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This sub-forum forbids discussion of or relating to the use of modifications. Creating a topic relating to modifications in the general VC sub-forum is often frowned upon, and more than likely will result in a locked topic. This link has been kindly provided, so adhere to it! Rules and pointers in full detail.
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BUYG: Vice Edition Yes, vice is back.
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Build Up Your Vice Gang  |
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Build Up Your Vice Gang
Group: Members
Joined: Mar 26, 2010
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 Welcome to Build Up Your Gang: Vice Edition, the famous game created solely for the gangs and city of vice. The game is simple, pick a gang and write stories about them, you get graded and paid for each story, the money can be used to buy guns, vehicles, locations, rackets and businesses, drugs and new gang locations. All of these can be used to make your stories more interesting, more interesting stories means more money. Do you have what it takes to build your gang to rule over Vice?
Have fun and enjoy the game
Ziggy455 and the BUYG Staff |
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As me, Ziggy455-a lonesome,
Grand Theft Auto obsessed loser,
you can expect this topic to be updated
at least once a day. However these kind hearted
fans also contribute to the game, the BUYG staff consists of:
Secronom President (aka Landstalker)
mrpain
Ziggy455
*More positions are available with trust and initiation. |
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| Rules |
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| 1. Read all rules carefully before enlisting into a gang. |
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| 2.Proofread your work, all stories must be typed up on microsoft word or another equivalent writing prgram which can pick up small mistakes. |
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| 3.Don't post half finished stories or stories with half a plot, make sure it has a beginning, middle and end. |
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| 4.Flaming, you flame anyone, you're character and stories go up in flames with you, permanent banning from the game aswell.Also, no Not-BUYG related talk, you can discuss ideas, threads and plans for future BUYG stories. |
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| 5.No double posting, if you have something else to say, re-edit your post. |
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| Guidelines |
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| 1.Each gang starts out with 1,000 dollars, a few weapons and a minimum of one vehicle. Some vehicles are listed in red and may only be used after the tenth story posted for that gang. |
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| 2. You may not use any weapons, vehicles or other gang trades which you have not purchased, if you want to sell anything your gang owns you will recieve half the price you purchased it for. |
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| 3. Any BUYG staff (Upon confirmation from Ziggy455) may choose to randomly confiscate items, weapons, vehicles and rackets and businesses, take note that your gang will only recieve confiscations if you have begun buying drugs. Confiscations will be dealth every Sunday, along with asset cashback distribution. |
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| 4. The BUYG staff will PM you if you have been inactive for a significant amount of time asking for you to post in the topic within the week, if you do not, then you will be wiped from the tables. |
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| If you decide that you want to switch gangs, then your story count so far is bracketed. Each new story you write is added to the bracketed number, as well as starting afresh with an unbracketed number. The bracketed number is used for multiple of five bonuses. The unbracketed number is used for other rewards, such as weapons and vehicles, as well as unlocking the bonus vehicles for your gang.. |
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| If you wish to expand, then you must buy property off of other gangs. You may only purchase property if it’s unoccupied. If the gang has an active member writing, only under a different property, then you must have their consent. If you’re buying a property which is in a city where your gang is already established, then it’ll cost $300. If you wish to expand to another city, it’ll cost $600. |
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| Submission rules |
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| In order to stop inactivity killing this off, things are going to change. |
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| 1. You MAY NOT post 'I will post up a story later. In order to join you must post a beginning story (Minimum 500 words) of how your character got into the gang it did. Depending on how well it is reviewed, based on grammar, punctuation and the effort the moderators find from it, then you can be submitted to the faction you chose. |
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| 2. The game will be set up into rounds, a maximum of three stories (500 Minimum) can be posted by one character by the end of the round. For example, the first round may begin on Octber 25th and will end on October 31st. All dates and times of the rounds will be handled and set out by a moderator |
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| 3.If you have not posted at least one (500 words minimum) story by the end of a round, your character shall be 'killed off' and you will have to start again. No bitching, no 'Aww I was off!' if you are unable to write up a story, then PM a moderator and they can put your player's status as 'In Hiding'. |
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| 4. If a story is deemed 'Rushed' or 'Plagarised' in any way, a moderator may choose to 'Void' it, asking the player for a better written piece. |
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| 5. I know it seems like we're a little dictating now, but how many of these games have gone down the pan because people say they'll 'get around to it?' If you can not commit, you can not play. Effectively if you choose to leave the game more than three times, you will be banned from joining again. |
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| 6. For every story I've seen, there are people making their own logos or pictures for the headlines of their stories. I ask that you do not do this as I will be creating logos for each faction so they can be placed above the stories themselves so as me and other moderators can actually distinguish what/who's story we're reading. |
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Round in Progress.
Opening date is 20/10/11
Closing date is 31/10/11 |
| Story Count Bonuses |
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| Story Count | Prize(s) |
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| Multiple of five | for every fifth story you post, you recieve $100. | | 10th Story | Free weapon or drugs under $200 | | 15th Story | Free Weapon under $400 | | 20th Story | Vehicle of your choice under $300. | | 20th Story for your gang | Any Car free | | 50th story | Free Racket or Business under $2,000. |
 | Vercetti Gang |
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| Location | Property | Gang Member | Story Count |
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| Starfish Island | Diaz's Mansion | -- | 0 | | Vice Beach | Pole Position Club | -- | 0 | | Mainland | The Docks | -- | 0 | | Weapons | Colt 45.,MP5 | | Vehicles | Infernus | | Money | $1,000 | | Rackets and Businesses | -- | | Assets | -- | | Drugs | -- |
| Cubans |
| Location | Property | Gang Member | Story Count |
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| Little Havana | Cafe Robina | -- | 0 | | Little Havana | Havana Laundromat | -- | 0 | | Little Havana | Havana Streetwear | -- | 0 | | Weapons | Colt 45.,Tec-9 | | Vehicles | Cuban Hermes, Taxi | | Money | $1,000 | | Rackets and Businesses | -- | | Assets | -- | | Drugs | -- |
| Haitans |
| Location | Property | Gang Member | Story Count |
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| Little Haiti | Auntie Poulet's | -- | 0 | | Little Haiti | Kaufman Cabs | -- | 0 | | Little Haiti | Haitian Drug Factory | -- | 0 | | Weapons | Colt 45.,Tec-9 | | Vehicles | Voodoo, Sanchez | | Money | $1,000 | | Rackets and Businesses | -- | | Assets | -- | | Drugs | -- |
| Sharks |
| Location | Property | Gang Member | Story Count |
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| Vice Beach | Vice Point Mall | -- | 0 | | Downtown | Downtown Ammu-Nation | -- | 0 | | Prawn Island | Abandoned Villa | -- | 0 | | Weapons | Colt 45, MP5 | | Vehicles | Gang Burrito | | Money | $1,000 | | Rackets and Businesses | -- | | Assets | -- | | Drugs | -- |
| The Bikers |
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| Location | Property | Gang Member | Story Count |
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| Downtown | The greasy Chopper | -- | 0 | | Downtown | Moist Palms Hotel | -- | 0 | | Downtown | Skumole Shack | -- | 0 | | Weapons | Uzi, Stubby Shotgun | | Vehicles | Angel, Freeway | | Money | $1,000 | | Rackets and Businesses | -- | | Assets | -- | | Drugs | -- |
| P.I.G.S |
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| Location | Property | Gang Member | Story Count |
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| Vice Point | North Point Mall | -- | 0 | | Industrial Area | Escobar International Airport | -- | 0 | | Vice Beach | Leaf Links Golf Club | -- | 0 | | Weapons | Nightstick, 9mm, Micro SMG | | Vehicles | Baggage Handler | | Money | $1,000 | | Rackets and Businesses | -- | | Assets | -- | | Drugs | -- |
 | Weapons | Cost |
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| Brass Knuckles | $5 | | Screwdriver | $6 | | Knife | $7 | | Meat Cleaver | $7 | | Hammer | $8 | | Axe | $10 | | Baseball Bat | $10 | | Pool Stick | $10 | | Golf Club | $12 | | Night Stick | $15 | | Machete | $15 | | Katana | $30 | | Chainsaw | $75 | | Handguns | Cost |
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| Colt 45. | $95 | | 9MM | $115 | | Colt Python | $120 | | Sub-Machine Guns | Cost |
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| Tec-9 | $140 | | Ingram Mac 10 | $150 | | Uzi | $180 | | MP5 | $250 | | Shotguns | Cost |
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| Chrome Shotgun | $250 | | Stubby Shotgun | $300 | | Spaz 12 Shotgun | $400 | | Machine Guns | Cost |
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| Ruger P | $450 | | M4 | $650 | | Sniper Rifles | Cost |
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| Sniper Rifle | $300 | | PSG-1 | $950 | | Throwables | Cost |
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| Molotovs | $5 | | Tear Gas | $30 | | Grenades | $60 | | Detonative Grenades | $75 | | Heavy Firepower | Cost |
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| Flamethrower | $2,000 | | Rocket Launcher | $3,000 | | Minigun | $5,000 |
 | Vehicles | Availibility | Cost |
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| Admiral | 3 | $300 | | Angel | 3 | $350 | | Ambulance | 3 | $500 | | BF Injection | 3 | $450 | | Baggage Handler | 3 | $200 | | Banshee | 3 | $800 | | Barracks OL | 3 | $2,000 | | Benson | 3 | $700 | | Blista Compact | 3 | $600 | | Bloodring Banger | 3 | $750 | | Bobcat | 3 | $500 | | Boxville | 3 | $650 | | Burrito | 3 | $550 | | Bus | 3 | $1,500 | | Cabbie | 3 | $500 | | Caddy | 3 | $250 | | Cheetah | 3 | $850 | | Coach | 3 | $1,600 | | Comet | 3 | $750 | | Cuban Hermes | 3 | $550 | | Deluxo | 3 | $1,500 | | Enforcer | 3 | $2,500 | | Esperanto | 3 | $450 | | FBI Rancher | 3 | $900 | | FBI Washington | 3 | $950 | | Faggio Scooter | 3 | $250 | | Fire Truck | 3 | $3,000 | | Flatbed | 3 | $1,700 | | Freeway | 3 | $500 | | Gang Burrito | 3 | $500 | | Glendale | 3 | $300 | | Greenwood | 3 | $200 | | Hermes | 3 | $500 | | Infernus | 3 | $1,200 | | Idaho | 3 | $600 | | Kaufman Cab | 3 | $400 | | Landstalker | 3 | $450 | | LineRunner | 3 | $700 | | Love Fist Limo | 3 | $3,000 | | Manana | 3 | $450 | | Mesa Grande | 3 | $500 | | Moonbeam | 3 | $350 | | Mr Whoopee | 3 | $1,000 | | Mule | 3 | $500 | | Oceanic | 3 | $500 | | PCJ-600 | 3 | $600 | | Packer | 3 | $750 | | Patriot | 3 | $650 | | Perennial | 3 | $350 | | Phoenix | 3 | $650 | | Pizza Boy Scooter | 3 | $300 | | Police Car | 3 | $900 | | Police Cheetah | 3 | $1,000 | | Pony | 3 | $300 | | Rancher | 3 | $450 | | Regina | 3 | $450 | | Rhino | 3 | $5,000 | | Rumpo | 3 | $250 | | Sabre | 3 | $600 | | Sabre Turbo | 3 | $750 | | Sanchez | 3 | $450 | | Sand King | 3 | $800 | | Securicar | 3 | $1,500 | | Sentinel | 3 | $450 | | Sentinel XS | 3 | $550 | | Stallion | 3 | $450 | | Stinger | 3 | $650 | | Stretch | 3 | $1,750 | | Taxi | 3 | $450 | | Top Fun Van | 3 | $750 | | Trashmaster | 3 | $750 | | Virgo | 3 | $350 | | Voodoo | 3 | $650 | | Walton | 3 | $300 | | Washington | 3 | $500 | | Yankee | 3 | $450 | | Zebra Cab | 3 | $500 | | Boats | Availibility | Cost |
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| Coast Guard | 3 | $1,500 | | Cuban Jetmax | 3 | $1,500 | | Dinghy | 3 | $500 | | Predator | 3 | $1,300 | | Reefer | 3 | $1,500 | | Rio | 3 | $1,400 | | Squalo | 3 | $1,300 | | Tropic | 3 | $1,500 | | Flight Vehicles | Availibility | Cost |
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| Hunter | 3 | $4,000 | | Maverick | 3 | $2,000 | | Police Maverick | 3 | $4,500 | | Skimmer | 3 | $5,000 | | VCN Maverick | 3 | $4,000 |
| Rackets, Assets and Businesses |
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Rackets, Assets and Businesses are a great way to earn your gang large sums of money, Rackets are the illegal way to earn cash while Businesses are more or less the formal and legal way to earn cash. However they all go to the gang's cause and if the feds find them, they will be confiscated.
How to work rackets and businesses and Assets is very simple, it only requires two things; A building and an asset - The asset is the only income you recieve as the buildings themselves generate no income. Each Business or racket costs an initial fixed price. Upon purchasing a racket you gain one free Asset. Once you purchase a building and asset, they will be displayed in your gang's box.
All Assets cost one quarter of their racket or business's initial price. Also! If you ever want to earn more from your racket or business, then you have to buy another building. Only three racket or businesses can be owned by a gang at one time.
Assets themselves also earn your gang money from their jobs, your gang can constantly keep these workers running, the cash flow is infinite and every week each asset will generate 10% of their cost, E.g. One Drug dealer asset costs $400, so every sunday $40 will be distributed into that gang's cash amount. You can have a maximum of five assets to a racket or business.
The weekly income generated from each type of asset is listed in brackets after the cost of each asset.
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| Racket | Cost | Asset | Cost | Income per Asset |
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| Weed Farm | $1,200 | Harvester | $350 | $35 | | Crack Den | $1,400 | Dealer | $400 | $40 | | Brothel | $1,600 | Whore | $500 | $50 | | Protection Ring | $1,800 | Enforcer | $550 | $55 | | Cocaine Ring | $2,000 | Smuggler | $600 | $60 | | Theft Ring | $2,200 | Thief | $750 | $75 | | Burglary Circuit | $2,600 | Burglar | $800 | $80 |
| Business | Cost | Asset | Cost | Income per Asset |
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| Cafe | $1,200 | Waitress/Waiter | $350 | $35 | | Bar | $1,400 | Bartender | $400 | $40 | | Restaurant | $1,600 | Waiter/Waitress | $550 | $55 | | Docking Depot | $2,100 | Sailor | $650 | $65 | | Taxi Service | $2,300 | Driver | $700 | $70 | | Strip Club | $2,500 | Stripper | $800 | $80 | | Car Dealership | $2,800 | Car Salesman | $800 | $80 | | Casino | $3,500 | Croupier | $1,000 | $100 |
| Drug Rules and Regulations |
| 1.Once your gang purchases drugs, the only problems are with the authorities of vice, (BUYG Staff) |
| 2.In order to be able to use drugs functionally within your gang, you must post two stories: One describing you buying the drugs, the other shwoing you selling the drugs. |
| 3.BUYVG Staff will act as Vice city's Feds, FBI and police. We have the power to confiscate weapons, cash and vehicles, randomly-however if you feel like you are being treated unfairly, any of the staff will be more than happy to cooperate. If you don't like something being confiscated, maybe you should of stayed out of the drug game, Playa'. |
| 4.Money from the Wholesale amount will immediately be added to your gangs money status. However depending on the quantity, a roll of dice shall determine a 'Tax' turn in which 25% of your money will be tributed to higher-ups. |
| 5.Do NOT! abuse the drug system, buying increased amounts over and over will result in the Feds finding you and confiscating all of your stash. You can be limited to 3 drug purchases a week. |
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| Love Juice | 1 Litre (0.26 Gallons) | $35 | $50 | | Love Juice | 2 Litres (0.52 Gallons) | $70 | $140 | | Love Juice | 1 Gallon (4 Litres) | $180 | $360 | | Boomshine | 1 Litre (0.26 Gallons) | $40 | $80 | | Boomshine | 2 Litres (0.52 Gallons) | $80 | $160 | | Boomshine | 1 Gallon (4 Litres) | $220 | $440 | | Marijuana | 3.5 Grams | $25 | $40 | | Marijuana | Ounce (28 Grams) | $1,000 | $1,400 | | Marijuana | Pound (16 Ounces or 448 Grams) | $2,000 | $2,200 | | Marijuana | Kilo (2.2 Pounds or 998 Grams) | $2,300 | $2,500 | | SPANK | 1 gram | $55 | $70 | | SPANK | teener (1.5 grams) | $80 | $95 | | SPANK | ball (3.5 grams) | $160 | $185 | | SPANK | Ounce (28 Grams) | $900 | $1,000 | | SPANK | Pound (16 ounces) | $6,000 | $8,250 | | Ectasy | 1 Pill | $5 | $10 | | Ectasy | 100 Pills | $1,400 | $1,800 | | Ectasy | 1000 Pills | $4,500 | $7,000 | | Ectasy | 10,000 Pills | $7,000 | $10,000 | | Crack Cocaine | 1 Gram | $70 | $110 | | Crack Cocaine | Ounce (26 Grams) | $800 | $1,500 | | Crack Cocaine | Pound (16 Ounces or 448 Grams) | $4,500 | $5,750 | | Heroin | 1 Gram | $260 | $380 | | Heroin | Ounce (28 Grams)( | $800 | $1,450 | | Heroin | Pound (16 Ounces or 448 Grams) | $4,700 | $6,900 | | Crystal Meth | 1 Gram | $90 | $130 | | Crystal Meth | Ball (3.5 Grams) | $250 | $320 | | Crystal Meth | Half-Ounce (14 Grams) | $580 | $700 | | Crystal Meth | Ounce (28 Grams) | $4,700 | $6,900 | | Crystal Meth | Pound (16 Ounces or 448 Grams) | $8,000 | $9,600 |
| Gang Wars |
| Gang wars are another great way to make money, the rules of a gang war are simple. A gang war is initiated by one gang member adressing another, if the gang member accepts then it will start. They're ag reat way to add some exciting action into your gang member's lives. | | Rules | | A gang war consists of 3 stories; A beginning, a middle and an end. Each member must write three of them, the victor will win a cash prize of $500 and a Vehicle of their choice in the opposing losers garage. One BUYG staff will moderate the gang wars, them and only them can solely decide the victor, depending on Detail, Grammar and punctuation. |
This post has been edited by Build Up Your Vice Gang on Thursday, Oct 20 2011, 16:19
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| Build Up Your Vice Gang |
 Posted: Saturday, Mar 27 2010, 17:54
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Build Up Your Vice Gang
Group: Members
Joined: Mar 26, 2010
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| QUOTE (Landstalker @ Mar 27 2010, 17:10) | I would like to join the Vercetti's at the Pole Club Position, please. And, what you call "moderations right", if it is not too much asking.
What is the Skumole Shack for the Bikers? Is it the wooden thing on the roof of a building that Tommy can buy?
I have an idea about the gang territories. PM me if you want to know it. |
Yes, the Skumole Shack is the small hut.  All players have been added to their respective gangs, start uploading stories people. I'll grade as soon as they're posted. On another note, Vice City story gangs are into consideration; Including The Vance crime family-led now by Pete vance. |
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| WelcomeToLibertyCity |
Posted: Saturday, Mar 27 2010, 23:20
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City of Angels
Group: Members
Joined: Aug 26, 2008
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| QUOTE (Ziggy455 @ Mar 26 2010, 17:02) | | QUOTE (WelcomeToLibertyCity @ Mar 26 2010, 18:48) | | I don't know, I have doubts if this topic will get popular... If it does I'll consider joining. Good luck Ziggy! |
Thanks man, don't worry, It'll get popular if people spread the word. If it goes off with a bang, would you consider moderation? |
If this picks up, I would be glad to help you out. I'll check every so often to see how many members there are and stuff. Contact me if you feel like asking anything or need some help, I'm pretty experienced with BUYG SA and IV. |
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Posted: Saturday, Mar 27 2010, 23:32
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Expect insanity.
Group: Members
Joined: May 2, 2007
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| QUOTE (WelcomeToLibertyCity @ Mar 27 2010, 23:20) | | QUOTE (Ziggy455 @ Mar 26 2010, 17:02) | | QUOTE (WelcomeToLibertyCity @ Mar 26 2010, 18:48) | | I don't know, I have doubts if this topic will get popular... If it does I'll consider joining. Good luck Ziggy! |
Thanks man, don't worry, It'll get popular if people spread the word. If it goes off with a bang, would you consider moderation? |
If this picks up, I would be glad to help you out. I'll check every so often to see how many members there are and stuff. Contact me if you feel like asking anything or need some help, I'm pretty experienced with BUYG SA and IV.
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Thanks dude, if you'd like to moderate, feel free to ask me for the password to the account, recruiting game players is the only problem. However I'm thinking of adding deadlines, to keep it active, |
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Group: Andolini Mafia Family
Joined: Oct 14, 2009
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The Sharks - Abandoned Villa
Chapter 1 - Prologue
Friday 1st of August 1986, 6:01 pm
Escobar International Airport, Florida
"Passengers for Flight 57 to Liberty City, please make your way to the departure lounge at Terminal 3; boarding time will take place in a few minutes."
The voice of the PA system at Escobar International Airport continually ringed throughout my ears as I waited at the luggage pick-up point. I was as tired as a dog; I had just sat on a pulsatingly boring flight from Los Santos which lasted what seemed like an eternity, but was only 5 hours. It was 6:00 pm, and the muggy, moisture-laced air was wreaking havoc on my oily, post-pubescent skin. The fact that I had misjudged the weather and donned a pair of jeans wasn't exactly a fruitful decision, either.
My name is Aleksandar Djilas, and I'm here for a new start. I turned 18 last November, and two months ago I graduated from Hashbury District High School in San Fierro. Ever since I grew up as a young kid on Los Santos' west side, I had dreams of living in Vice City. The glitz, the glamour, the women and the sunshine; it was all a dream for me. Los Santos was a fantastic place, but it was very 'plastic-y'; everyone was a shyster, a crook or a loser. My parents divorced when I was a young child, so I lived between homes, and coming from a strict Yugoslav background, my heritage was strictly enforced on me from a young age. The values from the old country which were instilled in me as a youngster ("Always respect the family, no matter what happens; always respect everyone else and receive respect in return diligently, and whatever you actions you partake in, do so with dignity") were essentially useless in such a corrupt city like Los Santos, where people would sell their own mother to get ahead in the food chain.
Vice City portrayed everything which I had dreamt for as a young child, where success and respect was earned, not given, and where the rewards for success outnumbered the population of the city. I was ready for my new life, a fresh start, and I was willing and prepared to work from the ground up.
Nothing’s gonna stop me.
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I know that was short, but it's basically just a slight introduction into my character and his background. I'm going to be moving through this slowly, but that way I'll be able to flesh out the story more and make it more interesting.
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| mrpain |
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wub wub
Group: Zaibatsu
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I would like to join the Bikers Greasy Chopper please. And I created an artwork for them. Hehe.  Chapter 1: Start Your Engines!I woke up in the Greasy Chopper with puke all over my face. That was a classical case of a f*cked up hangover and all I could remember was me drinking a shot of whiskey. Or vodka, I'm still not sure what the hell I drank though but it sure as hell tasted good. As I stumbled my way through the restroom of the bar to wash the puke out off my face, Big Mitch Baker, A.K.A Mr President of The Bikers, smacked me hard in the head to get my attention. Imagine just waking up from a f*cked up hangover and getting smacked hard on the head. Not a good feeling of course. I fell clumsily onto the floor and Big Mitch Baker helped me up and said something like a greeting. "Hello Mr. Vice President. Had a good drink last night?" I was still drunk and could not make out what he was saying. All I heard was Mr. Vice President. I mumbled, "Vice President? Why that's f*cking me!" "Yes that is you. Now wake up Drake!" He shouted out so loud I felt my brains falling out of my ears. I fell again, this time, I found myself in the restroom. "Uh, who's Drake?" Big Mitch Baker felt annoyed, "That's you dumbass. Drake West, Vice President of the Vice City Bikers. Wash yourself and get the f*ck outside!" I was sober as I could be after I washed my face off. I strolled out the Greasy Chopper to find my fellow bikers with Big Mitch Baker on their bikes. A prospect, Newton Marlon, was preparing my Angel for me. He really had high respect for me since I am the VP. My bike would always be super clean when he's around it. I got on my bike and thanked Newton, "Good job my trusty prospect. Here take this tip and get yourself one helluva hangover like I did." "You're very welcome but I ain't gonna buy me a hangover. I'm gonna buy me a hooker!" Newton always love the ladies. I fistpumped him for that, "Amen my brother." I started my Angel and the engine was as sweet as ever but the bike that was just behind me was stronger than mine. The engine roared through the whole Downtown and I easily recognised whose bike it was. I looked behind and saw Otto, the Sargeant At Arms of the club, starting his fearsome Freeway. He's one scary motherf*cker with a terrfying bike. He came up to me and asked, "Do you know what we doing?" "Live free?" What else could the Bikers do? Otto chuckled, "That, and a protection run for the Love Fist band. We gotta escort their limo and them to some rocking concert in Little Haiti." At first, I just thought it was another day on the job but then I realized it was just a band. "Protection run for Love Fist? Seriously who's gonna attack them?" Otto kind of agreed on that, "Well yeah, just a band. But let me rephrase my sentence, rocking concert in Little Haiti." And the thought soon came up onto me. Little Haiti, Haitians. Rocking concert for Haitians, that could not be good. I gave a nod to Otto and the Bikers started rolling to the Love Fist studio. When we arrived, Kent Paul and Love Fist were already in their limo. Big Mitch Baker signalled them the green light to go, ensuring it is safe. "Get in formation people! Keep your eyes sharp for any Haitians." The VP always drive beside the President so I revved up my bike to stay in the same speed as Big Mitch Baker. I could tell Big Mitch Baker was already hating that protection run when he said to me while we were following the limo, "Love Fist are really a group of dumbasses. The Haitians are already very protective on their turf and they want to play they? What kind of Haitian listens to rock?" I could not resist joking, "Well they are Love Fist. They spread the love but in return they get a pack full of fists." Big Mitch Baker, apparently, did not get the joke, "The irony." We were not even near Little Haiti when we heard the first gunshot onto the limo. One of the bandmates screamed, "f*ck NO I DON'T WANT TO f*ckING DIE!" Crying could be heard in the limo even from a distance. Shows how the band got some good vocals. Haitians soon popped out from everywhere. Otto toss me a stubby shotgun and I felt hyped to blast it away on some black garbage. Big Mitch Baker ordered us to get into cover and the war was on. Gunshots flew everywhere and a Haitian shot my Angel. That really got my adrenaline running. You can f*cked with a man's life but you do not f*cked with his bike. I spotted the Haitian who shot my bike and I ran towards him, not caring about the bullets whizzing past me. I sneaked around him and fired my shotgun behind him. I think I dislocated his shoulder. "f*cking prick." I shot him again for the sheer hell of it. Big Mitch Baker shouted at me, "Drake for f*ck sake's don't go commando at a moment like this! Follow me while we escort Love Fist to safety. And try not to get shot you dumbass!" All this and I still felt a little bit drunk. EDIT: Sorry I didnt realized the artwork was too big. Will post a smaller one next time |
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| Build Up Your Vice Gang |
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Build Up Your Vice Gang
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Joined: Mar 26, 2010
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mrpain: mrpain has been added to bikers with a story count of one.
Your first story has alot of repetition, big mitch baker and VP are repeated at least seven to eight times- just call him Mitch, You wouldn't say Tommy vercetti punched a man then Tommy vercetti had a beer. Try to switch up the words, the length was good but paragraphs were short.
All in all I hope to see an improvement while you are playing, I'll place $40 in the bikers faction. Thanks for the Artwork, I'll try to tweak it for you. This post has been edited by Build Up Your Vice Gang on Sunday, Mar 28 2010, 15:15
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Hustler
Group: Awaiting Authorisation
Joined: Mar 14, 2010
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Vercetti Gang - Pole Position Club
Chapter One - Prologue
Tuesday 6th of April 1986, 13:27:12 pm
Ex-Bower Cruise Ship, Flordia, Ocean near Vice City
Sunny day
The Korean looking man, was waiting on the ship deck facing the hot and beatiful sun, tipical, of Flordia, Vice City. He was having black hair, red eyes, he had not a lot of muscles, the same for his fatness and was white or yellow. In fact, no one could say by the time. All of that because; he was hidding himself the best he could. No one knew his name, his age or either where he came from, even, if he was looking a little bit Korean. The man was strange, even weird some persons exagerated, calm, gentle, helpful, not talkative and was on his guard every time, every where and even while doing something relaxing. The Korean was at the same spot every day or in his chamber. That Korean was me.
I was about to get some sleep when I saw Vice City dock. I was about to return to my chamber to get my things when the cruise ship, Ex-Bower, stopped for no reason. Every one was suspicious. We heard some shoots and cry from the place where the captain was boating the ship. I approached the location and saw four guys with M4 exiting the murder place. I hidded the best I could against the wall. More of them arrived by Predator, Reefer and Maverick. All of them were armed of M4 too. In total, they were twenty with the four others who were already aboard. I runned toward the stairs and got downstairs to my room.
When I reached my room, I entered it, took my things and ran to the other side of the corridor. I took the right stairs. At the same time, five armed guys arrived in the corridor by the other set of stairs. Me, in all my state, with my adrenaline, sprinted to the front of the cruise ship and jumped out of the boat. Fortunately, I jumped bad and got on one of the Reefer the attackers used. When the engine started running, I boated the boat as fast as I could. Those guys still got able to get a shot or two on the boat. I reached the docks and...
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I know it's short but it's just a prologue.
This post has been edited by Landstalker on Sunday, Mar 28 2010, 15:57
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