!” Yusuf was on the rooftop with half a dozen men who immediately began to scurry around the jet. Luis noticed a hum from beside him, and saw a huge square machine.
“What the f*ck’s that?”
“Scrambler niggah! The jet’s got a transponder on it. We’re going to disable it then take it down there.” Yusuf pointed to the sea and on the horizon was a large yacht.
“Right. Well that was f*cking insane, bro.”
“You loved it.”
Luis laughed. “I didn’t love being shot at by the f*cking army.”
“But, my niggah…” Yusuf bent down and came up with a silver briefcase He opened it and revealed the money stuffed into little piles inside. “Was it worth it?”
Luis took the case. “I hope so.” He said with a shake of the head.
Yusuf laughed. “If you ever want to borrow it….”
“Are you gonna paint it gold?” Luis was too wired to laugh at his own joke.
“That’s not a bad idea, Luis.” Yusuf smiled.
“You’re a crazy mother*cker, Yus’”
“Haha, that I am!”
Luis headed for the elevator, still shaking his head by the time he reached the street.

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Why is it that whenever I finish reading one of your chapters I just want more? it's in no way surprising that this won "story of the year". Well done. On a side note can we have another annual award contest ? it means we get more chapters biggrin.gif.
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It's good to see Yusuf's name pop up and a VTOL, you,ve been playing to much Saint Row The Third haven't you. Well done Moc
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QUOTE (billy james @ Sunday, May 13 2012, 10:04)
It's good to see Yusuf's name pop up and a VTOL, you,ve been playing to much Saint Row The Third haven't you. Well done Moc

Well the VTOL was in San andreas remember - the Hydra. I'm not adding anything major that's not in a GTA game tounge.gif

@Lightning Strike Thanks. I'll add a new chapter in the next few days. I've always said as a rule of thumb, the more replies i get, the quicker chapters come. Usually i try to avoid double posting (previous chapter was an exception as i wanted to say thanks tounge.gif ).

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I like it. I'm certainly not caught up and I find fan fiction hard to read at times but this is a ctually very good. Kudos my man biggrin.gif
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Chapter two – Right Under Your Nose


Niko and Rami had spent a day keeping surveillance on the mercenary that worried their boss so.
“This can’t be a coincidence. He’s been running operations in Africa for the last year. For him to come back, here of all places, now of all times…” Their boss had shaken his head. Niko offered a suggestion; perhaps he was returning to live here. No, their boss had said, if he was adopting residence he would already have his home purchased. He was here for work.
And so it was that Niko and Rami had relieved the duo they looked upon as the ‘B’ team, and continued surveillance for another day. Heavy rain ensued, to Rami’s relief. No one would notice of men sitting in cars. A hot day, sitting in the car may be noticed, but when one is running for shelter, one’s mind is not looking at cars. And even if they were, the sheet of precipitation in the air and speckled rain on the windows did well to hide them.
With the rain still as heavy, the contact appeared, ducking straight into a cab. They almost missed him.
Africa dulled your tradecraft. Rami thought. The man had tried too hard to not look like he was rushing into the cab. He was like a bad actor. That made him stand out.
Niko put his car in gear and they followed, using the same technique as before.
The man was complacent. That much was obvious. A tail might have been easier to spot in Africa, in the backwards towns of war-torn, poverty riddled countries, but here, in Liberty City… The cab led them straight to Meadows Park.
Not a bad choice of venue, Rami observed. The rain had meant the park was mostly empty. There was the odd hardcore jogger, out against better judgment, and they saw one man walking a dog. The spot was good for the lack of cover, though Niko had a long range sniper, and his spot on the building to the west, north of the Monoglobe, offered him a decent view. Rami had parked his car on the road and used a monocular to see through the trees. His vision wasn’t fully clear.
“Where you suppose his backup men are staying?” Niko wondered aloud.
Rami replied with an unseen shrug. “Some cheap hotel probably. They would have made their own way here, and they’ll make their own way back. They’re not our concern though, disregard them.”
Luis drove the first car. Johnny was in the third. Karen drove in the middle, and members of The Lost filled the remaining seats. They parked their cars by the State Pavilion Towers. Karen, wearing a rain coat over a duffel coat, got out of the car and adjusted the rain hat that completed her ensemble. She didn’t look up, or around. Instead she was escorted by Luis and Johnny, who also worse clothes that hid their identity while looking like ways to keep themselves dry.

The primary subject – he was not yet a target, as they wanted to find out who he was meeting with – stood with a smart coat and an umbrella. Rami imagined him with a Trilby and a Tommy-gun. That thought made him smile. Both men watched as the secondary target began to talk.
“You got a visual ID on secondary?” Rami asked.
“No.” Niko’s reply was simple. “He’s got his hat pulled down low, and that thick jacket….” Rami’s view was obstructed. “Anything on the other men?”
“Negative. We’ll have to attempt a tail.”
“Split off?”
“No other option.”
“Ok. I’ll take the Primary, the mercenary.”
“Copy that, Niko. I’m on our mysterious Secondary.”

Karen resisted the urge to laugh. Actually she was too nervous to. She knew this mercenary… kind of. He’d done some work when she first joined the paper company. Those were days she’d rather forget, and it was only due to not having much else, after entrapping Niko Bellic that she stayed on. Her boss wasn’t that bad a guy really. He didn’t like Niko but after staying on, things were different for Karen. She was treated like more a professional and handled passive intelligence gathering. In short, she was the person who did the boring jobs, like watching an apartment for six days. She was kept separate to Niko, who she didn’t even think knew she still worked there.
But it was today’s irony that tickled her. Here she was, hiding from people, in a bright yellow raincoat. She couldn’t be any more conspicuous, but the weather was almost a gift from God, whose existence she had often questioned.
She spoke matter-of-factly – the way these kinds of men did. The man appreciated it, but he was a professional.

“Secondary subject is handing over a briefcase.” Rami observed.
Niko nodded before realizing Rami would need a vocal reply. “I confirm that.” The mercenary opened it. “Primary has opened case. Looks like…. Yes, it’s money.”
“Recruitment.” Rami noted.

The mercenary snapped the case shut before the money could get wet. He’d checked the piles and made sure it was all there. Seeing no shredded phone books, he shook Karen’s hand. She nodded, wondering if the man cared where the money came from, or if Yusuf Amir cared where it went.
“Meeting’s breaking up by the looks of it.” Niko said. A moment later Rami agreed.
Luis and Johnny led Karen to the cars.
“Luis.” She said without turning her head. “I want you driving my car.”
Luis frowned but shrugged with a single shoulder. “If you want, but why?”
“Paranoia I hope.”
“You want Johnny riding shotgun?”
Karen had done her research and knew how dangerous Johnny was with guns. She nodded and Johnny, who was mere feet away, spoke his acknowledgement.

“Niko, I hope you’re moving.” Rami said.
Niko was. He had to scramble to his car, parked on Savannah Avenue, hoping that Rami could hang around long enough to advise him on the Primary Subject’s direction.
“Change of plan, Niko. Primary subject is coming my way. Secondary is heading west. Three car convoy.”
“Got it.” Niko said as he reached the road. He turned his head north to see the cars exit Walton Lane. They turned north too.
Rami had parked his car in accordance to the direction of the traffic. That meant he was facing south, and the mercenary had turned south. He already had his engine on and decided for a bit of boldness. He pulled out in front of the mercenary – now riding with one of his men – and actually led them to the junction on Tudor street. He carried on south on Cleves, as did the mercenary. They followed him to Parr street, where Rami turned, heading west. The target carried on and, in his mirrors, he saw them turn west also.
He rejoined them on Howard Street and now followed them, two cars behind. He would continue to follow them along Huntingdon Street and over the Algonquin Bridge.
Niko had to play catch up, and gunned his engine. The secondary subject was clever. Their little convoy turned onto the expressway, backtracking. Niko followed them without incident to the airport. He saw them pull into the multistory car park, but he had to go round to avoid being detected. He parked by the train terminal and kept an eye on the multistory car park. If they moved on foot to the train station or airport terminal, he’d see them. He also had the car park exit covered.
No one left on foot. Instead the same three cars exited the multistory and headed to the loop. Niko moved to follow.

The worst possible thing happened. Well maybe not the worst, but it was pretty bad. The cars split up. Two took the turn for the Algonquin-Dukes Expressway and Niko didn’t notice the third peel off back onto the loop until it was too late. He was already in the underpass.
He swore. It was an obvious ploy, but it was obvious both ways. Either the subject had split from the convoy in the hope to lose any tails in the airport traffic, or it was a decoy. Both were obvious tactics, and something in his mind told Niko that it was too obvious. Niko stuck with the middle car and the remaining convoy, not that he had much choice.
Then it happened again. The middle car turned off of the expressway. Niko made an impulsive decision. If the first was a decoy, this decoy would be ignored by any tails, so that told him that the subject was trying to be smart.
But if the first wasn’t a decoy, then there’d be no reason for them to split…
Niko turned off.

As it happened, the car took left turn and merged with the southbound traffic on the Broker-Dukes Expressway. Niko followed them over the Broker Bridge where they pulled over in Chinatown. Four men got out and immediately Niko sighed in annoyance.

Luis, Karen and Johnny were, in fact, in none of the three cars. They’d changed cars in the car park and, after a ten minute wait, they set off. It was Luis’s idea actually. He wasn’t as dumb as he seemed.

Rami had more luck though. He tracked the mercenary back to the original hotel. They still had one lead.

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Chapter Three – Between a Rock and a Hard Place


Karen had sent Luis and Johnny on a crash course in countersurveillance tactics. Johnny had hated it. His life had been direct. If someone was f*cking with you, your turned around and f*cked with them. Luis saw the advantage in the training though, but he didn’t particularly like it either. He just wanted to be back at Marionette, working the ‘floor and checking out the Bellezas.
And now they had to plant something on someone. Neither man understood why, but there it was. The target – the way that strange guy who’d ‘trained’ them spoke – was sitting at a café, oblivious to the two men, with his jacket slung over the chair across from him – so, Luis assumed, he could keep an eye on it.

Luis approached and nodded to get the man’s attention. “Oye, Hermano.” He said as he reached the table. Johnny saw the man tense. “Me pueden ayudar por favor?”
The man shook his head, his face twisted in confusion. “I’m sorry, what?”
Estoy perdido - Yo no soy de por aquí. Estoy en busca de la felicidad isla.
“I’m sorry I don’t speak… Me no comprende…”
Luis got the map out – something he’d seen one of the ‘bad guys’ do. “Err..” He said, holding the map over the table, “Happy Island?” He pointed at the map then shrugged. “¿Dónde estoy ahora?
The subject was about to say something – probably saying he didn’t speak Spanish – when Johnny bumped in to Luis. He stumbled and, hidden by the map, dropped the smart phone into the man’s jacket pocket.
Oye imbécil, mira por donde vas!” Luis said in an annoyed tone.
“f*ck off, amigo.” Johnny replied, disappearing into the building. Luis turned to the man at the table and shrugged, holding his arms out in a helpless gesture.
“Happiness Island?” The man asked, ignorantly raising his voice as many people do when talking to foreigners.
Luis nodded. “Si! ¿Dónde…?”
The man pointed behind him. “South!”
“South…Sur?
“Yeah, knock yourself out. Now f*ck off.”
“Oye, no hay necesidad de tener un coño…”
“Yeah?” The man said, reaching down to his crotch. “Right here pal.”
Luis walked off.

Niko and Rami had little rest. Their boss had wasted no time sending them back to the mercenary’s hotel. This time though, they were to enter the mercenary’s hotel room. The first half of the battle was finding out which room.
Rami took care of this. The men approached the desk clerk, and Rami pulled out a false LCPD badge. He showed it to the clerk who swallowed hard.
“What’s the matter boy?” Rami said, expertly dropping all hints of accent from his already Americanized voice. Even Niko had lost some of his accent. He remembered when Brucie came back from a business trip with his brother – a man whose existence he’d kept hidden from Niko for months – the bodybuilder had picked up a little accent to go with his tan.
“Nothing.” The clerk was young. Early twenties, maybe late teens.
“You sure.” Rami leant in, his stare as hard as his voice. “Not a stoner are you, son?” The boy flinched. “Oh you are aren’t you?”
Good cop, bad cop, Niko realized. He stepped in, trying his own American accent. “Give him a break, will ya? He’s just a kid. Haven’t we got bigger fish to fry?”
Rami nodded, mentally smiling at Niko’s improvisation. He went with it. “Alright. Listen kid, don’t sweat it. We’re looking for someone who’s staying in this hotel.” Rami showed the kid the photo he’d snapped of the target. It wasn’t a great one but good enough for the kid to recognise. “He checked in… yesterday at…” Rami looked to Niko who gave the kid the time.
The kid nodded. “I know the one. Seems like a nice guy.”
“Don’t be fooled.” Rami said with a shake of his head. “He’s not. I can’t tell you why; investigation and such and – well you watch cop shows on TV, right?”
The kid nodded. And gave the hotel room up.
“Good boy.” Rami said, walking off.
Niko leant in, a finger on his lips. “Not a word, ok? I shouldn’t tell you this but this guy’s got someone here in his pocket, so don’t say anything to anyone, ok?”
The kid nodded, scared halfway to death.

The elevator ride up was quiet. The only words exchanged were tactical ones. They reached the right floor and stepped out to see a familiar face.
The mercenary was waiting for the god-damned elevator!
Rami nodded at the subject. If Niko didn’t know him better he’d think he didn’t recognise him. The mercenary entered the elevator and, seconds later, the doors closed.
Niko opened his mouth to talk but Rami’s finger shot to his lips. He shook his head.
They reached the hotel door and checked the hallway.
Clear.
Niko, with a hand in his suit jacket, kept watch while Rami worked on the lock. They had no way of knowing if anyone was inside, so they just stepped in, guns (both with suppressers on) coming out.

The first thing they did was to scan the room. They checked the entire place and, once happy that it was clear, began their search.
Rami first checked for any measures to alert the subject to his visitors – the old clichéd spy tricks, like a hair placed on drawers, or coins left precariously on top of doors.
“There’s nothing here.” Niko said, agitated. “So much for complacency, Rami.”
The Israeli ignored him and carried on looking. While Niko looked on the desk, and in drawers, Rami was looking under the bed, and pulling the drawers out completed to look in the cavities.
“Wait a minute.” Niko said after a minute, attracted by a digital noise. Rami turned to see a cell phone on the bed.
“Careless.” He observed. Niko picked it up. Both men wore surgical latex gloves and weren’t worried about finger prints. Rami noted Niko’s eyebrow rise. “What have you got?”
“Voice mail. Just came through.”
“Go on then.”

Niko played it, placing his own phone by the earpiece to record it. Rami had moved over and leant in to hear a male voice talk about men arriving, and a date. The message ended and Niko tapped another button.
“What you just do?” Rami asked with a frown. “You didn’t delete it did you?”
“No, I set it as unread.” Niko smiled.
Nice, Rami thought, pointing for Niko to put it back on the bed.

Both men’s heads turned as one as the scraping noise came from the door. They exchanged a panicked glance. He’s back!
“Hide.” Rami whispered, scrambling under the bed. Niko saw the door move open and followed suit, welcomed by a perplexed glance from Rami. Neither man spoke, but their guns were out.

The mercenary walked in to the room and stopped, looking around.
“Where the f*ck are you, you bastard?” He said through clenched teeth. Rami’s grip tightened on his gun, but he forced himself to relax. A tense gun-grip was not a good idea.
The subject moved toward the bed then exhaled through his nose. “Gotchya.” He said.

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You've gotta love cliffhangers. So wonderfully cliched, and by their very nature you know what's going to happen.

So let's find out (It's a long one folks):

Chapter Four – Final Boarding call


Niko and Rami watched almost helplessly as the pair of feet stopped right next to the bed. Rami had his gun out, and controlled his breathing. The legs stayed still for a moment then turned and headed back to the door. They watched the door open and, seconds later, the subject was gone.
Niko breathed a heavy sigh of relief, and Rami merely holstered his pistol.
“That was close.” Niko breathed.
“Yeah. How about we…” Rami gestured out from under the bed.
“Yeah.” Niko shimmied out and stood looking around as Rami followed.
“I think we’re done here.” Rami said, now standing. “Apart from forgetting his phone, this guy still remembers some things.”
“Pretty big thing to forget though.”
Rami shrugged and moved to the door, peering through the peephole. “We’re clear.”
Niko nodded and followed the Israeli out of the room.

They returned to the office and sat in front of their boss.
“Update me.” The man said curtly.
“We recovered a voice recording.” Rami said.
“At least you got something. Any lead of the one that got away?”
“No.” Niko said, pulling his phone out. “But the message we recovered mentioned support.” He slid the phone over to their boss, and pressed play.
The men listened, even though Niko and Rami had already heard the message. After it ended their boss nodded.
“I see. Well we should address this. As I’ve said, this is too much of a coincidence. Now the mercenary’s calling in his men.” The man took a breath and thought for a moment. “Alright. Get yourselves to the airport. I’ll arrange your flights. You’ll have some gear shipped ahead of you.”
The thing that annoyed Niko was sitting around, waiting. They received a phone call telling them that the gear would be waiting for them in Los Santos. Now they simply had to wait.

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It was dusk when they landed, and they had a couple of hours until the targets’ flight was due. Even private flights sometimes had to adhere to air traffic schedules.
The targets, which belonged to a PMC associated with the mercenary waiting in Liberty City, were waiting in a private terminal lounge. Both Rami and Niko saw this as bad trade craft; each mercenary should have travelled between coasts independantly, and they shouldn’t be using the same airport, let alone the same flight. But, the Israeli had said to the Serbian, if it makes their job easier, why complain? Sometimes things did go your way.

They’d studied what material they could on the flight over, spending most of the time looking at the layout of the lounge – it was actually published in a newspaper which reported on a relatively recent refurbishment of the airport. A current photograph of the lounge was affixed also.
The trick was, they both saw at once, getting in to begin with. Once they’d collected their gear – which had been sent ahead somehow – they could hardly walk in through the main entrance. No this operation, Rami had said in observation, would have to be an extended one. First they’d need to – to use Rami’s words – penetrate the airport’s parameter - then infiltrate the terminal. All without detection, which would not only alert the mercenaries into fleeing, but bring down the wrath of anti-terrorist forces, because that’s exactly what their actions would be identified as; terrorism. After all, if one heard the words ‘attack’ and ‘airport’, what else would one think?
Collecting their gear had been the easiest and, in some ways, most stressful part so far. They had to navigate the streets of an unfamiliar city and its infamous traffic, which rivaled Liberty City’s, and locate the safe house. Luckily, their boss had supplied them with a list of safe houses and their addresses and with the aid of a sat-nav, the duo arrived on schedule.
The gear was as surprising as the safe house; that is to say not at all. The décor was cheap and boring and the most exciting item in the entire building was either the television – an old cathode ray tube – or perhaps the refrigerator. That was, of course, excluding the cache hidden inside. There were three crates of varying sizes. The first, and smallest, set on top of the pile, contained the state-of-the-art headsets that Niko didn’t really like much. They were bulky and reminded him of opticians’ apparatus, something he’d been introduced to mere months ago.
The second crate, in the middle in both size and positioning, contained their tactical suits – flexible but armored apparel that bore a strong resemblance to NOOSE SWAT gear. It was colored a dark grey – not black as many people assumed – and came complete with a balaclava and gloves and boots.
The bottom, and largest, case, contained their weapons. Both men had a primary weapon that consisted of a submachinegun – a more modern/high tech version of the P90 – and a sidearm – a pistol. Both weapons had high-end suppressers which the men attached with ease, after checking and running a quick service/clean on both weapons. They also had a few grenades – smoke and flash mainly, though each took a couple of fragmentation grenades – just in case. The final case also contained a knife, a multi-tool kit, and a mechanical lockpick.

Once both men had donned their combat gear, they drove out to the airport, their weapons and headsets stored in the trunk, jackets draped over themselves to hide their military appearance.
Niko parked a block from the Airport and they made their way to it on foot, artfully dodging any traffic in between.
They were greeted by the well known sound of jet engines, and Rami breached the chain link with ease. Within a minute they were beside the runway.
Niko was on point and, with his submachinegun in front, led Rami toward the terminal, to ‘waypoint one’, carefully keeping out of the lights and using cover where possible. In no time at all they reached the door.

Niko was worried about alarms, but Rami shook it off. Airports were busy places and certain areas weren’t alarmed. Whether it was luck, or the norm, their entry point was not alarmed and wide open. It took a while – almost fifteen minutes – but they managed to slip in unnoticed, right next to the ‘throwers’ that loaded up the luggage trolley that would service the airplanes. It was a feat in stealth and discipline, using the piles of cases, the parked caddy and other obstacles to sneak in, and they did it without being seen. Rami wondered if the baggage handlers would actually care.

They found themselves in the catacombs of the airport. As evident by the men loading and unloading the baggage trains, this was the hub for luggage, with conveyors moving in all sorts of directions. There were a lot of workers around too – all moving about like busy, but unenthusiastic, employees, many of them Latinos. Not many females though, Rami observed, wondering if the physical demands of being a handler played a factor. Probably not, he concluded; the women were all probably working roles that dealt directly with the public. Women seemed to be perceived as more hospitable and friendly than men. Rami believed that by such a shallow policy was how they’d probably function.

Either way, male or female – there was a female baggage handler – they were obstacles to be avoided. Both men knew the direction they had to move in, and the designation of the private terminal – P-3B, a designation that would mean absolutely nothing to anyone that didn’t work here.
The entire area was lit like a factory. Fluorescent lights hung high overhead, and orangey-yellow lights dotted the conveyors. There were the odd lamps on walls and pillars, as well as a myriad of LEDs on the machinery. Fortunately though, whether through economy-friendly design or happenstance, there were plenty of shadows and the complex layout only offered many hiding places.

Niko moved forward first. In a military sense, this area was heavy with civilians. That meant they were weapons-tight. They simply had to avoid any contact.
Niko took cover behind a wall, pressing his body deep into the shadows, and peeked round a corner. A set of metal steps hugged the wall and led to a catwalk which probably services the higher echelons of the conveyor system as well as providing access to the terminals. It was up they wanted to go.
Their night vision goggles were, in fact, infra-red based night vision, and gave the user a high contrast viewpoint. Human bodies stood out like proverbial sore thumbs, as did any other sources of heat. Thermal vision, the informal name was, though there were so many variants of the tool. Niko was not seeing the world in blues and oranges, but in black and white. There was a filter that added a mixture of the more common night vision in too, and that allowed Niko to see the faintest of light sources, and the basic outlines of objects.
Niko watched for any moving workers and saw his opening. He moved out and climbed the stairs, staying low and walking as quickly as he could without compromising on quietness. Luckily this area was not a quiet one, and they had some leeway in the noise they produced.
Niko reached the top of the steps and turned a corner. Ahead a man was approaching – probably thirty or forty feet away. He was carrying a large box and his face was hidden. Niko moved to the only cover available – on top of a machine control panel. He got as flat as he could and edged away from the walkway, into a soft shadow.
The worker passed, not even looking in Niko’s direction. Niko’s position was just above head height, so to be seen the man would have to just happen to look up. Like looking on a shelf.

Rami had positioned himself between a pillar and the lower end of a conveyor. He saw Niko disappear up the steps then the worker come awkwardly down. The worker walked past Rami and Niko radioed in.
“The way up’s clear.”
“Copy.” Rami acknowledged before moving up the steps.

The two converged on the catwalk and moved forward. They found themselves on another level with more conveyors and luggage elevators. Pillars littered the area with signs and fire extinguishers, as well as dolly-trolleys leaning up against them.
Rami pointed in the direction and, on the far wall under the golden glow of a service light, the access door to P-3B stood, lit up like a spotlight.

Rami now led Niko. It was the better way to play this game – leapfrog. Niko took cover out of sight while Rami moved to the next point of hiding. A moment later, Niko followed.
This repeated itself for another five minutes, and they finally found themselves on the highest catwalk, approaching door P-3B.
Niko backhanded Rami on the shoulder. The Israeli turned to see Niko pointing.
Above the door was a camera, pivoting, its single-eyed lens overlooking the area below.
“Stick to the wall. Move slowly.”
Rami took the natural lead now. He pressed his back against the wall and began side-stepping toward the door. He waiting for a moment, telling Niko to hold, then, as the camera began its rotation away from them, he moved quickly toward the door. He worked the lock in seconds and slipped inside.
“Clear in here.” His voice sounded in Niko’s ear. “Wait for the camera, then move in here.”

Niko felt insecure. Sure, he’d avoid the camera’s merciless gaze, but what of the men downstairs? If they looked up and saw a soldier – there was no other word that adequately described him – moving across the catwalk...
It didn’t bear thinking about. Instead he took a deep breath and, once the camera moved away, hurried toward the door.

Rami watched Niko enter and close the door behind him. He paused, casting a last look out over the luggage area as he shut the door, checking to see if anyone had noticed him. Rami was impressed by that.

The pair shared a nod then moved on.

The terminal was exactly what they expected. It had not changed from the photo or the layout they’d studied – both documents had been burnt. It was lit with night-lights too. Enough to see by, but also with plenty of shadows.
“This is going to fun.” Rami said, half sarcastically. In truth it would be fun. This was what they did. Sure, they’d both fare better with more social-based wet work, tailing and taking single people out, but they were also both trained for this.
In his short time working for the Mossad, Rami had dealt with some KGB operatives from Department V. Rami believed it was the Russians that coined the phrase wet affairs – Мокрые Дела – and it was likely that which gave them the reputation – in films and fiction at least – of cold hearted killers. The stereotype – or was archetype the right word? – of the Russian KGB assassin, eliminating the target with no emotion... it all came from Department V, the mokrie dela, the wet work. To wet the earth with the bane of blood, Rami had heard it explained by that old KGB man.

“How do you want to play it?” Niko asked, pulling Rami out of his mental digression. The Israeli looked down at the men waiting. Most sat reading papers, or magazines, two were engaged in a game of chess, and two more were playing cards on a seat between them. One man was doing some press-ups and a few were walking round. There was a small coffee shop at the far end, serving refreshments to alleviate the hunger pangs, or to quench a thirst. It was both too early and too late for these men to need the caffeine, so it was likely many drank the coffee just to have something to do. Two men were actually dozing, though Rami knew better than to discount them.
“Take out the stragglers first.” Rami said, noting the men walking around. Every man seemed to be in good shape, and were most likely armed. Rami wondered if the men had suppressed or unsuppressed weapons. He didn’t plan to find out, at least not the hard way.

Niko pointed at himself then to the left, where the walkway looped round to an empty cafe which stood above the terminal’s gate. The upper level encompassed each of the four – actually six, as the room was hexagonal – sides, with three stairways down, two leading down like those found in great halls, and one leading down behind the wall, providing back-stage access to the restrooms, which occupied both levels.

Rami ventured down, as Niko set his sights on a target that had wandered into the empty cafe. An easy kill Rami noted, but an important one. Like with sports, the first act had to be a good one. Goalkeepers apparently found it important to pounce on early shots, and nothing pleased them more than an easy first shot. Attacking players would, Rami imagined, want their first shot to be on target. A confidence builder? Perhaps, the Israeli though inconclusively. He was simultaneously amazed and bewildered by goalkeepers though, throwing themselves about like they do. They had to be tough and brave, leaping through the air, but also downright idiotic, perhaps crazy. Rami was unaware of the saying that all goalkeepers were crazy.

Niko crept up on the mercenary, his combat knife in hand. When he got in range, he hooked his left hand round the target’s head, cupping the mouth, and plunged the knife into the vertebrae, just below the skull. The man was dead almost instantly, and made no sound. He did not kick out, nor did he make any kind of death rattle. A truly silent kill – it was a technique that required practice but was deadly.

Rami’s was mere feet away from his first target. The man was moving through the light. He was not going to reach him before he stepped into view of the other mercenaries, so Rami took careful aim. He controlled his breathing, taking a breath and letting half out, then fired.
The man fell on the carpeted floor with very little noise. No one heard. Perhaps all the shooting they’d done in their lives had rendered them slightly deaf. Rami moved on, skirting the light and dragging the body behind a bench. He then checked his gun and moved on.

Niko had identified his next target. Immediately below him, the temptation to jump off the upper level was there. Distant, but there nonetheless. Instead Niko moved on a distance away from the target and slipped over the railing. He let himself down gently – and quietly – then crept up on the man.

Rami saw his target’s route pass ahead of him. He stood behind a large hanging sign and used his infra-red vision to track his target. The goggles had no problem seeing through the cardboard and, as the target passed, Rami stepped out.
The target’s head turned to see Rami’s left hand reach out. He grabbed the mercenary by the cheeks and thrust a hard and accurate punch to the throat.
The man sucked air in, shocked and before he could make any other sound, Rami stepped around him and grabbed him in a sleeper hold.
There was no neck break – not in the Vinewood way anyway, Rami tightened the sleeper hold and within seconds the man fell from consciousness. Then Rami tightened and held it for even longer, offering a little twist as he pulled the head upwards. There was the faintest of cracks as the spinal cord was severed. But Rami did not do the action violently, so the break was surgical. And quiet.

Out of instinct, Rami turned. He saw a mercenary approaching.
“Dave.” The man was holding a paper. “You seen this?”
Rami was already seen albeit only his shadow. Niko had turned on hearing the voice and had his gun up.
“Hold fire.” Rami breathed.

The man approached Rami, who was still in shadow. Luckily the mercenary was in a lit patch, so seeing the details of the figure was difficult.
“You get changed, brah?”
As soon as the man stepped out of the light, Rami moved forward. His knife plunged into the soft of the man’s stomach – he didn’t work out – and his hand came up to muffle any cry.
Niko nodded at Rami’s work – rather at how calm he was.
“What you...?” Niko turned and came face to face with a mercenary. The man blinked.
The man tried to yell. Niko grimaced and shot the man in the chest and face. No shout had come but the man fell onto a trash can, knocking it over.
Niko moved quickly, climbing up the wall with the use of a seat, and taking cover.
“We’re blown!” He rasped into the mike.
“Copy. Keep your head down.” Rami had already changed positions, and had take cover behind a service desk. He took a deep breath.

From his perch above, Niko saw the men get up and begin to move. Words were exchanged and a shout came out.
“Mario?” There was no answer.
More hushed talking and the men began to spread out, their guns drawn.

“Try to keep this quiet.” Rami advised.
“Got it.” Niko replied, reloading his pistol. He then shrugged and switched to his submachinegun. “Be advised, I’m switching to primary.”
“Copy.”

Niko scanned the room, forcing himself to observe. These guys had made a huge mistake. By spreading out they’d allowed themselves to become vulnerable.

Rami was still in great shape, At least for a man of his age. In his prime, in his work for the Mossad, he had been a very strong and agile operator. He could leap higher than most men, and could dangle by a single arm for minutes at a time without his aim suffering. He could shimmy along ledges and even shoot at the same time. He could drop down from the rafters like a ninja, and kill his target – by gun or by hand – before he hit the floor.
Now though? He was getting old. He’d now moved from his cover, having taken a target down in the confusion, and climbed up to the higher level – kicking off of the wall to get the height his partner required a chair for. He still had some moves
“Thin them down to five or six, then we can bring the thunder.” Rami said, referring to their flash grenades and open combat.
Niko obliged by taking out a man who’d paused in between rows of seats. The headshot floored him. A mercenary turned and stared, but the newly deceased had, post mortem, hidden his body well. The man began a slow walk round.
“He’s mine.” Rami thought out-loud. Niko nodded – to himself – then moved to a different position.

Rami climbed over the railing and allowed himself to hang there for a moment. He felt the strain on his wrists and knees. Ten years ago he’d feel his muscles harden as they worked, and that’s it. Now, there was some discomfort.
The target passed beneath him and the Israeli pushed off of the railings, rotating in mid air.

The knife came down first. For some reason, the mercenary had looked up, perhaps seeing a shadow out of the corner of his eye. Perhaps in the reflection of his gun.
Rami didn’t ignore the now familiar target. The serrated blade came down, the tip penetrating the man’s left eyeball.
Rami landed in a roll, releasing his blade. He recovered, ignoring a dull pain in his knees, and pulled the body out of sight. He retrieved the knife and pushed the body under a row of seats. He ducked and rolled under the row behind.

Niko’s new position took him down to the lower level. He brought his gun up, sights set on the back of a man’s head.
He felt the breath before anything else. Immediately he spun round, his arm coming up and knocking the gun out of the man’s hand. The man’s face dropped. Niko was aware of the noise the gun made as it crashed to the floor, but he ignored it. For now. He grabbed the man by the collar and used his momentum to spin the man round. Both men fell, to Niko’s design, and the Serbian landed on top of the mercenary.
“Thought you could sneak up on me, ti kurvin sine?” Niko pulled the man up then threw his head down as hard as he could. There was a cold, wet thud and the man went limp. Niko then stood and felt the eyes on him. A shot was fired.
Niko grabbed one of the grenades.
“Cloudburst!” He rapped into his mic. The mercenaries probably didn’t hear it but he spoke in code anyway. Cloudburst meant he was releasing a smoke grenade.

Things suddenly went to hell. Rami brought his gun up and shot two men from under the seats. Niko had pulled down his goggles and pulled down a vending machine. Using it as cover he began picking off targets with short, controlled bursts.

Rami saw the men fall. One by one. The Serbian was using the smoke to conceal himself, and once he pulled down his goggles, Rami saw the red and orange figure behind a large darkened square. Clever, his analytical mind observed as he reloaded his gun.

The mercenaries began peppering Niko’s position with gun fire. The smoke was beginning to thin, so Niko moved. He rolled to the side and shoulder open a door as he rose to his feet. He even closed it after him.

Rami hadn’t seen his partner move. He was reloading and when he looked up, Niko was gone.

Niko found himself in a small corridor. It wasn’t well lit. The hallway looked like those found in the back of hotels – connecting two places for the convenience of the staff. He ran along, an idea forming in his mind.

Rami had to leave his position. Three men had cornered him and, as he crawled out, they approached.
There was a shout, but Rami rose, using his leg power to slap the gun out of the first man’s hands, with both palms. A little known fact – at least amongst most criminals – was that you hit hard with soft, and soft with hard. You don’t punch someone in the face. There’s a lot of bone there – you use the heel of your hand. You only punch in the stomach, or somewhere that’s soft. A gun was certainly not soft.
The mercenary was surprised, but Rami wasn’t. He danced past the man and spun as the other two – three now – mercenaries opened fired. The Israeli ducked as the mercenary took the bullets, Then he thrust forward, lunging the now dead body into one of the gun men.
Rami surged forward. As he reached a man – who was anticipating a melee attack – he threw his legs forward, allowing his upper half to fall backward. He grabbed the mercenary’s suppressed pistol and slid under the man’s open legs. As he passed, Rami opened fire, taking out the other two men. He stood and grabbed the disarmed man’s shoulder, spinning him round. A knee to the stomach allowed Rami to grab the head in an upside-down headlock. He twisted. Hard.

Niko opened the door and moved through the cafe. He found himself on the upper level and approached the railings.

Rami turned to see the remaining mercenaries bring their gun up, having seen the four second fight. The Israeli dropped the pistol and went for his submachinegun.
“Starlight!” Niko’s voice sounded. Rami merely looked at the floor, strafing as he did so.
The group of mercenaries hadn’t anticipated what came next. Niko had ‘cooked’ the grenade, and expertly thrown it into the group of men. They only had time to see it before it exploded.
The noise was ear piercing. The flash, had Niko not looked away, would have taking him out of the game too. But the mercenaries on the lower level all began stumbling about. The flashbang had exploded right in front of one man’s face, and he lay on the floor, unconscious, perhaps dead. Two more were writhing on the floor, bleeding from the ears.
Niko and Rami shared no sympathy. They opened up with their guns, sending three round bursts into each man’s head. In seconds they’d taken down ten men.

A few more survived. One had figured out Niko’s escape and was in the service corridor. Another had been at the far end of the terminal, by the entrance. The third was standing by the access door to baggage handling.

Niko took out the man by the baggage handling door. A simple shot with the submachinegun’s sights had seen to that. Rami turned and sprinted toward the man by the entrance. He leapt up and ran on the seats of two of the chairs, stepping up onto the backs of them before leaping into the air.
The target was taken by surprise. Rami came down, his knife drawn and held with the blade running parallel with his wrist. The force of him coming down not only slit the man’s throat, but almost took the head clean off. Rami stood, his lower arm and hand drenched in blood.

One man remained, and Niko had seen the door open. He’d left it closed. He moved and stood behind the door in the cafe.
The remaining target rushed through the door and al Niko had to do was put a single bullet in the back of his head.

“Mission compl–”
Niko’s statement was interrupted by a loud crash. He ran to the railings and saw a man disappear through a set of doors by the gate.
“We’ve got a runner!” Niko called to Rami, leaping the railing and taking chase. Rami wasn’t far behind.

Niko sprinted through the door and into the crisp, night time air. It was then he saw how close they’d timed it. The targets’ plane – a private one which still amazed both men – had taxied into position. The steps were down and the target ran up them.
Niko followed and the plane began to move. Rami only just caught up and had to leap off of the top of the steps as the plane accelerated.
“Don’t move!” Both men stared at the target, standing in the cockpit, a gun to the pilot’s head. “Shut the door.” The co-pilot was already dead. There was no sign of the crew, who’d fled as the man came aboard.
Rami obeyed. They had strict rules here – no civilian causalities. “Make a move toward me, and I kill him, we all die.”
The plane took off, and Niko lost his balance. He fell out of sight and knocked into a cupboard, revealing a collection of rucksacks. He grabbed one then waved it to Rami.
Parachutes!
The tables had turned.
“You’re not going to shoot.” Rami said calmly. “If you wanted to die, you wouldn’t have run.”
“Who are you?” The man demanded.
“Let me answer that question with another.” Rami said. “Who hired you?”
“Nah-uh.” The man laughed mockingly. He was scared. “You take out my team – my team. I don’t owe you sh*t.”
“I’ll tell you if you tell us.”
The man chewed on that for a moment. “We’re a PMC. We go where the money is.” They knew that.
“But who paid for you?”
“You’re asking the wrong man. Ask that prick who sold us out. He took the money then sent you didn’t he?”
“Good try.” Niko said, reappearing. “You’re hired to kill the bad guys.” A look in the man’s eyes told them they were right. “But I’ve got bad news for you friend.” Niko approached the target. “Do you want to know who the bad guys are?”
The man exhaled, barely able to form the word ‘yeah’.
“Us.” Niko’s face went hard, and cold, his eyes staring the man down. The target froze and Niko’s gun came up. A single shot was fired.
The man flinched and nudged the pilot, knocking the controls. The plane changed pitch slightly, but enough to affect Niko’s shot. The single bullet didn’t hit the target’s head. Instead it bore into his chest. The man’s muscles tightened and he fired his shot into the pilot’s face.

The sound of the engines changed then. The plane began to tilt. Nose first.
“We’re going down.” Rami called out. Niko moved forward and brought his gun up to finish the target off. But the man fired first, causing Niko to jump back.
“I’m taking you with me…” The man gargled. He turned and fired several shots into the instruments before Niko could react. Both Rami and Niko put bullets into him in the end.
Then they saw the ocean in the cockpit window.
“We’d better leave.” Rami said, strangely calm. Both men grabbed the parachutes, struggling to stand. By the time they were on and they’d opened the door – to an inrush of wet and icy cold wind – the plane was almost vertical.
Rami wasted no time and leapt out. Niko was half a second behind.

The plus side – Niko thought as he fell into the darkness – was if the chute didn’t open, they might survive. It was only a couple of hundred feet fall to the water. Survivable. More so than on land anyway.
Both men had waiting mere seconds before opening their chutes. They weren’t far from land, and managed to steer in that direction.

Behind them the private jet collided with a fishing trawler in a huge fireball. Both operators felt the heat as they floated down towards the city of saints.

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Damn, i thought the cliffhanger would end differently. tounge.gif

I've only read half of the chapter right now(too long lol). I'll finish it tomorrow, but i gotta hand it to ya Mokrie. It keeps getting better and better, and you constantly put more and more effor in it. Keep it up!

As for what i've read so far of it, i love the details you put in yet aagin, and this time the focus is on action i'd say.
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When does both partys cross paths again, I love reading those bits, I like how the plane went down and how it ended
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Part one was slow ill admit. The entire tagline of this was 'liberty city will burn' and I aim for it to be explosive and, well part 3 is going to be mental.

This chapter is not my best. It had three rewrites, it kept getting too splinter cell like, even though all the guns and tools have been in a gta at some point, an every chapter I try, above all else, to make it feel like gta (luis stealing a jet for example; yeah right anyone would do that, let alone out fight experienced pilots, but hey SA did it and It was a device needed to tie two threads together).

The length; I thought about splitting it into two chapters but the break would affect the action I think. Like pausing a film mid-fight.

Let me know if it's too long to read in one go and I might set about splitting it into two posts.

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Hey Mokrie, nice work, but you made one mistake. In one part of the last chapter Niko is jumping on mercenary and he curses on Serbian ''you kurvin sin'', but he should yell ''ti kurvin sine'', that is grammatically correct on Serbian. If you want fix this.
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