[R3N3GADEAPOC]

GTA:Episodes from San Andreas is a mission pack series set in the state of San Andreas

The series:

The Story of the Vagos

Characters:

• Jones Cestillo: 26 yr old man looking to stay out of trouble only to find more trouble. Joined the Vagos gang after robbing the ocean docks. Main Character
• Hector Jenmioz: Lietenent of the Vagos gan.
• Frank Tenpenny: Leader of the C.R.A.S.H project, manipulates gang members to sell out.
• Eddie Pulaski: Works with Frank in gang manipulation.
• Jimmy Hernandez: A good cop true to his word, Looked down upon by Tenpenny and Pulaski.

Missions:
Chapter 1:

• Introduction: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=20418
• The First Job: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=20419
• Welcome to the Vagos: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=20420
• Varios Los Aztecas: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=20428
• C.R.A.S.H: Script done

TRAILER SOON TO BE MADE

REWRITING EVERYTHING, REMAKING MISSIONS, FOR NOW JUST PLAY THE ONES I ALREADY HAVE UNTIL I MAKE THE NEW ONES.


The Ballad of Gangsta OG Loc

NOT STARTED

San Andreas Military stories

NOT STARTED

FOR NOW THE PROJECT IS CANCELLED FOR ANOTHER MISSION PACK!

This post has been edited by R3N3GADEAPOC on Saturday, Aug 25 2012, 01:06

[R3N3GADEAPOC]

Criticism is always appreciated!

[IceBoy1911]

Its Could be better if you published Missions
..and Spend more time for these missions...
Goodluck

[R3N3GADEAPOC]

QUOTE (IceBoy1911 @ Tuesday, Aug 7 2012, 21:24)

Its Could be better if you published Missions ..and Spend more time for these missions... Goodluck

These are only the starting missions, The more into the series is when the longer stuff comes. Depending on the criticism I get I'll update missions to make them better.

[xGhostx]

I'll play this later on today, I hope you can take criticisms (if you have any), because I'm gonna be pretty tough.

[Csabi98]

Reading the main post, I only got that the story is about The Vagos, and the characters. I think you should make "Story" and "Characters" separate, I mean, you say how Jones joined the Vagos in his description.. I think you should mention that in "Story". Speaking of that, it lacks story. What year it is? Why was Jones a robber? Why did he join the Vagos after robbing the Ocean Docks, etc.. you know. Well, thats it for now, I will play your missions in a few minutes and edit this.

[AnDReJ98]

This is his story and he can write what he want. You're in one case right for that in seccond not. Leave him to do what he want as this is his Mission-Pack.

[R3N3GADEAPOC]

Thanks for the critics, I think I might reveal a lot of things in the C.R.A.S.H mission I'm making. Reason I didn't put a story section in the thread is because it might give out spoilers for future missions.

This post has been edited by R3N3GADEAPOC on Wednesday, Aug 8 2012, 17:10

[Csabi98]

Played the missions, and well, I don't really have anything to say. No bugs, no nothing. They were designed well. The only thing, they may be a little too easy. Its good that you revealed more things in the missions, like the year, etc..

Give out spoilers for future missions? You can avoid this easily, by making the story section contain only the beginning of the story, and revealing things later on in missions. You are right though, revealing things in the topic might ruin the fun. Just reveal basic things that the players would be curious about.(Sorry for this, I'm building the story for you again) Hector doesn't seem to act like a leader to me.(as mentioned in main post) He seems really friendly to me.

Andrej, you are right too, in one case, for that in second not. He asked for critics so he can improve. I gave him some advice. Its not a must to follow them.

This post has been edited by Csabi98 on Wednesday, Aug 8 2012, 17:35